2013-06-19, 18:10 | Link #973 |
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While I don't necessarilly agree with _everything_ you've done in this series, Bonzo, I certainly do find satisfaction with all you have done, both the small, quiet scenes and the larger, actionful ones.
And inspiration, too, in my own exercises in fan fiction. The exchange between Nunnally and Kallen found below gave me a gruesome idea for a cliffhanger the other day. |
2013-06-29, 07:22 | Link #976 |
I change anime endings.
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And now, the fixed appendix with Lelouch marriage, I changed some panel, modified the text and added a page, maybe the old pages are more clear, but time is passed and used different pencils:
http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...rn26.4aeng.jpg http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...rn26.4beng.jpg http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...rn26.4ceng.jpg http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...rn26.4deng.jpg http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...rn26.4eeng.jpg http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...rn26.4feng.jpg http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...rn26.4geng.jpg |
2013-06-29, 18:01 | Link #977 | |
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My singular complaint would be that the size of the first page is smaller than the others, making the panels and dialogue balloons more compact. |
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2013-06-30, 05:08 | Link #978 |
I change anime endings.
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In the first page I just modified one dialogue.
Second changed dialogues. Third dialogue and redraw 2/3, I removed Nagisa and put Sayoko. Fourth dialogues , changed 8th panel and added scarlet. Fifth added Scarlet, changed dialogue and fixed last panel sixth is a total new page. last changed lelouch phrase. |
2013-07-01, 18:23 | Link #979 |
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As always Bonzo you delivered! Words fail me at this moment, but I was moved by their marriage once again, your "adjustments" were subtle and didn't deter from the story, and it was very beautiful!! I have more too say, but that I'll send in a PM.
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