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ZeroXSEED · 2011-12-10, 19:10

@Stratos

Ayup, besides, if it's October then it's beyond V7.

@Blitz

I can't help but... Pun intended...

Eratas123 · 2011-12-10, 19:37

@ Stratos - Seems fine to me

I like that you gave Maya a ole besodes butt monkey teacher

How many drones are there anyway?

@ Rain - Can you give me some plot points that you want to be unique to Shadow and not feautured in HOTM?

ZeroXSEED · 2011-12-10, 19:40

Rain wasn't here, I figured he'll login in 10-11:00 Pinoy time

Eratas123 · 2011-12-10, 19:50

@ Senpai - I know that, I'm just giving it now in case he comes back

Anyway, I planned to have Maya act like an overportective mom at one point. Should I include trying to stop Irish from seeing porn?

MeisterBabylon · 2011-12-10, 20:08

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Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

I can't help but... Pun intended...

@.@

You've read that too?! XD

Trivia: Erika Weber's prototype, before she got merged with Kyral's OC during the big reshuffle, was based on Iori. Explains Erika's mystery live-in boyfriend.

Eratas123 · 2011-12-10, 20:12

@ Meistah - Erika's the sweetest girl there.......with a hammer the size of a fully grown man

Are you planning to put les-yay in it like Lucky Star?

@ Senpai - No answer?

Side note - I invited Fangking2 to join us here, dunno if he'll agree though.

ZeroXSEED · 2011-12-10, 20:20

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Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Senpai - I know that, I'm just giving it now in case he comes back

Anyway, I planned to have Maya act like an overportective mom at one point. Should I include trying to stop Irish from seeing porn?

Why not, have her fail one or twice, rather than gave up, she'll be more determined.

As for Fang, I've invited him before he post Dokuganryuu (technically I'm his first Beta).

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Originally Posted by MeisterBabylon

@.@

You've read that too?! XD

Trivia: Erika Weber's prototype, before she got merged with Kyral's OC during the big reshuffle, was based on Iori. Explains Erika's mystery live-in boyfriend.

Yeah, as I said I never being picky when it comes to manga except for Yaoi/Yuri

Eratas123 · 2011-12-10, 20:24

@ Senpai - What do you think they should do on their bonding say? Also, I have a plot summary for Kanzashi's life arc, can you comment on it when I post it?

Side note - You invited him before? He didn't accept then?

StratoSpear · 2011-12-10, 20:27

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Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

@Stratos

Ayup, besides, if it's October then it's beyond V7.

Really now?

Dang... should I wait or move on...?

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Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Stratos - Seems fine to me

I like that you gave Maya a ole besodes butt monkey teacher

How many drones are there anyway?

Well she is a fellow Academy instructor/teacher. I can't imagine her standing at one spot and looks in awe while Inami goes around stabbing/dicing drones in the Academy airspace all by himself.

As for the number of drones... I can't come up with a definite number. A lot of them, basically. (This would justify the other students mobilizing to defend their school.)

Eratas123 · 2011-12-10, 20:31

@ Stratos - This is something other authors seem to ignore. Only ans Fabgking seem to give her a role apart from perverted ditzy teacher.

Also, the other 4 teachers can probably take the praxidike Drones.

ZeroXSEED · 2011-12-10, 20:33

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Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Senpai - What do you think they should do on their bonding say?

Dunno, I'm, not that experienced when it comes to familial bonding...

Probably something where Yamada insist that Irish can depend on her and she'll do the same, because that's how family works.

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Originally Posted by Eratas123

Also, I have a plot summary for Kanzashi's life arc, can you comment on it when I post it?

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Originally Posted by Eratas123

Side note - You invited him before? He didn't accept then?

No response, rather than refuse, he might be not interested enough to check (hence why I always promote this thread EVERYWHERE)

MeisterBabylon · 2011-12-10, 20:35

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Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Meistah - Erika's the sweetest girl there.......with a hammer the size of a fully grown man

Are you planning to put les-yay in it like Lucky Star?

Its a Nanoha/Higurashi thing, that the cutest = most dangerous.

Likewise, Chibi Erika has a Pico-pico hammer that she breaks out when she's scared.

The fans ship Kei and Erika together.

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Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

Yeah, as I said I never being picky when it comes to manga except for Yaoi/Yuri

Did you know, it was considered porn in my conservative catholic school. XD

Eratas123 · 2011-12-10, 20:38

@ Senpai and Rain - What do people usually do on a day off? Just give me some idea's and I'll see if I can change it.

Side note - He just PMed me. He said he'll gove the forums a try

EthernalRain · 2011-12-10, 20:44

Back now!

@ Eratas: Plot points unique to Shadow:

- Kyuukai getting wounded in the abdomen, a bullet chipping his spinal column. He's forced to hobble around on a forearm crutch, only donning an exoskeleton frame to his legs to let him walk, run and fight when it's not charging. It doesn't do anything other than give him slightly improved leg strength while it braces them.

For example, some thing like this:

Spoiler for Example:

- The unique plot points from the previous page.

- Koneko has Tabane create a teenager's body for her, much like Chachamaru from Negima, except with a difference in what kind of body was created. She uses it to flirt with Ichika, much to her father's chagrin.

She's also a bit tsundere to everyone.

- A trip to the ALBATROSS could be in store. In HotM, it docks at ISA, but in Shadow, it has no reason to. So the ISA group could go visit, which gives reason for some Irish-Joshua-Tabane-Koyomi interactions.

Koyomi begins to see Joshua like a father figure.

- A CERBERUS mission commissioned to the ISA group, where Kyuukai and Irish are called up along with Mactavish to take. This could show more of Mactavish's greyness and his reasons for being so.

- Solomon's adopting of Adam and his fathering of Squall. Due to having two men having a big part in her lives, she doesn't completely downgrade men's involvement in PT.

- The Tokiwa family and Shinonono family relations could be different. Both families are samurai families. The two sets of grandparents could be at odds with each other, instead of friendly with each other in HotM.

- Kyuukai piloting a mecha (not a suit) during the major warfare battles, such as the ALBATROSS siege up until it is incapacitated, on which he goes on foot. More detail on the previous page.

Also, here's a pic of the kind of mecha he'll pilot. It's not humanoid at all:

Spoiler for Scale Image of Kyuukai's Mecha:

These are the ones off the top of my head still.

People just relax on a day off, or do things they really want to do but don't have the time to do on other days. I for one go hang out with friends, play anything, or spend my time foruming or writing.

ZeroXSEED · 2011-12-10, 20:45

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Originally Posted by MeisterBabylon

Did you know, it was considered porn in my conservative catholic school. XD

Well, my sister ESPECIALLY doesn't like them as well...

Zero's Sister: "Can't you see two girls or two guys being that close is NOT always being as pair of lesbian and homos, F***er!"

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Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Senpai and Rain - What do people usually do on a day off? Just give me some idea's and I'll see if I can change it.

Depends, one that usually too busy usually prefer to rest than going for a recreation, but sometimes they could take both.

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Originally Posted by Eratas123

Side note - He just PMed me. He said he'll gove the forums a try

Maybe I'm not persuasive enuff

StratoSpear · 2011-12-10, 20:53

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Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Stratos - This is something other authors seem to ignore. Only ans Fabgking seem to give her a role apart from perverted ditzy teacher.

Also, the other 4 teachers can probably take the praxidike Drones.

I see. I figured having her as a combatant would work quite well given the magnitude of the situation(all hands on deck!).

Also, 4 other teachers? I could only think of Maya, Inami and Chifuyu, but even then, I have no idea where Chifuyu keeps her IS.

Still, yes. They'll most likely be able to take on the normal Praxidike drones.

Spoiler for Other stuffs:

Eratas123 · 2011-12-10, 20:56

@ Rain - I meant what a mother and son do on a day off together like bonding. I need it for Irish and Maya.

Anyway, how about actions that doesn't happen in HOTM? I need something that's not just a different version of an event in HOTM.

Side note - New omake: Crossdressing Day. Something like everyone getting clothes of the opposite gender. Plus points if it's cosplay.

@ Senpai - How can people fall in love when they constantly argue and fight?

@ Meistah - Is there anyone in St@rs who's actually in a straight relationship, apart from Erika?

ZeroXSEED · 2011-12-10, 20:57

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Originally Posted by StratoSpear

I see. I figured having her as a combatant would work quite well given the magnitude of the situation(all hands on deck!).

Also, 4 other teachers? I could only think of Maya, Inami and Chifuyu, but even then, I have no idea where Chifuyu keeps her IS.

The four teacher is Rapid Response Task Force of I.S.A., in short, glorified security team consisted of combat instructor. None of the is introduced so far.

ZeroXSEED · 2011-12-10, 21:02

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Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Senpai - How can people fall in love when they constantly argue and fight?

I'm not sure it applies

1. They reached a conclusion of their argument and follow it/ making compromise
2. Reaching an understanding of their difference and accept it.
3. Concluding their argument is useless and that they have exact same intention.
4. some combination of the above will create a chemistry.

it doesn't even need to be between two people falling in love, friendship and familial love can work with that dynamic.

EthernalRain · 2011-12-10, 21:06

@ Eratas: Kyuukai losing his ability to properly walk, Koneko's new body, the CERBERUS mission, and his piloting of a not so giant mecha are unique to Shadow only.

- Kyuukai getting evicted from ISA and moving into the orphanage sometime during the plot would be one concept.

- Kyuukai getting roped into teaching at a high school because one of it's principals is an otaku, and FRACTURE wanted Kyuukai temporarily out of armed service.

Most, if not all of my plot points include Kyuukai due to him being HotM's main protagonist.

I'm still thinking up some more ideas.

Anyway, on a day off like that, a mother would normally rope her son into spending time with her, maybe something like shopping, or loafing around the house, or doing whatever the mother likes to do.

The son really doesn't have much of a choice.

Crossdressing day is a go from me.

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ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	@Stratos Ayup, besides, if it's October then it's beyond V7. @Blitz I can't help but... Pun intended... __________________

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Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Stratos - Seems fine to me I like that you gave Maya a ole besodes butt monkey teacher How many drones are there anyway? @ Rain - Can you give me some plot points that you want to be unique to Shadow and not feautured in HOTM? __________________

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ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Rain wasn't here, I figured he'll login in 10-11:00 Pinoy time __________________

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Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Senpai - I know that, I'm just giving it now in case he comes back Anyway, I planned to have Maya act like an overportective mom at one point. Should I include trying to stop Irish from seeing porn? __________________

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Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Meistah - Erika's the sweetest girl there.......with a hammer the size of a fully grown man Are you planning to put les-yay in it like Lucky Star? @ Senpai - No answer? Side note - I invited Fangking2 to join us here, dunno if he'll agree though. __________________

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Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Senpai - What do you think they should do on their bonding say? Also, I have a plot summary for Kanzashi's life arc, can you comment on it when I post it? Side note - You invited him before? He didn't accept then? __________________

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Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Stratos - This is something other authors seem to ignore. Only ans Fabgking seem to give her a role apart from perverted ditzy teacher. Also, the other 4 teachers can probably take the praxidike Drones. __________________

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Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Senpai and Rain - What do people usually do on a day off? Just give me some idea's and I'll see if I can change it. Side note - He just PMed me. He said he'll gove the forums a try __________________

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EthernalRain Head of FRACTURE R&D Join Date: Oct 2011	Back now! @ Eratas: Plot points unique to Shadow: - Kyuukai getting wounded in the abdomen, a bullet chipping his spinal column. He's forced to hobble around on a forearm crutch, only donning an exoskeleton frame to his legs to let him walk, run and fight when it's not charging. It doesn't do anything other than give him slightly improved leg strength while it braces them. For example, some thing like this: Spoiler for Example: - The unique plot points from the previous page. - Koneko has Tabane create a teenager's body for her, much like Chachamaru from Negima, except with a difference in what kind of body was created. She uses it to flirt with Ichika, much to her father's chagrin. She's also a bit tsundere to everyone. - A trip to the ALBATROSS could be in store. In HotM, it docks at ISA, but in Shadow, it has no reason to. So the ISA group could go visit, which gives reason for some Irish-Joshua-Tabane-Koyomi interactions. Koyomi begins to see Joshua like a father figure. - A CERBERUS mission commissioned to the ISA group, where Kyuukai and Irish are called up along with Mactavish to take. This could show more of Mactavish's greyness and his reasons for being so. - Solomon's adopting of Adam and his fathering of Squall. Due to having two men having a big part in her lives, she doesn't completely downgrade men's involvement in PT. - The Tokiwa family and Shinonono family relations could be different. Both families are samurai families. The two sets of grandparents could be at odds with each other, instead of friendly with each other in HotM. - Kyuukai piloting a mecha (not a suit) during the major warfare battles, such as the ALBATROSS siege up until it is incapacitated, on which he goes on foot. More detail on the previous page. Also, here's a pic of the kind of mecha he'll pilot. It's not humanoid at all: Spoiler for Scale Image of Kyuukai's Mecha: These are the ones off the top of my head still. People just relax on a day off, or do things they really want to do but don't have the time to do on other days. I for one go hang out with friends, play anything, or spend my time foruming or writing.

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Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Rain - I meant what a mother and son do on a day off together like bonding. I need it for Irish and Maya. Anyway, how about actions that doesn't happen in HOTM? I need something that's not just a different version of an event in HOTM. Side note - New omake: Crossdressing Day. Something like everyone getting clothes of the opposite gender. Plus points if it's cosplay. @ Senpai - How can people fall in love when they constantly argue and fight? @ Meistah - Is there anyone in St@rs who's actually in a straight relationship, apart from Erika? __________________

2011-12-10, 21:06	Link #12240
EthernalRain Head of FRACTURE R&D Join Date: Oct 2011	@ Eratas: Kyuukai losing his ability to properly walk, Koneko's new body, the CERBERUS mission, and his piloting of a not so giant mecha are unique to Shadow only. - Kyuukai getting evicted from ISA and moving into the orphanage sometime during the plot would be one concept. - Kyuukai getting roped into teaching at a high school because one of it's principals is an otaku, and FRACTURE wanted Kyuukai temporarily out of armed service. Most, if not all of my plot points include Kyuukai due to him being HotM's main protagonist. I'm still thinking up some more ideas. Anyway, on a day off like that, a mother would normally rope her son into spending time with her, maybe something like shopping, or loafing around the house, or doing whatever the mother likes to do. The son really doesn't have much of a choice. Crossdressing day is a go from me.