2008-07-23, 07:15 | Link #2941 |
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Talk about backlog breaking.
You never have enough sentai. Though this is Kamen Rider to be exact. A paladin Rider. 'Nuff said. Though the main draw is that there's enough room to hold a Deck, a slot for cards in the front, a fist weapon and a sword that collapses into a gun for this entire set. Plus there's a small relation to a dragon here as well. With so many points going for it, and since Keroko's of the TSAB's, Kouya's Adeat weapon should resemble a device, and can be used in both human and worgen forms. So, IXA belt. Whimsical, or for real? I was thinking of fooling about with the Bakarengers' namesake to give Kouya, since he has never been to school, the title of DekaBakaMaster. Gotta catch up! Butt...!!!! The Power of Khrack Compels You.
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2008-07-23, 07:44 | Link #2942 | |
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*gets pwned by the Nakajima sisters* Line duly noted, removed and updated in master file. *limps away* P.S.: i just got re-established so i need to really catch up
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Anyway, angel eater aside, similar threats would fall under the Combat Divisions duristiction I'd think. Quote:
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2008-07-23, 09:42 | Link #2945 | ||
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But the main drawback is that its useless in Worgen form. Kouya is neutral to the fiery-screaming sentai acts, but I do feel that he might like the cool-sentai character type exemplified by DekaMaster, who is also worgen. Gah what to do... Quote:
1 more week of grace.
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2008-07-23, 09:56 | Link #2946 | |
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That was before I jedified him though. Speaking of which, have some new footage of Tycho in action: Spoiler for saber fight:
Now I really feel motivated to start writing on Tycho's pre-Rogue days. Wuss. Just marathon it. I did, from chapter 14 to... somewhere around 120 I think? not sure. |
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2008-07-23, 10:19 | Link #2947 | ||
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Doesn't really matter. That it happened before the story began is good enough.
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2008-07-23, 10:24 | Link #2948 | |
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Yeah, I noticed after you told me. I didn't notice at first because I never read those dramatic speeches on the last page, its usually more of the same anyway. |
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2008-07-23, 10:36 | Link #2949 | ||
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The personality that you give to your characters with the inclusion of small quips and other comments throughout the profiles really help to make them likable, another factor that makes it hard to dislike / find faults with the minor issues. Re: Mina As with Tsho, I can see strong hints to Amelia here, but is it only me that sees Zelgadis in the device? The dynamic seems very similar to what I remember of the two in my watch 4-5 years ago of the three series. re: Mei I love her spell names.They're absolutely brilliant. |
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2008-07-23, 10:43 | Link #2950 |
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Which reminds me, Dk, what do you mean with feeling left out of the yelling? Do you mean that all we say is 'yes, that's a good character' to your characters or 'yes that's a good chapter' to your stories? Cause I seem to remember us literally ripping into your story centered around the Infinite Library.
You're not left out. When you stray, we yell at you. You just don't stray that much. Nothing wrong with that, heck, the only time I was yelled at was when I had my 'Keroko is a clone of the Saint King' routine, beyond that I've never been yelled at before when it came to my characters or stories. |
2008-07-23, 10:59 | Link #2951 | ||
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Anyway this card deck thing is a recent development for Kouya; and due to its potential to cover a lot of bases, I could throw the Worgen stuff out. As it were, the Worgen bits were Nodoka-centric, as they were initially part of lore about books coming to life. Kouya is the son of a dog demon (as with Kotarou), and the Big Bad Wolf from a genderbending fairytale collection (You heard that right. ). The boy in his puppy form made contact with the Exploration Club after one particular rabbit chase went to Wonderland, and the rest is history. Until I decided to add cards into the mix. It might be just me, but I may be putting too many ideas into one soup again (like Kha until 5th Ed. ) so I need to throw some out. Worgen, or Cards? Quote:
Though finish Negiha Keroko first. <_< / >_> Revision comes first, then WoW, so I’m crawling along, smelling the Khrack.
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2008-07-23, 11:11 | Link #2952 | |
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I know, I know. Wow is currently in the backseat for me again. |
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2008-07-23, 12:12 | Link #2954 | |
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Saber: You are still not using them? Me: Guess not. They aren't called Sakura Cards for nothing. Now its home-free for me to go cool-sentai with Kouya via in-jokes. But I still haven't an Artefact. :/ Any ideas? I'm kinda dry at the moment... Just checking. @Eva: Need Northrend to be WHAAAAAAT?! EVAAA!!! *strangles the beta-tester lottery winner*
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2008-07-23, 12:22 | Link #2955 | ||
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I didn't win the beta-test lottery . I merely asked a guildy who works at Blizz if he had any beta keys to spare Oh, and DECULTURE!! |
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2008-07-23, 13:46 | Link #2959 | ||
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About Mei: the basic character idea was inspired off of a specific established character this time, and the spell names are in the exact same style. (In fact, "No Touching" is a direct port.) If anyone knows what I'm talking about, it's Cantrip (aka Cindy Smithers) on page 90 of the Teen Champions sourcebook of the HERO System. Other than Foxbat, Cantrip is possibly my next favourite Champions character ever. Quote:
The thing about feeling left out is because I can't point to any of my characters and go "look, this was a Mary Sue, but the OC thread helped me fix it". I've noticed that when a character gets Busted by the thread, it becomes somehow more memorable, with people bringing it up over and over again in the incessant flamewars which burst out due to something or other. Any Publicity, and all that. Truth to tell, the comment was made as a side remark to a larger problem I have about this whole exercise in general. It all started with... I believe it was tshouryuu's remark about how labelling an OC as an Ace is near-immediate grounds for Mary Sue-ism. Upon that, I set out creating an Ace character just to see if this was applicable in all cases. I don't usually create high-powered characters, because I don't feel confident in my abilities to provide a suitable setting for the characters to utilize their powers, and so I thought it would be a nice change of pace. I asked, several times, what qualifies as an Ace, and I pushed her power levels as high as I felt comfortable with. I fully expected Lumina to have to be nerfed. Instead, I was told that she needed to be buffed. Since pushing the power levels didn't make Lumina a Mary Sue, I decided to push the backstory, and tried again with Mei. Angsty past, mysterious conspiracies, unconventional Device, the works. And now I'm told that she's an interesting character rather than a Mary Sue. This is deeply worrying. I specifically set out to make Mary Sues twice, and both times were told that I failed in that endeavour. While this might seem to be beneficial ("DK can't make a Sue, so all his characters must be balanced!"), it highlights something which I have no idea how to solve: I am not creative enough to come up with a Mary Sue even with active effort. It's that mental barrier which worries me. After all, the most important thing about writing is to be able to write, to just set the words down, and then edit them later as needed, rather than second-guessing yourself all the time and ending up with nothing at all. This inability to create a Sue on demand implies a subconscious second-guessing mechanism in my mind, rendering me incapable of creating and thinking with wild abandon. I am the sort of writer who writes spontaneously, running on raw inspiration when it strikes. I need to be able to think "with wild abandon", or I'll end up never writing anything. Now you see why this worries me so much. Why can't I create a Mary Sue? What is it, in my mind, which prevents me from making one? |
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2008-07-23, 14:21 | Link #2960 |
RUN, YOU FOOLS!
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: Formerly Iwakawa base and Chaldea. Now Teyvat, the Astral Express & the Outpost
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You are way too sane to make a Mary Sue. Maybe there are a mental lock to stop you from picking references that are way too much for Nanoha. Now, if you were trying to port Dio Brando from JoJo Part 3, Kira Yoshikage from JoJo Part 4, Gold Experience Requiem from JoJo Part 5, Stairway to Heaven from JoJo Part 6, an Antediluvian vampire from Vampire the Masquerade, Yukari Yakumo from the Touhou or taking inspiration from those, alarm bells shall rightfully ring.
Know what? It is not wrong to not be able to make a Mary Sue. |
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