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Eratas123 · 2012-07-21, 01:20

Not much better, really.

Eratas123 · 2012-07-21, 02:05

About to post Synchronicity soon. My writing binge will end soon.

DarkJak2050 · 2012-07-21, 02:16

Quote:

Originally Posted by StratoSpear

You rang?

Kinda busy with military life and all but now I'm here.

So, Fal is the manifestation of the Minerva. Exactly what's her description when she makes her appearance?

Eratas123 · 2012-07-21, 02:23

Is Laura tall enough to drive?

ZeroXSEED · 2012-07-21, 02:41

Barely, if you count 145 cm as able to. Some car just plain impossible for her though.

Mine has similar problem but with army motorcycle.

demino_hellsin · 2012-07-21, 03:11

Okay, I'm stuck in an awkward scene. I need help.

Eratas123 · 2012-07-21, 03:30

With what?

demino_hellsin · 2012-07-21, 03:37

Spoiler for For keeping my fiction so that only interested people have to bear with the wall of text:

How does one continue this conversation while flying at little under mach 0.9? O.o?

Eratas123 · 2012-07-21, 03:57

They have a radio, so having a conversation isn't hard.

demino_hellsin · 2012-07-21, 04:07

But... what would you say in such a situation?

Eratas123 · 2012-07-21, 04:13

I dunno, how's the weather?

demino_hellsin · 2012-07-21, 04:16

...sooooo... I think I've found one reason why I'll never stop being single.

wavehawk · 2012-07-21, 04:18

Do what I do. Listen to music. you'd be surprised what comes up. For example, try listening to something more old-school and then have a think of things...

Spoiler:

Listen to that. see what ideas can pop into your head.

Eratas123 · 2012-07-21, 04:26

I write stories literally as I'm typing. I don't plan what they're going to say, it just comes out.

StratoSpear · 2012-07-21, 04:44

Quote:

Originally Posted by DarkJak2050

So, Fal is the manifestation of the Minerva. Exactly what's her description when she makes her appearance?

Correction, Fal is the manifestation of the Minerva's core, the Iwaki Core unit, which is basically an IS Core in a different, less-stable housing.

Description-wise... If you meant her looks, she'll look like Makoto from iDOLM@STER, down to her choice of clothes.

DarkJak2050 · 2012-07-21, 05:36

Okay then.

Now, I hope that I can get Chapter 7 up sometime this week.

Eratas123 · 2012-07-21, 05:42

Updated story

wavehawk · 2012-07-21, 07:06

Quote:

Originally Posted by Eratas123

I write stories literally as I'm typing. I don't plan what they're going to say, it just comes out.

- that's okay if you can get the flow going, but when you hit writer's block...

ZeroXSEED · 2012-07-21, 07:13

Quote:

Originally Posted by wavehawk

- that's okay if you can get the flow going, but when you hit writer's block...

You will hit it hard

Eratas123 · 2012-07-21, 07:23

Yeah, hence my constant complaints. For example: I didn't expect it to reach 9000 words.

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ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Barely, if you count 145 cm as able to. Some car just plain impossible for her though. Mine has similar problem but with army motorcycle. __________________ Last edited by ZeroXSEED; 2012-07-21 at 02:59.

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Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	With what? __________________

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demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	Okay, I'm stuck in an awkward scene. I need help.

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demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	Spoiler for For keeping my fiction so that only interested people have to bear with the wall of text: The young man sighed in relief. Thankful to that warning voice that could only have come from a guardian angel. “Ah, God. Thank you for keeping an angel watch over me. I might have died back there if not for her.”, he mumbled the prayer as his teary eyes watched the heavens. Despite the fact that IS was activated for PIC to keep him from actually losing his life from any collision let alone that... but he might not have appreciated the unavoidable bruising that would follow. “Ichika? Are you alright? You're mumbling to yourself.”, the voice from before asked him. Trusting his ears that it was coming from his right, Ichika turned his head. He recognized the French Plait of France's representative cadet. “Oh, hi Charlotte. I'm fine.”, he turned his attention back to the track but did a double take. “Wait, what? Charlotte?”. Almost saddened by the tone Ichika used in reaction to her presence, tears began beading up at the corner of her eyes. The smile she had initially sent his way turned from warm to deadly cold as her eyes closed to withhold whatever secrets were brewing within her. Ichika quickly noticed the signs as he came face to face with what he liked to call, the smile from the angel of death. So he quickly amended his greeting, “I mean oh! Charlotte! It's you!”, he cried out in feigned pleasant surprise, laughing nervously at the back of his throat. As if an evil spirit was exorcised, the air around Charlotte quickly dissipated into the norm. The curve of her lips once more pleasant instead of cryptically menacing. “ How does one continue this conversation while flying at little under mach 0.9? O.o?

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Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	They have a radio, so having a conversation isn't hard. __________________

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demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	But... what would you say in such a situation?

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Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	I dunno, how's the weather? __________________

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demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	...sooooo... I think I've found one reason why I'll never stop being single.

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wavehawk Some say I'm the Reverse Join Date: Jul 2006	Do what I do. Listen to music. you'd be surprised what comes up. For example, try listening to something more old-school and then have a think of things... Spoiler: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vNnfQ5w2ORU Listen to that. see what ideas can pop into your head. __________________ "We haven't been properly introduced..."

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DarkJak2050 Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2011	Okay then. Now, I hope that I can get Chapter 7 up sometime this week.

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Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Yeah, hence my constant complaints. For example: I didn't expect it to reach 9000 words. __________________