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Old 2008-06-22, 06:37   Link #6621
Enraptured
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(Takes a deep breath)
Ok, here's my first attempt at Nanoha Fan fiction. This goes back to The Shiny Sword's challenge to turn a song into a Fanfic. NanoFate.

It's All Coming Back to Me Now by Celine Dion

Spoiler for It's All Coming Back to Me Now:
D: That was so awesome.
'I got your message, said a voice inside my heart.'
This line totally made me break down and start tearing ;_;
Very nicely done! Thanks for the great read :3


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I've got to give you guys credit for being awesomely awesome with Pink on Blonde and Under The Table. I just had to say that :3 You guys make me happy Thanks.
HAH.
YOU. -accusing finger-
Have NO IDEA HOWWW LONG I couldn't stop laughing for when I read your 'MY BOOBS ARE OKAY' crack. ;_;
Arrgh Hayate! And OH GODD THE VIDEOOO!!
-starts snickering again

So, we're even?
Thanks! <3
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Old 2008-06-22, 17:23   Link #6622
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Backlog BREAKER!

My GOD, i go away for the weekend and i come back to this!!!!!! takes me back to what it was like, three weeks ago XD. Anyway heregoes the best bits:

*Black Wolf climbs to the high diving board 50 feet up before canon balling into the pool of fiction and crack*

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ALERT! ALERT!

New Challenger Aproaching!


Upcoming OC for Vita, Shadows of the Past

( I think that Teh Shiny Sword and Black Wolf are going to like it ^.^)

Spoiler for ???:

*Jaw Drops* must have more! K-9 Rocks! i want to know his fighting style (assuming male >.< Wasn't strictly mentioned) and stuff. Like the MGS style comic, and his cocky attitude. K-9 vs Zafira! FIGHT!

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Spoiler for [Medieval!Nanoha] Chapter 6:
Enter the wolkenkritter! oh yeah! i didnt see that coming actually i just kind of figured the bandits would be well, bandits! They didn't go save Erio! No! hope he comes back! So im curious as to what happens now, are they going to fight a little? as obviously Yuuno's jewel seeds are at stake, or are we going to see a befriending marathon? XD starlight breaker anyone?

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(Takes a deep breath)
Ok, here's my first attempt at Nanoha Fan fiction. This goes back to The Shiny Sword's challenge to turn a song into a Fanfic. NanoFate.

It's All Coming Back to Me Now by Celine Dion

[SPOILER="It's All Coming Back to Me Now"]-snip-
That was really good! a very nice writing style with a nice take on a storyline not really done before, at least not this well. I Hope to see more from you like this. Was a really good read.


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Transitions

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*smiling like an idiot at all the cute and fluffy moments* i really like this one so far, Its great to see you really caught up on it. Im looking forward to the next installment. Nanoha is totally not expecting what Fate's going to drop on her at the end of this it seems. That or shes just completely clueless, which is kinda true. Im interested to see what sort of reaction you make Nanoha have. More!!!

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I've got to give you guys credit for being awesomely awesome with Pink on Blonde and Under The Table. I just had to say that :3 You guys make me happy Thanks.
LOL TSS, thanks for the comments. Also, Crack was awesome, forgot to quote it in above but *giggles* bewbs! XD . if you liked Pink on Blonde and Under the table, you will like this. *hopes* this chapter is, well something ive not really tried before. Its the steamiest scene i think i have ever really written so not sure if its come across right. That and the character involved may seem, well, a bit out of character and over confident. Any thoughts on that would be great. Anyway without further ado:
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Old 2008-06-22, 20:12   Link #6623
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Vampire!Fate was finally updated on FF.N for anyone who wants to relive the past:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4268517/8/
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Old 2008-06-22, 20:26   Link #6624
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Gah! I've been out for like....two weeks!
I've been studying and have had finals.
Summer has officially begun!!!
Though I'll never be able to read all this.
*goes back to lurking*
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Old 2008-06-22, 20:48   Link #6625
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You know that irritated feeling you get when you finally see the arrow in the FedEx logo and then you can’t unsee it? That’s what I felt after reading your comments and rereading the second part. You’re damn right about the leaving part and Vivio's plot problems. So I rehauled the second half to give it a bit more weight and a pinch of irony. Thank you for taking the time to point that out with reasons as to why. That was most helpful. I don’t have a great excuse for the censorship other than I’m just pretty cautious on a new forum. You’ll see the sailor soon enough.

[SPOILER="All Coming Back to Me Now- second half edit"]snip
FedExlogo? @_@ it has an arrow? lol

Nice re-vamp ^^ Hope to see more from you
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Old 2008-06-23, 00:20   Link #6626
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Chapter 64
Vatican Knights

Spoiler for Escape:
Who knows what they've found here. Jasper seems good up until now, but I still can't get that thought that he might be the traitor, from some chapters ago, out of my head. Vivio's idea of plans was funny.


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I sort of liked this chapter, yet I didn't like one part of it. What I didn't like was the live demo that Signum received at the middle, because it felt as if Nanoha was addressing Fate as if she was nothing more than a DOG or a LAB RAT used for experiments!!! And nobody should speak like that towards Fate! Signum's reactions were good though, especially at the end.
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Old 2008-06-23, 00:52   Link #6627
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Chapter 65

Vatican Knights

Spoiler for The last tear:
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Old 2008-06-23, 01:40   Link #6628
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Chapter 65

Vatican Knights

Spoiler for The last tear:
T___T
Now I'm sad I thought about Jasper as a traitor, when he actually proved to be a good guy. Poor Vivio, she's really having it hard, everybody going away like that. If something happens to Karil... I'd rather not think. I liked this death though, very graphic and in details, very much like Alphonse's. The part with forming a triangle around Vivio was a bit confusing though, wasn't the corridor straight?
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Old 2008-06-23, 01:49   Link #6629
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Vampire!Fate was finally updated on FF.N for anyone who wants to relive the past:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4268517/8/

I read the chapter of vampire Fate and i can say: IT IS GREAT AND I LOVE IT.

i can't wait for the update of the ficition. ^_^
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Old 2008-06-23, 02:11   Link #6630
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T___T
Now I'm sad I thought about Jasper as a traitor, when he actually proved to be a good guy. Poor Vivio, she's really having it hard, everybody going away like that. If something happens to Karil... I'd rather not think. I liked this death though, very graphic and in details, very much like Alphonse's. The part with forming a triangle around Vivio was a bit confusing though, wasn't the corridor straight?
They were in a corner, Jasper placed the glass between the 2 walls to protect Vivio, in other words, the corridor wasn't straight, there were many desviations on that passage You got it?
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Old 2008-06-23, 02:18   Link #6631
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@ Black wolf: i just read your fiction, chapter 3 and well.

it's rock, keep going.

i am looking forward for update.
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Old 2008-06-23, 12:51   Link #6632
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Spoiler for Vampire!Fate pt.1a (Nanoha):


A.) Nanoha
B.) Fate
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Old 2008-06-23, 13:04   Link #6633
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Spoiler for Vampire!Fate pt.1a (Nanoha):


A.) Nanoha
B.) Fate
Nyahaha xD. Parenting discretion advised.

I vote A, I want to see more of this action from N's perspective :3.
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Old 2008-06-23, 13:04   Link #6634
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Spoiler for Vampire!Fate pt.1a (Nanoha):


A.) Nanoha
B.) Fate
Ohh.. they are starting to get it on, woohoo... too bad Caro had to interrupt them.
I vote B
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Old 2008-06-23, 13:05   Link #6635
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Spoiler for Vampire!Fate pt.1a (Nanoha):


A.) Nanoha
B.) Fate
Interruptions for the lose D:

B for variation
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Old 2008-06-23, 14:07   Link #6636
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Spoiler for Vampire!Fate pt.1a (Nanoha):


A.) Nanoha
B.) Fate
B

The laughing at the end made it.
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Old 2008-06-23, 14:10   Link #6637
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Spoiler for Vampire!Fate pt.1a (Nanoha):


A.) Nanoha
B.) Fate
B -faints-

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Interruptions for the lose D:
QFT!!!! so true.. ;-;

edit:

@B_W and Pink on Blonde: (copy+pastaaa from ff.net)
B_W!!!!! *glomps* Nice fic!!!! X3 What's nice about it is you have managed to make the steamy semi-NSFW aspects of the story work with the more serious parts (Shagnum romance) to make this fic an enjoyable read. Like the crack is there surely but I can still see Shagnum's budding feelings for each other as the main driving force. Eh..whatever am I saying?? *fears that she is speaking incoherently again* I like it very much! *huggles* Oh and chapter 3 didn't even need to have full blown smex to make me blush so hard. *blushes* Ah plus points for that as well for making it steamy with just a few actions and words. *thumbs up* So yayy!!!

Last edited by wanwan1203; 2008-06-23 at 15:01. Reason: comments on fics (backlogggg) >.<
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Old 2008-06-23, 15:03   Link #6638
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And Now I bring you....

The completed prologue.


Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha RebelS

Prologue
A New Hero, Vivio H. Takamachi, age 15

Spoiler for Part 1:


Spoiler for Part 2:


Spoiler for Preview:


Spoiler for Bonus:

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Old 2008-06-23, 15:07   Link #6639
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@ Satashi: I go for B
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Old 2008-06-23, 15:47   Link #6640
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First part of a small, fluffy piece I'm working on.

Spoiler for "Lamaze" is the Magic Word?:
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