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Unbelievable...Only a few dozen chapters ago I would have only entertained that thought in one of Harima's imaginary manga. Looks like it's more believable now. Hmm...Eri as a dominatrix... |
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2007-03-03, 12:11 | Link #1622 |
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Beautiful chapter. Lots of revelations about Yakumo, and it FINALLY puts the naysayers to rest about her feelings for Harima. Though whether this spells the end for Onigiri could very well depend on Sara (she can either encourage her to go for it like before or help her move on).
Personally, I hope she goes for it. Then the rumble can truly be on
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2007-03-03, 12:48 | Link #1623 | ||||||
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Well, this chapter reinforces my reasons for believing that Yakumo should definitely not become the main character; she’s just too angsty, and the series becomes way too melodramatic whenever it focuses on her since she seems incapable of playing both serious and comedic roles. Compare this to Eri, who makes a serious statement about her goal at the end, but manages to make it funny.
Anyways, it was nice to see Yakumo showing some regret for slapping Eri. Although, I think she’s confessing to the wrong person in Sara; all her problems seem to stem from her problems with Tenma, so that’s the one she needs to tell this to if she’s going to get maximum development as a character. Quote:
Yakumo is implied to have feelings for Harima in Chapter 215, but that’s nothing new. Eri confirms that she still hasn’t given up, that she hasn’t changed her mind about “friends first,” and Harima has committed himself to the movie, indicating that there’s going to be more Flag chapters in the near future. How is that a reset for Eri? Quote:
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Yakumo “sacrificing” her feelings in Chapter 206 is not good, though, since part of it stemmed from a clear desire for Harima not to be with Eri, and, by doing so, she also betrays her sister. Then, there’s the timing of this development, which is terrible to say the least. If Yakumo actually does like Harima now, it’s much too late in the series. Also, if she does become a rival for Eri, she’ll be becoming one immediately after Tenma stopped being an effective rival for Eri, indicating that she’s going to be used to develop Flag. It’s too convenient for Flag for a new obstacle to appear right after the old one disappeared. Finally, but not least, is the overwhelming presence of Flag. Eri’s feelings for Harima have been considerably developed, and Harima’s feelings for Eri’s have been slowly changing throughout the series, so it simply would not make any sense for Kobayashi to make Yakumo and Harima love each other out of the blue and disregard all the development Flag has gone through. Anyways, I think you have good reason not to get your hopes up just yet. Quote:
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2007-03-03, 13:36 | Link #1624 | |
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Unbelievable....still doubting even after all this time. You're really just turning a blind eye now, since she's practically confessing at this point.
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If it really was just for the sake of an ideal, she would've said so outright ("I thought he'd always be so-and-so, now he's like this..." or something to that degree).
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2007-03-03, 13:55 | Link #1626 |
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Excellent, excellent chapter.
Before we jump to any conclusions, let's take a look at the sequence of events. b29, p.1 - Yakumo walks back after the Cultural Festival Play, where she fought with Eri. "Hey Iori, do you think that Sawachika-sempai loves Harima-san? But she's always harsh around Harima-san, and it's not like we have a special relationship. It's fine like this, right?" Yakumo suspects that Eri likes Harima. She recognizes that if Eri does love Harima, then she would have caused Eri a lot of suffering over the past little while. However, she dismisses the thought, rationalizing that Eri probably doesn't love Harima. The words "It's fine like this, right?" are a means by which Yakumo justifies her actions to herself. 206, p.4 - Yakumo denies having feelings for Harima. This could mean one of two things - either she really doesn't like him, or she likes him and she's hiding it. 206, p.5,6 - Yakumo becomes aware of the fact that Eri and Harima may be getting closer, and she actively takes steps to prevent the two dolls from being placed together. This means one of two things - either she doesn't want Eri to end up with Harima because she's jealous (ie. wants him for herself), or she doesn't want Eri to end up with Harima because she wants to see Harima paired up with someone else. Note her words in Ch. 206, p.7,8: "He's not the type of person who would change his mind." "He's not so careless as to fall for someone just like that." And when asked about whether she's been confessed to, she says "no" with a smile - to show that she's pleased about the fact that he hasn't gone after her - pleased with the fact that he is living up to that ideal. 206, p.9, she places the Harima doll and the Tenma doll together on her own. This indicates that her desire to see Harima and Eri separated had nothing to do with jealousy - it's simply because she wanted him to end up with her sister. It makes no sense for Yakumo to want to end up with Harima and then to actively try to set him up with someone else. In Ch. 207, Yakumo sets her plan in action by having Tenma write manga with Harima. That was the same plan that set up for the climax in Ch. 212. Now, let's take a look at this chapter. Since Ch. 212, we've seen no signs of remorse from Yakumo, despite her sister's pleading. The trigger that actually makes her recognize her wrongdoing is Harima's explanation in p.5. Eri's plan to make Harima choose clearly establishes Eri's feelings regarding Harima. With that, Yakumo's lingering doubt in b29 has finally been confirmed. Note the side caption on that page: "Yakumo, can't go back now." Now that Yakumo knows about Eri's feelings for Harima, she can't go back to the old way of thinking in b29. She now knows for sure the full extent of what she's done in the past - there's no turning back. Now look carefully at the words on p.9: "I know Sawachika-sempai is in love with Harima, and it hurts me inside so badly." This is not the same as: "I know Sawachika-sempai and Harima-san are in love with each other, and it hurts me inside so badly." Yakumo isn't sad because Harima is being taken away from her by Eri. Rather, the sudden realization that she has in this chapter about Eri's feelings for Harima are the cause of her feelings of guilt. Then: "I've buried so many things inside of me, and it's all building up. I'm becoming a terrible person." What has she buried? Feelings? No, because having feelings for Harima wouldn't make her a terrible person. What else could you bury and have build up, making you feel like a terrible person? Guilt. Guilt that she's held inside since b29. All throughout the manga, she's constantly interfered with Eri's relationship with Harima. She undid Eri's sewed gift to Harima. She interfered in Eri's play. She constantly pushed Tenma to be with Harima, knowing that Tenma wasn't interested. All this she did unknowingly, but with a lurking doubt deep down that she may be hurting Eri. Ch.215, p.8: Yakumo tells us why she slapped Eri - it was entirely for the sake of her sister. But why does she add "That's what I thought when I slapped her, but... I was wrong."? The only thing that has changed since then is that Yakumo now knows Eri's feelings. She now knows the conflict that was going through Eri's head - she now knows that Eri really loves Harima. Note that she confirms that the phone call in Ch.211 had nothing to do with the slap. Therefore, there is no jealousy towards Eri involved here. Remember how I was talking about the idea of Yakumo redeeming herself? This is the very first step. It's now her responsibility to make amends with Eri. With this chapter, she can no longer be used as a plot device used to interfere with Flag - she's a full character in her own right. I find some of the earlier remarks to be somewhat bizarre. Here we have a character who has just admitted to having a lot of guilt because of constantly hurting someone else (unintentionally, of course) over a period of months, and the first thing on some people's minds is: "Yeah! Does this mean she'll step in and interfere some more?" As p.5's side comment notes, there's no turning back now. Now that she knows that Eri loves Harima, she cannot interfere with a good conscience. It would undo everything that elevated her character in this chapter. I've waited a really long time for this. It's kind of cathartic, really - she's been a real thorn in Eri's side for the past 100 chapters or so. It's a relief to see her finally 'fess up to everything that she's done - it shows, that despite all the trouble she's caused, she still was acting with good intentions. With a little luck, she may even make for a valuable ally for Flag. You know, I wonder... could this be that inroad into the manga writing thing that we've been looking for? On another note, I really liked the conversation on the last page. It's good to see Akira talking a bit more freely: "Do you have to give up love and friends to be a devil woman?" Eri has this habit of deliberately building walls around herself. Flag still has a lot of work to do. Last edited by Swampstorm; 2007-03-03 at 14:21. |
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@Swampstorm: Nice use of logic; it makes the most sense to me, since Yakumo being in love suddenly seems to contradict how she’s been acting previously. |
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2007-03-03, 15:35 | Link #1629 | |
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2007-03-03, 16:41 | Link #1631 | ||
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I was speaking honestly, though. I personally thought that this chapter was all about Yakumo finally recognizing all the trouble she's caused Eri over the past five months, and that she'd finally started to feel remorse. That's why I thought it to be rather absurd for people to be suggesting that she try to cause further problems for Eri, afterwards. It looks really bad on your character if you admit to feeling guilty and then go back and keep repeating your mistake. This apology has been a long time coming for Flaggers. As the chapter itself notes, she can't turn back, now. She has to make amends. Every chapter can be a catalyst for a huge Onigiri push, in theory, but then again, the same holds true for any other faction. If Yakumo pursues Onigiri at this point, though, she turns those tears that she shed into a lie. By the way, did you miss this post? Quote:
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Ch.215, p.8: Yakumo gives us a big explanation on why she slapped Eri, and she finishes with "That's what I thought when I slapped her." The slap isn't out of hatred for Eri. It was out of anger towards seeing Eri berate Tenma. I don't have any disgust over her actions now that she admitted that she was wrong - I thought I made my views clear back in Ch. 212. You don't need to drag her name in the mud just to build a case for an interest on her side. Either option doesn't help Onigiri. If the slap was out of anger for Harima and Eri being together, then there's no moral justification for the two to be together. If the slap was done to help Tenma, then she has no interest in Harima, but she's a good person. When faced with Scylla and Charybdis, why not choose Scylla? You don't get anything out of making a monster out of Yakumo, either way. Quote:
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Remember that Eri's interest in Harima wouldn't be a threat, even if Yakumo was interested. It would only be a problem if Harima reciprocates. So why would there be any need for jealousy? |
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2007-03-03, 18:56 | Link #1635 |
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Flag ending is still possible but time is growing short... should be less then 40 days before *Torimaru* leaves...
(i know this might sound lame but what about the other characters? We havnt heard from souo, mikoto, sarah, etc... in such a long time ) |
2007-03-03, 19:10 | Link #1636 | |
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There is no reason for Yakumo to make amends and the slap can frankly be taken care of by a simple apology. The main point of the chapter is that Yakumo has finally realized her feelings. If Yakumo were to stand by even after all this, there would be no reason for the mangaka to make this chapter at all. He made it for a reason and this shows a change in Yakumo's personality and also in her attitude towards Harima. For her to not do anything after this realization would be turning the tears she shed into a lie. |
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2007-03-03, 20:51 | Link #1637 |
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too bad, i was hoping the chapter would've picked up from last time. i was hoping to see everyone's reactions to harima picking tenma over the manga (especially tenma's!) and i was hoping to see harima go crazy over the manga. oh well, i enjoy a little angst every now and then in SR.
i just hope they follow up on how people feel about harima picking tenma... it seems more and more people are finding out who likes who, so i'm hoping more people find out about who harima really likes. |
2007-03-03, 21:52 | Link #1638 |
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@ Swampstorm: Pretty good. I'm almost entirely convinced, because I find some truth in your analysis as well. It can probably only be done by a true Flagger, though, because most of us here were fixated on the changes in Yakumo shown in this chapter and any connection to the slap than going further back.
Her guilt, unfortunately, can be the cause of her own confusion as well. Making apologies is one thing, which I would approve of very much, but supporting Flag? What about her own opinion? After her little talk about how Tenma has been treating her and how great her sister was, I have little doubt that even if she apologize, there was little that can be used to stop her if she finds out Eri has "put down" Tenma again. Supporting Flag would need Yakumo to get rid of any and all prejudices she has against Eri, because guilt to her is one thing: Obstructions to her sister are another. It won't be right either if she were to support Flag out of guilt either, just to "make things right" for Eri. It's up to one's interpretation of what "things" she buried inside her. For one, your explanation sounds rather logical. It's still too early, though, to decide completely if she does or doesn't have any feelings for Harima. This chapter only shows a change in her. We need more actions, more reactions from Yakumo to decide on a clearer picture. The bad thing about Onigiri is that most of it is vague at best. Good to discuss, hard to decide. It has never been entirely clear like Oudou or Flag, which are easier to point out. Getting embroiled into an argument about it will be quite endless, IMO. Still, I can't help but feel even if this spells a revelation for Yakumo's feelings for Harima, the indication that Harima had chosen Tenma over the manga might actually be a signal to tell us that Onigiri has taken a step backwards. It's because of the fact that Onigiri mainly has its connections through the manga. This would probably be good for Yakumo, though, considering how focused she is on supporting Oudou now. |
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2007-03-03, 22:16 | Link #1640 | |
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And I highly doubt harima really going to acting for good. He still has a manga to write. He may even have to do it concurrently to meet the deadline. Something he definitely need yakumo with.
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