One Piece FanFiction Discussion

[xris]

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[BlackNhite]

A thousand thank-you's xris for setting this up. Now I can shoot off some ideas...

I've noticed as of late that most of the best One Piece fics are OC oriented. It's a bit odd to say that concerning a fanfic, but I think I know the reason why: it's hard for someone who is not Eiichiro Oda to really capture the "essence" of his characters.

I don't know what it is about One Piece as a fandom, but random high-school AU's and ship-fics just seem out of place, more so than they would in say the Naruto fandom.

Maybe it's because One Piece is more of a "sleeper-hit" here in America?

Oddly enough, I'm fine reading most One Piece material concerning OC's, even when they don't make the slightest mention of the Strawhats. Something about Oda's world has a habit of bringing out the best in writers' creativity and results in a plethora of wacky, interesting characters.

Or maybe I'm just getting lucky in my choice of fanfiction...

Regardless, One Piece is my most "OC tolerant" fandom.

[Rainbowman]

Okay, here's a story to show how I feel about the current situation involving the Strawhat crew being seperated:

My character Million D. Nickel and his crew along with the original crew would be trying to escape from Kizaru. Kizaru hits Nickel with his light attack resulting the following: Nickel and the original crew being split into 12 colored copies- Red, Orange, Yellow, Green, Blue, Purple, Cyan, Brown, Pink, Gray, White, and Black.
Kuma (who is upgraded to send characters to different planets) then arrives and sends the following away: Kitsu with the green copies, Brooke Spears with the gray copies, Leslie with the blue copies, Tink-top with the yellow copies, Francine with the cyan copies, Nickel and his assist characters with the orange copies (at which point the orange copy of Nickel realises that this event had happened to the original crew and gets angry by attacking Kuma), Streaker with the pink copies, Nico Robert with the purple copies and finally Monkey D. Cookie with the red, brown, white and black copies. Cookie's group lands on a planet that mostly resembles africa and are then captured by it's natives and sent to the male descendants of Boa Hancock and her sisters. The red, brown, white and black copies of Nickel then get angry and turn into their elemental monster forms: Balrog (red), Metaterror (brown), Evangelion (white), Gravidemon (black). They brutally beat their opponents and were about to finish them off only to have the red, brown, white, and black copies of Luffy and Nami calm them for now. The 4 groups of 12 colors then combine back into normal but Nickel is still angry from knowing Kuma had seperated the original strawhat crew. And until Nickel reunites with his other copies and his other crewmates, those copies of Nickel will not rest from their anger. What made things worse is that instead of looking for the others, Ace has to be rescued from execution. This made Nickel roar in fury so loud that ears would bleed. Nickel then went with Cookie and the 4 colored Luffy and Nami while the rest of the 4 colored copies of the original crew stayed behind. Nickel was supressing his anger until they get to Impel Down. Somewhere in other places, the following were dealing with the horrors of elemental monsters:

Orange copies on Master Rainbowman's home station fighting elemental monster Behemoth.
Cyan copies on an arctic version of cybertron fighting elemental monster Yetigo.
Blue copies on a planet of homosexuals (half like Amazon Lily and half like Kamabakka Kingdom) fighting elemental monster Leviathan.
Yellow copies on an insectoid planet fighting elemental monster Killerwatt.
Gray copies on a planet similar to Iraq and Iran fighting elemental monster Cosmohorror.
Pink copies on a planet similar to springfield fighting elemental monster Oroboros.
Purple copies on a mining planet fighting elemental monster Ziz
Green copies on a planet of ruin fighting elemental monster Covenent.

This story shows how angry I am with the current story of One Piece.

To learn more about my characters, visit: http://onepiecefanon.wikia.com/wiki/OnePiece_Fanon_Wiki

[ashez2ashes]

I wrote one a long time ago...
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2343867/...dhood_Memories

[denice25]

Thank you for the infos. Proud to be a member of this site.

[BlackNhite]

Found this a few days ago and will now shamelessly advertise it here.

Fanfiction.net: Existence

It's a Zoro-centric fic and, while not the most well-written, it does have a nice idea behind it and the overall plot and mechanics are exceptional among most fanfics (or maybe I just read too much trash).

Best of all, there are no pesky pairings (as of yet, hopefully never) to get in the way of my experience. I don't know why, but they tend to utterly ruin my experience...

[holyalexander]

hehehe... its about time.. and thanks for the link..

[falloutboy013]

thanks for the link....i just love one piece

[Rainbowman]

Originally Posted by BlackNhite

Found this a few days ago and will now shamelessly advertise it here.

Fanfiction.net: Existence

It's a Zoro-centric fic and, while not the most well-written, it does have a nice idea behind it and the overall plot and mechanics are exceptional among most fanfics (or maybe I just read too much trash).

Best of all, there are no pesky pairings (as of yet, hopefully never) to get in the way of my experience. I don't know why, but they tend to utterly ruin my experience...

No pairings huh? Typical for Zoro not being paired with anyone. I for one hope Oda can have Zoro realize that Tashigi is really his long lost friend Kuina at some point.

In the meantime, what are anyone's thoughts on a fanfiction that anyone could make, perhaps having One Piece characters in thier version of, say, "WATCHMEN"?

[BlackNhite]

Originally Posted by Rainbowman

No pairings huh? Typical for Zoro not being paired with anyone. I for one hope Oda can have Zoro realize that Tashigi is really his long lost friend Kuina at some point.

Meh, to each his own...

In the meantime, what are anyone's thoughts on a fanfiction that anyone could make, perhaps having One Piece characters in thier version of, say, "WATCHMEN"?

Number One: None of the Strawhats could be main characters (by main of course I mean Rorschach, Night Owl, Doctor Manhattan, Spectre, and of course Ozymandias.
Not that they wouldn't make great main cast, but with this setting it's just too good an opportunity to use our underappreciated marine and Shichibukai characters.
Hmm... DoFlamingo/Rorschach... I'm getting hot already!

[Rainbowman]

Originally Posted by BlackNhite

Number One: None of the Strawhats could be main characters (by main of course I mean Rorschach, Night Owl, Doctor Manhattan, Spectre, and of course Ozymandias.
Not that they wouldn't make great main cast, but with this setting it's just too good an opportunity to use our underappreciated marine and Shichibukai characters.
Hmm... DoFlamingo/Rorschach... I'm getting hot already!

You may have a point. Perhaps the Strawhat crew could cross over into the world of "WATCHMEN" and there could be team-ups:

Luffy, Nami, Usopp, and Chopper with Nite Owl and Silk Spectre
Sanji, Robin, Franky, and Brook with Doctor Manhattan
Zoro with Rorschach

The only One Piece character that I can think of to team up with Ozymandias is Monkey D. Dragon.

[BlackNhite]

Originally Posted by Rainbowman

Sanji, Robin, Franky, and Brook with Doctor Manhattan.

You know the good Doctor has to meet Eneru at some point...

"You dare build your glass monlith on MY Fairy Verth!? I shall take it as tribute to me!"

[Rainbowman]

Now that I think of it, I wonder how Rorschach would deal with the Tenryuubito? Probably the same like he did to Big Figure and his henchmen ending with blood.

[The_Three_Kings]

Originally Posted by Rainbowman

This story shows how angry I am with the current story of One Piece.

To learn more about my characters, visit: http://onepiecefanon.wikia.com/wiki/OnePiece_Fanon_Wiki

Lol your angry because Luffy went to save Ace before the crew? Just imagine this: Your mom/dad/brother/sister/best friend/girlfriend/boyfriend was on the verge of execution, about to die the next couple of days. However, your crew is separated too. However, they are all alive and each of them can hold their own in a fight. Also, all of them have a way of meeting back together (biblicard). So the choice is between saving someone precious to you on the verge of death or saving someone that is healthy and can take care of themselves.

[Rainbowman]

Originally Posted by The_Three_Kings

Lol your angry because Luffy went to save Ace before the crew? Just imagine this: Your mom/dad/brother/sister/best friend/girlfriend/boyfriend was on the verge of execution, about to die the next couple of days. However, your crew is separated too. However, they are all alive and each of them can hold their own in a fight. Also, all of them have a way of meeting back together (biblicard). So the choice is between saving someone precious to you on the verge of death or saving someone that is healthy and can take care of themselves.

You could be right, however it was the separation itself that was horrifying enough to make me angry enough to become the hulking monster who would brutally kill the one responsible for the separation.

On another subject I had come up with a teaser trailer that's mostly in text based on the 10th One Piece Movie: Strong World; with the orchastration of the first/teaser trailer of WATCHMEN. The following characters appear:

1st half of trailer:
The 3 Admirals
The 8 Shichibukai
The Impel Down staff
The 4 Yonkou
The Tenryuubito

Someone quotes: "God help us all"

2nd half of trailer:
Arlong
Miss Doublefinger
Baron Omattsuri with Lily Carnation
CP9 members Kalifa and Spandam
Absolom and Zombie Lola
Kinjishi
Silhouette of Million D. Nickel in Tiger Hulk form

Then we get to a scene with the Original Strawhat crew in government uniforms, then a different scene with the Future version of the Strawhat crew, then a scene with Nami, then a scene with Monkey D. Cookie crying. During those scenes Million D. Nickel makes his voice as rough as Rorshach's in quoting: "My crew will be wanting me back including the members I love..."

We then go to a scene with Million D. Nickel who is brooding then shows his "eyes of the sith". During that scene he would quote: "...I will have to tell them...'No'."

Final trailer scene:
We view panning away a monster (possibly Nickel's corrupted Ultimate form) with symbols repesenting a zodiac in a circle who is as large as Oz from Thriller Bark.

Title: One Piece Galaxy: Wrath of the Zodiac
turns into release date transformers style then turns into Strawhat Pirate insignia

[Rainbowman]

Originally Posted by Rainbowman

You could be right, however it was the separation itself that was horrifying enough to make me angry enough to become the hulking monster who would brutally kill the one responsible for the separation.

On another subject I had come up with a teaser trailer that's mostly in text based on the 10th One Piece Movie: Strong World; with the orchastration of the first/teaser trailer of WATCHMEN. The following characters appear:

1st half of trailer:
The 3 Admirals
The 8 Shichibukai
The Impel Down staff
The 4 Yonkou
The Tenryuubito

Someone quotes: "God help us all"

2nd half of trailer:
Arlong
Miss Doublefinger
Baron Omattsuri with Lily Carnation
CP9 members Kalifa and Spandam
Absolom and Zombie Lola
Kinjishi
Silhouette of Million D. Nickel in Tiger Hulk form

Then we get to a scene with the Original Strawhat crew in government uniforms, then a different scene with the Future version of the Strawhat crew, then a scene with Nami, then a scene with Monkey D. Cookie crying. During those scenes Million D. Nickel makes his voice as rough as Rorshach's in quoting: "My crew will be wanting me back including the members I love..."

We then go to a scene with Million D. Nickel who is brooding then shows his "eyes of the sith". During that scene he would quote: "...I will have to tell them...'No'."

Final trailer scene:
We view panning away a monster (possibly Nickel's corrupted Ultimate form) with symbols repesenting a zodiac in a circle who is as large as Oz from Thriller Bark.

Title: One Piece Galaxy: Wrath of the Zodiac
turns into release date transformers style then turns into Strawhat Pirate insignia

I never wanted to double post this, but I updated this in case anyone hasn't noticed and I'm waiting for an answer.

[Perona]

^ I just want to say, Rainbowman you got too much time on your hands to think of that lol

But I think it's kind of cool even though, some of those names I don't recognize. Maybe it's those characters you made xD

I need to see that movie Watchmen and Can't wait for Movie 10

[Rainbowman]

Originally Posted by Perona

^ I just want to say, Rainbowman you got too much time on your hands to think of that lol

Mostly because I don't get much info on what is being made.

Originally Posted by Perona

But I think it's kind of cool even though, some of those names I don't recognize. Maybe it's those characters you made xD

You can look at the info on the characters I made at http://onepiecefanon.wikia.com/wiki/OnePiece_Fanon_Wiki
and maybe make color pictures to help visualize them.

Originally Posted by Perona

I need to see that movie Watchmen and Can't wait for Movie 10

Speaking of Movie 10, have you seen it's new teaser trailer on youtube.com? The 10th movie is supposed to be titled "Strong World", however no one has translated that particular teaser trailer yet.

[kingsky123]

Originally Posted by BlackNhite

Found this a few days ago and will now shamelessly advertise it here.

Fanfiction.net: Existence

It's a Zoro-centric fic and, while not the most well-written, it does have a nice idea behind it and the overall plot and mechanics are exceptional among most fanfics (or maybe I just read too much trash).

Best of all, there are no pesky pairings (as of yet, hopefully never) to get in the way of my experience. I don't know why, but they tend to utterly ruin my experience...

seconded. This is well-written.

[BlackNhite]

Originally Posted by kingsky123

seconded. This is well-written.

Woof, woof! (wags tail)

A dog is always happy to be praised for his finds!