Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[00-Raiser]

Originally Posted by Nanya01

Heh, thanks guys.

And, Moczo, I know that those people would be upset.

I don't care.

Anyway...

Raiser, this one's for you.

Spoiler for Erio/Lutecia:

Sighing as she relaxed in her outdoor bath, Lutecia smiled as she looked up at the night sky. She was dressed in a modest, for her anyway, light purple bikini that matched her hair. Smiling, she turned as she heard the door open. "Glad you could make it." She slid over and let her companion, who was wearing a red swimsuit, into the water with her.

"Well, you asked nicely." Her companion smiled at her.

"Thanks for joining me, Erio." Lutecia smiled as she slid up next to him, sighing softly as he wrapped an arm around her shoulders. "I'm surprised Caro isn't jealous..."

Erio chuckled softly. "We don't have those feelings for each other. She's more like a sister to me than anything else..."

"Fufufufufufufu... I beat the midget at something then." Lutecia grinned, causing both of them to laugh. "Still, thanks for coming out here." Closing her eyes, Lutecia smiled more as he squeezed her shoulder.

"How about you, Lutecia... You could join the Bureau and get transferred to work with Caro and myself, then you could see us all the time?"

Lutecia shook her head. "I'm happy as it is. Maybe in a couple of years, but my restrictions aren't as bad as they used to be." She still had her limiter, but it wasn't as strong as it had been before, thankfully.

"Well... I wouldn't mind you joining us." Erio smiled as she blushed. "It would be nice to have you around more often too."

She smirked and moved so that she was straddling his lap. "Why? So you could make out with me every day?"

Erio blushed slightly, but smirked back at her. He didn't mind her teasing, in fact, he was pretty used to it. "I don't see the problem."

She leaned in closer to him. "People might say we're a couple."

He shrugged as he moved his head closer to hers. "People say too much, I think."

"What if they call me your girlfriend?"

"You say that like it's a bad thing." Erio whispered to her.

Both of them closed their eyes as their lips met, their arms wrapping around each other as they kissed and revelled in the sensation of skin on skin. Both of them shuddered into the kiss. They wanted to do more, they both did, but they both knew the risks, and they both knew that they weren't ready, not yet, for the results if they went that far.

"Sorry..." Lutecia whispered as she leaned against him, her head resting on the crook of his neck. "I am."

"It's okay..." Erio didn't like it either, but he wasn't ready, not yet. "Maybe in a few years."

"Yeah..." She smiled as he rubbed her back. She could feel that he wanted it as much as she did, but she was thankful that he wouldn't push it.

Watching them from the house, Megane smiled. Erio was good for Lutecia. Her eyes sparkled in happiness. Maybe in a couple of years, they would get more serious. At least, she hoped so. "Fufufufufufufu..." She rubbed her hands together while chuckling. She wouldn't push it though, she wanted to see how it developed on its own.

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Thanks a lot, Nanya. That was just perfect I especially like this exchange:

"What if they call me your girlfriend?"

"You say that like it's a bad thing."

It's nice that they're taking things slowly. These days people are too quick to jump right into the sex.

Oh that Megane. She seems like the type that'd already be planning her daughter's wedding and would overboard on it

[Justin_Brett]

Oh, trolling. You're such a lovely force when used in the right way.

[Moczo]

Originally Posted by Nanya01

Heh, thanks guys.

And, Moczo, I know that those people would be upset.

I don't care.

Just so long as you understand you're doing the internet equivalent of shouting at a brick wall. A brick wall that shouts back.

... I should have thought of a better metaphor.

Anyway...

Raiser, this one's for you.

Spoiler for Erio/Lutecia:

Sighing as she relaxed in her outdoor bath, Lutecia smiled as she looked up at the night sky. She was dressed in a modest, for her anyway, light purple bikini that matched her hair. Smiling, she turned as she heard the door open. "Glad you could make it." She slid over and let her companion, who was wearing a red swimsuit, into the water with her.

"Well, you asked nicely." Her companion smiled at her.

"Thanks for joining me, Erio." Lutecia smiled as she slid up next to him, sighing softly as he wrapped an arm around her shoulders. "I'm surprised Caro isn't jealous..."

Erio chuckled softly. "We don't have those feelings for each other. She's more like a sister to me than anything else..."

"Fufufufufufufu... I beat the midget at something then." Lutecia grinned, causing both of them to laugh. "Still, thanks for coming out here." Closing her eyes, Lutecia smiled more as he squeezed her shoulder.

"How about you, Lutecia... You could join the Bureau and get transferred to work with Caro and myself, then you could see us all the time?"

Lutecia shook her head. "I'm happy as it is. Maybe in a couple of years, but my restrictions aren't as bad as they used to be." She still had her limiter, but it wasn't as strong as it had been before, thankfully.

"Well... I wouldn't mind you joining us." Erio smiled as she blushed. "It would be nice to have you around more often too."

She smirked and moved so that she was straddling his lap. "Why? So you could make out with me every day?"

Erio blushed slightly, but smirked back at her. He didn't mind her teasing, in fact, he was pretty used to it. "I don't see the problem."

She leaned in closer to him. "People might say we're a couple."

He shrugged as he moved his head closer to hers. "People say too much, I think."

"What if they call me your girlfriend?"

"You say that like it's a bad thing." Erio whispered to her.

Both of them closed their eyes as their lips met, their arms wrapping around each other as they kissed and revelled in the sensation of skin on skin. Both of them shuddered into the kiss. They wanted to do more, they both did, but they both knew the risks, and they both knew that they weren't ready, not yet, for the results if they went that far.

"Sorry..." Lutecia whispered as she leaned against him, her head resting on the crook of his neck. "I am."

"It's okay..." Erio didn't like it either, but he wasn't ready, not yet. "Maybe in a few years."

"Yeah..." She smiled as he rubbed her back. She could feel that he wanted it as much as she did, but she was thankful that he wouldn't push it.

Watching them from the house, Megane smiled. Erio was good for Lutecia. Her eyes sparkled in happiness. Maybe in a couple of years, they would get more serious. At least, she hoped so. "Fufufufufufufu..." She rubbed her hands together while chuckling. She wouldn't push it though, she wanted to see how it developed on its own.

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Heh. Cute.

[Justin_Brett]

Nah, that's pretty perfect.

[Tabasco]

Originally Posted by Nanya01

Heh, thanks guys.

Spoiler for Erio/Lutecia:

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Awww. I'm with Megane, a girl could do a whole lot worse. A certain irony in one of the resident speedsters taking things slowly though.

[itanshi1]

Hey, he's a lance user. He knows who to poke and who to slice or wait what?

[deathcurse]

Originally Posted by RadiantBeam

And you wanted to keep it short.

I should know better than to ever start any "short" stories . You would think that after 6 different short stories have mutated into longer series on me, that I would have learned my lesson!

[blitz1/2]

Originally Posted by Justin_Brett

Oh, trolling. You're such a lovely force when used in the right way.

umm, wrong thread for u?

[itanshi1]

Originally Posted by Nanya01

Due to certain "reviews" that I have read and the idiots on 4Chan, as well as the Manga thread, I HAD to write this...

He might be reffering to this

[Tiresias]

Originally Posted by Yasanagi

Uploaded a new chapter of Material Days with some new scenes here and there and a few other rewritten items.

Available here.

Just want to tell you that you use Touma on chapter 3 but switched to Thoma on 7. You might want to pick one and stick with it, whichever it is

[Yasanagi]

Touma is how Nanya spells it. Forgot to change it to Thoma so I'll probably get around it later.

Edit: Ah, screw it. Touma it is.

[Mathais]

Hi! I know that this is quite possibly one of the worst places to ask this question, but are there any BL!Yuuno stories? Possibly of the Yuuno/Chrono variety, but I'll take anything at this point. I've already done a search of a good portion of this thread and found some old Chrono/Yuuno stuff and this interesting Verossa/Chrono thing, but I just wanted to know if anyone else has stumbled across something?

Before anyone asks, yes, I've already followed the "if you can't find it, write it" maxim for fanfiction, and while I don't claim to be any good, I just want to see if there's any more.

Thanks in advance!

[RadiantBeam]

Originally Posted by Mathais

Hi! I know that this is quite possibly one of the worst places to ask this question, but are there any BL!Yuuno stories? Possibly of the Yuuno/Chrono variety, but I'll take anything at this point. I've already done a search of a good portion of this thread and found some old Chrono/Yuuno stuff and this interesting Verossa/Chrono thing, but I just wanted to know if anyone else has stumbled across something?

Before anyone asks, yes, I've already followed the "if you can't find it, write it" maxim for fanfiction, and while I don't claim to be any good, I just want to see if there's any more.

Thanks in advance!

Hmmm....

Well, I was going to say that we have some older fics buried in the thread if you go back, but you already mentioned those, so I guess that's a no go in terms of suggestions. Um.... by any chance, have you checked out Fanfiction.net? Last time I checked, I didn't see anything specific for Yuuno BL stories, but I could be wrong.

If worst comes to worst, you could always make a request in the thread for someone to pick up.

Sorry I wasn't much help.

[00-Raiser]

Originally Posted by Mathais

Hi! I know that this is quite possibly one of the worst places to ask this question, but are there any BL!Yuuno stories? Possibly of the Yuuno/Chrono variety, but I'll take anything at this point. I've already done a search of a good portion of this thread and found some old Chrono/Yuuno stuff and this interesting Verossa/Chrono thing, but I just wanted to know if anyone else has stumbled across something?

Before anyone asks, yes, I've already followed the "if you can't find it, write it" maxim for fanfiction, and while I don't claim to be any good, I just want to see if there's any more.

Thanks in advance!

I wrote a Chrono/Yuuno short. I did a Vice/Griffith one too.

[blitz1/2]

Originally Posted by itanshi1

He might be reffering to this

What's this about and 4chan?

[Mathais]

Ah, thanks for the help! I've already been through fanfiction.net 'cause it's my fanfiction home and fav'd ShortS (and not just for the BL!) along with a lot of the stories mentioned here. I guess I'll just have to try writing more of my own.

[RadiantBeam]

I... I don't even know how to explain this short. Words fail me.

Spoiler for Fall down, your mind:

A pained gasp, followed by a soft sigh; beneath her fingers, gently gripping the other woman’s arm to keep her still out of instinct, though she knew very well that her victim wouldn’t try to run. It was, as always, an irony that never escaped her.

She didn’t know how long they stayed liked that; a few seconds or a few minutes, she didn’t keep count. Finally, though, she’d had her fill and pulled away, wiping at her mouth with the back of her hand; in the moonlight, there was a flash of blood-stained fangs.

Grimacing, Takamachi Miyuki lifted a hand and gently pressed it to the bite marks on her neck, wondering when this had stopped freaking her out. “Was that enough?” she asked.

In the darkness, she couldn’t see Shinobu nod, but she didn’t need to; the older woman would have kept drinking if she needed more. Wincing slightly at the soft sting, the black-haired girl rubbed the spot to soothe it. Noticing this, Shinobu hastily scooted off the bed and grabbed some Band-Aids.

“Sorry. I bit too hard again.”

“It’s fine.” She smiled sheepishly. “I’m the only person you use for this, so it’s not like you practice much on everyone else.” Accepting the Band-Aid, she pressed it onto the bite; she’d have to take care to keep it hidden until it healed.

“I’m still sorry,” Shinobu murmured, going back to sit on the side of the bed.

“And I said it’s fine. You aren’t going to tell Kyou-chan about this, and you need to get blood from somewhere.” Though deep down, Miyuki couldn’t help but fight the feeling that in a way, they were both somehow cheating on Kyouya by doing this; Shinobu by not telling him about her condition, for a lack of better word, and Miyuki for agreeing to help her handle it.

Sighing and knowing she wasn’t about to get the younger girl to blame her, Shinobu brushed loose strands of purple hair out of her eyes. “Do you want me to walk you home? It’s late, and the news said a storm was blowing in.”

Miyuki shook her head, sliding off the bed and adjusting the hood of her sweater. “I’ll be all right. It’s not too long a walk, and the buses are still running.” She smiled easily and adjusted her glasses, grabbing her bag. “Call me when you get thirsty again, okay?”

Was she the only one who hated how normal this had become? Shinobu got up and followed Miyuki out of her bedroom and down to the front door, both women taking care to keep their footsteps light so no one would hear them.

“Shinobu-san?” She hadn’t answered.

Jolted out of her thoughts, Shinobu shook her head and nodded quickly. “Right. I will.” She opened the door and stepped outside with Miyuki, smiling sheepishly when the younger girl gave her an amused look. “At least let me walk you out.”

“You feel guilt too easily, Shinobu-san.” Shouldering her bag, Miyuki easily bounded down the steps and started off; in the darkness, wearing her usual black sweatshirt, the girl seemed to fade into the night.

She hesitated, then called out. “Miyuki.”

The younger girl paused and looked back. “Yeah?”

“Do you… do you think we’ll ever tell Kyouya about this?”

At that, the black-haired girl laughed. “Which part, Shinobu-san? That you’re a vampire, or that I’m your preferred victim?”

Shinobu was silent; she had no response to that. Turning her back, Miyuki lifted her hand in a light wave and disappeared into the night.

Sighing softly, the older woman closed the door behind her and headed back upstairs. It was late, and she had early classes tomorrow. Noel would be suspicious if she slept in.

She could still taste Miyuki’s blood on her tongue.

Spoiler for What is this I don't even:

1. So yeah. Expanding a bit on Triangle Hearts 3, in which Shinobu is a vampire. Obviously this is set in MGLN 'verse, but still, if Dezo gets to play around with the aspect, why can't I?

2. So, um, I guess this would kind of be a "friends with benefits" situation for Shinobu and Miyuki. Only instead of sex, Shinobu gets blood. And... I don't really know what Miyuki gets out of it. Knowing something about Shinobu that Kyouya doesn't know?

[Tabasco]

Interesting~

Maybe oddly, the first thing I wondered is 'how did that arrangement even get set up in the first place?' As far as motivation goes, I guess its possible Miyuki likes it somehow...? Though that immediately opens up a whole new set of questions, so maybe better to not pursue that line of thought.

[DezoPenguin]

Originally Posted by RadiantBeam

I... I don't even know how to explain this short. Words fail me.

Spoiler for Fall down, your mind:

A pained gasp, followed by a soft sigh; beneath her fingers, gently gripping the other woman’s arm to keep her still out of instinct, though she knew very well that her victim wouldn’t try to run. It was, as always, an irony that never escaped her.

She didn’t know how long they stayed liked that; a few seconds or a few minutes, she didn’t keep count. Finally, though, she’d had her fill and pulled away, wiping at her mouth with the back of her hand; in the moonlight, there was a flash of blood-stained fangs.

Grimacing, Takamachi Miyuki lifted a hand and gently pressed it to the bite marks on her neck, wondering when this had stopped freaking her out. “Was that enough?” she asked.

In the darkness, she couldn’t see Shinobu nod, but she didn’t need to; the older woman would have kept drinking if she needed more. Wincing slightly at the soft sting, the black-haired girl rubbed the spot to soothe it. Noticing this, Shinobu hastily scooted off the bed and grabbed some Band-Aids.

“Sorry. I bit too hard again.”

“It’s fine.” She smiled sheepishly. “I’m the only person you use for this, so it’s not like you practice much on everyone else.” Accepting the Band-Aid, she pressed it onto the bite; she’d have to take care to keep it hidden until it healed.

“I’m still sorry,” Shinobu murmured, going back to sit on the side of the bed.

“And I said it’s fine. You aren’t going to tell Kyou-chan about this, and you need to get blood from somewhere.” Though deep down, Miyuki couldn’t help but fight the feeling that in a way, they were both somehow cheating on Kyouya by doing this; Shinobu by not telling him about her condition, for a lack of better word, and Miyuki for agreeing to help her handle it.

Sighing and knowing she wasn’t about to get the younger girl to blame her, Shinobu brushed loose strands of purple hair out of her eyes. “Do you want me to walk you home? It’s late, and the news said a storm was blowing in.”

Miyuki shook her head, sliding off the bed and adjusting the hood of her sweater. “I’ll be all right. It’s not too long a walk, and the buses are still running.” She smiled easily and adjusted her glasses, grabbing her bag. “Call me when you get thirsty again, okay?”

Was she the only one who hated how normal this had become? Shinobu got up and followed Miyuki out of her bedroom and down to the front door, both women taking care to keep their footsteps light so no one would hear them.

“Shinobu-san?” She hadn’t answered.

Jolted out of her thoughts, Shinobu shook her head and nodded quickly. “Right. I will.” She opened the door and stepped outside with Miyuki, smiling sheepishly when the younger girl gave her an amused look. “At least let me walk you out.”

“You feel guilt too easily, Shinobu-san.” Shouldering her bag, Miyuki easily bounded down the steps and started off; in the darkness, wearing her usual black sweatshirt, the girl seemed to fade into the night.

She hesitated, then called out. “Miyuki.”

The younger girl paused and looked back. “Yeah?”

“Do you… do you think we’ll ever tell Kyouya about this?”

At that, the black-haired girl laughed. “Which part, Shinobu-san? That you’re a vampire, or that I’m your preferred victim?”

Shinobu was silent; she had no response to that. Turning her back, Miyuki lifted her hand in a light wave and disappeared into the night.

Sighing softly, the older woman closed the door behind her and headed back upstairs. It was late, and she had early classes tomorrow. Noel would be suspicious if she slept in.

She could still taste Miyuki’s blood on her tongue.

Spoiler for What is this I don't even:

1. So yeah. Expanding a bit on Triangle Hearts 3, in which Shinobu is a vampire. Obviously this is set in MGLN 'verse, but still, if Dezo gets to play around with the aspect, why can't I?

2. So, um, I guess this would kind of be a "friends with benefits" situation for Shinobu and Miyuki. Only instead of sex, Shinobu gets blood. And... I don't really know what Miyuki gets out of it. Knowing something about Shinobu that Kyouya doesn't know?

Given the fact that they're not telling Kyouya, I think it goes a little beyond "friends" on Shinobu's part...especially with that last line. And the whole part about not telling Noel. Oh, yeah, I sense angst in the making if you ever decide to extend this! (Not sure about Miyuki, either...she seems more noncommittal, more that she's concentrating on the process rather than the girl, if you know what I mean?)

Heh...let's see, you've paired Miyuki with Fiasse, Shamal, Nanoha, and now Shinobu in your fics. She's kind of the Little Black Dress of your MGLN stories, eh?

[Moczo]

Originally Posted by RadiantBeam

I... I don't even know how to explain this short. Words fail me.

Spoiler for Fall down, your mind:

A pained gasp, followed by a soft sigh; beneath her fingers, gently gripping the other woman’s arm to keep her still out of instinct, though she knew very well that her victim wouldn’t try to run. It was, as always, an irony that never escaped her.

She didn’t know how long they stayed liked that; a few seconds or a few minutes, she didn’t keep count. Finally, though, she’d had her fill and pulled away, wiping at her mouth with the back of her hand; in the moonlight, there was a flash of blood-stained fangs.

Grimacing, Takamachi Miyuki lifted a hand and gently pressed it to the bite marks on her neck, wondering when this had stopped freaking her out. “Was that enough?” she asked.

In the darkness, she couldn’t see Shinobu nod, but she didn’t need to; the older woman would have kept drinking if she needed more. Wincing slightly at the soft sting, the black-haired girl rubbed the spot to soothe it. Noticing this, Shinobu hastily scooted off the bed and grabbed some Band-Aids.

“Sorry. I bit too hard again.”

“It’s fine.” She smiled sheepishly. “I’m the only person you use for this, so it’s not like you practice much on everyone else.” Accepting the Band-Aid, she pressed it onto the bite; she’d have to take care to keep it hidden until it healed.

“I’m still sorry,” Shinobu murmured, going back to sit on the side of the bed.

“And I said it’s fine. You aren’t going to tell Kyou-chan about this, and you need to get blood from somewhere.” Though deep down, Miyuki couldn’t help but fight the feeling that in a way, they were both somehow cheating on Kyouya by doing this; Shinobu by not telling him about her condition, for a lack of better word, and Miyuki for agreeing to help her handle it.

Sighing and knowing she wasn’t about to get the younger girl to blame her, Shinobu brushed loose strands of purple hair out of her eyes. “Do you want me to walk you home? It’s late, and the news said a storm was blowing in.”

Miyuki shook her head, sliding off the bed and adjusting the hood of her sweater. “I’ll be all right. It’s not too long a walk, and the buses are still running.” She smiled easily and adjusted her glasses, grabbing her bag. “Call me when you get thirsty again, okay?”

Was she the only one who hated how normal this had become? Shinobu got up and followed Miyuki out of her bedroom and down to the front door, both women taking care to keep their footsteps light so no one would hear them.

“Shinobu-san?” She hadn’t answered.

Jolted out of her thoughts, Shinobu shook her head and nodded quickly. “Right. I will.” She opened the door and stepped outside with Miyuki, smiling sheepishly when the younger girl gave her an amused look. “At least let me walk you out.”

“You feel guilt too easily, Shinobu-san.” Shouldering her bag, Miyuki easily bounded down the steps and started off; in the darkness, wearing her usual black sweatshirt, the girl seemed to fade into the night.

She hesitated, then called out. “Miyuki.”

The younger girl paused and looked back. “Yeah?”

“Do you… do you think we’ll ever tell Kyouya about this?”

At that, the black-haired girl laughed. “Which part, Shinobu-san? That you’re a vampire, or that I’m your preferred victim?”

Shinobu was silent; she had no response to that. Turning her back, Miyuki lifted her hand in a light wave and disappeared into the night.

Sighing softly, the older woman closed the door behind her and headed back upstairs. It was late, and she had early classes tomorrow. Noel would be suspicious if she slept in.

She could still taste Miyuki’s blood on her tongue.

Spoiler for What is this I don't even:

1. So yeah. Expanding a bit on Triangle Hearts 3, in which Shinobu is a vampire. Obviously this is set in MGLN 'verse, but still, if Dezo gets to play around with the aspect, why can't I?

2. So, um, I guess this would kind of be a "friends with benefits" situation for Shinobu and Miyuki. Only instead of sex, Shinobu gets blood. And... I don't really know what Miyuki gets out of it. Knowing something about Shinobu that Kyouya doesn't know?

Well it was... it was certainly different, that's for sure. I mean good, but also a bit out of left-field

Maybe Miyuki's just being nice? She's supporting her big brother's love, in her own... slightly unusual way!