2011-12-30, 09:19 | Link #15523 |
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He's going to win Marty Stu Award in this fandom. Even Seadra's OC can't match him. side note - waduh parah kabeh ngomongna basa filipina -_- @ERas Seitokai Yakuindomo is a (technically) harem comedy where girls are WAY more perverted than the boys, mostly verbal and visual gag is part of the appeal, it's dialogue is comprised of double entendre and bread-eggs-milk-squick. The main character is not dense, instead he was celibate and a nicer version of deadpan snarker.
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2011-12-30, 09:23 | Link #15525 |
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Can we please go back to english? I'm having a hard time grasping most of it.
@ Senpai - So how would calling her immature and a bit of an idiot not ruin the moment? Also, he never says or does anything bad to her. In fact, most of the time he just helps her and doesn't talk.
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2011-12-30, 09:29 | Link #15526 |
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Does Irish have compassion of sort? He might even apologize if he did (in his own way). Or maybe we can have Maya being crybaby but otherwise determinator.
If Irish doesn't talk a lot to Maya, make each conversation between them meaningful. And in fiction, characters doesn't always talk verbally. Facial expression and body actions can be a form of communication as well.
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Now that's just taking it too far...
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2011-12-30, 09:33 | Link #15528 |
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He doesn't ay it out loud, of course. The only problem is that he constantly snarks in his head and putting it in his POV might ruin things. Also, he's not exactly a nice guy at this point.
Side note - Seitokai Yakuindomo made me laugh since even though the girls talk about perverted things, it's pretty obvious they aren't because they're being shameless or teasing. They did just recently go co-ed, maybe that's the reason why. Also, the main guy is hilarious for a harem protag since he's so deadpan and serious.
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2011-12-30, 09:37 | Link #15529 |
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How about his POV slowly change from constant snark to neutral to somewhat pleasant but confused? This will make his developments stand out more.
side note - Yes, Imagine Houki channeling Shino (both voiced by Youko Hikasa), the world will implode.
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2011-12-30, 09:40 | Link #15530 |
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So he calls her an idiot t first, but stops doing it later on? Also, what causes blushing other than embarassment or shyness?
Side note - Houki as Shino is impossible For one thing, she's not even his senpai. Do you know Seitokai no Ichizon? Funniest harem lead ever!
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2011-12-30, 09:47 | Link #15534 |
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@ 3-Senpai - So the whole naturally blushing thing people in anime have is BS?
Side note - Fits Tatenashi better @ Senpai - Why not? The harem lead was funny, he fully takes beatings in stride since he pretty much baits the girls on purpose, acts serious when he needs to, and doesn't even actually want a harem and acts like a pervert to dissuade the girls from liking him.
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2011-12-30, 09:57 | Link #15539 |
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@Era-chin
Not.. ahem, lies so far, it just that blushing can also caused by other factor than embarrassment. People in real life blushed when they're embarrassed, I don't see why people in fiction don't. =.= Side note - See Box's comment Anyway, we're going to have pajama party somehow, too bad you can't join nii-nii! See you guys later. |
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