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Fireminer · 2014-03-04, 05:39

Any preview?

ZeroXSEED · 2014-03-04, 06:30

Nah, it's a bare bones as of now, will zombify it after another GBF

Fireminer · 2014-03-04, 09:57

Careful not to overdue yourself! I'd hate to see GBFCR got delayed.

And have you make a character sheet like I suggested?

ZeroXSEED · 2014-03-04, 10:30

Not yet, I'm doing the cover as well as screening the character portrait for convenience

You can see Azuma and Meguru in the front now

(EDIT: FRAK I use wrong hair color, they look like Reiji and Aila now

)

Fireminer · 2014-03-04, 10:43

Frankly, where did you copy that?

And a mecha list, too.

Hmm... Can you add hardpoints to a transformable suit? I'm brainstorming a crossover fic with Muv-Luv, in which four characters use these: Rosso Aegis, Kyrios, Delta Plus and Age-2.

ZeroXSEED · 2014-03-04, 10:49

A lot of sources, but the character is from SPIRAL

Should be possible to mount either under the backpack or around the wings, however the payload would be tiny.

And it's really hard to notice, but Meguru's Akatsuki is modified to act like a TSF rather than Mobile suit

Anyway, we're off topic now, see you later when I post the Gotanda oneshot.

blitz1/2 · 2014-03-04, 11:37

@fireminer:

In a way, we are doing that split personality with Madoka in Sacred Twins, like ichika, she also has a darker side, one that wants to take ichika all for herself (spoiler if not read: She already revealed herself once already)

agetreme · 2014-03-04, 13:50

Reality say: The thing about transformable unit is.... things are surprisingly fragile when you add transformation into it.....It is probably due to having lots of moving part to accommodate the said transformation

Sci-fic says: Sure, why not?

=
AU-verse....

Spoiler for Generation Shift (rework version...if I got the time and mood)/AU-verse:

===

Meanwhile, in another universe/ OC-verse

New Male lead work as Tech support for ISA. Due to the high-tech equipment involved, the job pay really well (better than the Janitor).

Spoiler for ISes:

Silver-Throne · 2014-03-04, 16:58

Quote:

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

So the new pairing would be Dan and Ran, prepare for the ensuing shitstorm D:

(It'll be an oneshot)

Now that`s what you call 'That`s so wrong to many levels " lol

Tempest35 · 2014-03-04, 17:58

...I have contemplated this 'issue' with lack of other than Orimura wincest and quite frankly - it's someone else's problem.

Although... Shinomono-cest can be brought into the equation... buuuut i dun wanna~

~*~

Quote:

"Nee-san."

She turned her head towards the door partition as it slid open, revealing the form of her little brother.

"Enter," she granted permission with the simple word and slight nod of her head before she turned away, completing her task at hand. "To what do I owe the honor, little brother?"

"...are you... are you really leaving?"

She paused, her hand resting on the suitcase that lay on her bed - the answer to his query was plain to see. What stopped her was not his question but the accusation and hurt in his voice. Long had she struggled to keep him smiling and happy as an elder sibling should, and yet...
"Isn't it obvious by now Ichika? I told you that I was leaving."

"But you promised me that you wouldn't leave us! To leave me!!" He stood there, small fists trembling, tears already forming in his eyes. No, they were there before when he came into the room, she just took notice of it.

"Ichika, you are not a pampered child any longer. I have to go - Grandfather summoned me to that place after all." "You are to stay here with the Shinomono family in the meantime. Tabane and Houki will be your sisters in my place."

"Never!" His cry had such a vehemence that it surprised even her. "There is only one Nee-san in the world for me - Chifuyu-nee is my only nee-san!!" The force of his proclamation moved her heart as she beheld him standing before her, trying and failing to keep the tears from falling down his young cheeks. How she cursed her fate and her grandfather for making her hurt her precious one so...

"I know, Ichika, I know." She knelt in front of him, even as he wiped his eyes with more force than necessary. "I know I promised to stay with you always, but I also promised myself, the first time I held you in my arms, that I would protect you always. This is keeping with that promise." She tugged his shirt towards herself and he wrapped his arms around her neck tightly. "I'm going to make sure that you remain safe and happy. If I don't go, then many other brothers will lose their precious sisters."

"Don't I get to be selfish," he whispered in a broken voice next to her ear. She felt her heart breaking in response.

"...no, not this time," she said, fighting to keep her own emotions in check.

He whimpered and his hold tightened around her neck as she rubbed his back soothingly.
"Ichika..."

"Ch-Chifuyu-nee..." His voice was weaker, as if he was incredibly sleepy. Chifuyu lifted his face up and saw that he had indeed fallen asleep just like that.

"That Tabane...she must have given him something to drink."

"Miss Orimura, it is time," the voice was loud but respectful as the driver called into the house. "Orimura-sama is awaiting your arrival."

"I shall be there presently," she replied back as she lifted her little brother up in her arms and set him down on her bed. With a lingering kiss upon his forehead, she took her suitcase and headed towards the door, pausing to take one last look at him before leaving the house for Tokyo.

Twelve days later, the Third Clash occurred. Thousands of people died, hundreds vanished... Orimura Chifuyu was heralded as being the Savior of Sawagaki and the Hero of the Third Clash. That day, was also the last time anyone saw her again...

Yay~ I can still write~ I based this off of Freezing. Horrible story - great art.

Fireminer · 2014-03-04, 19:30

@Tempest: I believe that Madoka is the culprit.

Madoka: MWAHAHA! Ichika-nii is mine! FOREVER!

Izumi. · 2014-03-04, 22:28

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tempest35

...I have contemplated this 'issue' with lack of other than Orimura wincest and quite frankly - it's someone else's problem.

Although... Shinomono-cest can be brought into the equation... buuuut i dun wanna~

~*~

Yay~ I can still write~ I based this off of Freezing. Horrible story - great art.

LOL freezing. it's not quality but the babes are hot. That was honestly one of the sweetest things I have read, granted I haven't read much. I hate to say this. That made me more open in their wincest, isn't wincest a supernatural term? for Sam and Dean?

StratoSpear · 2014-03-05, 00:09

Quote:

Originally Posted by agetreme

Reality say: The thing about transformable unit is.... things are surprisingly fragile when you add transformation into it.....It is probably due to having lots of moving part to accommodate the said transformation

Sci-fic says: Sure, why not?

=
AU-verse....

Spoiler for Generation Shift (rework version...if I got the time and mood)/AU-verse:

===

Meanwhile, in another universe/ OC-verse

New Male lead work as Tech support for ISA. Due to the high-tech equipment involved, the job pay really well (better than the Janitor).

Spoiler for ISes:

Now that I think about it, you could probably apply a Sei/Reiji dynamic to that idea. One engineers, the other pilots.

DarkJak2050 · 2014-03-05, 03:52

Looks to me that everyone here's doing okay on their fics.

ZeroXSEED · 2014-03-05, 05:08

@ Jak
we're trying to recover from fandom crisis

Silver-Throne · 2014-03-05, 06:38

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tempest35

...I have contemplated this 'issue' with lack of other than Orimura wincest and quite frankly - it's someone else's problem.

Although... Shinomono-cest can be brought into the equation... buuuut i dun wanna~

~*~

Yay~ I can still write~ I based this off of Freezing. Horrible story - great art.

Go for it! Im taking a break now..playing World of Tanks just took my energy

agetreme · 2014-03-05, 08:14

Quote:

Originally Posted by StratoSpear

Now that I think about it, you could probably apply a Sei/Reiji dynamic to that idea. One engineers, the other pilots.

Come to think of it....

Yea... it is a great idea.

Which means more focus on tournament... which is good considering the canon lack of it.

Edit: The Dynamic extend beyond just IS. Vantier operators has their own Dynamic to it. One pilot, the other support.

To make them more of a team, probably working under the same tech company which work on ISes as project once in a while.

Second edit: They share the same Mentor (inventor of Vantier) who for once, is not a genius pretending to be a madman but actually "not right in the head".

Inventor: "Flying is overrated, my Vantiers don't fly or levitate, they only fall upwards."

Silver-Throne · 2014-03-05, 08:34

Quote:

Originally Posted by agetreme

Come to think of it....

Yea... it is a great idea.

Which means more focus on tournament... which is good considering the canon lack of it.

Edit: The Dynamic extend beyond just IS. Vantier operators has their own Dynamic to it. One pilot, the other support.

To make them more of a team, probably working under the same tech company which work on ISes as project once in a while.

Second edit: They share the same Mentor (inventor of Vantier) who for once, is not a genius pretending to be a madman but actually "not right in the head".

Inventor: "Flying is overrated, my Vantiers don't fly or levitate, they only fall upwards."

Vantier? I dont remember something with that. Mind explaining for me?

StratoSpear · 2014-03-05, 08:57

Quote:

Originally Posted by agetreme

Come to think of it....

Yea... it is a great idea.

Which means more focus on tournament... which is good considering the canon lack of it.

Edit: The Dynamic extend beyond just IS. Vantier operators has their own Dynamic to it. One pilot, the other support.

To make them more of a team, probably working under the same tech company which work on ISes as project once in a while.

Second edit: They share the same Mentor (inventor of Vantier) who for once, is not a genius pretending to be a madman but actually "not right in the head".

Inventor: "Flying is overrated, my Vantiers don't fly or levitate, they only fall upwards."

Mr Inventor probably spent too much time hanging in invert.

And...

Spoiler for Arisawa:

If you find him a little too pale, he has a reason for it.

Fireminer · 2014-03-05, 09:40

The eyes, Strato, the eyes.

And Agetreme, if you want a duo setting, maybe it would be more than one pair. Uses different aspects: Friends, Lovers, Living Emotional Crutches, Ex-Enemies, Siblings, Comrades, Using Each Other, Forced, Yandere!

The last one reserved for the playboy. I always like the idea of over-protective to absolute-dominance.

2014-03-04, 06:30	Link #50742
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Nah, it's a bare bones as of now, will zombify it after another GBF __________________

2014-03-04, 10:30	Link #50744
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Not yet, I'm doing the cover as well as screening the character portrait for convenience You can see Azuma and Meguru in the front now (EDIT: FRAK I use wrong hair color, they look like Reiji and Aila now ) __________________

2014-03-04, 10:49	Link #50746
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	A lot of sources, but the character is from SPIRAL Should be possible to mount either under the backpack or around the wings, however the payload would be tiny. And it's really hard to notice, but Meguru's Akatsuki is modified to act like a TSF rather than Mobile suit Anyway, we're off topic now, see you later when I post the Gotanda oneshot. __________________

2014-03-04, 11:37	Link #50747
blitz1/2 Tenshi's Defense Squadron Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Fighting against those who oppress the system	@fireminer: In a way, we are doing that split personality with Madoka in Sacred Twins, like ichika, she also has a darker side, one that wants to take ichika all for herself (spoiler if not read: She already revealed herself once already) __________________ hai, hai. Onii-chan has his work cut out for him.

2014-03-04, 13:50	Link #50748
agetreme Just another Idiot Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Delusion world	Reality say: The thing about transformable unit is.... things are surprisingly fragile when you add transformation into it.....It is probably due to having lots of moving part to accommodate the said transformation Sci-fic says: Sure, why not? = AU-verse.... Spoiler for Generation Shift (rework version...if I got the time and mood)/AU-verse: Pilot/ IS Fuyuki / Nishiki (White colored) Houka / Shion (Remembrance) Cecily / Blue Rain Rin (YanLing) / ShenLong 3 Laura / Schwarzer Regen Mk II Charlotte / Eclair Revised Otonashi / Yuugasumi (Evening Mist) Hibiki / Uchigane Sanshiki (Juusoubi/Heavy Equipment) = Some characters might appear in OC-verse in their younger self. > Cecily is polite and lady-like (more like an Oujo)..... > Otonashi is a quiet girl while her sister Hibiki is hyperactive. > "Laura" might be referenced.... === Meanwhile, in another universe/ OC-verse New Male lead work as Tech support for ISA. Due to the high-tech equipment involved, the job pay really well (better than the Janitor). Spoiler for ISes: Trying to remove Cecilia's butt-monkey status... Blue Tear's [Teardrop] pack: Special Pack that specialized in Bits, pilot's skill is still needed to control them all. Edit: Don't have to control them all at once....coughcombine modecough [Teardrops] pack: 4x [Droplets] upgraded Blue Tears Drone 1x [Stardust] Drones (Drone strapped with Starlight rifle) 2x [Tearer] Blade Drones (Drone Strapped with Interceptor) Skirt 6x Missiles Drones can docked with each other or with the unit to provide additional boost... which means this pack turn Blue Tear into Pseudo-fourth gen unit through combo platter ability. Example of Combo E.g. [Blue Tear] + [Droplets] = High-speed mode [Stardust] + [Tearer] = Enforced Energy Shield [Droplet]+[Tearer]= Melee Bits The pack was originally deemed as impossible due to serious software bug which was fixed thanks to a certain "Mysterious" Programmer known as Noverlord (handle name.... not real name). == Eclair is a French unit, which will probably be introduced in OC story....Described as Second Gen unit that might as well be described as "almost third gen". Dunois company was saved thanks to another company buying it out. The owner of the company is a Dogged Nice Guy who really like IS especially Rafael units and has a crush on Charlotte. Unfortunately, since status quota is god, He is a really shy person and Charlotte dislike him for buying out her family's company.... __________________ Ara Han Last edited by agetreme; 2014-03-04 at 14:12.

2014-03-04, 05:39	Link #50741
Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	Any preview?

2014-03-04, 09:57	Link #50743
Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	Careful not to overdue yourself! I'd hate to see GBFCR got delayed. And have you make a character sheet like I suggested?

2014-03-04, 10:43	Link #50745
Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	Frankly, where did you copy that? And a mecha list, too. Hmm... Can you add hardpoints to a transformable suit? I'm brainstorming a crossover fic with Muv-Luv, in which four characters use these: Rosso Aegis, Kyrios, Delta Plus and Age-2.

2014-03-04, 19:30	Link #50751
Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	@Tempest: I believe that Madoka is the culprit. Madoka: MWAHAHA! Ichika-nii is mine! FOREVER!

2014-03-05, 03:52	Link #50754
DarkJak2050 Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2011	Looks to me that everyone here's doing okay on their fics.

2014-03-05, 05:08	Link #50755
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	@ Jak we're trying to recover from fandom crisis __________________

2014-03-05, 09:40	Link #50760
Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	The eyes, Strato, the eyes. And Agetreme, if you want a duo setting, maybe it would be more than one pair. Uses different aspects: Friends, Lovers, Living Emotional Crutches, Ex-Enemies, Siblings, Comrades, Using Each Other, Forced, Yandere! The last one reserved for the playboy. I always like the idea of over-protective to absolute-dominance.