2014-04-08, 08:08 | Link #51869 |
~ Your Smile ~
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Join Date: Dec 2008
Location: 346Pro
Age: 38
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He makes it too easy to be blamed and the author does a horrible job at making him less of a bullseye. I have to admit the later novels seem to have a bit more thought put into them. But not enough, not without some heavy retconning. After all, Ichika is a lazy nerd with a trove of useless facts and a secret that not even he knows but he doesn't need to be that dense. The author just tossed it in there without making things fit. Even I gave him a few reasons to be dense.
And he really needs more character development. He hasn't changed a mediocum since day 1. Likewise, I make him less dense as i go along. The harem genre has advanced. IS' cheap tactics no longer function in this day and age.
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2014-04-08, 08:21 | Link #51871 |
Titans Test Team Pilot
Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: The Elysium
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Looking through the past discussion about anti-feminist made me put this one out, to go with this theme.
Spoiler for Again, questionable antagonist:
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2014-04-08, 08:37 | Link #51873 |
Lumine Passio
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Join Date: Jul 2013
Location: Hanoi, Vietnam
Age: 18
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Not that many.
Now I really know what to make with Ichika's final form. - Two beam claws - Two beam boomerang, mounted on shoulder. - Two leg-mounted beam sword. - One Tsurugi. - Two beam saber - One Beam Yari - 6 Beam Kunai. Total: 16 blades |
2014-04-08, 09:31 | Link #51876 |
Lumine Passio
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Join Date: Jul 2013
Location: Hanoi, Vietnam
Age: 18
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Who would make that?
Then again, we've seen gun that could be used by spinning the disk. A bit more crazy wouldn't matter. Say, if we exposed someone to responsibility, they grow up, right? But can we fully predict the outcome? Like Kouta, Kaito and Mitsuzane before the Inves threat. |
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fanfic ideas, fanfiction, ff.net, harem, is fanfic, warning fanfic spoilers, wincest |
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