Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[ghazghkull]

page claim!!

All I can say it, that was a nice thing to wake up earlier this morning XD

[mercurianangel]

@Gillian
Thankies, I'm flattered ^___^

@Kazu-kun
I'll work on that request a bit ...though it might take a while due to the upcoming test week, and a little project...

[SpaceBrotha]

Originally Posted by mercurianangel

Wootsauce!
Now I can post this~

Spoiler for Fate's shower-view...NSFW:

DA Link

0: D

Yes! fatevision FTW!

Originally Posted by ghazghkull

page claim!!

All I can say it, that was a nice thing to wake up earlier this morning XD

haha, it's good morning to you and good night for me: midnight, time for bed

[Gillian]

Originally Posted by SpaceBrotha

Yes! fatevision FTW!


haha, it's good morning to you and good night for me: midnight, time for bed

"nearly" midnight for me^^
23:24

Originally Posted by Satashi

True story.

she's my official partner in crime ^_^

congratulation ;D

Originally Posted by mercurianangel

@Gillian
Thankies, I'm flattered ^___^

We have a saying for that, but I don't know it in English....
so I post it in German:

"Lobe, wem Lob gebührt"

[Satashi]

I awoke to a dull dreary morning when Nanoha's cell phone rang out on it's own accord. My eyes opened to see darkness and hear the cracking of small pebbles of frozen rain clash against my window. It seems as if the cold front had made it's way right on time, giving us a freezing slurry rather than snow. A small stirring on my chest made me look down at Nanoha and smile at her tired expression. After letting out a small yawn she requested five more minutes to rest. I didn't mind, as we were both skipping school for the day. My hand reached up to my headboard and flipped open her phone to shut off the alarm. I don't really blame her for being so tired, as she stayed up most of last night being nervous about the upcoming photo shoot. That and lately I could tell something was troubling her. I knew it had something to do with Fate and I was pretty sure what exactly it was as well. The only problem was, for some reason, Nanoha was really nervous about this and hasn't fully opened up to me yet. That alone made me really worried; she has never kept anything from me before.

Saved by the Bell X
By: Satashi

[Krinen]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Saved by the Bell X
By: Satashi

I smell a ploooot deviiiiiiiiiice!

[/end of random absence]

[ghazghkull]

Kya!!! I Must Read The Next Update!!!

[Gillian]

Originally Posted by Satashi

I awoke to a dull dreary morning when Nanoha's cell phone rang out on it's own accord. My eyes opened to see darkness and hear the cracking of small pebbles of frozen rain clash against my window. It seems as if the cold front had made it's way right on time, giving us a freezing slurry rather than snow. A small stirring on my chest made me look down at Nanoha and smile at her tired expression. After letting out a small yawn she requested five more minutes to rest. I didn't mind, as we were both skipping school for the day. My hand reached up to my headboard and flipped open her phone to shut off the alarm. I don't really blame her for being so tired, as she stayed up most of last night being nervous about the upcoming photo shoot. That and lately I could tell something was troubling her. I knew it had something to do with Fate and I was pretty sure what exactly it was as well. The only problem was, for some reason, Nanoha was really nervous about this and hasn't fully opened up to me yet. That alone made me really worried; she has never kept anything from me before.

Saved by the Bell X
By: Satashi

yeah, it's getting interesting

[SpaceBrotha]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Spoiler for SbtB X intro:

I awoke to a dull dreary morning when Nanoha's cell phone rang out on it's own accord. My eyes opened to see darkness and hear the cracking of small pebbles of frozen rain clash against my window. It seems as if the cold front had made it's way right on time, giving us a freezing slurry rather than snow. A small stirring on my chest made me look down at Nanoha and smile at her tired expression. After letting out a small yawn she requested five more minutes to rest. I didn't mind, as we were both skipping school for the day. My hand reached up to my headboard and flipped open her phone to shut off the alarm. I don't really blame her for being so tired, as she stayed up most of last night being nervous about the upcoming photo shoot. That and lately I could tell something was troubling her. I knew it had something to do with Fate and I was pretty sure what exactly it was as well. The only problem was, for some reason, Nanoha was really nervous about this and hasn't fully opened up to me yet. That alone made me really worried; she has never kept anything from me before.

Saved by the Bell X
By: Satashi

hope that he didn't just turn off the alarm, and instead set it on snooze, or nanoha will be mighty angry with him for being late from the photo shoot...

[Gillian]

Originally Posted by SpaceBrotha

hope that he didn't just turn off the alarm, and instead set it on snooze, or nanoha will be mighty angry with him for being late from the photo shoot...

I think the shooting is in the afternoon?

[Gilraen Isilra]

Oh my goodness! That sounds oh so very interesting!!

[Satashi]

Her shoot is at noon :P

Going to try and get more school action in this chapter. Since lately it hasn't been about school at all >.< So yeah.

[Gilraen Isilra]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Her shoot is at noon :P

Going to try and get more school action in this chapter. Since lately it hasn't been about school at all >.< So yeah.

If they're in school that means Fate/Nanoha are separated and can only be together during lunch =P

[Gillian]

Originally Posted by Gilraen Isilra

If they're in school that means Fate/Nanoha are separated and can only be together during lunch =P

love defeates all troubles

I'm looking forward to more school action

[SpaceBrotha]

Originally Posted by Gilraen Isilra

If they're in school that means Fate/Nanoha are separated and can only be together during lunch =P

And we can have more focus on the other couples that are dancing about, yuuno and hayate, suzuka and arisa.

Then again, it might just be something random, as we can't have dramatic events and fluff flying about ALL the time... it would ruin the effect a bit.

[Satashi]

Well, the name of the story is Saved by the Bell, a high school fic. Now that Nanoha's career is moving along, I'm going to try and swap back to them being in school and school activities. The up coming dance, Nanoha's tennis, Hayate's cooking, Yuuno's TA job, ect. Try and give a little notice to the other couples as well.

Hey it was you guys who said to give them time to fall in love >: D you've raited 9 chapters, a few more won't kill you

[Gillian]

more chapters, are always desired

[Fuyu no Sora]

Originally Posted by Satashi

The up coming dance, Nanoha's tennis, Hayate's cooking, Yuuno's TA job...

...Keroko-chan abusing of her position and making Nanoha run ten laps around the court

Originally Posted by Satashi

Hey it was you guys who said to give them time to fall in love >: D you've raited 9 chapters, a few more won't kill you

Yes it will We impatient ones want more

Evil Sata-chan is evil ()

[SpaceBrotha]

Originally Posted by Fuyu no Sora

Yes it will We impatient ones want more

Oh shush you, more chapters is more chances for humor, developement and showing other characters.

Evil Sata-chan is evil ()

didn't you notice that when you read the truth or dare part of chapter 9?

[Ryand-Smith]

ghazghkull, your story, its nice Nanoha X Fate fluff. I like how its written, the time period, and its feel. Is it a one shot, or are you planning to write more