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HasuMasu · 2013-09-13, 06:14

No it's alright I just co-wrote it anyway.

Fireminer · 2013-09-13, 06:57

@SEED: Just tell us your idea! Maybe I could use some! (With permission first, of course. Seriously, half you guys's small idea has been re-molded into my fic)

ZeroXSEED · 2013-09-13, 08:52

No I meant discussing HOW to apply it on my fic

Then again, recycled fanon is my usual shtick anyway.

Fireminer · 2013-09-13, 08:56

"Immidating is the best form of Flattery", huh?

Anyway, just wondering why humanity haven't try to colonize the Moon. They have got Beam technology for God's sake! Not to mention power that could meddling with Time-Space Fabric.

(Just thinking a scene which Ichika in KR Birth armor slammed his enemy to the moon's surface.)

ZeroXSEED · 2013-09-13, 09:10

Anyway, Chapter 3 seems a little cramped and full of dialogues, the pacing is also problematic. I need some idea how to split and then embellish them.

Here's the summary

> Ichika's final test (half of it offscreen)
> Dan's daily activity (foreshadowing)
> Pretty normal situation in Orimura residence
> The Not!Harem and Dan barge in
> Hilarity and violence ensues
> Pool episode
> Man to man talk

Where to split? Any suggestion?

Fireminer · 2013-09-13, 09:17

How about Ichika passed the test, and they decided to go to Gotanda Bistro for a feast? Hangover, if you can.

ZeroXSEED · 2013-09-13, 09:33

Hmm

Actually, M!Ichika still unable cope with situation properly, this is a plot point btw.

Spoiler for Spoiler for Spoiler:

From this point on, M!Ichika is not afraid anymore and willing to befriend the girls again.

Fireminer · 2013-09-13, 09:41

Put someone in Mirrorverse and told them to cope up with it - not a good thing! You have a good point.

But I haven't seen Ichika's "Male Side" (A.K.A Leadership quality) rise up with all these inferior compare to his Female counterpart. Give him something dramatic and heroic!

ZeroXSEED · 2013-09-13, 09:50

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Originally Posted by Fireminer

But I haven't seen Ichika's "Male Side" (A.K.A Leadership quality) rise up with all these inferior compare to his Female counterpart. Give him something dramatic and heroic!

That's the point of the story actually

Because female Ichika unconsciously possess HUGE inferiority complex about her gender, despite her apparent ignorance on the issues.

They'll eventually help each other coping with their problem, covering the entire romance subplot.

Fireminer · 2013-09-13, 09:57

Mutual Understanding or Cross-Dimensional Couple?

Still feel intricgured with the idea of loving yourself - or your female counterpart.

And Female Ichika's real twin...Any Idea?

ZeroXSEED · 2013-09-13, 10:05

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Originally Posted by Fireminer

Mutual Understanding or Cross-Dimensional Couple?

Sorta, this explore how striking similarity and slight difference doesn't necessarily clash.

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Originally Posted by Fireminer

Still feel intrigured with the idea of loving yourself - or your female counterpart.

Joke aside, I have a twin sister I can talk with. half the fun is lampshading the absurdity of the idea, the other half is exploring the 'forbidden fruit' aspect of such fantasy. The fact that both of us are in medical school does help.

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Originally Posted by Fireminer

And Female Ichika's real twin...Any Idea?

Chapter 1

Fireminer · 2013-09-13, 10:13

Lucky that me and my brother are Same-Egg.

And I know about that detail. Just wonder how could Ichika handle Madoka, or the "Twin Tornado" (One of the new combination attack I just have came up with).

And now remember it, you are one of the three most prominent Incest writers I have came across with: Fujin of Shadow, Real-type Trooper R-0, and you. Maybe IS kind of has this weird charm that attracts that paticular idea.

ZeroXSEED · 2013-09-13, 10:16

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Originally Posted by Fireminer

And I know about that detail. Just wonder how could Ichika handle Madoka, or the "Twin Tornado" (One of the new combination attack I just have came up with).

Do remember that they're nemesis by technicality.

agetreme · 2013-09-13, 10:18

My logic fails so I need to check the following logic:

*Note: This is set in IS universe where females are held in higher regards than male.

A: Females are superior to male in every aspect. Right?

B: Right.

A: Which means Female are physically just as capable as men, right?

B: Right.

A: Therefore, there is no need for men to protect women since they are just as capable of protect themselves.

B: Wait a minute....

A: In fact, more than capable, considering that a war between Males and Females would be over within three days.

=

Does it sound logical? If not, tell me if there is an fallacy committed and also what is the fallacy committed so I can point that out.

Fireminer · 2013-09-13, 10:31

@SEED: And that only make thing better!

@Age: Woman need not a war to win. Since the age of Eva, they has been using their charm to seduce us man. After all, female human is the biggest mystery on earth!

That aside, while I believe that any I.S could wipe the floor with airplanes, tanks, submarines,...That is not enough to win a war, which is a far complex system that could be win with crude force.

But hey, have anyone try a scenario which all I.S Pilots execpt Ichika going haywire?

ZeroXSEED · 2013-09-13, 10:41

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Originally Posted by Fireminer

But hey, have anyone try a scenario which all I.S Pilots execpt Ichika going haywire?

Many of us did, but then again, such scenario easily fall to MEN STRONK, BUT WOMEN ARE ALL FEMINIST agument

Seriously, this one fic I read has obvious gendercide and yet Ichika actually forgive Chifuyu for it.

Lolwut.

@ Age
That's the logic behind every fic I wrote about I.S. verse

Including Sacred Twins, where Ichika has little problem hitting girls on the face (Chapter 13).

agetreme · 2013-09-13, 11:02

Quote:

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

Many of us did, but then again, such scenario easily fall to MEN STRONK, BUT WOMEN ARE ALL FEMINIST agument

Seriously, this one fic I read has obvious gendercide and yet Ichika actually forgive Chifuyu for it.

Lolwut.

@ Age
That's the logic behind every fic I wrote about I.S. verse

Including Sacred Twins, where Ichika has little problem hitting girls on the face (Chapter 13).

So it is logical? Yay?

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Quote:

Originally Posted by Fireminer

@SEED: And that only make thing better!

@Age: Woman need not a war to win. Since the age of Eva, they has been using their charm to seduce us man. After all, female human is the biggest mystery on earth!

That aside, while I believe that any I.S could wipe the floor with airplanes, tanks, submarines,...That is not enough to win a war, which is a far complex system that could be win with crude force.

But hey, have anyone try a scenario which all I.S Pilots execpt Ichika going haywire?

Character A like to point out that Females are also the one helping out the the process of natural selection.

Character A is a slacker-ist... he don't really give a damn about Feminism or men rights. So long as it doesn't bother him, he is fine with it.

Fireminer · 2013-09-13, 19:58

Maybe my Old Man's words is really the truth: "Woman are sadomachist. They desire a beast." - A.K.A A bit of fuedal in a family is accepted.

DarkJak2050 · 2013-09-14, 04:58

Hey, Zero. I have something to ask.

Whenever I get a nosebleed, I splash some cold water on my forehead and the back of my neck.

A minute or two later, the bleeding stops. Why is that?

ZeroXSEED · 2013-09-14, 05:03

Cold water constrict blood veins to a degree

Nosebleed usually caused by the opposite process

2013-09-13, 06:14	Link #46001
HasuMasu Senior Member Artist Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: The Middle Way	No it's alright I just co-wrote it anyway. __________________

2013-09-13, 08:52	Link #46003
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	No I meant discussing HOW to apply it on my fic Then again, recycled fanon is my usual shtick anyway. __________________

2013-09-13, 08:56	Link #46004
Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	"Immidating is the best form of Flattery", huh? Anyway, just wondering why humanity haven't try to colonize the Moon. They have got Beam technology for God's sake! Not to mention power that could meddling with Time-Space Fabric. (Just thinking a scene which Ichika in KR Birth armor slammed his enemy to the moon's surface.) Last edited by Fireminer; 2013-09-13 at 09:08.

2013-09-13, 09:10	Link #46005
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Anyway, Chapter 3 seems a little cramped and full of dialogues, the pacing is also problematic. I need some idea how to split and then embellish them. Here's the summary > Ichika's final test (half of it offscreen) > Dan's daily activity (foreshadowing) > Pretty normal situation in Orimura residence > The Not!Harem and Dan barge in > Hilarity and violence ensues > Pool episode > Man to man talk Where to split? Any suggestion? __________________

2013-09-13, 09:33	Link #46007
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Hmm Actually, M!Ichika still unable cope with situation properly, this is a plot point btw. Spoiler for Spoiler for Spoiler: Here's even broader explanation: When the Not!Harem and Dan barge in, he disguise himself the way he appeared during press conference. This is of course trigger all sort of reaction, closely in-character with the girls as depicted in the novel. This doesn't last long and no blood spilled thankfully. The next part is what important. When F!Ichika told him to join them having lunch, he pretend that he's busy and refused. F!Ichika then realize that he's still hurt by the fact that none of them know him, and afraid to form a new bond altogether (thus the disguise) On the other hand, Dan is jealous by the attention F!Ichika gave to her male counterpart, and everyone else is suspicious with their relationship. Maximum high tension, heh. They went to the pool, and Dan talk with M!Ichika about F!Ichika. Dan reveal that he still has feelings for her, despite already rejected back then in Junior high. He asked if M!Ichika feel the same too. Instead, M!Ichika told Dan to confirm it again. There, Dan confessed to F!Ichika for the second time. This time however, F!Ichika is more clear with her intention and is able to reject him properly, allowing Dan to leave his feeling behind and reform their friendship. Lingyin thanked M!Ichika because she's afraid that their friendship is falling apart, M!Ichika ensured that she should believe with that bond From this point on, M!Ichika is not afraid anymore and willing to befriend the girls again. __________________

2013-09-13, 06:57	Link #46002
Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	@SEED: Just tell us your idea! Maybe I could use some! (With permission first, of course. Seriously, half you guys's small idea has been re-molded into my fic)

2013-09-13, 09:17	Link #46006
Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	How about Ichika passed the test, and they decided to go to Gotanda Bistro for a feast? Hangover, if you can.

2013-09-13, 09:41	Link #46008
Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	Put someone in Mirrorverse and told them to cope up with it - not a good thing! You have a good point. But I haven't seen Ichika's "Male Side" (A.K.A Leadership quality) rise up with all these inferior compare to his Female counterpart. Give him something dramatic and heroic!

2013-09-13, 09:57	Link #46010
Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	Mutual Understanding or Cross-Dimensional Couple? Still feel intricgured with the idea of loving yourself - or your female counterpart. And Female Ichika's real twin...Any Idea?

2013-09-13, 10:13	Link #46012
Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	Lucky that me and my brother are Same-Egg. And I know about that detail. Just wonder how could Ichika handle Madoka, or the "Twin Tornado" (One of the new combination attack I just have came up with). And now remember it, you are one of the three most prominent Incest writers I have came across with: Fujin of Shadow, Real-type Trooper R-0, and you. Maybe IS kind of has this weird charm that attracts that paticular idea.

2013-09-13, 10:18	Link #46014
agetreme Just another Idiot Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Delusion world	My logic fails so I need to check the following logic: *Note: This is set in IS universe where females are held in higher regards than male. A: Females are superior to male in every aspect. Right? B: Right. A: Which means Female are physically just as capable as men, right? B: Right. A: Therefore, there is no need for men to protect women since they are just as capable of protect themselves. B: Wait a minute.... A: In fact, more than capable, considering that a war between Males and Females would be over within three days. = Does it sound logical? If not, tell me if there is an fallacy committed and also what is the fallacy committed so I can point that out. __________________ Ara Han

2013-09-13, 10:31	Link #46015
Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	@SEED: And that only make thing better! @Age: Woman need not a war to win. Since the age of Eva, they has been using their charm to seduce us man. After all, female human is the biggest mystery on earth! That aside, while I believe that any I.S could wipe the floor with airplanes, tanks, submarines,...That is not enough to win a war, which is a far complex system that could be win with crude force. But hey, have anyone try a scenario which all I.S Pilots execpt Ichika going haywire?

2013-09-13, 19:58	Link #46018
Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	Maybe my Old Man's words is really the truth: "Woman are sadomachist. They desire a beast." - A.K.A A bit of fuedal in a family is accepted.

2013-09-14, 04:58	Link #46019
DarkJak2050 Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2011	Hey, Zero. I have something to ask. Whenever I get a nosebleed, I splash some cold water on my forehead and the back of my neck. A minute or two later, the bleeding stops. Why is that?

2013-09-14, 05:03	Link #46020
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Cold water constrict blood veins to a degree Nosebleed usually caused by the opposite process __________________