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demino_hellsin · 2013-07-12, 10:05

So we got writers in tempest nd erachi, wave and sometimes age with the occasional box

Artist is zero

Gunblade and or zero can publish.

Anyone else joining this party?

Eratas123 · 2013-07-12, 10:15

Here's a deadpoolification of IS-kun:

Kuu: "IS-kun, I've gone through great danger to give you a dire warning about-"

IS-kun: 'Oh creator, she's not here 10 minutes before she starts talking about this dire warning for the sake of the world stuff.'

Kuu: Phantom Task has used a worldwide hijacking device to-

IS-kun: *Shows IS-kun floating around randomly and looking for suitable pilots in his internal computer*

Kuu: Which all rests on tou, IS-kun. Now here's the critical part-

IS-kun: It's so boring~ *Starts crying* Need to make it stop........ *Shoots himself with a large laser beam*

Kuu: Damn it, IS-kun!

*Wakes up later after absolute defense repairs him*

IS-kun: Did I lose her? What's this? *Picks up note left on the floor* "Idiot, meet me in the other side of the academy in one minute. If you don't you'll miss the.....big breasted girl who wants to be your new pilot!?" "It could be a trick like last time.....no, I can't take that chance! Big breasted pilot, I'm on my way!"

demino_hellsin · 2013-07-12, 10:21

Make it feel a little less like a reskin I suppose? Can't say I can do better. Got college putting my creativity under its thumb.

Tempest35 · 2013-07-12, 11:24

Which is why I want to pair him with Honne-tan...she is surprisingly 'sufficient' in that area.

I think that she'll come up with his official 'nickname' but as for what it is, I have no clue yet. But I do see him becoming slightly infatuated by Yamada-sensei for a bit. Just a bit...

Eratas123 · 2013-07-12, 18:57

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A9fsdrFgznk

Pretty sure I posted this before, but whatever. In case anyone needs a dose of depressing romance. 3 minutes long only, and the song is the best part.

agetreme · 2013-07-12, 20:42

DeathPool is overrated.

IS-kun: "To best choose an IS pilot that is suitable for me, it is best to look at real numeral data"

*IS-kun bring out a list of data*

Ichika: "What are these numbers?"

IS-Kun: "Three size."

=

IS-kun:"Okay....may be that (three size data) didn't work but thankful I had prepared a plan B. I have recorded every single IS battle for review to find which Pilot's combat style suit me better.

Ichika: ".......I can't see any IS....all I can see is breast and Butt..."

=

Meh, my humor need work.

Eratas123 · 2013-07-12, 20:58

If you want to write it, be my guest :/ I'm busy with my FOZ stories anyway.

demino_hellsin · 2013-07-13, 05:56

Now now, no one should be discouraged from the project

wavehawk · 2013-07-13, 06:13

Quote:

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Here's a deadpoolification of IS-kun:

- Doesn't work. Eras, comedy works most of the time because it's unexpected. The more times you hear a joke, the less funny it gets. I don't find this bit funny because I've already seen that (WHO DAFUQ IS DAT) joke in the deadpool game.

Plot Bunny idea warning: IS-Kun inadverdently gets his own harem of sorts (original charas or the IS supporting cast), and has his own adventures.
http://youtu.be/TF09lyLirbQ

Eratas123 · 2013-07-13, 08:22

Again: If anyone wants to write it, be my guest. I'm already juggling like 13 fics and adding another to a pile just makes for trouble. In either case, I wasn't the one to start the idea, so writing it is kinda hard because I have no idea what personality he has beyond 'Innocent' and 'Wants big breasts and butts despite being a robot'.

The end result also bugs me. What will be the ending? Any story I plan eventually has an ending in mind. A story with no ending just seems....pointless.

Oh, and I copy pasted that deadpool thing from the game. I was using an Ipad, I was sleepy, and then I got lazy.

wavehawk · 2013-07-13, 10:05

Quote:

Originally Posted by Eratas123

'Wants big breasts and butts despite being a robot'.

- IS-Kun: "It's the fit. The FIT! IS are supposed to hug the body and provide a perfect fit!"

Lingyin: "You're a dirty old man in the body of an IS."

Silver-Throne · 2013-07-13, 19:21

Quote:

Originally Posted by wavehawk

- IS-Kun: "It's the fit. The FIT! IS are supposed to hug the body and provide a perfect fit!"

Lingyin: "You're a dirty old man in the body of an IS."

IS-kun : I`m not an old man you you flat iron!
Ichika : Run for your life

*feels aura promising death*
____________________________________

Can someone provide me IS-kun`s personality? So that I think of something what to do

Eratas123 · 2013-07-14, 08:02

I'm writing it now. If anybody wants to take over, its your choice, but I need something to alleviate boredom.

agetreme · 2013-07-14, 10:43

I am having Idea indigestion right now....

Got three fic unrelated to IS + rewrite of generation shift + OC story..

I am now wondering how to squeeze everything within a day since I usually took hours to type out stuff (proof-reading/editing and stuff like that, I tend to do those things on the fly rather than after I finish typing out the whole thing.).

mattomonga · 2013-07-14, 18:16

IS Transfer Student:
name: Matt Jackson
Gender: Male
Nickname: Viz (short for visual powers)
Looks:
Bright blue raggedy hair
Red Eyes or Sharingan like eyes (depending on if he is using them)
Alingment: Chaos
Personality: He is very quiet. The only one he has ever spoken to is ichika.
Powers:
Device: TsukuNyoMe
Long Range-Medium Range Attack Type
Wields Laser Rifle And Dagger
Genetic Mutations: was a participant in america's Sharingan project and gained use over all sharingan forms, with immunities to the debuffs.
Backround: Was born 15 years before the events in IS, in The United States of America. joined the Sharingan project when he was 5. Mother and Father are deceased.
Dorm: lives in the attic above charles and itchika's room.
Friends: Itchika, Charles, Cecielia, Houki
Family:None
Clothing: Black Trench Coat, School Uniform, Jeans.

Eratas123 · 2013-07-14, 18:56

....No offense, but that's stupidly overpowered. So he's both a male IS pilot and a modern day version of Sasuke? I fail to see any weaknessess or, if he's not a pilot, a reason for him to be living in IS academy.

That and he's wearing a black trench coat :/ That's one of the trademark attires of a character that the author wants people to think is cool. That and its not very practical since a black trench coat makes one stick out like a sore thumb.

agetreme · 2013-07-14, 20:39

I am a little nicer.....so I am going to explain which elements of the profile and why it can't work (unless you are a very good writer).

Quote:

Originally Posted by mattomonga

IS Transfer Student:
name: Matt Jackson
Gender: Male
Nickname: Viz (short for visual powers)

Not Nickname, more like Codename. Nobody in ISA is going to call Matt Viz because of his visual power (normal people remember?)

Quote:

Red Eyes or Sharingan like eyes (depending on if he is using them)

It is a story that has Naruto element in it? What is the weakness due to Sharingan enhancement? He get dry eye more often?

Why Sharigan? I mean, since it is an American project, shouldn't it has an English name?

Quote:

Alingment: Chaos

Based on what you have, I assume that his alignment is chaos neutral.

Quote:

Personality: He is very quiet. The only one he has ever spoken to is ichika.

This description is little vague because it could easily means "he is a shy person who feel uncomfortable talking to girls" or "he is a calm and composed person who happen to be a sexist."

Quote:

Device: TsukuNyoMe
Long Range-Medium Range Attack Type
Wields Laser Rifle And Dagger

Simple and normal. Not crazy or over-weaponized.....which is good.

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Quote:

Genetic Mutations: was a participant in america's Sharingan project and gained use over all sharingan forms, with immunities to the debuffs.

Now there is a problem.... how do you explain other form of Sharingan? Even if you can explain it.....

Wow...that guy is pretty evil considering that you have to murder your love one to gain other form of Sharingan.

What does you mean by immunities to debuff? Are you sure you are posting at the right section instead of Nanoha?

Have you watch the anime or read the novel? When did you ever seen a Debuff effect?

Quote:

Backround: Was born 15 years before the events in IS, in The United States of America. joined the Sharingan project when he was 5. Mother and Father are deceased.

15+11 = 26 year old. A child don't actually 'join' military project. It is more like being experimented on.

Quote:

Dorm: lives in the attic above charles and itchika's room.

.....Attic? Okay..... (can't see how there is an attic, shouldn't it be another room or just the rooftop with him camping using a tent?).

Quote:

Friends: Itchika, Charles, Cecielia, Houki

Alternate universe or misspell? And how the hell does he befriend the girls when he doesn't even talk to them?!

Quote:

Clothing: Black Trench Coat, School Uniform, Jeans.

Unlike Eratas, I don't actually mind...the trench-coat and Jeans I mean IS students do customize their uniform. But mind you, we are talking about white uniform here. Black is very strike and make him stick up like sore thumb and shouldn't your character be keeping low profile? If he doesn't like talking to girls should he be wearing something which doesn't make him stand out? (at the extreme comical end: wear a normal female uniform).

What wrong with sticking out like sore thumb....and being a guy....

Teacher: "Matt! can you do something for me?"
Teacher: "Matt! can you carry this"
Teacher: "Matt! Can you carry that?"
Teacher: "Matt! Answer this question"

Yea.... you are basically a target board for people to throw things at.

StratoSpear · 2013-07-14, 21:57

The more I think about that IS-kun, the more I wonder... Does he have a head? I just imagined an IS suit walking around, just the hovering legs and arms (and chestplate maybe) strutting around the school. Who could not be terrified by that?

Even so, this popped into my head:

Girl 1: Oh yes. IS-kun, be at the arena by noon. Just a heads-up.
IS-kun:....
Girl 1:...*realizes IS-kun has no head*... Oh... right, sorry.

Eratas123 · 2013-07-14, 22:30

He does in the fic I made: But its just a hollow helmet like the White Knight helmet.

demino_hellsin · 2013-07-15, 04:56

Lol, it would be funny when it turns out the helmet isn't really necessary and he only keeps it on so people don't freak out.

Funnier still is if he refers to them as his hat.

2013-07-12, 10:15	Link #44642
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Here's a deadpoolification of IS-kun: Kuu: "IS-kun, I've gone through great danger to give you a dire warning about-" IS-kun: 'Oh creator, she's not here 10 minutes before she starts talking about this dire warning for the sake of the world stuff.' Kuu: Phantom Task has used a worldwide hijacking device to- IS-kun: Shows IS-kun floating around randomly and looking for suitable pilots in his internal computer Kuu: Which all rests on tou, IS-kun. Now here's the critical part- IS-kun: It's so boring~ Starts crying Need to make it stop........ Shoots himself with a large laser beam Kuu: Damn it, IS-kun! Wakes up later after absolute defense repairs him IS-kun: Did I lose her? What's this? Picks up note left on the floor "Idiot, meet me in the other side of the academy in one minute. If you don't you'll miss the.....big breasted girl who wants to be your new pilot!?" "It could be a trick like last time.....no, I can't take that chance! Big breasted pilot, I'm on my way!" __________________

2013-07-12, 11:24	Link #44644
Tempest35 Awe of She Author Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Orlando	Which is why I want to pair him with Honne-tan...she is surprisingly 'sufficient' in that area. I think that she'll come up with his official 'nickname' but as for what it is, I have no clue yet. But I do see him becoming slightly infatuated by Yamada-sensei for a bit. Just a bit... __________________ "Focus entirely on me, you ordinary soldier."

2013-07-12, 18:57	Link #44645
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A9fsdrFgznk Pretty sure I posted this before, but whatever. In case anyone needs a dose of depressing romance. 3 minutes long only, and the song is the best part. __________________

2013-07-12, 20:42	Link #44646
agetreme Just another Idiot Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Delusion world	DeathPool is overrated. IS-kun: "To best choose an IS pilot that is suitable for me, it is best to look at real numeral data" IS-kun bring out a list of data Ichika: "What are these numbers?" IS-Kun: "Three size." = IS-kun:"Okay....may be that (three size data) didn't work but thankful I had prepared a plan B. I have recorded every single IS battle for review to find which Pilot's combat style suit me better. Ichika: ".......I can't see any IS....all I can see is breast and Butt..." = Meh, my humor need work. __________________ Ara Han

2013-07-12, 20:58	Link #44647
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	If you want to write it, be my guest :/ I'm busy with my FOZ stories anyway. __________________

2013-07-12, 10:05	Link #44641
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	So we got writers in tempest nd erachi, wave and sometimes age with the occasional box Artist is zero Gunblade and or zero can publish. Anyone else joining this party?

2013-07-12, 10:21	Link #44643
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	Make it feel a little less like a reskin I suppose? Can't say I can do better. Got college putting my creativity under its thumb.

2013-07-13, 05:56	Link #44648
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	Now now, no one should be discouraged from the project

2013-07-13, 08:22	Link #44650
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Again: If anyone wants to write it, be my guest. I'm already juggling like 13 fics and adding another to a pile just makes for trouble. In either case, I wasn't the one to start the idea, so writing it is kinda hard because I have no idea what personality he has beyond 'Innocent' and 'Wants big breasts and butts despite being a robot'. The end result also bugs me. What will be the ending? Any story I plan eventually has an ending in mind. A story with no ending just seems....pointless. Oh, and I copy pasted that deadpool thing from the game. I was using an Ipad, I was sleepy, and then I got lazy. __________________

2013-07-14, 08:02	Link #44653
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	I'm writing it now. If anybody wants to take over, its your choice, but I need something to alleviate boredom. __________________

2013-07-14, 10:43	Link #44654
agetreme Just another Idiot Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Delusion world	I am having Idea indigestion right now.... Got three fic unrelated to IS + rewrite of generation shift + OC story.. I am now wondering how to squeeze everything within a day since I usually took hours to type out stuff (proof-reading/editing and stuff like that, I tend to do those things on the fly rather than after I finish typing out the whole thing.). __________________ Ara Han

2013-07-14, 18:16	Link #44655
mattomonga Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2013	My IS Character IS Transfer Student: name: Matt Jackson Gender: Male Nickname: Viz (short for visual powers) Looks: Bright blue raggedy hair Red Eyes or Sharingan like eyes (depending on if he is using them) Alingment: Chaos Personality: He is very quiet. The only one he has ever spoken to is ichika. Powers: Device: TsukuNyoMe Long Range-Medium Range Attack Type Wields Laser Rifle And Dagger Genetic Mutations: was a participant in america's Sharingan project and gained use over all sharingan forms, with immunities to the debuffs. Backround: Was born 15 years before the events in IS, in The United States of America. joined the Sharingan project when he was 5. Mother and Father are deceased. Dorm: lives in the attic above charles and itchika's room. Friends: Itchika, Charles, Cecielia, Houki Family:None Clothing: Black Trench Coat, School Uniform, Jeans. __________________ _______________________________________________The Duck Will Kill Us All...

2013-07-14, 18:56	Link #44656
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	....No offense, but that's stupidly overpowered. So he's both a male IS pilot and a modern day version of Sasuke? I fail to see any weaknessess or, if he's not a pilot, a reason for him to be living in IS academy. That and he's wearing a black trench coat :/ That's one of the trademark attires of a character that the author wants people to think is cool. That and its not very practical since a black trench coat makes one stick out like a sore thumb. __________________

2013-07-14, 21:57	Link #44658
StratoSpear Titans Test Team Pilot Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: The Elysium	The more I think about that IS-kun, the more I wonder... Does he have a head? I just imagined an IS suit walking around, just the hovering legs and arms (and chestplate maybe) strutting around the school. Who could not be terrified by that? Even so, this popped into my head: Girl 1: Oh yes. IS-kun, be at the arena by noon. Just a heads-up. IS-kun:.... Girl 1:...realizes IS-kun has no head... Oh... right, sorry. __________________ "You cannot be bad at watching a movie. You cannot be bad at listening to an album. ...But you can be bad at playing a videogame, and the game will punish you and deny you access to the rest of the videogame."

2013-07-14, 22:30	Link #44659
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	He does in the fic I made: But its just a hollow helmet like the White Knight helmet. __________________

2013-07-15, 04:56	Link #44660
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	Lol, it would be funny when it turns out the helmet isn't really necessary and he only keeps it on so people don't freak out. Funnier still is if he refers to them as his hat. Last edited by demino_hellsin; 2013-07-15 at 05:19.