Infinite Stratos Character Creation and Fanfiction Discussion

[Strigon 13]

It's been a long time.

Well, I pass to leave the profile of the first protagonist of a project that I'm doing during my free time.

Spoiler for Ryouko Murakami:

Name: Ryouko Murakami
Gender: Female
Nickname: “Yuki-onna” (literally “Snow Woman”)
Age: 15 years old
Looks: (Picture coming soon)
Personality: Tsundere, introverted, Hot-blooded (when in combat)
Alignment: Lawful Good
Abilities: Ignition Boost, Diving Charge
Catchphrase: What an idiot
Song: Platinum Lucifer / Silver Fallen Angel
Counters: Doesn't like the sun, hates Caucasian mens (specially the Europeans)
Background:

A normal girl, who became a representative pilot. Her status of representative isn't affiliated with Japan on a first place, she is a special case.

Her family is the head of Murakami Industries, which is the biggest military contractor of Asia, and main developer of newest IS’s prototypes, which has a mutual development agreement with the well-known Tesla Leicht Institute, on the research on new technologies.

Even if she is a high class girl, she doesn’t act like one, because in the past she continuously got in troubles with the people around her, to extremes to be dropped from school more than once.

However, she has a natural ability on the use of IS, especially on the use of firearms, which rivals high class & worldwide known marksmen. She eventually went to a special training on the TLI to become a representative from the institute itself.

Personality

In the past, she was very confrontational with the people around her. But when she entered IS academy, from recommendation of the TLI, she decides to throw her past out and start anew.

However, she responds very violently toward the one who manages to make her lose her patience. But apart from that, she is very friendly with the people around her… if they know how behave, of course.

She has a sort of A-cup angst, due to the fact that her best friend has bigger bobs than her. And the fact that she is a little more… flat, than the rest of the girls of her age.

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Spoiler for Yukikaze:

IS Name: PAX-007 MK II “Yukikaze” (Biakushiki MK II)
IS Type: Long Range Attack
Color: White Body & Cyan Stripes
Generation: 3rd Generation “Test Unit” IS
Maximum Speed: Mach 2.5 (1902 Mph) normal mode, Mach 4 (3040 Mph) during Twilight Ritter
One Off Ability: Twilight Ritter

It was created as a Test Unit for the new SND (Super Nova Drive) reactor system, under the ward of the well known Tesla Leicht Institute, located in the southwestern United States, and the Murakami Industries, located on Hokkaido’s island.

Designed from the data obtained from “Byakkushiki Setsura” analysis. It was designed with almost the same design and frame during the machine’s 1st shift. The main difference however, is that the scientist resolved the energy issue concerned to the leech of the shield's power during the special attack, installing a new type of photovoltaic panel and also a upgraded Shield Generator, which allows the recharge of the shield with almost every form of light source.

The unit was developed and created by a TLI scientist named Alexander Krieger, who was one of the responsible of the creation of various other IS units, such as the original Byakkushiki, and the infamous Silver Gospel.

Another big difference between the original and the new version is the fact that is designed not as a melee unit, but as a long range assist unit, taking on account their nature of “Glass Cannon”.

The IS itself is almost exactly like the Byakushiki, only minor aesthetical changes where done, such as the wings repainted completely white, and the golden parts repainted in cyan.

Some scientists call this unit Weiß Ritter, from his similarity of a prototype concept of a series of future machines called PT (Personal Troopers).

Weapons & Abilities

Deemed to use only Medium & Long range weapons, is fully loaded with variable types of firearms. It has 3 Linked Lasers mounted on the left arm. Various Split Missile Pods, with at least six pairs of them, located on the wings. A Beam Sword attached to the right arm, for CQC. And Dual Revolvers, for close ranged combat.

The main weapon is the Bullhorn Launcher, which consist on a long and heavy rifle that can fire both solid rounds and energy blasts. It alternate between 3 modes:

S-Mode: S comes from Solid. The rifle fires powerful Depleted Uranium armor piercing rounds, at full automatic fire at a speed of 300 rounds per minute, over an effective range of 1,500 m.

E-Mode: E comes from Energy. The rifle charges a powerful energy attack, using the sun light energy collected from the photovoltaic panels on the wings of the IS. The energy blast is devastating for a unit with no shield, due to the fact that it can melt steel due to the extreme heat generated.

D-Mode: D comes from Double. The rifle opens and reveals an Electronic Telescopic sight, which allows the pilot to lock on the target with all her remote weapons. After the target is locked, it begins to fire: first several split missiles, and then the S-mode until the ammo is depleted, and finally overloads the E-mode and fires a deadly energy strike over the enemy.

Twilight Ritter

Based on the “Reiraku Byakuya”.

The IS open the wings to collect enough solar energy to overload and amplify its attacks. Immediately begins to overload, changing their armor color from white to purple, at the same time it summons a second Bullhorn launcher on the left arm.

It fires the 2 rifles on E-Mode to the enemy several times, from different angles at once. After, it connects the two rifles into a much larger one. The rifles charges and fire a red beam, fourth times more powerful than the normal yellow one, and taking advantage of the Nullifying Barrier capability, it destroys the enemy shield in one shot, even if it's fully charged.

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A cookie for the one who manages to see all the references.

Expect another protagonist soon.

PD: The picture it will come soon. When? I don't know

[blitz1/2]

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

AND THUS ZERO ANNOUNCED!!!!



-IS- Infinite Stratos: Sacred Twins

Spoiler for First Part Twincest:

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V1 Chapter 01: My Brother’s Classmates are all female
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"Everyone's here, right? Then let's start the SHR (student homeroom meeting)--"

The short and petite assistant homeroom introduced herself, sigh, even though she’s short and thus petite –why I’m repeating it??- her incredibly-sizable assets are distracting.

Hey, even my niichan is interested! Uh, it’s not the time for me to feel happy!

Well…the vice-homeroom teacher don’t look like she’s in her twenties, late or early I don’t care. But hey, she looks even younger than me, something weird if you think about it. The Clothes are irrelevant, it’s adult clothes…wait, it does look striking too.

The fact that she's wearing glasses did not make her mature, at all. Ichika-nii, even you realize it don’t you?

"Then everyone, let's get along with each other for the next year~"

"......"

Your own embarrassment makes tense atmosphere. I screamed mentally.

Seems like she’s not experienced enough, at least in the front of students. At least she looks and act nice.


"Now, let's move on to self-introductions. Mm, we'll go by seating arrangements."

Oh whoever made the arrangement, curse you. Why you placed Ichika-nii in the middle, look at how everyone's eyes turned to him.

Ichika-nii seems like he’s uneasy.

I bet because he’s the only male here.

Everyone enjoy the first day of the school, except him, because his classmates are all girls, and he’s the only boy…wait, that’s very redundant.

And he’s distracting himself from the problem by looking intensively at the teacher…and that bi-err…I mean that first childhood friend of him.

Pleading for attention it seems, and this childhood friend of him instead turned her gaze away from him.

HOW DARE YOU! Shinonono Houki, after those six years he spent mourning after you!

Oh no, he’s not mourning, a little sad maybe? I’m sorry for being overdramatic.

Well, finally, his gaze turned at me.

FINALLY! YAY!

I gave him a cool smile and reassuring look, seems like it was effective enough to ease his fidget, though his expression still shout loud that he’s going to snap.

UH OH! ICHIKA-NII IT’S YOUR…GAH!

"...san, ORIMURA ICHIKA-SAN."

"Ye-yes!?"

JEEZ, how embarrassing. Everyone is almost breaking out of control, laughing. Thank God, only snickers and spurt here and there was heard.

Truth to be told Ichika-nii, you're not that bad at handling girls (if that bossy tomboy - I mean Gotanda-Imouto is any indication)

"W-well, I'm sorry for calling you out so loudly. Are, are you angry? Sorry, sorry! But, that, self-introductions, we started from 'あ' (a), and now we're at 'お (o)' for Orimura-san now. So, pl-... please, could you introduce yourself? Could, could you?"

She bowed politely, and her spectacle sliding down…ah, what a ditz…wait, that kind of submissive attitude! It's dangerous sensei! Even Ichika is bothered, oh whatever, I don’t care anymore! Stop staring on those jugs!

Oh he's not staring on them.

"No, about that, there's no need to continue apologizing... besides, it's just a self-introduction, so please calm down, sensei."

"Re-really? Really? Really? Ok, yo-you said it, so you better do it!"

HOW DARE YOU HOLDING HIS HANDS AFTER YOU STARTLED HIM LIKE THAT!

Guh, no wait, it’s his fault. Why? Ichika-nii why? You’re at least five years younger than her! You attract a lot of attention!

Besides, I'm here cheering you from behind, even if mentally. Ichika-nii!

He stood up in an instant, leered aside and behind. Everyone’s eyes were pointed at him in a manner of Armor Piercing bullet, and it made him nervous. Even I could feel it!

Oh, why he ended up in this heaven-no, girly hell? It’s my fault, somehow.

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~ICHIKA POV~
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"Uu—so cold..."

In the middle of February, we, as third-years, were heading towards the examination center.

"If I want to get into the high school nearest my house, why must I go to a place that's four stops away from it...and today's so cold..."

“Stop complaining, you’re the one being enthusiastic abut this darned exam”

My Twin sister complained to me! What an useless brother I am.

Due to a cheating case last year, the government would only divulge the location of each school's entrance exams 2 days before the actual thing. Though I feel that it's completely redundant, as you all can imagine, I was only a third-year at the time. Besides, what could I say? Basically, I could only bear grudges as I headed towards the examination center.

My ideal school was Aoetsu Private School that was near my house, average standard in education, and has a school festival.

If there's any special advantage that's worth mentioning, it's that the private school's fees are extremely cheap, exceptionally cheap.

Why? That's simple. This is because 90% of all the graduates of this school are employed in jobs related to this school's corporation.

Even if it wasn't like the employment freeze, it's something worth being happy about when you can be taken care of right after your graduation.

And there are too many wonderful jobs out there, and besides, it's all localized. There's no need to worry about flying to one rural place on one day. Really wonderful.

“You’re just trying to run from Chifuyu-nee, don’t you?”

Ah, the might of magic. No, this is what we call human minds and behavior, there’s always someone, somewhere in the world able to decipher your expression and act into exact words.

In my case thought, it’ my own Twin sister Madoka.

Before you ask, Madoka looks and act like mini-Chifuyu, at first glance anyway. Madoka is really short fused, if you known her better.

If Chifuyu-nee is tungsten, then Madoka is tungsten plated graphite, he mask crack bigger the harder you hit.

The more you reveal her dark side, and ah.

“As if you’re don’t” I told her and grin.

Her face flushed, and her arms cradling to mine. I noticed how close and intimate this scene is.

This weather must be really cold, colder than I could complain.

As for my house, quite a few things happened. My parents are no longer around, and though my older sister, who's a lot older than me, has taken care of me for quite some time, I've always felt inferior for having no parents. I Have this twin sister that also superior in everyway to me, adding salt to the injury indeed.

Of course I love her; she’s my sister after all. And she’s always stayed beside me, for the best and worst. We’re like inseparable pieces of puzzle they said.

On a side note, even though we are not poor since Chifuyu-nee's earnings are good, I'd still feel bad if I continue to be a burden to her.

At first, I thought of working immediately after graduating from middle school, but due to my big sister's overwhelming strength -—- primarily brute strength --— I couldn't overcome them, so until then, I was still an examinee.

However, getting into this Aoetsu Private School was like finding a job. At the same time, I could reduce Chifuyu-nee's burden—however, it doesn't really have anything to do with reducing her burden, it's just that I wanted to do it.

It was strange, in case of Madoka, she could easily enter most of the prestigious school and ensuring a bright(er) future. Why she follows me into this definitely ordinary High School remains a mystery.

Thanks to a year of cramming, I was designated as a class A student. Madoka however always been All-star student…

…and hilariously pressed to join remedial summer class due to laziness and bad attitude.

Even geniuses are human, they can do mistake, even if rarely. From that day, she swore an oath that she’ll become ultra-disciplined student, hey, now you’re more like Mini-Guan-Yu than ever!

As usual, I went about taking exams, and as usual, I was accepted as per normal, so I wasn't nervous when I walked into the examinations area.

Where’s the place again? Oh, how the heck we’ve ended in this place? Second floor? AH! Why they have to make this city hall so complicated! This is a labyrinth? Glass wall? And what with those stupidly high ceilings?

Who design this place! You call this true art? I call it inefficiency! And they call me stupid for stating the truth?

Rambling aside, there’s a door, and curse Madoka and her mischievous curiosity, she entered it without thinking. As screw it, I’ve been tired of walking anyway, so I’ve follow her.

"Ah—you should be an examinee, right? Alright, head over to the opposite side and change. We're in a rush here. Here, we can only loan it up till 4 o'clock, and we can't extend it any further. Really, I don't know what the government is thinking here..."

The hell what’s with that thirtysomething woman? She gave Madoka instruction even though she’s not looking at her at all. Madoka even so far gave her a red-eye! And then she left…

“What a lazy examiner” Madoka snorted.

Talking about yourself huh, Imouto?

“Shut up”

Don’t read my mind, dang it. Speaking of which, why the examiner told us to change clothes? Is this anti-cheating measure? School these days is very creative…

Pulled the curtain, we found something interesting, or rather, mysterious.

A knight bow in the might of Orimura twins and swearing its eternal allegiance! Thy lord shall come to bless you!

NO WAIT! It’s really an armor suit, huge, bulky, yet and the time sleek and elegant. Graceful and yet at the same time showing its rigid strength. It was posed as kneeling.

On a side note, it has no torso and head.

“Whoa, Infinite Stratos!” Madoka chirped, “Look Ichika, an IS”

“I knew it”

Intended as space exploration machines, IS has performance level so high that one unit singlehandedly turned a medium nation’s worth of naval fleet during an Incident known as ‘White Knight Incident’.

From that day, IS was well known as some sort of Weapon of Mass Destruction, thus require a strict regulation in possession and deployment. Alaska Treaty was born.

Problem is, only girls can operate them. In front of me, an IS is nothing more than an Inanimate suit of armor, so heavy I can’t even lift my finger inside it.

“Hey! Hey! Can I try this?”

“We’re almost late for the Aoetsu exam” Not that I care anymore, anyway “But go ahead”

Cheerful and excited, you know, I’m not overstating it that this side of her is a rare sight, probably not even one week once.

My chest felt warm and somehow I gained 200% spirit every time this happens.

The arrangement of torso section somehow accentuated her figure, now that is uncomfortable, really.

Chuckled, I try to touch the 150cm long leg…and somehow it reacts.

Information flowing into my minds, so many information that is alien, yet at the same time seems like they’re always been in my brain for years. Basic movement, range of engagement, operation time, utility tool, safety measure, basic armament, maneuver, enemy recognition, sensitivity, gyroscopic control, armor residual, etc. etc.

“Ichika… this is-“

“Wha, what happened?” I gasped.

“It couldn’t be!”

“But he’s a guy”

By the time I get a grasp of reality, I was inside the IS, and the world that I saw through the data of the 'IS' was like—

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~MADOKA POV~
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"Hm— ...well, I'm Orimura Ichika. I'll be in your care."

Oh well, that's a good start, look, only this time I'll allow the girls gave you some sort of expectation.

You had to make a good first impression, after all.

Whooosh~

Why it's so silent? I thought....

"That's all"

My head fell to the desk, so did everyone else’s. Stupid niichan is stupid, he seems like realized it and have some sort of stupid internal monologue again during that introduction, the reason he's distracted.

Speaking of which, only 85% of the time I can guess his mind right, contrast to everyone’s thought that Twins shared their minds all the time.

"Ichika, you baka" I muttered rather loudly.

Oh, looks like he heard it.

And ouch, there was legendary Guan Yu in action, smacked Ichi-nii in the head. Cue epic war music start, enhancing the badass entry of Guan Yu, oh my oniichan is awesome, still alive in front of her might...

Wait, she said she's not Guan Yu? And OUCH!

"Ah, Orimura-sensei, is the meeting over?"

Now everyone will knew our ties to the legendary Guan Yu, I mean Orimura Chifuyu. Sayonara, normal school life...

"Ah, Yamada-sensei. It's been tough on you, forcing you to make them introduce themselves."

HOW DARE HER RECEIVE SUCH GENTLE, LIU-BEI VOICE FROM CHIFUYU-NEE!

"CHIFUYU-NEE?!"

Great, we synchronized our wail. Maybe we should form a romantic singing duet...wait a minute.

By the way, why the HELL Chifuyu-nee is here?? She only came home once or twice a month, and the hell I and my niichan did not know what kind of job she did! I was never informed of it, at all. And what's with the tight fitting black suit? How ecchi!

"Orimura-Imouto, show him more appropriate way"

I stand up rather calmly and blinked twice.

"My name is Orimura Madoka, younger twin sister of Orimura Ichika. I have no doubt about my brother and my own potential and that's why we're sitting here. I hope we can be friends and achieve our goal to be exceptional students together! Nice to meet you all!" I shouted, in a voice could be mistaken for terminator, err... my older sister.

Oh the reactions, Jesus, THE REACTIONS! They squeaked and squealed, cried "How cool" and "So happy to be your friends!"

"Awesome!"

"You, COULD IT BE?!"

"THERE'S NO MISTAKE!"

"SHE IS-"

And then come the climax introduction, BEHOLD! CHIFUYU ORIMURA! MY BELOVED BIG SISTER!

"Everyone, my name is Orimura Chifuyu, and my duty is that for this one year, I'll be training you in the operations and controls of IS. Everything I teach, you have to remember, and understand. To those who can't understand, I'll teach till they can. My job is to thoroughly train you in your youth, from the age of 15 to 16. You can oppose my attitude, but you have to listen to what I say. Roger that?"

Cue the shriek of excitement, Chifuyu-neesama is awesome!

"KYAAA—! It's Chifuyu-sama, it's the real Chifuyu-sama herself!"

"I've always been your follower!"

"I came to this school from North Kyuushuu because I admired you, onee-sama!"

"I came all the way from southern Hokkaido!"

"I'm so happy to be taught by Chifuyu-sama!"

"I'll gladly die for Chifuyu-sama!"

"...it's really quite a sight to see so many idiots gather here every year. What a surprise? Or is there a special reason? Are these idiots here only to attend my class?"

Thanks sherlock, it's very obvious isn't it?

"KYAAAHH! ONEE-SAMA! SCOLD US MORE! CONTINUE TO SCOLD US MORE!!"

"BUT BE GENTLE TO US FROM TIME TO TIME!"

"AND BE EXTREMELY ELEGANT AFTERWARDS~!"

Oh no, now they're being masochist too??

That aside, Ichika-niichan seems to be relieved that the attention now all absorbed by Chifuyu-nee. I also understand how surprised he is that now our beloved oneesan is our Homeroom teacher.

God is a sitcom writer for sure.

"Oi, so you failed to make even a simple greeting?"

WA! So cruel, how can you do that to Ichika-nii?!

"No, Chifuyu-nee, I—"

He's getting slapped in the head again, Chifuyu-nee, you realize that without beating, his brain is already broken aren't you?

"Call me Orimura-sensei."

"...Yes, Orimura-sensei." he whined, poor him.

"Eh...? Then, it means that Orimura-kun is Chifuyu-sama's younger brother...?"

"Maybe that has something to do with him being the only man in the world that can use the IS?"

"Ah~ Great. I really wanted to switch him over."

KNOW YOUR PLACE!! I roared mentally. Seriously, this is getting out of hand!

"Even her little sister is cool just like her"

"KYAA!! You're right! Madoka-sama is not bad too!!"

BUDDHA! PLEASE! SAVE THIS ACADEMY FROM SEXUAL DEVIATION! for that matter, at least protect me from some sort of sexual Harassment -except if it's Ichika, wait NO-!

Wait, does that means Ichika-nii is 'The Savior of Heterosexuality'?

I made Madoka brash and temperament, but acting cool outside, all the way, like...Mini-Chifuyu. But she could be herself in front of Ichika or Chifuyu, and probably the rest of Harem... if they could be closer with her of course...

Oh and yes, in her monologue, she always call him 'Ichika-nii' but in conversation she did not add honorifics, talk about pride...

Nothing like some twincest to brighten up the day, at least madoka is bro-con enough (kind of) lol, I'll be looking forward to this, as long as she isn't a TSUNdere, then I guess it would be fine (seeing as most of Ichika's harem fit that type)

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by blitz1/2

Nothing like some twincest to brighten up the day, at least madoka is bro-con enough (kind of) lol, I'll be looking forward to this, as long as she isn't a TSUNdere, then I guess it would be fine (seeing as most of Ichika's harem fit that type)

Rather than TSUNdere, she's a KUUdere (Kuu from Cool) meaning that she maintain a cold, indifferent attitude but actually cheerful, upbeat, and lovely inside.

Yes, she throw a snark here and there, but she'll never hit Ichika for being dense, or even with her being jealous. Adding her Brocon tendencies in the mix, mostly she'll protect him from the haremmettes instead, at worst just leave him tormented.

I also always assume that Chifuyu fits this personality as well, Laura didn't, she mellow too fast.

Hell, even Ichika said something along the lines of gold plating, and that there's cheerful side of her hidden inside.

[blitz1/2]

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

Rather than TSUNdere, she's a KUUdere (Kuu from Cool) meaning that she maintain a cold, indifferent attitude but actually cheerful, upbeat, and lovely inside.

Hell, even Ichika said something along the lines of gold plating, and that there's cheerful side of her hidden inside.

Because of your fic, I am having a strong urge to make a IS X Imouto paradise fanfiction crossover, must fight urge!!!! Thanks Zero....

[DarkJak2050]

Alright, this has taken a while but I finally manage to get started on my fanfic in terms of storyline. But before you read the "Preview", here are my Fanfic's Plot and OCs to refresh your memory, be sure to click on the link:

Project Silverback and First OC

Original Characters 2-4

Alright and now for the biggie, (and I mean a real biggie). Quick Summary:
Thunder Crash is on it's final night before it has to vacate its base the next morning. The OCs were talking about their own future plans now that Thunder Crash is disbanded and their days as Mercenaries are done, when they suddenly came under attack.

Spoiler for Project Silverback "Preview":

Its dark, where am I? I was talking with Sideswipe and Scourge about our future plans now that Thunder Crash is disbanded. Then huge explosions happened 10 meters away from us and I find myself in complete darkness. Shortly after, I hear a faint voice…

“Hot Shot!”

I slowly open my eyes half-way, finding myself lying on the ground. Then I hear that voice again.

“Are you alright? Come on, get up!”

A voice that I recognize, it was Eddie “Sideswipe” Garcia’s, long time childhood friend and right-hand man. Along with Sideswipe’s voice, I hear gunfire all over the place. I struggle to get up while looking what’s going around me. As I stood up, I see Sideswipe, a semi-buffed teenage Spanish American boy 5 meters away from me leaning his back against a Humvee that’s been turned over on its side, firing his sidearm at a group of military soldiers on the other side of the Humvee.

“We got some over there, Sideswipe.” said another voice I recognized.

Crouching next to him on his left is Clayton “Scourge” Maddox, a tall, buffed young adult African American male providing support fire with his handheld SMG (Sub-Machine Gun). The next thing I see, are my fellow mercenaries dropping to the ground. Getting what’s generally going on, I dual wield both of my sidearms, both being semi-automatic pistols, and start firing at the bastards that attacked us.

“You’re mine now!” I shout before shooting 4 shots at the same group of soldiers firing at Sideswipe and Scourge.

All four shots hit each soldier right in the forehead, but with these shots being as powerful as a .50 cal round, their heads splatter all over leaving their bodies falling to the ground. Then, I ran towards Sideswipe and Scourge.

“What the hell’s going on here!?” I asked when I got to them.

“I guess the time of vacancy of this base has been bumped up by a day.” Scourge replies.

“Sxxx. They couldn’t have just waited until the next morning, huh?” I said while firing at a pair of soldiers rushing in on our position, killing them.

“Did you contact the base?” I asked Sideswipe and Scourge.

“Yeah, they’re taking defensive measures as we speak.” Sideswipe answers back.

“You got a plan, Hot Shot?” Scourge asks.

I took a better look to assess the situation. I counted off how many guys we have left, including us, which brings us to 18 left. The base is 250 meters behind our position, and we’re surrounded on 2 sides, in front, and on our right. We’re holding our grounds fine, but things will turn nasty if we stay here for too long.

“Here’s the plan; get off of your ass and start taking it too them!” I say while moving to Sideswipe’s right side.

Scourge chuckles a little bit. Then I continue.

“We’ll hold our ground here for now and when there’s a break; we’ll bolt back towards the base and begin our counter-attack.”

“Right.” Sideswipe replies. But his eyes open up, and then he immediately raises his pistol, shoots at my head just missing my left ear by 1 centimeter. I felt something splatter on the back of my head; I turned around to see an enemy soldier that had his head blown off, falling on his back with his knife in hand. Then I turned back towards Sideswipe.

“Thanks man.”

“Hey, we’re brothers. We always watch each other’s backs.” He replies.

“Hey guys, you’d better see this.” Scourge says while checking the dead soldier’s body. We turned and approach him.

“Look...” Scourge shows the symbol on the dead soldier’s right arm to us.

“What the hell!?” Sideswipe exclaims.

On the symbol, we see the Kanji characters, “自衛隊”, which can be read as “Jieitai”. (Correct me if I’m wrong.) Upon reading this, my eyes opened up and just like Sideswipe, I exclaimed.

“Japan Self-Defense Force!?”

“Why the hell are they attacking us? I thought we’re on their side!” Sideswipe asks.

“I don’t know, Sideswipe, you wanna ask ‘em?” I answered back while turning my attention towards more JSDF soldiers on our right firing at us.

“Whatever the reason is, there’s only one way out of this. Scourge!”

“Way ahead of you.” Scourge replies while at the same time he pulls out a Claymore Frag Grenade (Grenade version of the Claymore Mine), throws it at the squad of JSDF soldiers on our right…

Beep beep beep…

DUHHHN!

The Claymore Grenade blows up, killing the whole JDSF squad.

“Boom, baby!” Scourge yells. This is exactly the break that we need.

“Alright, fallback! Fallback!” I bellowed while turning towards the base and began running. Sideswipe, Scourge and our remaining 15 guys began to follow suit. And not a moment too soon. Upon looking back, more JSDF soldiers arrive, firing and in pursuit of us.

“If you got smokes, use them now to provide cover.” I shouted out while running back towards the base.

Some of our guys dropped some smoke grenades on the spot, shooting out thick smoke providing cover for us. With that, we lost some of the pursuers. While running back towards the base, I reach into my right pocket, pull out my headset and place it on my right ear. Shortly after we had more pursuers after us. Some of our guys fired back at them once every now, killing them. Seeing this, I put my index and middle fingers on the earpiece and shouted into the microphone;

“Ratchet, we’re being overrun with JSDF. Get the Wolf Pack out here!”

“What!? JSDF!? Why the hell are they attacking us!?” Ratchet asks back through the earpiece.

“We’ll figure that out later. For now, get Wolf Pack out here!”

“Fine, but it’s going to be danger close. You better get your asses back in here!” Ratchet replies reluctantly.

“Just fire them up!” I barked into the microphone.

(The Wolf Pack is just like the Predator drone that the US armed forces use, but it’s specifically designed for Aerial Assault. And just like the Wolf, these drones attack in packs consisting of 5-7 drones, hence the name.)

We’re 130 meters away from the base and we see more of our guys about 40-50 meters near the left side of the entrance of the base prepping for the counter-attack.

“Contact!” Sideswipe shouts out, pointing on our right side. A small group of JSDF soldiers are about to fire at us.

“Take cover!” I bellowed as bullets rained down on us. Everybody scattered, taking cover behind some of the reinforced shipment creates and small containers nearby.

“Gyaaa!”

“Ah-ahhh!”

"No!!" Sideswipe cries.

While taking cover behind a small container, I turn around and see that two of our own guys have been shot, one getting hit in the center of his, chest killing him instantly. The other was shot in the left upper thigh causing him to fall down, face firs but still alive. He started to crawl towards us and Scourge was about to go after him but as he did, JSDF shot him multiple times in the back, killing him.

“Damn it!” Scourge snarls while retreating back towards us.

JSDF soldiers got us pinned down; if we stay here any longer, the Wolf Pack’s gonna end up killing us with the JSDF.

“Aaaaaggghhhh! Now I’m pissed!” In frustration, I pulled out three Claymore Grenades and threw them at the JSDF.

“Fire in the hole!” I shout, and everyone puts their heads down.

Beep beep beep…

DUHHHN!

DUHHHN!

DUHHHN!

Small chunks of dirt, sand and body parts are sent flying all over the place, some of them landing on us.

“Ugh, man. That was nasty.” Sideswipes commented.

I look out to see if its all clear to continue our retreat, while Sideswipe and Scourge were doing an ammo check on everyone.

“All clear, keep moving! We’ll get the casualty count later when this is over.”

The 16 of us broke out of cover and resumed our retreat towards the base. Then Sideswipe came up to me about the ammo check.

“These guys are low on ammo, Hot Shot.”

“Alright.” I replied, and then I turned my head back towards our remaining 13 guys as I ran.

“Keep moving! Shoot only when you really have to, got that?”

“Sir, yes, sir!” our remaining guys yelled.

We’re now 90 meters away from the base and I spot something high up in the night sky above the base, descending at a high speed.

“Heads up!” I assumed that the Wolf Pack’s inbound.

“Uh, Hot Shot. That doesn’t look good.” Scourge said while looking at what I assumed was the Wolf Pack.

Then, it came to a thunderous crash near the guys that are preparing the counter-attack. I couldn’t tell really because we’re still far away from it. A short moment later, we saw a cloud of smoke burst out from the crash site. We hurried over but when the smoke cleared, there stood a white mech with light blue lining, standing at around 3 meters tall, with a feminine body figure, wings appearing that they’re not physically attached to its back, and it’s wielding an energy sword in its right hand. Around it were the bodies of the guys that were preparing the counter-attack lying on the ground literally cut in half, making a huge pool of blood around the mech like figure. Then, it started charging towards us.

“Oh, sxxx!” I sweared.

“Here it comes!” Sideswipe alerting everyone.

As it got closer, we all broke away, completely scattering all over the place. While doing so, I got a better look at to confirm what it is. And to my biggest fear, I figured out; it’s the one thing that disbanded Thunder Crash, the one thing that broke the balance of power, putting women at the top of the hierarchy over men. This is a…

“INFINITE STRATOS!!” I bellowed.

The Infinite Stratos chased down 6 of our guys, they tried to fight back, but it was futile. All I can hear are the screaming and crying of my fellow mercenaries getting killed at the hands of a weapon that can only be used by women. The IS turns her attention towards me, Sideswipe and Scourge.

“Goddamn it! How do we kill this thing!?” Sideswipe frustratingly asks.

The IS charges towards us, with her energy sword held high up about to swing it down like a samurai. We all held our ground but at the last minute, we all dove out of the way.

“That’s a big-ass bitch!” Scourge commenting on the IS.

“Ratchet, where’s the damn Wolf Pack!?” I yelled into the microphone of my headset.

“The drones are gonna be inbound soon, hurry!” Ratchet urgently replies.

The IS continues with her relentless attacks. Focusing on Sideswipe, swinging her sword at him. Sideswipes can only dodge her attacks for so long, but Scourge took advantage of this by running and jumping on the back of the IS and tagging her with 5 grenades on her right arm; 3 Claymore Grenades and 2 Smoke Grenades. Immediately after tagging the grenades on her, Scourge jumped off of her.

“Sideswipe, get out of there!” Scourge alerting Sideswipe.

Sideswipe was continuously dodging the IS’s attacks. But when he saw the chance, he dove straight forward, going right between her legs and running towards me and Scourge. Then 5 seconds later…

Beep beep beep

DUHHHN!

DUHHHN!

DUHHHN!

The Claymore Grenades blew the sword out of the IS’s hand and after the 3rd Claymore Grenade went off, the smoke grenades began shooting out thick smoke disrupting her vision. But just as we’re about take a small breather, the JSDF started attacking again, picking up from where the IS left off. I turned on my headset to contact Ratchet again as bullets hit me on my combat armor, ricocheting off of it. Others whizzes by, missing me by mere millimeters.

“Ratchet, we need that Wolf Pack!” I shouted into the microphone.

“They’re firing… NOW!!” Ratchet shouts back.

An explosion went off 20 meters away from us. Then another explosion, this time it took out the JSDF. Flying overhead of us was the Wolf Pack, making a second round trip to continue with the counter-attack.

“Run!! Everyone, get inside the base!!” I bellowed and began running towards the base.

Sideswipe, Scourge and our 7 remaining mercenaries began running towards the base, while the Wolf Pack continues the massive counter-attack with Sidewinders/Hellfire missiles and Anti-Tank Sabot rounds.

I was the first to reach the base but I waited for the others, providing covering fire. The 7 remaining mercenaries were close behind.

“Go go go!” I urged them as they get inside while I provide covering fire.

They got inside with Sideswipe and Scourge rounding up the pack. Scourge got inside and Sideswipe the last one we’re all waiting on.

“Come on, Sideswipe!” I yell as I saw him getting closer and closer, still providing covering fire. When he was 3 meters away…

BOOM!

A shot from the Wolf Pack went off behind Sideswipe, knocking him down face first.

“Ah sxxx…”

I bolt out towards Sideswipe to get him inside but then, the IS showed up again and jumped up to continue her attack.

“Come on, make it in time!!”

I managed to get to Sideswipe, grabbed him by the back collar of his armor and, on pure adrenaline, threw him into the base with Scourge catching and setting him on the floor. Then I bolted back towards the base. And not a second too soon because the IS came down, landing in the same spot from where I threw Sideswipe.

Once I got inside, the doors closed right behind me. Now that we’re inside, we’re regrouping, loading up on weapons, armoring up, and gathering at the doors. I then turned towards Sideswipe, who was sitting on the floor, to see if he’s okay as a series of muffled explosions are going on just on the other side of the doors.

“I’m alright man, thanks. Tesla knows how to make combat armor.” He said as I approached him.

“Yeah.” Agreeing with him.

“And it’s like what you said when we were out there. Speaking of which, I say that we’re even now.”

Sideswipe lets out a small chuckle as he gets up.

While taking a breather from what happened outside, the series of muffled explosions are continues just on the other side of the doors. The Wolf Pack was engaging on the IS, sending everything it had on her. The explosions went on for the next 10 seconds, 10 seconds that felt like 10 minutes. And when the last explosion went off, the jet engines from the Wolf Pack roared off, far into the distance. Leaving us with a moment of tensed silence.

“…”

All of us were waiting to see if it’s all clear or not, before Scourge broke the tensed silence.

“Did we blow that bitch up?” He asked.

“…”

BANG!

A huge bulge appeared on the doors, and everybody raised their weapons up, aiming at the door. Then the doors are hit 5 more times, making the bulge bigger and bigger with every hit. After the fifth consecutive hit, the banging stopped.

Just when it stopped, a part of the wall above the front doors was broken in, leaving a hole that’s 3-4 meters in diameter. We all got out of the way of the falling debris, after dodging the debris; we saw what was standing in the hole in the wall above the front doors and what made it.

“Sxxx!” I yelled out loud.

It was the Infinite Stratos, looking virtually unharmed after the Wolf Pack’s constant barrage. Some of us actually looked terrified that it survived such an attack when seeing it. When the IS pilot saw this, she let out a sinister laughter.

“Did you really think something as weak as that can stop an IS?” She asked.

To respond to her question, we all raised our weapons up at her, ready to shoot. She responds back with a small evil laugh and a sinister smile on her face, as she brings out her energy sword. Then she jumps straight down, holding her sword with both hands overhead about to swing it down at us.

- End Preview, thank you.

This is not really the final version of it, and I know that some clean up is needed here and there. Not only that I had to censor some of the words out for "safety sake".

[ZeroXSEED]

Infinite Stratos: Sacred Twins Part 1-1

And now for second part

BEHOLD!

Spoiler for Twincest Part 1-2:

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~ICHIKA POV~
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I came here to this public IS Academy as the only male in the world who can pilot the 'IS'.

The IS Academy is, as its name suggested, an educational corporation meant to nurture IS operators. The Japanese government sees it as a principle and duty to fund it and run it.

However, the results of the research are revealed to the entire world due to the common agreement, and at the same time, Japan has no right to either remain silent or hide them. No matter what happens in this school, the Japanese government has to intervene fairly, and has the obligation of settling these matters under the premises that the other countries in the treaty have agreed upon.

Also, the school has opened its doors to foreign students without any conditions, and the Japanese government is to provide protection—as according to the contents of the IS treaty regarding IS pilot training agencies.

This is the school's code of discipline.

Basically, it's like 'you damned Japan, creating that IS and causing chaos in the world, at least you should build a school to train people in this field of discipline. Hand over your research and technology. Ah, you'll bear all the financing costs'. A certain country A is really a rogue.

(Why am I at this school? ...Well, because I activated a test IS in an IS examination arena, but speaking of which, how did I end up walking there?...)

—Are Aoetsu Gakuen and the IS Academy similar? Anyway, that seemed to be the case.

"..."

Suddenly, in this extremely emotional classroom, I felt a low gaze.

Looking back, Houki, who was looking outside the classroom only just now, turned around to stare at me.

(Hm—, though she doesn't look angry... did I do something?)

Never mind, I'll ask her later.

Just as I thought of it, the bell rang.

"Oh my, SHR is over. Everyone, I'll have you people memorize the basics of IS within the next 6 months. After that, it's practicals, you must let the basic maneuvers sink in as a part of your body's actions within half a month. Okay? If you understand, answer me. Whether good or bad, answer to whatever I say."

Oh, a demon trainer from Hell. Right now, Chifuyu-nee should be a demon in human skin. No, I could still handle it if it was a demon, because those aren't humans. And yet this person in front of me could only understand half of the human functions, how inconsiderate.

Either way, this Orimura Chifuyu was the first generation IS pilot that represented Japan, and was undefeated in an actual match. However, one day, she announced her retirement and disappeared... so that meant that she came here to teach... she should at least tell me as a family member... I was an idiot for worrying about her.

"SIT DOWN, YOU FOOL!"

“Stupid Ichika”

Yes, yes, I'm an idiot, older and younger sister ganging up on me, god, how cruel.

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~MADOKA POV~
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Ichika-nii started to fidget again, ahh, poor him. Too much of a good thing always backfired huh?

It’s break time, seems like he was freed from the torture.

Speaking of which we also taught ‘normal’ education, math, history, etc etc. The education about IS and whatnot are supplementary, only composing 35% of the scheduled time as a whole.

Speaking of which, the second and third grader acted like a stalker, they hide behind wall and corner of a window, intensively looking at us and mentally calling two of us to approach them.

The news that my brother is able to pilot an IS spread like a wildfire across the globe, and thus, not only the concerned feminist (I hate them) but even a child should know once he said ‘My name is Orimura Ichika’.

By the way, even though the IS Academy is the world's only specialized IS school, a lot of schools with the intention of sending students, enter the IS study program, so they can enter advanced studies.

And these kinds of school are for 100% all-girls. In the end, these kinds of schools' girls have almost no immunity against males, and as the boys in a normal society, there's a dilemma about their position.

The current weapons are waste metal in front of an IS, that's why the balance of the world's military has been broken. And because IS was invented by the Japanese people, they have the monopoly on IS technology. The other countries that have became more aware of the threat signed an IS Application Protocol—called commonly as the 'Alaska Treaty', and had convened the IS's disclosure and its information share, establishing the foundation of world research institutions, and prohibiting military usage, among other things.

That's why, the number of IS pilots in a country has a very close relationship with its military force (a credible defense force). Only girls can be pilots, so all the countries implanted a female protection priority system.

That's why, because of the 'woman = great' image that was imprinted in everyone's heart, in only ten years women became superior to men in the hierarchy.

When suddenly an equal 'man' has appeared, it was obvious that there would be curiosity first.

On a slight chance, my brother turned his head, accidentally looking a girl sitting beside him. I knew he’s looking for Houki, but the girl is flustered no matter what.

Note that the news about we being Chifuyu-nee’s little sister is no less popular, more so now that I joined IS academy. Everyone’s expectation of us, especially me was so high bordering on retardation. Ah, and the girl-crush they had on Chifuyu-nee also leaked onto me! I’m not my sister damn it!

Ah, time to help my bother.

“Ichika -“ I said coolly.

"...Excuse me for a moment."

"Eh?"

Darn, that Houki, now she swoop the chance after the hardship you threw at him hours ago? How hypocritical! Huh, my brother looks afraid. Stop sending him that angry glance! Even if you said you’re born with it, can’t you even change it?!

Truth to be told, Houki is tall, one inch taller than me…well, more like everyone than us shorter than average thought. With the possibility of her gaining it from practicing Kendo for years…

Seems like Ichika-nii is hopeful of repairing that broken friendship they tied, his smile at me signaled that it’ll be fine, she asked for private conversation anyway.

"Quickly."

"I-I know."

QUIET YOU-

“And…you too”

Me? Oh, well, I’m still your childhood friend too right, well; at least we’re not promise to marry each other when we’re older…EWW!

"By the way..."

"What?"

Why so serious? Oh wait, Oniichan is trying to hold a conversation, still, poor him. Seriously, are you wanted to talk or what, Houki?

"Last year, you won the world kendo championship, right? Congratulations." He said.

“Yeah, congratulations, Houki” I said as well.

"..."

After Houki heard us say that, her mouth immediately became a 'へ' form, her cheeks turned red. ... o-ho! Seemingly like something buried deep down there rising up again, must be careful.

After all, childhood friend is a strong contender as his lover candidate.

"Why do you know that?"

"You say why, I saw it in the newspaper..."

"Why, why did you see it in something like newspapers."

Why? Because news about female kendo championship is popular, and something popular will be put in the newspaper, maybe Tv sometimes. Besides, why asked a rhetorical question in the first place? He read it because he wanted to read, not stalking you!

"Ah--also."

"Wh-what?"

"..."

"Ah, no..."

The way she changed attitude left Ichika-nii in disbelief, seriously. Are you some sort of Air Conditioner, Houki? How can you adjust your temperature so suddenly?

"It's been a long time since we have seen each other. Even though it's been six years, I still recognized you immediately."

"Eh..."

"You see, the same hairstyle." While saying this, he pointed at his own head; Houki immediately starts to play with her ponytail.

Geez.

"At-at least you still remember."

"That, I can't forget that, since we are childhood friends. "

"..."

…I want to broke this lovey-dovey mood, but I don’t want my brother unhappy. Speaking of which, I did it anyway, he realized that I’m glaring in anger…no, jealously.

Ding--Dong--Dang--Dong.

Aye, time has already passed. The bell announcing the second period rings, and the bunch circling Houki and us naturally disappeared.

"Let's return to the classroom too."

"I-I know."

I don’t know what to say, perhaps she has changed a lot, or perhaps she’s always like this. I don’t know, honest.

Speaking of which, she’s manlier than any guy I knew, ah, Ichika-nii also has the same point of view, her willingness to work hard and stubbornness makes her manly.

"Why aren't you sitting already, Orimura."

"I'm very grateful to be under your guidance, Orimura-sensei."

STOP HITTING HIM! GUAN YU!!

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~ICHIKA POV~
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"...Thus, the basic operations of IS have to be witnessed by the country. If no permission is granted, we have to pursue criminal responsibilities..."

Yamada-sensei continued with her lesson ever so eloquently. However, I didn't understand anything at all.

"..."

Five heavy books were sitting in front of me. Just flipping the top most page, I can only see columns and columns of words with unknown meaning.

(Er, is it only me? Am I the only one who doesn't understand anything? Do the rest know? This active whatever offsets that wide-area something, what does it mean? Does it mean that I have to memorize everything...?)

I took a peek at the girl on the next table, and could only see her listening to Yamada-sensei's words, nodding away and jotting down notes from time to time.

(Ku... don't tell me those rumors about IS students studying before they enrolled is true...)

IS pilots have a direct link with our national security strength, so in a certain sense, this school exists to groom the elites. Also, these were scholars who managed to ace exams several times tougher than entrance exams.

(Though I'm not too interested in being elite... hm-, can't let this continue. Anyway, got to study.)

Feeling somewhat inferior, I lowered my head, and unknowingly, I peeked over at the girl who's jotting down notes.

"Is-, is there something wrong?"

As expected, after the girl noticed me looking at her, she revealed shock and nervousness, showing a forced smile that has a certain kind of expectation.

"Ah, no, it's nothing. Sorry."

"Is-, is that so?"

After hearing what I said, the girl showed me a look of relief and disappointment, before returning back to working on her notebook...hm~ did I do something to irritate her?

"Is there something you don't understand, Orimura-kun?"

Yamada-sensei noticed me talking to the girl besides me, and specially asked me.

"Ah, that..."

I again looked back at the textbooks —mm, I don't understand anything at all.

"If you have any questions, please ask me. I'm a teacher after all."

Yamada-sensei lifts her chest up and answers confidently. Oh, maybe she is really reliable. Alright, let's give it a go.

"Yamada-sensei!"

"Yes, Orimura-kun?"

An answer that's full of enthusiasm. Seems like this will work, as expected of a teacher.

"I don't understand anything at all."

I honestly said out my shortcoming. If I do this, most of the time, I'll be given empathy.

"Erm...ev, everything...?"

Yamada-sensei looks extremely bothered as she gives a completely stiff expression...that's weird? Where did that reliable teacher go?

"Th-Then...except for Orimura-san, is there anybody else who doesn't understand the current lesson up till this point?"

Prompting the class, Yamada-sensei raised her hand.

Silence...

Strange, that's too strange. Nobody raised their hand. If they only understood half of it right from the beginning, they'll definitely regret it in the future. Is that right, is that really alright, everyone?

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~MADOKA POV~
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……Could it be that…

"...Orimura, did you read the reference book before entering the school?"

BLOODY HELL, as I expect, he don’t read most of it! No, if he read it at all, he at least understands some of the simpler terminology, 100% ignorance is too much even for him. He mught be idiot, but he’s not thatstupid, or maybe it’s vice versa, I don’t care anymore!

Before he could say something…I want to protect him.

“I-“

“I borrowed it without him knowing after I lost mine and forgot to give him back…” I said, he’s visibly stumbled.

PANG! PANG! My brain lost about ten thousand cells according to Orimura’s equation of brain damage. Attendance book combo hit, if someone could say.

"I'll issue you another copy later, but you must memorize it within a week, got it?"

"No, that, the thickness is a little..."

"I'm telling you to do it."

"...Fine, I'll do it."

Ichika-nii, did you saw my sacrifice, oh he did, and he’s worried. Ah god, I’m so happy.

"I guess you can't spell Twincest"
*Put on sunglasses*
"Without win"

~YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!~

[blitz1/2]

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

Infinite Stratos: Sacred Twins Part 1-1

And now for second part

BEHOLD!

Spoiler for Twincest Part 1-2:

*snip*

"I guess you can't spell Twincest"
*Put on sunglasses*
"Without win"

~YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!~

ARRGHH! YOu stole my line! xD

Nice work btw, are you going to upload this to FF.net?

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by blitz1/2

ARRGHH! YOu stole my line! xD

Nice work btw, are you going to upload this to FF.net?

Yeah, I combine those two and this little addition as one chapter. I'll upload it right now.

Spoiler for Twincest Part 3:

Meanwhile, suspicious of something, Chifuyu-nee glared at me. Oh god, and they say I'm like Mini-Chifuyu, does that mean I'm always scary, a devil sergeant all the time?

Y'now, that fullmetal-stuff.

But for some reason, girls are into me. Hey, don't you realize how handsome my twin brother is? On a second thought, ignore him…please?

"Whether it's in terms of mobility, firepower or suppressing ability, the IS far surpasses all the older weapons in that aspect. If you don't understand this weapon 'thoroughly' before operating it, accidents will occur. We teach you basic knowledge and train you to prevent such accidents from occurring. Even if you can't understand, memorize it, and remain firm and steady. These are rules and regulations."

Yes, that's completely true.

Let me add on one thing, WE didn't wish to be here.

On one day, a certain group of black-clad men came up beside him, said something about 'we'll protect you' and left a notification letter regarding enrollment into the IS Academy.

I don't understand, does this 'protection' consist of tossing a boy into a girls' garden and abandoning him? Right now, we want protection, and Chifuyu-nee's the reason.

"...You brats, you two thinking of 'I didn't come here on my own will', right?"

I was shocked. Why did she reveal my thoughts so brazenly? By the way, my brother's reaction is exactly the same. Maybe we indeed share 85% of our thoughts?

"No matter whether you wished for it or not, humans can't get away from a social life. If you want to abandon it, abandon your identity as a human first."

"..."

Ichika-nii promise that he won't abandon us like our parents does, he also promise that he'll always try to improve himself, until the day he could proudly announce that he's Orimura Ichika.

Stupid.

As if he really will do that, let's see when he got a girlfriend or something…

Or not…aahh, with so many girls around him, his shell will crack sooner or later.

"Th-Then, Orimura-kun, I'll teach you everything that you don't know of, so you must work hard? Right? Right?"

Yamada-sensei tightened her hands and closed in. As she's shorter than him, it naturally became that she's shyly looking away.

"Yes. Then, I'll leave it to sensei after school."

After saying that, he sat down. Chifuyu-nee also returned to the side of the classroom.

"After-, after school... a teacher together with a student, two people alone after school... Ah! No, no, Orimura-kun. Sensei will become very weak when she's forced... and this is my first time with a guy..."

WHAT? What with that's reaction? Have you no shame whatsoever? Basically, you're saying that you won't resist if he comes for something indecent? How lame!

"How-However, if it's Orimura-sensei's younger brother, then..."

BLAM!!

Instinctively, I slapped my desk, hard, everyone except Chifuyu-nee chilled in response. I also broke Yamade-sensei's ra-I mean lewd fantasy.

"…Sorry, there's a bug on my desk"

Coughed twice, Chifuyuu-nee saved us from the brink "Yamada-sensei, continue with the lesson."

Yamada-sensei frantically moved back to the stage— and failed.

"Uu—it hurts..."

Ichika-nii, if only you realize that this is just the tip of a massive iceberg…

[blitz1/2]

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

Yeah, I combine those two and this little addition as one chapter. I'll upload it right now.

Spoiler for Twincest Part 3:

Meanwhile, suspicious of something, Chifuyu-nee glared at me. Oh god, and they say I'm like Mini-Chifuyu, does that mean I'm always scary, a devil sergeant all the time?

Y'now, that fullmetal-stuff.

But for some reason, girls are into me. Hey, don't you realize how handsome my twin brother is? On a second thought, ignore him…please?

"Whether it's in terms of mobility, firepower or suppressing ability, the IS far surpasses all the older weapons in that aspect. If you don't understand this weapon 'thoroughly' before operating it, accidents will occur. We teach you basic knowledge and train you to prevent such accidents from occurring. Even if you can't understand, memorize it, and remain firm and steady. These are rules and regulations."

Yes, that's completely true.

Let me add on one thing, WE didn't wish to be here.

On one day, a certain group of black-clad men came up beside him, said something about 'we'll protect you' and left a notification letter regarding enrollment into the IS Academy.

I don't understand, does this 'protection' consist of tossing a boy into a girls' garden and abandoning him? Right now, we want protection, and Chifuyu-nee's the reason.

"...You brats, you two thinking of 'I didn't come here on my own will', right?"

I was shocked. Why did she reveal my thoughts so brazenly? By the way, my brother's reaction is exactly the same. Maybe we indeed share 85% of our thoughts?

"No matter whether you wished for it or not, humans can't get away from a social life. If you want to abandon it, abandon your identity as a human first."

"..."

Ichika-nii promise that he won't abandon us like our parents does, he also promise that he'll always try to improve himself, until the day he could proudly announce that he's Orimura Ichika.

Stupid.

As if he really will do that, let's see when he got a girlfriend or something…

Or not…aahh, with so many girls around him, his shell will crack sooner or later.

"Th-Then, Orimura-kun, I'll teach you everything that you don't know of, so you must work hard? Right? Right?"

Yamada-sensei tightened her hands and closed in. As she's shorter than him, it naturally became that she's shyly looking away.

"Yes. Then, I'll leave it to sensei after school."

After saying that, he sat down. Chifuyu-nee also returned to the side of the classroom.

"After-, after school... a teacher together with a student, two people alone after school... Ah! No, no, Orimura-kun. Sensei will become very weak when she's forced... and this is my first time with a guy..."

WHAT? What with that's reaction? Have you no shame whatsoever? Basically, you're saying that you won't resist if he comes for something indecent? How lame!

"How-However, if it's Orimura-sensei's younger brother, then..."

BLAM!!

Instinctively, I slapped my desk, hard, everyone except Chifuyu-nee chilled in response. I also broke Yamade-sensei's ra-I mean lewd fantasy.

"…Sorry, there's a bug on my desk"

Coughed twice, Chifuyuu-nee saved us from the brink "Yamada-sensei, continue with the lesson."

Yamada-sensei frantically moved back to the stage— and failed.

"Uu—it hurts..."

Ichika-nii, if only you realize that this is just the tip of a massive iceberg…

Lol, Madoka is getting pissed, but I think it would be better if madoka was getting more jealous just from Yamada's body figure and fantasies.

Something like:

I wish I was in that position, I mean, HOW indecent! (instead of "how lame")

xD

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by blitz1/2

Lol, Madoka is getting pissed, but I think it would be better if madoka was getting more jealous just from Yamada's body figure and fantasies.

Something like:

I wish I was in that position, I mean, HOW indecent! (instead of "how lame")

xD

Madoka always obsessed for Ideal figure, which she had (This will be elaborated in Ichika's subtext-y monologue later) and that she saw Maya-sensei's boobs is too large for her proportion (and taste...NOT THAT WAY!)

Madoka as of this chapter has yet to develop sexual fantasies involving him, but knew she attracted to him in romantic way, and resent other female for being so indecent...calling them lame

You see, there's a law called 'Karma'

By the way, the story is posted as my sig below, the first one

[DarkJak2050]

I guess, no one's interested in my fanfic.

I've read part of your work on Fanfic.net, Zero. And I have a feeling that it may contain spoilers for vol 7 in the IS Light Novels, so I think a "disclaimer" should've been in the Summary. Just saying.

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by DarkJak2050

I guess, no one's interested in my fanfic.

I've read part of your work on Fanfic.net, Zero. And I have a feeling that it may contain spoilers for vol 7 in the IS Light Novels, so I think a "disclaimer" should've been in the Summary. Just saying.

Now that you said it...

I haven't even finished the second novel and just use the character Madoka as OC stand in simply because they said she exist...

EDIT: OH CRAP YOU MEAN VOLUME 5?! So, how should I put the spoiler? Is it like "This character did not appear until vol X" or what??? It's my first time writing a fic without using OC or Crossover as medium of divergence.

Umm, well, I said I read your fic in the +rep and really, it's good. I guess I should told you outright, sorry.

Since there's so much OC in the very first chapter, it's sometimes hard to understand similar if you did a crossover with obscure series.

Until I read the character profile, I could not get a grasp with the character. But after read it several times, I get the whole world.

I'm not a good writer myself (Butchered English and all those plot holes...) but I believe it's a good story.

I think it's best to introduce an OC with a canon character, it'll make the OC identifiable quickly.

[DarkJak2050]

Well, I did point out that it's not the final version of it. In fact, it's only a part of the Prologue of my Fanfic. Showing a part of the "roots" of the OCs's grudge towards the IS.

[wavehawk]

Still working...

It was about 4pm when I finally got word of her.

By then, I was already half out of my mind trying to figure out the possibilities--It was easy to find out how far a 2nd generation IS could fly before running out of energy, but energy capacity was something we hadn't yet tested on <Shenlong>.

Oddly enough, it was a much calmer (but still royally pissed) Sam that got back to me via my mobile. Apparently, someone from the country and wine valleys up north reported something "like a flying Yowie" screech past them not fifteen minutes earlier.

"Get up there, and I don't care if you have to have your head cut off, just get her back!" Sam's delightfully worded order was.

The Yarra Valley was out country, not desert, but definitely away from regular civilization. There were only three things you could find out there: wine-growers, farmers, and animals.

I sudenly thought of the Wallabies and took a wild guess.

There were quite a few tourist-y places in this area, just beyond the Dandenong mountain ranges and across the Wineries. Hidden little locales where they served food and showed off tame versions of the local wildlife. There were also more pofessional places like Healesville sanctuary, but I doubted Linyin would turn up there.

So I started looking up some of the smaller bed and breakfasts, ones that had either tame wallabies and kangaroos, or else had access to wildlife reserves. I went through thirty different calls--all of whom yelled at me because I enquired if they'd seen a flying girl in gigantic powered armor.

The thirty-first call was a bit different. The second I mentioned that I was with ASIO, the woman on the other line suddenly inerrupted: "Are you looking for that little chinese robot girl?"

So I filled up my car's tank. For good measure I asked for an extra gascan of fuel and put it in back.

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by DarkJak2050

Well, I did point out that it's not the final version of it. In fact, it's only a part of the Prologue of my Fanfic. Showing a part of the "roots" of the OCs's grudge towards the IS.

EDIT: How exactly a small flying drone able to carry a Tomahawk? Maybe you're thinking about Hellfire Antitank Missile? Seriously, change it...someone will notice sooner or later.

Spoiler for for Spoiler:

Besides that, as I said I understand the story as awhole, that JSDF betrayed your OC protagonist

But perhaps you make it like this

> OC met Canon Characters (CC) this also known as Establishing Original Character Moment.

> More interaction with CC, this interaction will slowly humanize and characterize your OC, whether they're hero, anti-hero or villain. Keep in mind, Villain does not equal Antagonist. Light Yagami and Lelouch Lamperouge is some example of Villain Protagonist and Anti-hero Protagonist.

> Tell readers about OC's background (Perhaps not in first chapter, maybe second or third). Your OC's action should have a motive, in this case, their hatred toward IS explained whether by flashback or exposition, but you may prefer Flashback. So, this preview might became this part.

> Reaction from CC about those, this is important. Whether they sympathize with OC or whatever you think suit the plot.

If you put it that way, the reader will think "What's their motive? Who are they?" and keep reading.

Remember, as I said before, full OC story is hard to do well. If you want to do such story, you should put all your might in it, and writing fanfiction became less fun that way. Of course if you succeed making a story that is good according to reader, the satisfaction is priceless.

In the end, it's still up to you

[blitz1/2]

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

Madoka always obsessed for Ideal figure, which she had (This will be elaborated in Ichika's subtext-y monologue later) and that she saw Maya-sensei's boobs is too large for her proportion (and taste...NOT THAT WAY!)

Madoka as of this chapter has yet to develop sexual fantasies involving him, but knew she attracted to him in romantic way, and resent other female for being so indecent...calling them lame

You see, there's a law called 'Karma'

By the way, the story is posted as my sig below, the first one

Soon my friend, soon. xD. Then we'll have Yosuga no Sora IS style!

Have you thought of Madoka's IS as well? I was thinking of one, well I am still thinking of the concept before actually drawing a rough sketch.

Spoiler for Madoka's IS:

Name: You can think of one (but I was thinking of Kurogane, or something with Black, seeing as Madoka should serve as the opposite of Ichika's white)

Basic frame: i think it should resemble features of both Byaku Shiki and Akatsubaki

Weapons: This is the hard part, i guess. Since, madoka is like a mini chifuyu, would she also have Yukikaze? I am proposing having a pair of them, both can combine together into a dual sided saber.
I am was also thinking of mounting either a beam rifle or even a mini gattling cannon mounted onto the forearms, as a backup weapon.
2 additional throwing knives

History: If you want, we can discuss this over PM.

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by blitz1/2

Soon my friend, soon. xD. Then we'll have Yosuga no Sora IS style!

Have you thought of Madoka's IS as well? I was thinking of one, well I am still thinking of the concept before actually drawing a rough sketch.

Spoiler for Madoka's IS:

Name: You can think of one (but I was thinking of Kurogane, or something with Black, seeing as Madoka should serve as the opposite of Ichika's white)

Basic frame: i think it should resemble features of both Byaku Shiki and Akatsubaki

Weapons: This is the hard part, i guess. Since, madoka is like a mini chifuyu, would she also have Yukikaze? I am proposing having a pair of them, both can combine together into a dual sided saber.
I am was also thinking of mounting either a beam rifle or even a mini gattling cannon mounted onto the forearms, as a backup weapon.
2 additional throwing knives

History: If you want, we can discuss this over PM.

Spoiler for Read story first, click this later:

Hmm, well, if you read it again, you'll realize that Madoka HATES being a Mini-Chifuyu (ie. a Shadow of some sort), so, she sharpened her sharpshooting skill, hoping that she would be 'different' than her. She do have some grade in close combat, though not even (this story's) Ichika's level, see my notes in Chapter 2.

Basically, my aim of her character development is that she could be recognized as herself, not Mini-chifuyu or Ichika's twin sister, notice that most people ignored her in Chifuyu or Ichika's presence.

Oh how cruel and hypocritical I am, but it's a sin an author should bear right? BTW, have you read my message yet?

[blitz1/2]

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

Spoiler for Read story first, click this later:

Hmm, well, if you read it again, you'll realize that Madoka HATES being a Mini-Chifuyu (ie. a Shadow of some sort), so, she sharpened her sharpshooting skill, hoping that she would be 'different' than her. She do have some grade in close combat, though not even (this story's) Ichika's level, see my notes in Chapter 2.

Basically, my aim of her character development is that she could be recognized as herself, not Mini-chifuyu or Ichika's twin sister, notice that most people ignored her in Chifuyu or Ichika's presence.

Oh how cruel and hypocritical I am, but it's a sin an author should bear right? BTW, have you read my message yet?

I didn't read chapter 2 before I wrote the PM over ff.net. Sorry about that.

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by blitz1/2

I didn't read chapter 2 before I wrote the PM over ff.net. Sorry about that.

I've just finished chapter 3 and uploading it, btw, if you read this please read the message I sent to your Account on FF.net.

By the way Blitz, did you realize that I copied 100% of the dialogue and adding more? Now I'm very ashamed, really-really ashamed.

But thanks to your brilliant ideas, I throttled myself at 300% speed and got a backache while planning for 100% original chapter 4.

BTW, anybody interested to write Ichika x Chifuyu???

[DarkJak2050]

Heads up guys. Spotted another fanfic on Fanfic.net.

IS: What lies in Shadow

Not sure on who wrote it, though.