Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[Chaos2Frozen]

Originally Posted by Kha

Looks like I have to quote Chaos here:

[AsakuraYoh]

"Well... Yeah, like I said, she's not my girlfriend she's my--"

[/AsakuraYoh]

[Anna]

"...I'm his fiancee."

[/Anna]

*RUNS HOLY DAMNED FAST*

That's nice, but where's that burning spirit of yours ?

Go on, shout it from the rooftops!

Originally Posted by Fuyu no Sora

I think it was Liingo that told you "You're not supposed to scare them away" or something of the sort.

*Snap fingers*

What a good idea!

Originally Posted by Fuyu no Sora

So...you're quoting him eh?

No wonder things are going wrong for you *pats*

What's wrong with that ?

Originally Posted by Anita

Anita: Excuse me, while I go settle this... -_-

Lies, you like this

Originally Posted by ghazghkull

Oi, oi, oi! *Pulls out a few hand cuffs*

Do I need to charge you Outer Cadians with 'Disturbing the peace'?!

*Smile*

ghazghkull, why do you have hand cuffs to begin with?

*fake gasp*

Masaka! You are into THOSE kind of things ?




Koyori: "I'm truly sorry, but Koyori is going to have to change her image of ghazghkull-san!"

[ghazghkull]

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

*Smile*

ghazghkull, why do you have hand cuffs to begin with?

*fake gasp*

Masaka! You are into THOSE kind of things ?




Koyori: "I'm truly sorry, but Koyori is going to have to change her image of ghazghkull-san!"

*few minutes later*

!

Crap I've been found out! *Runs and hides in shame*

[Saint X]

Originally Posted by ghazghkull

Oi, oi, oi! *Pulls out a few hand cuffs*

Do I need to charge you Outer Cadians with 'Disturbing the peace'?!

*Aims GN Particle Launcher at... *static**

[Virtue, Eliminating Targets]

*sees ghazghkull running away*



How about we play "How long will he keep dodging the HEUG GN particle beam?"

yup.. the OC is very... *Static*... we have stuff that can even scare *static*

*knocks on Radio*

*But sees GN particles floating around*



Well It seems that i'll hang around this place a bit more... and probably take a shot at someonething...

*runs*

[ghazghkull]

Oi, oi, oi! Last thing we need is a mod's attention and giving us a warning of some sorts ><

[Chaos2Frozen]

ghazghkull's right!

...We should do things more peacefully.


Like, writing stories about how he's secretly into unspeakable late night fetishes. Using Nanoha characters to emphasize that point of course.

Or perhaps we can make it like a talk show-


*ramble ramble...*

[ghazghkull]

NANI?!!!!

Oi, oi, oi! Don't you start putting words into my mouth!!!

I don't dare touch the Nanoha fandom with that fetish. They're too cute for that!

I'd rather do that with my girlfriend >3<

[Kha]

It takes a tsundere to turn this place upside down huh?

We need our shot of RH to bring us all back on topic! Or maybe if I can convince Anita to release that dabble she wrote.

[Chaos2Frozen]

Originally Posted by ghazghkull

NANI?!!!!

Oi, oi, oi! Don't you start putting words into my mouth!!!

I don't dare touch the Nanoha fandom with that fetish. They're too cute for that!

... I didn't. I meant that they would talk about it, I didn't mean that they would go through with it...

Unless... That's what you want to hear...

Originally Posted by Kha

It takes a tsundere to turn this place upside down huh?

We need our shot of RH to bring us all back on topic! Or maybe if I can convince Anita to release that dabble she wrote.

She's a tsundere? I hardly noticed !

Must be the lack of 'love'... Need more 'love' I tell ya...

[KeithKurogane]

Originally Posted by krisslanza

Fanfiction is known to be a little... Odd sometimes.

And even though I posted this in the OC (Since it IS a OC) I think it deserves posting here too since this particular OC will make some appearances in Arc-en-Ciel: Ashes unto Dust.

Spoiler for Aegina von Bronquia:

Name: Aegina von Bronquia (Aegina of the Family Bronquia)
Sex: Female
Race: Varistan
Age: ? (Haven't decided)
Rank: ? (Also undecided...)
Hair Color: Blood red
Eye color: Green/Gold
Skin color: White
Height: 5' 7"
Weight: 118 lb (Random number)

Notes:
o Thinking of having her carry around a either laser-based sword or a chainsword... Why? Because its appealing to imagine her slaughtering TSAB soldiers and coating herself in their various gore.
o Yes. She's very bloodthirsty. Thinking of giving her a fang or two.
o Also a bit of a nymphomaniac. A very rough kind of girl.
o Feared a bit by her own soldiers and being transfered to her division is not a really good thing... the casualty rate is high as Aegina gives no care to how many soldiers she loses as long as she wins in the end.
o Is quite obsessed with the Fate Testarossa prisoner but isn't allowed to touch her due to standing orders from the Emperor.
o Visited Mid-Childan when the two forces were at peace.

Comments or questions or anything at all?
I've learned getting questions asked of things helps me out a lot in developing Varista and stuff.

Hohoho!
Aegina!
I suggest you add her twin sister Luciana! (Luciana Rune von Bronquia)

Update!
My "Of Love and Super weapons" (Yggdra Union x MSLN xOver) is currently 25% complete!
Ill give you guys a teaser when it reaches 50%
(I need to 'decrease' Nanoha, Fate, and Hayate's firepower.)

[Kha]

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

She's a tsundere? I hardly noticed !

Must be the lack of 'love'... Need more 'love' I tell ya...

She's exactly like Anna... T_T

Well it's a little hard to do that when she's in Switzerland for exchange and me in Perth for studies... ...

[Chaos2Frozen]

let me get this straight.

Originally Posted by Kha

1. She's exactly like Anna... T_T

2. Well it's a little hard to do that when she's in Switzerland for exchange and me in Perth for studies... ...

So...

Basically...

What you are trying to say is...

This happened... ?

Spoiler for SK, and really big size:

P.S - That's for sending me flying into the sky...

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

ghazghkull's right!

...We should do things more peacefully.

Like, writing stories about how he's secretly into unspeakable late night fetishes. Using Nanoha characters to emphasize that point of course.

*ramble ramble...*

Spoiler for Granted:

“Do you trust me?” Nanoha asked softly, looking up into her eyes.

“Last time you asked that, I found out-rather unwillingly- what anal sex felt like.”

Nanoha smiled proudly. “You loved it.” She got a dark blush but no protest. “Fate-chan, do you trust me?”

Fate smiled softly at the request. “Yes, I trust you.” The look she got in return was priceless, melting her heart with the sheer cuteness and pride suddenly showing in her lover's eyes. “What did you have in mind?” She knew Nanoha liked to experiment in bed but always held back in an attempt to better please Fate's simple desires. Occasionally, like now, she would brave a request and ask permission to try something. Normally afterwards it became something they would do occasionally but for the most part their love-making was simple and romantic.

“Well,” Nanoha reached into the plastic bag and rooted around a moment before pulling out furry handcuffs. “I kind of...”

Fate's eyes went wide. “...Wow...”

“...Is it okay?”

Slowly nodding, Fate offered Nanoha her left wrist. “Mm... I trust you.” The blue eyed one smiled lovingly, gently taking Fate's wrist and clicking it within the restraint before putting the other half to their headboard. Shortly after her right wrist followed suit, leaving her bound shyly. “This is kind of...exciting...” Her wrist moved testingly, finding that she was, indeed, cuffed with her hands spread out above her head and attached to their bed frame.

Nanoha reached back into the bag. “One more thing...” She took out a blindfold that had the same fur around it as the handcuffs did. “You're not going to see any of this.” After the initial shock her lover gave a small lopsided grin and lifted up to allow Nanoha to place it on. “Is it okay? Uncomfortable? Are the cuffs too tight?”

“No, they're fine.” Fate felt her cheeks still coloring, suddenly wishing she could see Nanoha's gaze on her current position.

“Um...” Nanoha leaned over and spoke gently against her lips. “If I go to far... tell me okay?”

I really should finish that one......

[Kirika-chan]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Spoiler for Granted:

“Do you trust me?” Nanoha asked softly, looking up into her eyes.

“Last time you asked that, I found out-rather unwillingly- what anal sex felt like.”

Nanoha smiled proudly. “You loved it.” She got a dark blush but no protest. “Fate-chan, do you trust me?”

Fate smiled softly at the request. “Yes, I trust you.” The look she got in return was priceless, melting her heart with the sheer cuteness and pride suddenly showing in her lover's eyes. “What did you have in mind?” She knew Nanoha liked to experiment in bed but always held back in an attempt to better please Fate's simple desires. Occasionally, like now, she would brave a request and ask permission to try something. Normally afterwards it became something they would do occasionally but for the most part their love-making was simple and romantic.

“Well,” Nanoha reached into the plastic bag and rooted around a moment before pulling out furry handcuffs. “I kind of...”

Fate's eyes went wide. “...Wow...”

“...Is it okay?”

Slowly nodding, Fate offered Nanoha her left wrist. “Mm... I trust you.” The blue eyed one smiled lovingly, gently taking Fate's wrist and clicking it within the restraint before putting the other half to their headboard. Shortly after her right wrist followed suit, leaving her bound shyly. “This is kind of...exciting...” Her wrist moved testingly, finding that she was, indeed, cuffed with her hands spread out above her head and attached to their bed frame.

Nanoha reached back into the bag. “One more thing...” She took out a blindfold that had the same fur around it as the handcuffs did. “You're not going to see any of this.” After the initial shock her lover gave a small lopsided grin and lifted up to allow Nanoha to place it on. “Is it okay? Uncomfortable? Are the cuffs too tight?”

“No, they're fine.” Fate felt her cheeks still coloring, suddenly wishing she could see Nanoha's gaze on her current position.

“Um...” Nanoha leaned over and spoke gently against her lips. “If I go to far... tell me okay?”

I really should finish that one......

Argh you're... you're ... Y.Y mean!!!!
Evil !!

(you writte a next for that huh? ... Please v_v)

[Krinen]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Spoiler for Granted:

“Do you trust me?” Nanoha asked softly, looking up into her eyes.

“Last time you asked that, I found out-rather unwillingly- what anal sex felt like.”

Nanoha smiled proudly. “You loved it.” She got a dark blush but no protest. “Fate-chan, do you trust me?”

Fate smiled softly at the request. “Yes, I trust you.” The look she got in return was priceless, melting her heart with the sheer cuteness and pride suddenly showing in her lover's eyes. “What did you have in mind?” She knew Nanoha liked to experiment in bed but always held back in an attempt to better please Fate's simple desires. Occasionally, like now, she would brave a request and ask permission to try something. Normally afterwards it became something they would do occasionally but for the most part their love-making was simple and romantic.

“Well,” Nanoha reached into the plastic bag and rooted around a moment before pulling out furry handcuffs. “I kind of...”

Fate's eyes went wide. “...Wow...”

“...Is it okay?”

Slowly nodding, Fate offered Nanoha her left wrist. “Mm... I trust you.” The blue eyed one smiled lovingly, gently taking Fate's wrist and clicking it within the restraint before putting the other half to their headboard. Shortly after her right wrist followed suit, leaving her bound shyly. “This is kind of...exciting...” Her wrist moved testingly, finding that she was, indeed, cuffed with her hands spread out above her head and attached to their bed frame.

Nanoha reached back into the bag. “One more thing...” She took out a blindfold that had the same fur around it as the handcuffs did. “You're not going to see any of this.” After the initial shock her lover gave a small lopsided grin and lifted up to allow Nanoha to place it on. “Is it okay? Uncomfortable? Are the cuffs too tight?”

“No, they're fine.” Fate felt her cheeks still coloring, suddenly wishing she could see Nanoha's gaze on her current position.

“Um...” Nanoha leaned over and spoke gently against her lips. “If I go to far... tell me okay?”

I really should finish that one......

*cough* Yes.... You should.

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by Kirika-chan

Argh you're... you're ... Y.Y mean!!!!
Evil !!

(you writte a next for that huh? ... Please v_v)

Originally Posted by Krinen

*cough* Yes.... You should.

Spoiler for not really NSFW but tagging it anyway:

Hahaha, yes, that is my Nanoha/Fate bondage lemon. I started it to prove a point to other people that no matter how...."dirty".... your characters may get, it can still be done tastefully without making the people look like total whores. So that one is a little "kinky" but is also really funny as well. Nanoha's dirty talking, which Fate finds more funny than kinky; Nanoha trying out the dom role that Fate loves; Fate begging for certain things to be done; lots of toys being used; plenty of honey squirted from the bottle, not to mention massive giggling, playful flirts and jokes at each other, and an all around fun time without being "trashy" and "slutty".

It's like 2k words right now I think. Havn't worked on it 'cause I didn't know if anyone would even want to read it.

[Krinen]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Spoiler for not really NSFW but tagging it anyway:

Hahaha, yes, that is my Nanoha/Fate bondage lemon. I started it to prove a point to other people that no matter how...."dirty".... your characters may get, it can still be done tastefully without making the people look like total whores. So that one is a little "kinky" but is also really funny as well. Nanoha's dirty talking, which Fate finds more funny than kinky; Nanoha trying out the dom role that Fate loves; Fate begging for certain things to be done; lots of toys being used; plenty of honey squirted from the bottle, not to mention massive giggling, playful flirts and jokes at each other, and an all around fun time without being "trashy" and "slutty".

It's like 2k words right now I think. Havn't worked on it 'cause I didn't know if anyone would even want to read it.

You can throw a wrench in that reason not to write, then. Can't you? =3

[Fuyu no Sora]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Spoiler for not really NSFW but tagging it anyway:

Hahaha, yes, that is my Nanoha/Fate bondage lemon. I started it to prove a point to other people that no matter how...."dirty".... your characters may get, it can still be done tastefully without making the people look like total whores. So that one is a little "kinky" but is also really funny as well. Nanoha's dirty talking, which Fate finds more funny than kinky; Nanoha trying out the dom role that Fate loves; Fate begging for certain things to be done; lots of toys being used; plenty of honey squirted from the bottle, not to mention massive giggling, playful flirts and jokes at each other, and an all around fun time without being "trashy" and "slutty".

It's like 2k words right now I think. Havn't worked on it 'cause I didn't know if anyone would even want to read it.

By now you should have learned that people like your lemons Sata-chan

I'd like to read it. Seems fun *shrugs*

[Satashi]

Okay, I was going to open chapter 13 of SbtB and I mis clicked on a story that I never finished for Christmas. So, I'm sharing the unfinished christmas story:

Spoiler for cancelled Christmas story:

“Mama! Mama! He came! He really came!” The sound of Vivio's frantic calling from the living room made me open my eyes up tiredly. The young one was living in a small house along with Fate and myself. This was the first year we had a house after the incident a while ago. Shortly after everything with Jail was cleared up I had sought out a place to live and found this little house in a small community overlooking the city. Fate had moved in at my insistence and together we stayed there while not on missions. The door to our bedroom burst open and a bundle of energy jumped on my back and shook my shoulders. “Mama! Nanoha-mama! Wake up, you have to see this! I knew I saw him last night, I knew it!” Thankfully my daughter lost interest in me as soon I opened my eyes and instead went to Fate. The blonde growled low in her throat and mentally asked me what time it was. I replied a little over five in the morning and a string of cuss words invaded my head while Vivio hopped on Fate's back while still cheering.

Christmas
By: Satashi

“Vivio, sweetheart, can you wait until the sun comes up at least?” Nanoha yawned loudly and pulled her daughter off of Fate weakly.

“Presents!” The multi-colored eye girl beamed up at her mother ecstatically. “Mama, come on, let's open them!”

Sighing, Nanoha looked over at Fate who was pleading mentally for another hour of sleep. The two of them had stayed up all night long waiting for Vivio to finally go to sleep so they could put the presents under their Christmas tree. Fate had dressed up like Santa via Nanoha's pleading and it appeared as if it was worth it since Vivio said she saw 'him' last night. In all the two mothers had gotten little to no sleep and they were going to have both of their families over for the day to celebrate. Despite all of this, Vivio's wide excited eyes caved even Nanoha's barriers. “Okay, okay. We'll be in there in five minutes. Don't open any until we're there okay?”

“Okay, hurry up!” Vivio crawled over the bed and ran out of the room, door closing a little hard despite her best efforts not to slam it in her hurry.

“Fate-”

“Go away.” Fate replied instantly with her face buried in the pillow. “Sleep.”

“Come on,” Nanoha crawled onto Fate's back and laid on her. “Faaaaaaate.” A soft mummer came from the pillow. “Get up, she's about to explode.”

“I'm comfortable.”

“I'll make you coffee.”

“You'll do that anyway.”

“I'll give you a hug.”

“You're hugging me already.”

Nanoha pouted. “Come on, don't you want to see her excited face when she rips into the carefully wrapped paper?” Fate's lips turned up into a smile. “Ah, I saw that! Come on Fate-mama.”

“Nanoha?”

“Yes?”

“I can't move with you on top of me.” Fate turned her head so her cheek was against the pillow and opened one eye to look up at her. “You're nice and warm, but I'm pinned.”

Nanoha laughed to herself and retracted to allow the blond enough room to sit up. As the legs moved under her she tried to crawl away but ended up tripping on herself and over balancing. Moments later a soft thud was heard and Nanoha looked up from the floor to see Fate's amused face. “This doesn't leave the room.” Her answer came in the form of Fate's palm being placed on her butt since it was still on the bed and was pushed the rest of the way onto the floor. “Meanie.”

Fate opened her mouth to reply but Vivio's voice came yet again, demanding as politely as she could for them to hurry up. “Coming!” The red eyed girl slid out from under the covers to help her friend to her feet. “Merry Christmas, Nanoha.”

“Merry Christmas, Fate-chan.” She replied in turn while putting on her house robe. Once they both were ready they opened the door and walked down the small hallway that lead to the living room. Vivio was practically hopping in place, presents lined up in front of her already. “Merry Christmas, Vivio.”

“Merry merry!” Vivio cheered back, voice filled with excitement. “Ne, ne, can we open them now!?”

Fate leaned against the wall and nodded after making sure Nanoha was recording it. Paper flew thick and all at once. Gift after gift was shredded open, hugged and fawned over, then set aside to move onto the next. The entire ordeal probably lasted ten minutes but to the two mothers it only seemed to be one before it was already over. Their daughter was going back and forth between the gifts wondering what to play with first when Fate stepped in to help her. “Why don't you take them all to your room and set them there while we clean up the wrapping paper?”

Vivio nodded, quickly taking one gift at a time from the living room to her room. “Nice idea,” Nanoha commented as she walked past. The video camera was sat on the small table next to the couch on the way to the kitchen. Nanoha started working on auto pilot, hand moving for her coffee grinder and the blend of beans Fate seemed to like the most. Moments later the blonde finally joined her friend in the cooking area by wrapping her arms around Nanoha's waist and looking over the shoulder to watch the process. “Hello,” Nanoha greeted casually. The position was a familiar one to them, having been taken since they were only ten years old. “Vivio was cute wasn't she?”

Fate giggled to herself before replying. “It made it all worth it.”

“Just wait until I show everyone the pictures of you playing Santa last night.”

“You took pictures!?”

“Shh!” Nanoha shushed her quickly. “Don't let Vivio hear.”

“Delete them,” She insisted, voice lower now. “Don't you dare show anyone those.”

Nanoha smiled to herself. “Make me.” Almost at once hands found her ribs and fingers played over her sides. The brown haired girl gasped loudly before breaking into loud laughter. “S-stop it! Hahaha!” Moving backwards to try and make Fate get off her tickle spot, she pinned the blond between herself and the refrigerator. “Ha! Pinned!”

[Fuyu no Sora]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Okay, I was going to open chapter 13 of SbtB and I mis clicked on a story that I never finished for Christmas. So, I'm sharing the unfinished christmas story:

Spoiler for cancelled Christmas story:

“Mama! Mama! He came! He really came!” The sound of Vivio's frantic calling from the living room made me open my eyes up tiredly. The young one was living in a small house along with Fate and myself. This was the first year we had a house after the incident a while ago. Shortly after everything with Jail was cleared up I had sought out a place to live and found this little house in a small community overlooking the city. Fate had moved in at my insistence and together we stayed there while not on missions. The door to our bedroom burst open and a bundle of energy jumped on my back and shook my shoulders. “Mama! Nanoha-mama! Wake up, you have to see this! I knew I saw him last night, I knew it!” Thankfully my daughter lost interest in me as soon I opened my eyes and instead went to Fate. The blonde growled low in her throat and mentally asked me what time it was. I replied a little over five in the morning and a string of cuss words invaded my head while Vivio hopped on Fate's back while still cheering.

Christmas
By: Satashi

“Vivio, sweetheart, can you wait until the sun comes up at least?” Nanoha yawned loudly and pulled her daughter off of Fate weakly.

“Presents!” The multi-colored eye girl beamed up at her mother ecstatically. “Mama, come on, let's open them!”

Sighing, Nanoha looked over at Fate who was pleading mentally for another hour of sleep. The two of them had stayed up all night long waiting for Vivio to finally go to sleep so they could put the presents under their Christmas tree. Fate had dressed up like Santa via Nanoha's pleading and it appeared as if it was worth it since Vivio said she saw 'him' last night. In all the two mothers had gotten little to no sleep and they were going to have both of their families over for the day to celebrate. Despite all of this, Vivio's wide excited eyes caved even Nanoha's barriers. “Okay, okay. We'll be in there in five minutes. Don't open any until we're there okay?”

“Okay, hurry up!” Vivio crawled over the bed and ran out of the room, door closing a little hard despite her best efforts not to slam it in her hurry.

“Fate-”

“Go away.” Fate replied instantly with her face buried in the pillow. “Sleep.”

“Come on,” Nanoha crawled onto Fate's back and laid on her. “Faaaaaaate.” A soft mummer came from the pillow. “Get up, she's about to explode.”

“I'm comfortable.”

“I'll make you coffee.”

“You'll do that anyway.”

“I'll give you a hug.”

“You're hugging me already.”

Nanoha pouted. “Come on, don't you want to see her excited face when she rips into the carefully wrapped paper?” Fate's lips turned up into a smile. “Ah, I saw that! Come on Fate-mama.”

“Nanoha?”

“Yes?”

“I can't move with you on top of me.” Fate turned her head so her cheek was against the pillow and opened one eye to look up at her. “You're nice and warm, but I'm pinned.”

Nanoha laughed to herself and retracted to allow the blond enough room to sit up. As the legs moved under her she tried to crawl away but ended up tripping on herself and over balancing. Moments later a soft thud was heard and Nanoha looked up from the floor to see Fate's amused face. “This doesn't leave the room.” Her answer came in the form of Fate's palm being placed on her butt since it was still on the bed and was pushed the rest of the way onto the floor. “Meanie.”

Fate opened her mouth to reply but Vivio's voice came yet again, demanding as politely as she could for them to hurry up. “Coming!” The red eyed girl slid out from under the covers to help her friend to her feet. “Merry Christmas, Nanoha.”

“Merry Christmas, Fate-chan.” She replied in turn while putting on her house robe. Once they both were ready they opened the door and walked down the small hallway that lead to the living room. Vivio was practically hopping in place, presents lined up in front of her already. “Merry Christmas, Vivio.”

“Merry merry!” Vivio cheered back, voice filled with excitement. “Ne, ne, can we open them now!?”

Fate leaned against the wall and nodded after making sure Nanoha was recording it. Paper flew thick and all at once. Gift after gift was shredded open, hugged and fawned over, then set aside to move onto the next. The entire ordeal probably lasted ten minutes but to the two mothers it only seemed to be one before it was already over. Their daughter was going back and forth between the gifts wondering what to play with first when Fate stepped in to help her. “Why don't you take them all to your room and set them there while we clean up the wrapping paper?”

Vivio nodded, quickly taking one gift at a time from the living room to her room. “Nice idea,” Nanoha commented as she walked past. The video camera was sat on the small table next to the couch on the way to the kitchen. Nanoha started working on auto pilot, hand moving for her coffee grinder and the blend of beans Fate seemed to like the most. Moments later the blonde finally joined her friend in the cooking area by wrapping her arms around Nanoha's waist and looking over the shoulder to watch the process. “Hello,” Nanoha greeted casually. The position was a familiar one to them, having been taken since they were only ten years old. “Vivio was cute wasn't she?”

Fate giggled to herself before replying. “It made it all worth it.”

“Just wait until I show everyone the pictures of you playing Santa last night.”

“You took pictures!?”

“Shh!” Nanoha shushed her quickly. “Don't let Vivio hear.”

“Delete them,” She insisted, voice lower now. “Don't you dare show anyone those.”

Nanoha smiled to herself. “Make me.” Almost at once hands found her ribs and fingers played over her sides. The brown haired girl gasped loudly before breaking into loud laughter. “S-stop it! Hahaha!” Moving backwards to try and make Fate get off her tickle spot, she pinned the blond between herself and the refrigerator. “Ha! Pinned!”

Dang.

Evil Sata-chan is evil >.<

Why'd you cancel it anyway? It's good....

[Gillian]

Originally Posted by Fuyu no Sora

By now you should have learned that people like your lemons Sata-chan

I'd like to read it. Seems fun *shrugs*

jepp, can agree with Sora

we all like your lemons

Originally Posted by Satashi

Okay, I was going to open chapter 13 of SbtB and I mis clicked on a story that I never finished for Christmas. So, I'm sharing the unfinished christmas story:

Spoiler for cancelled Christmas story:

“Mama! Mama! He came! He really came!” The sound of Vivio's frantic calling from the living room made me open my eyes up tiredly. The young one was living in a small house along with Fate and myself. This was the first year we had a house after the incident a while ago. Shortly after everything with Jail was cleared up I had sought out a place to live and found this little house in a small community overlooking the city. Fate had moved in at my insistence and together we stayed there while not on missions. The door to our bedroom burst open and a bundle of energy jumped on my back and shook my shoulders. “Mama! Nanoha-mama! Wake up, you have to see this! I knew I saw him last night, I knew it!” Thankfully my daughter lost interest in me as soon I opened my eyes and instead went to Fate. The blonde growled low in her throat and mentally asked me what time it was. I replied a little over five in the morning and a string of cuss words invaded my head while Vivio hopped on Fate's back while still cheering.

Christmas
By: Satashi

“Vivio, sweetheart, can you wait until the sun comes up at least?” Nanoha yawned loudly and pulled her daughter off of Fate weakly.

“Presents!” The multi-colored eye girl beamed up at her mother ecstatically. “Mama, come on, let's open them!”

Sighing, Nanoha looked over at Fate who was pleading mentally for another hour of sleep. The two of them had stayed up all night long waiting for Vivio to finally go to sleep so they could put the presents under their Christmas tree. Fate had dressed up like Santa via Nanoha's pleading and it appeared as if it was worth it since Vivio said she saw 'him' last night. In all the two mothers had gotten little to no sleep and they were going to have both of their families over for the day to celebrate. Despite all of this, Vivio's wide excited eyes caved even Nanoha's barriers. “Okay, okay. We'll be in there in five minutes. Don't open any until we're there okay?”

“Okay, hurry up!” Vivio crawled over the bed and ran out of the room, door closing a little hard despite her best efforts not to slam it in her hurry.

“Fate-”

“Go away.” Fate replied instantly with her face buried in the pillow. “Sleep.”

“Come on,” Nanoha crawled onto Fate's back and laid on her. “Faaaaaaate.” A soft mummer came from the pillow. “Get up, she's about to explode.”

“I'm comfortable.”

“I'll make you coffee.”

“You'll do that anyway.”

“I'll give you a hug.”

“You're hugging me already.”

Nanoha pouted. “Come on, don't you want to see her excited face when she rips into the carefully wrapped paper?” Fate's lips turned up into a smile. “Ah, I saw that! Come on Fate-mama.”

“Nanoha?”

“Yes?”

“I can't move with you on top of me.” Fate turned her head so her cheek was against the pillow and opened one eye to look up at her. “You're nice and warm, but I'm pinned.”

Nanoha laughed to herself and retracted to allow the blond enough room to sit up. As the legs moved under her she tried to crawl away but ended up tripping on herself and over balancing. Moments later a soft thud was heard and Nanoha looked up from the floor to see Fate's amused face. “This doesn't leave the room.” Her answer came in the form of Fate's palm being placed on her butt since it was still on the bed and was pushed the rest of the way onto the floor. “Meanie.”

Fate opened her mouth to reply but Vivio's voice came yet again, demanding as politely as she could for them to hurry up. “Coming!” The red eyed girl slid out from under the covers to help her friend to her feet. “Merry Christmas, Nanoha.”

“Merry Christmas, Fate-chan.” She replied in turn while putting on her house robe. Once they both were ready they opened the door and walked down the small hallway that lead to the living room. Vivio was practically hopping in place, presents lined up in front of her already. “Merry Christmas, Vivio.”

“Merry merry!” Vivio cheered back, voice filled with excitement. “Ne, ne, can we open them now!?”

Fate leaned against the wall and nodded after making sure Nanoha was recording it. Paper flew thick and all at once. Gift after gift was shredded open, hugged and fawned over, then set aside to move onto the next. The entire ordeal probably lasted ten minutes but to the two mothers it only seemed to be one before it was already over. Their daughter was going back and forth between the gifts wondering what to play with first when Fate stepped in to help her. “Why don't you take them all to your room and set them there while we clean up the wrapping paper?”

Vivio nodded, quickly taking one gift at a time from the living room to her room. “Nice idea,” Nanoha commented as she walked past. The video camera was sat on the small table next to the couch on the way to the kitchen. Nanoha started working on auto pilot, hand moving for her coffee grinder and the blend of beans Fate seemed to like the most. Moments later the blonde finally joined her friend in the cooking area by wrapping her arms around Nanoha's waist and looking over the shoulder to watch the process. “Hello,” Nanoha greeted casually. The position was a familiar one to them, having been taken since they were only ten years old. “Vivio was cute wasn't she?”

Fate giggled to herself before replying. “It made it all worth it.”

“Just wait until I show everyone the pictures of you playing Santa last night.”

“You took pictures!?”

“Shh!” Nanoha shushed her quickly. “Don't let Vivio hear.”

“Delete them,” She insisted, voice lower now. “Don't you dare show anyone those.”

Nanoha smiled to herself. “Make me.” Almost at once hands found her ribs and fingers played over her sides. The brown haired girl gasped loudly before breaking into loud laughter. “S-stop it! Hahaha!” Moving backwards to try and make Fate get off her tickle spot, she pinned the blond between herself and the refrigerator. “Ha! Pinned!”

sweet little Vivio


ah, that brought back memories from long ago

Originally Posted by Fuyu no Sora

Dang.

Evil Sata-chan is evil >.<

Why'd you cancel it anyway? It's good....

maybe Satashi-sama couldn't finished till christmas, so Sata-chan stopped it?