2013-06-01, 09:58
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That one guy
Join Date: Nov 2011
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but there's a secret item to revive her, so long as they dig through the graveyard which is your closet and find the secret manuscript that revives her. Then they have to make their way to you and your impregnable computer guarded by your misfortune and daily life to force you to write the convenient deus ex machina that resurrects her.
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2013-06-01, 10:00
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Some say I'm the Reverse
Join Date: Jul 2006
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To save the girl. (laughs nervously)...you...haven't read any of my older fics, have you?
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2013-06-01, 10:03
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That one guy
Join Date: Nov 2011
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Hence the word force
urk... modified the end of the last scene I posted. ---------------------------------------------------- Another window popped open and Chifuyu found herself face to face with the infuriating woman from before. Umiyome Erine, the woman in the labcoat wasn't even sparing Chifuyu a glance nor did she give the pilot a chance to speak before taking charge of a conversation, “In addition to the Valeria, Armroad Personal Defense Corp. has requested that testing for their new IS pilot suits be performed. Orimura Chifuyu has been assigned the Tiny Top for theories on relations between unit responsiveness and skin contact ratio. Yamada Maya is assigned a traditional IS suit using their new textile Universal Stretch which is to be used for their new one-size fit all suits. Initial mechanical lab testing has been done for both so we've determined that they're quite durable. I'd go as far as to say they are rip-proof, bullet-proof, knife-proof. But they lack plating so at best they'd prevent bullets from shooting through you, but it'll still hurt like hell.” “That isn't very reassuring.”, Chifuyu grumbled under her breath. “Nothing ever is.”, Erine replied in kind as she fixed some papers on her unseen desk. “That will be all.”. With that the communique ended. An odd silence wrapped around the hangar. Considering that Erine had just verbally ripped the pilots a new one not twenty minutes ago, she was... “She was pretty calm wasn't she?”, the timid Maya spoke up. Maybe it was that announcement just then that gave the small woman confidence. After all, knowing that your wardrobe wouldn't malfunction if you so much as breathe wrong probably set her free of a lot of worries. The same couldn't be said for Chifuyu though as she concurred with an ominous, “Yeah.” Last edited by demino_hellsin; 2013-06-01 at 11:38. |
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2013-06-01, 22:28
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I am no one
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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On their own part, it's like a wish fulfillment, meeting a REAL person who can understand and accept you rather than always contradicting you (especially on male Ichika's part), thus the reason the relationship being, at best, pseudo-sexual, stressed more on familial and companionship kind of affection.  Quote:
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2013-06-02, 04:55
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I am no one
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2013-06-02, 05:47
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That one guy
Join Date: Nov 2011
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Too late for regrets then good sir. Work with that as the first step. workable but highly inefficient design. Unless the target has a defense that requires such a specific form of attack such as only affected by kinetic weaponry.
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2013-06-02, 06:01
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I am no one
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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It's not so much inefficient as hilariously complicated even by canon tech. It's fine if you have a special bullet in single shot rifle, for example, but each shot fragment being encased with energy field is pushing suspension of disbelief.
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