2011-06-08, 18:25 | Link #31241 |
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Decided to post Inappropriate Language to ff.net after all. Glad you guys found it amusing.
Oh, and DC, I wasn't quite happy with that line, either. But I made a modification to it that should enhance it somewhat.^^ |
2011-06-08, 18:32 | Link #31242 | |
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Join Date: Mar 2009
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It might just be me though, but I think that the added bit, while tying in more tightly with the humour earlier, seems to throw the bunch of the ending off a little bit. Like, it felt snappier to me when it had just ended with Arf saying "Figures, that dumb bastard." But at the same time, the new addition adds a nice level of irony...I dunno .
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2011-06-08, 18:57 | Link #31243 | |
Worshipper of Nanoha...
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Spoiler for Best line EVAR!!!:
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2011-06-08, 19:48 | Link #31245 |
"Hey, Isaac?"
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All right.
DC seems to have the thread focused on this, so I can hardly not contribute to the Hayate/Vivio FEVAH, right? XD Granted, as is my wont, I've chosen to take a slightly differing viewpoint on the relationship between the two. One that, I hope, will be appreciated. Or laughed at. Really, mostly the second. Raiser, your ficlet was also a major source of inspiration for me here, so thank you as well. I hope you enjoy the fruits of your inspirationing. Inspirationizing. ... I hope you like it. Spoiler for Alternative Viewpoints:
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2011-06-08, 19:55 | Link #31247 | |
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Excellent. ... *Is bored again*
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2011-06-08, 20:00 | Link #31248 | |
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Hilarious stuff. Love how you turned things around with Vivio being the one doing the [ill aimed] rejecting. Hayate's groping could potentially cause problems, but of course it's stated that she only does it to people she's close to that won't sue her (Shari even groped her back )
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2011-06-08, 20:30 | Link #31250 | |
Queen of Tragedy
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Despite it not going exactly as how I'm currently shipping , I absolutely loved it .
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2011-06-08, 20:30 | Link #31251 | |
Beta by Accident
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hee hee..."bathing in eel slime" ...Glad Nanoha and Fate weren't listening outside the door for that one! |
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2011-06-08, 20:40 | Link #31252 | |
Labda Prakarsa Nirwikara
Join Date: May 2010
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Well here's a (roughly written) alternative if you're interested:
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2011-06-08, 20:47 | Link #31254 |
Dark Energy
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I rather quickly came to the conclusion that this thread has a herd mentality. Someone writes something; someone then comments. Then someone sees someone commented, so they make their own comment. It snowballs from there until another person sees all the positive comments the one writing is getting and then decides to write their own story related in some way it. Rinse and repeat.
How do you think the Shadowverse got to be so big?
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2011-06-08, 20:54 | Link #31256 |
Labda Prakarsa Nirwikara
Join Date: May 2010
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Boredom. As in "so bored with the similarities shared by the majority of the current fics available that when a (relatively) fresh idea came out well, others start imagining their own take on the subject"
The same thing happened with Zero no Tsukaima before. Someone made an interesting story of Louise summoning EMIya Shirou, and soon enough a horde of "Lousie summons X" stories starts to pop out
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