2012-01-18, 05:01 | Link #18523 |
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Join Date: Sep 2011
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@ Demi - The fight extends when Tatenashi questions his will to fight and why he's not doing everything to win against her. This causes him to take the fight more seriously and he headbutts her to get out of her grapple
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2012-01-18, 05:06 | Link #18525 |
Titans Test Team Pilot
Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: The Elysium
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Super Robot Wars basically.
If I'm not wrong, Time Divers is a term for a group of people who travel between alternate dimensions. Also, another scene...Part of it anyways: Spoiler for Scene:
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2012-01-18, 05:07 | Link #18526 |
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uh....he doesn't win He just puts up a better fight before going down. Tatenashi asks him how he can protect his friends when he holds back so much. This made him fight more seriously.
Side note - You think Ichika could've beaten her? Laura couldn't beat her.
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2012-01-18, 05:14 | Link #18530 |
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Not really. Ichika admits that he shouldn't hesitate to ask his friends for help and even says that he'll get to the point where he can beat her in a fight. Tatenashi makes remarks about him turning into a guy she can fall in love with and he starts stuttering again.
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2012-01-18, 05:16 | Link #18532 |
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Join Date: Sep 2011
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Hell no I can't! This is why Daydreams is a pain in the ass to write By the way, this is just her daydream. the real version has Ichika getting the tar kicked out of him and he wasn't even holding back The canon version, basically.
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2012-01-18, 05:32 | Link #18539 |
That one guy
Join Date: Nov 2011
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I doubt she's actively looking at a guy's combat ability to decide whether he's dating material or not. Rather I think she finds Ichika to be honestly reliable. He's not quite as good as she wants him to be yet, but she's sure he'll reach that level she wants soon.
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2012-01-18, 05:33 | Link #18540 |
I am no one
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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My advice: Have Ichika try again, and again, and again....
And then finally win the fight for the first time. You just have to write one fight, the rest can be described with exposition, also, small quote how Ichika won against her. Better: a cool one liner.
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