Nanoha - Image Thread (wallpapers, fan art, gifs, etc.)

[Ararara-ra]

Originally Posted by LVD

Spoiler for Possible mistakes:

Page 01
Original - All citizens of all worlds that are under the charter of the Administrative Bureau in the name of justice and preserving social order promise therefore to forever relinquish their right to use non-magical devices techniques as weapons that can cause the loss of life nor will use the previous as weapons of war
Suggestion - All citizens of all worlds that are under the Charter of the Administrative Bureau in the name of justice and preserving social order promise therefore to forever relinquish their right to use non-magical device techniques as weapons that can cause the loss of life or will use the previous as weapons of war.
- I don't know how to correct legalese, so if anyone else would like to step in if there's anything else wrong with that part....

Original - As I have previously reported to you, the amount of cases involving the use of physical weapons are increasing in numbers
Suggestion - As I have previously reported to you, the amount of cases involving the use of physical weapons is increasing in number.
- Gah, is it "amount of cases are increasing in number" or "amount of cases is increasing in number".... Numbers should be changed to number, though.

Page 02
Original - Plus, there has been a drastic drop in morale. Rendering the Ground Defense Forces almost useless
Suggestion - Plus, there has been a drastic drop in morale, rendering the Ground Defence Forces almost useless.
- Defense is technically acceptable, but seeing FireFox telling me to correct it kind of irks me. Would this fall under the "all right" versus "alright" sort of deal, I wonder....

Original - Then we must make plans to arm small units with these weapons and set new strategies, at this point we can only fight 'poison with poison'
Suggestion - Then, we must make plans to arm small units with these weapons and set new strategies. At this point, we can only fight "poison with poison".

Original - Or, we must immediatly create a battle android unit, provide them with legal rights to fight and anex it to our forces
Suggestion - Or, we must immediately create a battle android unit, provide them with legal rights to fight and annex it to our forces.

Page 03
Original - To say it in other words, against the physical type weapons...
Suggestion - In other words, against the physical type weapons...

Original - But one of the main laws that the Space and Time Admin. was created on... That we would not rely on any mass destruction weapon to uphold peace... My decission alone can't...
Suggestion - But one of the main laws that the Space and Time Admin. was created on... That we would not rely on any weapon of mass destruction to uphold peace... My decision alone can't...
- You can add a comma after the first "but" if you'd like. I'm unsure if you tried to shorten Administration to Admin. or if the guy actually said it himself, as I do re-call Hayate shortening Mid-Childa to Mid in the manga. Personally, I'd try my best to keep it as Administration. lole, were you trying to avoid saying weapon of mass destruction?

Original - Today at 12:00 Standard MidChilda time
Suggestion - Today at 12:00 Standard Mid-Childa time,
- You could add a comma after "Today", too....

Page 06
Original - It has been a long time but I am sure there are some first time readers too. For all those first time readers that are feeling perplexed to the max, don't worry about it, it is the usual 'Himura' standard. The 'freedom' I give myself. Because the focus is Nanoha that hasn't changed. This is my 4th fantasy book.
Suggestion - It has been a long time, but I am sure there are some first time readers, too. For all those first time readers that are feeling perplexed to the max, don't worry about it. It is the usual "Himura" standard, the "freedom" I give myself. Because the focus is Nanoha, that hasn't changed. This is my fourth fantasy book.
- I'm not sure how it's actually written in Japanese to try and correct it, but "or all those first time readers that are feeling perplexed to the max, don't worry about it, it is the usual 'Himura' standard. The 'freedom' I give myself. Because the focus is Nanoha that hasn't changed." is quite awkward, unless I merge sentences together. I was thinking "It is the usual 'Himura' standard. The 'freedom' I give myself because the focus is Nanoha hasn't changed.", but.... yeah. Not like anyone really cares about what the artist thinks.

Page 09
Original - Then I will too...
Suggestion - Then, I will, too...

Page 10
Original - You mustn't Fate-san!
Suggestion - You mustn't, Fate-san!

Original - If we lose you now there won't be anybody to command the mage forces, it will be our end
Suggestion - If we lose you now, there won't be anybody to command the mage forces. It will be our end.

Page 13
Original - Based on their flight pattern it seems they are planning to attack headquarters
Suggestion - Based on their flight pattern, it seems they are planning to attack headquarters.

Original - It is allright.
Suggestion - It is all right.

Page 15
Original - In a normal unit that would bring problems in accomplishing the mission
Suggestion - In a normal unit, that would bring problems accomplishing the mission.

Original - There is a wide variety of androids, each specialized in a different field so the normal mages who fight with an all-around approach don't even pose a threat. Isn't about time you accept the effectiveness of the battle androids, Brigadier General?
Suggestion - There is a wide variety of androids, each specialized in a different field, so the normal mages who fight with an all-around approach don't even pose a threat. Isn't it about time you accept the effectiveness of the battle androids, Brigadier General?

Page 16
Original - Usually, when a mage switches sides and becomes an enemy there are no major repercurssions.
Suggestion - Usually, when a mage switches sides and becomes an enemy, there are no major repercussions.

Original - And, as I mentioned, magic lacks reliability and effectiveness
It can be called an "outdated source of power"
We can say that it isn't needed anymore
Suggestion - And, as I mentioned, magic lacks reliability and effectiveness. It can be called an "outdated source of power". We can say that it isn't needed anymore.

Original - A SS rank mage. To confront one you would need a squad... No, a batallion from the Armored Division.
Suggestion - An SS rank mage. To confront one, you would need a squad... No, a batallion from the Armored Division.
"An SS" or "A SS" depends on how you'd say it, as I have known a few people who'd read it as "A double S" as opposed to how I mentally read it as "An 'ess-ess'". If that made sense, argh.

Page 17
Original - 3rd Artillery Division return to support duty!
Suggestion - 3rd Artillery Division, return to support duty!

Someone should proofread my own "proofreading". I'm kind of a comma-holic. That, and I've only completed grade ten English, lol....

Thank you for your close notes
I took note of all of that.

I had some people online to proofread it for me real quick but as I lack of a team and I am a one-person group any kind of input is appreciated

Originally Posted by JINNSK

I'm sorry to bother you,

Spoiler:

(Blue text is original.red text is your translation)


The above translating are quite different from original meaning.Did you change them intentionally?Or is it a mistake?



1) Fate's remark was made to stop.If I complement it,I think it would be like the following.
Fate:"なのは 理解ってくれたのね"->"Nanoha You finally accept..."


2)In this comic,Vita becomes major.(Is "Vice" a spelling error,isn't it?)


I think
3)Vivio:"ママはね 自分で決めなさいって言ったの 強くなりなさいって…言ったの"->"Mama said that I have to decide by myself.And she said that I shoud grow to be strong"

Spoiler for Thank you JINNSK~:

1) It was intentionally tried to change it but I just couldn't get the words together. But now I think I'll use your line with a little modification. Thank you ^_^

2) Ah, that part I was kind of unclear who was speaking. I just assumed it was Subaru speaking and she was addressing Vita as she used to do when they were in the same unit.

3) Um, this is my mistake xD I'll fix it for the HQ release. Woah, I guess long hours of working on translation does really compromise one's ability to translate xD

Thanks a lot ^_^

Wah wah wah, thanks a lot for the corrections and suggestions


EDIT:

A little something I made to see if I could make everybody laugh

Spoiler for scene:

[Keroko]

Yes, yes you did.

Nanoha/Teana, Nanoha/Subaru or Teana/Subaru...

Decisions, decisions, decisions.

[Vivio Testarossa]

Rapidshares for the two doujins I posted earlier:

http://rapidshare.com/files/15659370...Nanoha_PV6.zip
http://rapidshare.com/files/15661660...Nanoha_PV7.zip

Spoiler for [AMR] Decade Eins:

http://rapidshare.com/files/15661935...ecade_Eins.zip

Spoiler for [GRINP] Lyrical Bonus!!!!!:

http://rapidshare.com/files/15662196...Bonus_____.zip

Spoiler for [Kohakunosima] O Yakusoku wa Zettai! Muteki Nano~:

http://rapidshare.com/files/15662421...teki_Nano_.zip

Spoiler for [Kikakugai.Extend] Fate Out of Standard:

http://rapidshare.com/files/15662532...f_Standard.zip

Spoiler for [Briest] LMR 02 (Somewhat NSFW?):

http://rapidshare.com/files/15662642...oha_LMR_02.zip

Spoiler for [Upagoya Endori] Nanoha Standby Ready Clock Up! (Again a little ecchi):

http://rapidshare.com/files/15662721..._Clock_Up_.zip

An english? translation of Magical SEED Soushuuhen X is on 4chan's /rs/ board.

[JINNSK]

Originally Posted by Ararara-ra

Thank you for your close notes
I took note of all of that.

I had some people online to proofread it for me real quick but as I lack of a team and I am a one-person group any kind of input is appreciated

Spoiler for Thank you JINNSK~:

1) It was intentionally tried to change it but I just couldn't get the words together. But now I think I'll use your line with a little modification. Thank you ^_^

2) Ah, that part I was kind of unclear who was speaking. I just assumed it was Subaru speaking and she was addressing Vita as she used to do when they were in the same unit.

3) Um, this is my mistake xD I'll fix it for the HQ release. Woah, I guess long hours of working on translation does really compromise one's ability to translate xD

Thanks a lot ^_^

Wah wah wah, thanks a lot for the corrections and suggestions


EDIT:

A little something I made to see if I could make everybody laugh

Spoiler for scene:

I forgot the following in my previous post.
お疲れ様です、頑張ってください

[princessnanoha]

Originally Posted by bpharu

it's just a poem, so it's not that easy to translate. This was made by our dear doujinshi editor and fanfic writer naymco (who also redrew hazukashikunai no ga koi) for a thread in our forums that is for role playing as canon nanoha characters (the thread is fun because now everyone is 'rolling' their chracters in the whole forum xd). Our fate is marrying our nanoha soon, so she drew it for the occasion, and maybe the poem is for her votes...? We'll have to wait until the weeding to know ^^

also is hard for me to translate from spanish to english, but i'll give it a try if you want (but i can guarantee that it will sound weird, and some sentences would have to be reworded )



if i were an angel
i would fly to you
forever
i would do it
i would do anything
to be by your side
i would do
the impossible
to hold your hand
you are my life
my destiny, my day by day.
You are
what i dream
what i yearn.
I need you,
like flowers and the waters
drops in a umbrella
heart in a soul
i feel that way
i feel something beautiful
i have a feeling and tell you
i tell and repeat
that i just...
Fell in love with you.


done.
I think it sounded better in spanish, but anyway i'll be pleased if someone tells me what should be corrected (grammar, wording, spelling). It's mainly because i had some problems translating this and i want to know where are any mistakes.

Cuídense y sigan sorniendo

creo que tu traduccion esta excelente, totalmente de acuerdo, esta mejor en español que en ingles!!!!!!! Tiene mas sentimiento

gracias,

[dokupan]

Thanks, VT! I appreciate it~

Originally Posted by Vivio Testarossa

Spoiler for [Upagoya Endori] Nanoha Standby Ready Clock Up! (Again a little ecchi):

http://rapidshare.com/files/15662721..._Clock_Up_.zip

LOL. I'm... not quite sure if I should consider that Fate/Signum or not. I'd just about kill for some actual fatenum at this point. D:

[Vivio Testarossa]

Originally Posted by dokupan

Thanks, VT! I appreciate it~



LOL. I'm... not quite sure if I should consider that Fate/Signum or not. I'd just about kill for some actual fatenum at this point. D:

Will dokupan translate?

[dokupan]

Bad habit is bad.

Originally Posted by Vivio Testarossa

Will dokupan translate?

dokupan has some serious conjunctivitis at the moment and she wont be translating a thing until that's all cleared up.

After that, who knows? It'll all depend on my mood. :>

Although there's a good chance I'll be working on a certain doujin that a certain someone sent me before I do anything else.

[Evil Rick]

Nanoha, Rise of Techno - Union, chapter 13

Spoiler for Intro:

Spoiler for Preview:

Full download link:

http://rapidshare.com/files/15667327...peror.zip.html

Enjoy!

PD: 2 chapters more to go

[Seraph42]

Dont think this Doujin was ever posted:

Spoiler for Master:

Dont remember were I got it
I also don't Know who Translated it, But all credit goes Him/her/it

[Vivio Testarossa]

Originally Posted by Seraph42

Dont think this Doujin was ever posted:

Spoiler for Master:

Dont remember were I got it
I also don't Know who Translated it, But all credit goes Him/her/it

I think Salary Man (or was it dokupan?), may have done that one...

Spoiler for Cute NanoFate:

Wow this tag really works. Yeah!

[dokupan]

Originally Posted by Vivio Testarossa

I think Salary Man (or was it dokupan?), may have done that one...

I just got this sudden urge to go weep in a corner.

WHERE OUR CREDIT PAGE IS? D<

[Vivio Testarossa]

Originally Posted by dokupan

I just got this sudden urge to go weep in a corner.

WHERE OUR CREDIT PAGE IS? D<

Who edited it again? LVD? Which page were they translated on? I don't seem to have this doujin in my "master file".

[Reiya]

http://spikewible.deviantart.com/art...of-M-101488347

Spoiler:

[Soljashy]

Originally Posted by Vivio Testarossa

I think Salary Man (or was it dokupan?), may have done that one...

I don't recognize it, though.

[markesellus]

Originally Posted by dokupan

MASTER
rainbowsarepretty.

Okay, people. This here's that angstfest of doujin that I agreed to translate for some reason. It's quite possible I ended up rushing it itwasn'tonpurposeIswear!, so it's entirely my fault if it sounds retarded.

But at least raizoo made it look nice, yes? :V

@ Aforementioned individual: I AM. :<

Here would be the original post. Clearing up anything.

[Keroko]

You probably didn't notice because I was too busy working to scream "thank you thank you thank you" for translating it. <_<

A little late, but...

Thank you thank you thank you for translating it! It's such a heartwarming doujin.

[Comartemis]

Heartwarming? How about highly depressing? Bad End for Nanoha = Comar doesn't like.

[Keroko]

It was heartwarming because it showed how much Nanoha cares for Vivio, for her to give Raising Heart, a partner whom she's never been separated from for years, is a little bit different from passing down any old thing.

And I'm a drama glutton, Nanoha doesn't die here so we get drama + heartwarming mother/daughter relationship. Win/win for me.

[Sassy_Bread]

Originally Posted by Reiya

http://spikewible.deviantart.com/art...of-M-101488347

Spoiler:

Hmmm...did you draw this yourself? Because this is really nice.
Btw, who are the other girls there? I can only recognize Subaru and Cutie Honey (thanks for putting her in!).