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Kaijo · 2009-12-15, 12:37

Speaking of fictions and posting, my computer is down and I probably won't be able to get it fixed for awhile, so stuff is on hold for now. Might not be able to resume work on fics until after the new year (mostly because all my notes are on that computer). Posting this from work. Bleh.

RadiantBeam · 2009-12-15, 12:43

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Originally Posted by TheShinySword

that's 'cause i'm too busy watching you *peeks over a hedge*

I get the strange feeling I'm being watched.... *looks around, slightly spooked*

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Originally Posted by Alavon

That's what you think...

*Alavon transforms into a ferret*

... And followed... *dials 9-1-1*

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Originally Posted by 00-Raiser

I got that feeling as well, but considering how that last one ended I think it needs some sort of continuation. Unless no one else thinks there should be one.

Read it and personally, I think it works fine with ending it when they seperate. You know they're going to get back together when Vivio is legal, unless something happens over the next year or so that changes their feelings (.... Oh, potential conflict there!), so there's really no need, IMO, for you to actually write the scene of them getting back together because the reader knows it will happen.

Going to go back and comment more extensively on the eight fics you posted, but I'll have to do that later when I have more time and can be more in depth about what my thoughts and opinions on it are.

Alavon · 2009-12-15, 13:10

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Originally Posted by RadiantBeam

... And followed... *dials 9-1-1*

How come you got spooked when Shiny looked over the hedge at you but dialed 911 at me when I transformed into a ferret?

Mae · 2009-12-15, 14:17

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Originally Posted by Alavon

Anyway...I'm keeping an eye on you, Raiser...I haven't forgotten...

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Originally Posted by RadiantBeam

....

o_O

Glad you aren't keeping an eye on me for anything... ^^;;;

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Originally Posted by TheShinySword

that's 'cause i'm too busy watching you *peeks over a hedge*

*sitting on her computer chair surrounded by TVs / watching monitors of everyone* ... :3

Tempy · 2009-12-15, 14:25

Now I'm paranoid.

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*tophat and monocle*

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00-Raiser · 2009-12-15, 17:08

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Originally Posted by Satashi

@00-raiser: Read your Vino fics :3 some were corny, some were over-done, but I really liked the "mother" one. Vivio telling Nanoha she loves her and Yuuno asking her to accompany her to get Vivio's present was done well :3

And nobody here is upset at you. Remember there's a differnce in what we write and who we are. "you are not what you write" as my college professor told us in class. "People will nit pick, dissect, edit, and complain about your words, but if you listen to them, they refer to your story and not you. Understand that."

If it's one thing I'm good at, it's being corny and over-done!

I know, but I thought people might have been getting tired of me going "But I can't think of anything! I can't see there being a problem!"

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Originally Posted by RadiantBeam

Read it and personally, I think it works fine with ending it when they seperate. You know they're going to get back together when Vivio is legal, unless something happens over the next year or so that changes their feelings (.... Oh, potential conflict there!), so there's really no need, IMO, for you to actually write the scene of them getting back together because the reader knows it will happen.

Yeah, I was thinking the same thing. But perhaps I'll revist it someday, or at least I could still do that lemon if I'm hor... er... inspired to do so

But my thoughts have gone into Fate/Yuuno territory as of late. I've also got my idea for a Christmas fic! I shall call it "How the Nakajimas Ruined and Subsequentally Saved Christmas (tentative)."

Dark Knight Gafgar · 2009-12-15, 18:15

Ah, look, a ferret! Excellent, I've been hungry.

/me bites ferret in half, chews, and pops the rest into his mouth and swallows

Mmm. Delicious.

.....What? Why do you all look so shocked? Never seen a Great Unclean One have a snack before?

Nanya01 · 2009-12-15, 18:22

*holds ferret!Alavon and pets* There, there. That wasn't a ferret that we knew. Yesss....

Alavon · 2009-12-15, 18:24

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Originally Posted by Nanya01

*holds ferret!Alavon and pets* There, there. That wasn't a ferret that we knew. Yesss....

*whimpers and trembles*

TheShinySword · 2009-12-15, 18:25

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Originally Posted by Dark Knight Gafgar

Ah, look, a ferret! Excellent, I've been hungry.

/me bites ferret in half, chews, and pops the rest into his mouth and swallows

Mmm. Delicious.

.....What? Why do you all look so shocked? Never seen a Great Unclean One have a snack before?

Oh dear.... Who wants to cut DKG open to get it back? And then glue Alavon back together. Anyone? Any volunteers at all? 'cause I'm positive his innards are acidic to the worst degree and I really don't wanna have to go in there.

Nanya01 · 2009-12-15, 18:28

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Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Oh dear.... Who wants to cut DKG open to get it back? And then glue Alavon back together. Anyone? Any volunteers at all? 'cause I'm positive his innards are acidic to the worst degree and I really don't wanna have to go in there.

You missed, Shiny, I already am petting a ferret!Alavon. The one that was eaten wasn't one that we know. *Pets Ferret!Alavon* There, there, you're safe now.

TheShinySword · 2009-12-15, 18:29

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Originally Posted by Nanya01

You missed, Shiny, I already am petting a ferret!Alavon. The one that was eaten wasn't one that we know. *Pets Ferret!Alavon* There, there, you're safe now.

Oh Kaiser!!! Nanya you're confused! You've been eaten too! *sniff* farewell comrade

Nanya01 · 2009-12-15, 18:31

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Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Oh Kaiser!!! Nanya you're confused! You've been eaten too! *sniff* farewell comrade

I was? *Blinks and shrugs* Okay, but... *Points behind everyone* I think my cousin, Bigfoot there, won't be too happy about that. *Winces as Dark Knight Gafgar is beaten to a bloody pulp* Yep.

Keroko · 2009-12-15, 19:04

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Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Oh dear.... Who wants to cut DKG open to get it back? And then glue Alavon back together. Anyone? Any volunteers at all? 'cause I'm positive his innards are acidic to the worst degree and I really don't wanna have to go in there.

Trust me, the acid is the least of your worries.

Alavon · 2009-12-15, 19:05

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Originally Posted by Nanya01

You missed, Shiny, I already am petting a ferret!Alavon. The one that was eaten wasn't one that we know. *Pets Ferret!Alavon* There, there, you're safe now.

*snuggles against Nanya*

:3

RadiantBeam · 2009-12-15, 19:28

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Originally Posted by Alavon

How come you got spooked when Shiny looked over the hedge at you but dialed 911 at me when I transformed into a ferret?

Because Shiny can't transform into a ferret that's small enough to follow me anywhere I go.

It's either that or I call animal control.

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Originally Posted by Mae

*sitting on her computer chair surrounded by TVs / watching monitors of everyone* ... :3

....

Eep.

Alavon · 2009-12-15, 20:22

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Originally Posted by RadiantBeam

Because Shiny can't transform into a ferret that's small enough to follow me anywhere I go.

It's either that or I call animal control.
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I'll take 911 over animal control. lol XD

AdmiralTigerclaw · 2009-12-15, 20:55

Just be happy Radiant didn't call in orbital support.

I have a bad habbit of using tactical strikes to enforce restraining orders.

Alavon · 2009-12-15, 21:25

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Originally Posted by AdmiralTigerclaw

Just be happy Radiant didn't call in orbital support.

I have a bad habbit of using tactical strikes to enforce restraining orders.

*laughs out loud*

XD

RadiantBeam · 2009-12-15, 22:08

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Originally Posted by Alavon

*laughs out loud*

XD

Actually, he was being serious.

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Nanya01 Left for TFF Author Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Frozen Hell of the North Age: 41	holds ferret!Alavon and pets There, there. That wasn't a ferret that we knew. Yesss.... __________________ My fics Due to certain things, I am not here, find me over on TFF.

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Kaijo Banned Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: Somewhere over the rainbow, in a house dropped on an ugly, old woman.	Speaking of fictions and posting, my computer is down and I probably won't be able to get it fixed for awhile, so stuff is on hold for now. Might not be able to resume work on fics until after the new year (mostly because all my notes are on that computer). Posting this from work. Bleh.

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Dark Knight Gafgar Dirty Bloody /b/tard Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: 4chan	Ah, look, a ferret! Excellent, I've been hungry. /me bites ferret in half, chews, and pops the rest into his mouth and swallows Mmm. Delicious. .....What? Why do you all look so shocked? Never seen a Great Unclean One have a snack before?

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AdmiralTigerclaw Sword Wielding Penguin Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Subspace, Texas Age: 39	Just be happy Radiant didn't call in orbital support. I have a bad habbit of using tactical strikes to enforce restraining orders.