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Old 2011-05-30, 23:36   Link #31001
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Oh hey, there's that stabbing sensation of a twisting knife that was missing from Vivio's side.
Indeed. I was beginning to worry that she'd lost her touch, but thankfully I was mistaken. It just feels wrong to read a DC fic and not have a part of me dead inside (even if it's just a tiny bit for now)...
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Old 2011-05-31, 01:17   Link #31002
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*Bursts out laughing*

Er, that might be an inappropriate response . But I did laugh . RD, you say the most awesome things sometimes ....

Hm, well, hopefully I wrote it right and left enough hints to show that it might not be as bad for poor Vivio as it might sound?
Actually, when I said "Vivio's side" I meant Vivio's side of the story. Not her actual side.

Though if Hayate rejects her or explains her hesitance, Vivio'll certainly feel it in her side.
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Old 2011-05-31, 01:56   Link #31003
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Sometimes, you have to stop fiddling and just post. Although most of the delay is due to replaying Dragon Warrior/Quest games 1 thru 8, heh.

Future Tense
Chapter 36: Before I Sleep

In which Nanoha and her friends find freedom... or death.

Previous chapters can be found here.

Spoiler for Future Tense, Chapter 36: Before I Sleep:


Copious Author's Notes to follow in a separate post. Reminder for any comments to be please have spoiler tags.
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Old 2011-05-31, 07:32   Link #31004
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Future Tense
Chapter 36: Before I Sleep
Honestly? I think you wrote the whole chapter with an eye to one line:

"I reject your reality... and substitute it with my own!"

Thank you, Mythbusters.

I loved the ride, Kaijo. Adored it. Made some calls correctly, fumbled heavily on others, but that's how I like it.

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You Never Lose By Loving
Lose By Holding Back
Ow. My heart hurts.

I shall be your bunny-spotter: Find the person in the cast who has a crush on one of the two of them (unrequited) (...or both!) and stab us further with their thoughts on the matter. While giving us Hayate/Vivio getting together.

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Thanks for the comments everyone!

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Particularly if you cut down on the pseudo-magi-science in the final chapter, I highly recommend Past Tense (or any other punny name) to fill in gaps you'd have liked to get to. I must admit that I felt that Givo didn't feel like a completed arc.
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Old 2011-05-31, 08:08   Link #31005
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You Never Lose By Loving is now posted on FF.net...so that I can post this companion piece here .

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Oh, Hayate, it's never that simple.

Once again, very nice. A good follow-up to Vivio's side of things, and I like the fact that you acknowledge that any love Hayate felt for Reinforce at the time probably wasn't romantic, considering she was only nine and the bond they shared; it was probably something more than romance, in a way, and it's nice to see that brought up.

And again, you have enough hinting on Hayate's side of things to get the impression that she's not as against being with Vivio as she would like to think, though it seems Vivio will have to coax her out of her shell.
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Old 2011-05-31, 11:14   Link #31006
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And with this post, I realize that I'm totally insane.

Comments in spoilers, please.

Dusk

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Red 26

Spoiler for Blood That Flows - Red 27:


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Old 2011-05-31, 12:02   Link #31007
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And with this post, I realize that I'm totally insane.

Comments in spoilers, please.

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Oh me, and I thought that Lina`s baby is troublesome.
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Old 2011-05-31, 12:41   Link #31008
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Indeed. I was beginning to worry that she'd lost her touch, but thankfully I was mistaken. It just feels wrong to read a DC fic and not have a part of me dead inside (even if it's just a tiny bit for now)...
LOL, now I want to write a Non Indicative First Episode-style story where happy fluff and flowers and bunnies reign, just to give me maximum mood whiplash? XD But I bet even if I did it would come as no surprise to anyone!

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Actually, when I said "Vivio's side" I meant Vivio's side of the story. Not her actual side.

Though if Hayate rejects her or explains her hesitance, Vivio'll certainly feel it in her side.
Haha, whoops on my behalf!

Then it's probably a good thing that I'm not planning on writing any more in the short term, so at least Vivio gets a Schrodinger's Cat-style response from Hayate --don't know if it's a dead hope or a live one, so both possibilities exist at the same time!

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Ow. My heart hurts.

I shall be your bunny-spotter: Find the person in the cast who has a crush on one of the two of them (unrequited) (...or both!) and stab us further with their thoughts on the matter. While giving us Hayate/Vivio getting together.
*Snicker* The crack pairing stomping down on actual pairings/more probable pairings?

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Oh, Hayate, it's never that simple.

Once again, very nice. A good follow-up to Vivio's side of things, and I like the fact that you acknowledge that any love Hayate felt for Reinforce at the time probably wasn't romantic, considering she was only nine and the bond they shared; it was probably something more than romance, in a way, and it's nice to see that brought up.

And again, you have enough hinting on Hayate's side of things to get the impression that she's not as against being with Vivio as she would like to think, though it seems Vivio will have to coax her out of her shell.
I don't know why I keep seeing Hayate as this Lonely At The Top commander , so nearly all my writing on her reflects that.

Good thing Vivio is a Determinator like Nanoha then!
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Old 2011-05-31, 12:53   Link #31009
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I don't know why I keep seeing Hayate as this Lonely At The Top commander , so nearly all my writing on her reflects that.

Good thing Vivio is a Determinator like Nanoha then!
Hayate comes across as the one who climbs a little too fast and reaches a little too far, so it doesn't surprise that she ends up being Lonely At The Top. Or maybe it's just the Wolkies screening out Hayate's suitors for her

*snicker* Determinator. Good luck, Hayate....
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Old 2011-05-31, 14:06   Link #31010
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*Snicker* The crack pairing stomping down on actual pairings/more probable pairings?
Moar crack. Lindy has a crush on both of them.
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Old 2011-05-31, 14:28   Link #31011
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Hayate comes across as the one who climbs a little too fast and reaches a little too far, so it doesn't surprise that she ends up being Lonely At The Top. Or maybe it's just the Wolkies screening out Hayate's suitors for her

*snicker* Determinator. Good luck, Hayate....
Hapless Suitor #1: "Ah, Hayate-san..."
*Wilts under expressionless stare from a very sharp-fanged Zafira*
Hayate: "Yes?"
Hapless Suitor #1: "....Nevermindnicetoseeyougoodbye!" *flees*

Hapless Suitor #2: "Hayate-san, I wanted to tell you..."
*About to bring out a bouquet of flowers, but freezes under Signum's very impassive, stone-cold stare, her hand resting on Laevantine's hilt*
Hayate: "You wanted to tell me something?"
Hapless Suitor #2: "...It was nothing. Good day!" *flees*

Hapless Suitor #3: "Hey there, why don't--"
*Loses confidence under Shamal's dangerously sweet smile as she idly flicks Klarer Wind around her finger*
Hayate: "Oh? Did you want something?"
Hapless Suitor #3: "Ah...I wanted to say, why don't I stop bothering you right now. Yes. Going." *flees*

Hapless Suitor #4: *Running up from a distance away* "Excuse me, Hay--"
*Flattened by Graf Eisen and Vita, as a cloud of dust rises up and obscures them in the distance*
Hayate: "Huh, I wonder what that was?" *keeps on walking*

Hayate: "I don't understand why everyone looks so jumpy around me lately! These perfectly good-looking guys and girls always crowd around Nanoha-chan or Fate-chan despite them being lovey-dovey for each other, and yet whenever I join them they all scatter! Nanoha-chan now wants me to go on her dates with Fate-chan so that they won't get bothered by people, but I don't get why people are so nervous around me!"
*Signum, Shamal, Vita and Zafira look at each other, then back at Hayate innocently*
Signum: "We have no idea why people would be like that to you, Mistress."
Shamal: "No clue."
Zafira: "How strange."
Vita: "You're just imagining it, Hayate."

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Moar crack. Lindy has a crush on both of them.
....My brain just broke, spawn . Please fix it!
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Old 2011-05-31, 15:16   Link #31012
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Nanya, I don't know if you read my review in one of your past chapter in FF.net a while back but I'll just put it here anyways...

I never thought you'll make Arisa's form when she activates and using her holy power similar to Shana (Shakugan no Shana) when the latter brings her power.

Flaming sword... check!
Fiery wings... check!
Tsundere... check!
Got Rie Kugimiya as her VA... (who happens played Shana's VA)... Oh... check!

the only thing different between the two is than Arisa's hair remains blond and she got blue flames rather than red that coins her alias...

and i just realized this just now.... T_T
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Old 2011-05-31, 15:24   Link #31013
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Nanya, I don't know if you read my review in one of your past chapter in FF.net a while back but I'll just put it here anyways...

I never thought you'll make Arisa's form when she activates and using her holy power similar to Shana (Shakugan no Shana) when the latter brings her power.

Flaming sword... check!
Fiery wings... check!
Tsundere... check!
Got Rie Kugimiya as her VA... (who happens played Shana's VA)... Oh... check!

the only thing different between the two is than Arisa's hair remains blond and she got blue flames rather than red that coins her alias...

and i just realized this just now.... T_T
Oh, I got it, I double checked to make sure. But, yeah, got it, even made a note of it on chapter 100 (Dusk Final)
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Old 2011-05-31, 18:50   Link #31014
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Good thing Vivio is a Determinator like Nanoha then!
I've noticed that this seems to be a requirement for all of Vivio's relationships, no matter who she's paired off with.
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Old 2011-05-31, 19:01   Link #31015
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Old 2011-05-31, 19:04   Link #31016
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Kind of reminds me of those two cute pics where Vivio surprises Signum with a hug from behind and just when everybody is ready to say "D'awwwwwww" Vivio promptly slams Signum against the floor with a German Suplex xD!
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Old 2011-05-31, 19:23   Link #31017
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Posted "Lose By Holding Back" to Fanfiction.net ^^. Plot bunny now allowed to hibernate!
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Old 2011-05-31, 21:34   Link #31018
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I've noticed that this seems to be a requirement for all of Vivio's relationships, no matter who she's paired off with.
That's because she's always paired off with older characters. As such she has to work harder to make them 'take her seriously' and view her has more than a little sister/friend/niece/what have you.

Pair her with a peer or some one younger and I'm sure things will go differently.
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Plot bunny now allowed to hibernate!
You're going to jinx it.
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Old 2011-05-31, 23:25   Link #31020
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Uploaded Future Tense, Chapter 36: Before I Sleep to ff.net.

I change the explanation section in the middle somewhat, editing out the pseudo-magical-reality stuff, and adding some clarification to one of Raiser's concerns (which I belatedly realized I should have had before, heh).
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