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Old 2008-05-25, 12:26   Link #4921
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B

And I have to say This:
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Spoiler for Vampire!Fate pt.7a (Nanoha):
Made me grin uncontrollably
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Old 2008-05-25, 12:54   Link #4922
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Enjoy an extra long part :3

Spoiler for Vampire!Fate pt.7a (Nanoha):


A.) Nanoha
B.) Fate

Think about what each of them will do, and choose wisely.
long post

sweet how caring Fate is and how nervous Nanoha is about her surroundings

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Old 2008-05-25, 12:56   Link #4923
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Aha, I had to reread that once, but it definitely made me laugh.

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Old 2008-05-25, 13:30   Link #4924
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Chapter 48
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Old 2008-05-25, 13:45   Link #4925
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Spoiler for Vampire!Fate pt.7a (Nanoha):


A.) Nanoha
B.) Fate

Think about what each of them will do, and choose wisely.
A and i don't know why exactly ..... I just sense more fun under this option. Btw so far good job.
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Old 2008-05-25, 14:26   Link #4926
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Enjoy an extra long part :3

Spoiler for Vampire!Fate pt.7a (Nanoha):


A.) Nanoha
B.) Fate

Think about what each of them will do, and choose wisely.
I like the shower scene. Poor Fate with saying "I like you" the thoughts that must be going through her mind! Poor Nanoha she must be so embarrassed with that sneeze. I choose B
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Chapter 48
Vatican Knights

Spoiler for Tears of Blood:
Gah! Another person dead! There is three left. Are you slowly going to kill them off until Vivio is the only one left? You can't kill Karil, that would be so sad. So is little Nanoha really evil? What was she doing to Helga? The ending was corny but I needed it since the death was sad.
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Old 2008-05-25, 15:09   Link #4927
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Great part
I must go with B this time.
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Old 2008-05-25, 15:11   Link #4928
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Gah! Another person dead! There is three left. Are you slowly going to kill them off until Vivio is the only one left? You can't kill Karil, that would be so sad. So is little Nanoha really evil? What was she doing to Helga? The ending was corny but I needed it since the death was sad.
Mmm... I don't know, I'm in a bloody freenzy
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Old 2008-05-25, 16:09   Link #4929
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Enjoy an extra long part :3

Spoiler for Vampire!Fate pt.7a (Nanoha):


A.) Nanoha
B.) Fate

Think about what each of them will do, and choose wisely.
B!!!!

I so want to see Fates POV now lol, that shower scene was... like awesome, ecpecialy the ending of it... poor readers haha
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Old 2008-05-25, 16:37   Link #4930
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Yay two times when I can say my vote

So, I pick B ^^ (like almost everybody XD)
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Old 2008-05-25, 17:03   Link #4931
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okay B wins :3
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Old 2008-05-25, 18:47   Link #4932
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6 pages of backlog.. I won't comment on all.. so:

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-giggles and prods Satashi's halo- Don't leave them hanging.

It's mean.

Also:

I'm starting something new, here's a preview:

Spoiler for lol a preview:
Oh no Precia's back?!... Nice preview! Is this going to be action or drama (genre)? Or both? One thing's for sure, Fate's gonna be in so much sh!t. I'd like to know what you're going to do with this so please continue. Yeyy for more fics from you! *cheers*

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18, pt 1


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Oh Nanoha was a yaoi fangirl?.. LOL At least Vivio got out of that one. More more!!

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Spoiler for Starlight Remembrance (One of many storys i got brewing haha):
Minor characters are getting some love. I like it. Maybe I'll get to reacquaint myself with the other characters while reading your fics as well as the others' like TSS'. I say, keep it coming.

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Teaser time

Spoiler for Magical Babysitter Lyrical Zafira:


A new review (Thank you very much Illidan) inspired me to start up work again. ^^;
A yuri army?? *goes off to read TSS' fic*

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want crack?
Spoiler for Nanoha is only a free member:


hey, you clicked it.
F-Fate?!!! *swipes furiously* ... b-but I don't have a credit card? *cries*
LOL at Hayate. nice crackfic.

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Anyway, I bring more fanfiction. Inspired by episode 18 and 19 of StrikerS. This is part 1, focusing on Fate + Shari + Alto.

Spoiler for Strength Lies in the Heart, Part 1: Hospital Visit:
More minor character lovin'! Sad ficcy is sad.. Fate is very Fate-like. Such a compassionate and loving leader.. kasu, I really like the way you write! I dunno but I really like it.. so please continue and I will be looking forward to more from you.

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Enjoy an extra long part :3

Spoiler for Vampire!Fate pt.7a (Nanoha):


A.) Nanoha
B.) Fate

Think about what each of them will do, and choose wisely.
Now this chapter, I like. We're getting some snippets of Fate's past again. Little pieces of information, little statements from her that make me wonder again about what happened to her in her life. We also get a glimpse of her anime self here and it reminds us that behind the horny and aggressive attitude, Fate is still the Fate we know and love. Her past must have been tough for her (maybe a past lovelife too?) that's why she is the way she is now. But it was still comforting to know that she's not all raging hormones. I felt sad for her when she said it's been a long time since she said the words I like you.. very sad scene.. I really wonder what happened.. very nice chapter.
And B

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I so want to see Fates POV now lol, that shower scene was... like awesome, ecpecialy the ending of it... poor readers haha
LOL yeah I had to read that line twice to be sure I wasn't seeing things. XD Poor readers.. wait that's me.. oO;; Poor me..

So AS added some stuff.. and I am staring at the tags.. Fluff farm? I can't say I disagree..but.. ^^' Hmm, I can't say they're wrong with the tags. By golly I think they (whoever added them) got them right! LOL *explores AS*
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Old 2008-05-25, 20:46   Link #4933
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Spoiler for Vampire!Fate pt.7a (Nanoha):


A.) Nanoha
B.) Fate

Think about what each of them will do, and choose wisely.
Hahaha
Nanoha's having some...weird thoughts.
And the sneezing thing is so cute!!
But...I think something like that happened in SBtB, right?
Did something like that happen to Satashi- sama? =3
seems like it >.>

Oh, and I guess I'll go for Fate now, so B
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Old 2008-05-25, 21:48   Link #4934
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Hahaha
Nanoha's having some...weird thoughts.
And the sneezing thing is so cute!!
But...I think something like that happened in SBtB, right?
Did something like that happen to Satashi- sama? =3
seems like it >.>

Oh, and I guess I'll go for Fate now, so
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Old 2008-05-25, 23:33   Link #4935
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Old 2008-05-25, 23:50   Link #4936
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Spoiler for The feelings of Vivio:
Vivio!! Wow that was a bit of angst. Karil is so awesome, I feel bad for her. Vivio is losing control, I hope the Alastor guy is trustworthy. Probably not...
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Old 2008-05-26, 00:22   Link #4937
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Spoiler for Vampire!Fate pt. 1a (Fate):


A.) Nanoha
B.) Fate
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Old 2008-05-26, 00:35   Link #4938
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Spoiler for Vampire!Fate pt. 1a (Fate):


A.) Nanoha
B.) Fate
Hehe Fate being dominated...for a little while. Oh the insecure feelings. Too bad Fate had to go. But it would be really bad if something bad happened to Erio. Cute chapter. I'm undecided but... how about some Nanoha. I want to see what she's thinking about. A
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Old 2008-05-26, 01:19   Link #4939
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Spoiler for Vampire!Fate pt. 1a (Fate):


A.) Nanoha
B.) Fate
..... *Extreamy flusterd and bleeding through the nose* Na-nano... nanoha... O_O That was hawt xD

I think I'm going to go back to voteingA!!!

I SOOOOOO want to see Nanoha reflect back on that if all lol
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Old 2008-05-26, 01:35   Link #4940
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Spoiler for Vampire!Fate pt. 1a (Fate):


A.) Nanoha
B.) Fate
I can't stop grinning like an idiot.. *grins like an idiot* Very fluffy.. *blushes* I like. Nice development on their relationship. I'm glad nothing happened beyond that and Nanoha was the one who stopped things from going further. Aww at Fate.. Now I'm really intrigued about her last love(?).. You've managed to convey the feelings of Fate well as she goes through everything in this chapter. I'm very happy to read everything in her POV: from the description of her feelings during the Dom!Nanoha scene, to the realization of some things as well as her fears, and up to the declaration that she'll protect Nanoha. The way you wrote it, what started with a hot make out scene turned into a very sweet moment between them. Maybe that's the reason why I am smiling after reading this. It seems that Nanoha has now become very important to her. It's like I can rest assured that no matter what happens to Nanoha, Fate will be there for her, no matter how dangerous the situation is. I realized in this POV how gentle Fate-chan is.. She's really sweet.. This is a great chapter! I do hope that nothing happens to cause heartbreak for Fate again, but I have a feeling that everything will not go as smoothly between the two of them.. I am officially endeared with the main characters of this story. Way to go!!
and I vote A

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