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Titans Test Team Pilot
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Indirectly it's about the OCs, but they aren't explicitly mentioned in that part.
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2012-01-10, 07:35 | Link #17487 | |
I am no one
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"You simply should not underestimate Emperor's right hand (=sidekick)" Later, due to twisted nature of network information, he was simply known as "Emperor's right hand of blazing courage" and a memetic badass Justified that they never knew that's real child soldier like (though Irish' case is exaggerated)
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2012-01-10, 07:35 | Link #17488 |
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@ Stratos - You might wanna tone down on that. Switching to the main cast only for your OC to be there or be the topic of discussion is okay for a few scenes, especially if something important happens, but making the whole story like that is really not the way to go.
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2012-01-10, 07:37 | Link #17489 | ||||
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My Tandem (Cameraman) IS Idea is probably the first step, but then it's only tandem because the IS acts as the carrier of the "camera"- both of which are piloted. maybe IS and Drone dockings first before IS to IS docking. maybe combine the following: http://oreno.imouto.org/post/show/194434/ -> IS Unit + http://oreno.imouto.org/post/show/201780/ -> "Camera" (the huge gun/drone thing in the pic) or something like that. |
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2012-01-10, 07:41 | Link #17491 | |
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2012-01-10, 07:42 | Link #17492 |
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@ Demi - I accidentally made all the kids 7 for first 2 chapters I should've made Charles and Rin Jr 10 at least.
@ Senpai - Too bad he doesn't have the Imagine breaker One punch equals getting a girlfriend Has Dan ever been asked out in your story? Side note - The main thing they're really calling BS on is the fact that Kyuukai gets wings and a modified gun in order to fight the IS. Irish gets a modified butter knife and a some kind of jumpsuit yet does relatively fine as well. Irish even mocks the concept by asking if they were expecting him to be some kind of male IS pilot @ Stratos - Good luck. Always being a focus or appearing when it's not really required for them to be there is one of the signs of a definite sue.
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2012-01-10, 07:45 | Link #17493 |
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@Eras: If you want to delve into time warp effects by something stupid then make a scene where Ichika gets closer to those kids mothers' then overnight they age a lot. Suddenly they have memories of their birthday and life history change Ignore the fact they could have been exchanged for a completely different existence/consciousness.
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2012-01-10, 07:48 | Link #17494 | |||
I am no one
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On a slightly ironic note, Setsura is burning when activated as 'plasma claw', its on his left arm. Quote:
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2012-01-10, 07:49 | Link #17495 |
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@ Demi - I can still fix Tate's kid at least. Charlotte mentions a girl with blue hair who liked anime. I was going to make her Tate's daugher, but I can just make her Kanzashi's. THe temporal paradox sounds serious and time lingo has been confusing as hell ever since back to the future
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2012-01-10, 07:55 | Link #17498 |
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@ Senpai - Is Dan ever worried for Ran when she gets a girlfriend like some big bro's do?
Side note - Irish tends to mock concepts a lot. For example: After the CPR scene. Irish: I suppose this is the time where you expect me to suddenly say I love you? I don't. I really, really don't. >_> or Irish: What do you think this is? Some kind of sexual fantasy where girls fall left and right for you just because you're a guy? I can't believe people actually think that Side note 2 - Would readers really buy such an obvious retcon? @ Demi - Didn't we already answer that?
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