2013-05-12, 12:18 | Link #43161 | |
Just another Idiot
Join Date: Sep 2009
Location: Delusion world
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= Random Stuff: (Main)Female OC is rare(I can only recall only a handful of fic with a female main lead) so I still wanted to do one but just don't have the mood to do it. I think it will work even with Nemo (male OC) in the story. He is just a Janitor after all. = The female Main protagonist's style is deliberately similar to Fuyuki(Generation Shift) in many ways yet different because she is more geared towards Iaijutsu and her style focus on one decisive strike while Fuyuki incorporate multiple light strokes after one heavy blow. Her IS sheath sword to charge and release one powerful strike and it is the predecessor to Yukihana but without energy absorb or barrier void ability. Not like it matter since it is powerful enough to take out most IS with one Hit. Might name her Orimura Mafuyu...... The 'Orimura' has different Kanji. probably have her joking about Ichika being related to her by blood...
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2013-05-12, 12:45 | Link #43164 |
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Join Date: Sep 2011
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Just be sure not to make them "Shallow love interests": I.E, they have nothing to them other than "I love Ichika". I did this on purpose for "The Soldier and the Bride", but to be fair, it goes both ways: Both Laura and Ichika are defined with their bond for one another.
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2013-05-12, 12:48 | Link #43165 |
That one guy
Join Date: Nov 2011
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Now this is the problem. How do I make them fall in love with him. To everyone but Chifuyu and Tabane, he's just that domestic man that cleans up after them and the cute little brother of Chifuyu. Well at least without going through the serious arcs.
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2013-05-12, 19:08 | Link #43166 |
I am no one
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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It's Nagisako
Being D-list fodder I don't even SURE to feature her in my fic. On the issue of "Shallow love interest", I invoked this per canon origin and gradually moving out (Madoka is the worst one in the regard). So far, Lingyin is on the top list, followed by Madoka, Houki and Cecilia need their arc, but putting Cecilia on the spotlight is hard >.< (Thankfully Tate and probably Kanzashi as love interest is skipped outright) Ah, sorry, but your world building is too extensive and constantly changed, hard to comment when what I think is "Where to begin this???" For what I remember now, it's the story of a male janitor (?) with (his?) plushie robot
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2013-05-12, 21:55 | Link #43168 |
Awe of She
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Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: Orlando
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Wait, so Mother's Day in the US was today... Who would Ichika give a 'mother's day gift to? Chifuyu? ... or would she refuse it? XDD
Spoiler for Bah, it's late and I can't think of anything... T^T:
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2013-05-12, 23:14 | Link #43169 |
That one guy
Join Date: Nov 2011
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"So... you getting Your sister anything for mother's day?"
"Wha-? No! She's my sister. Why would I get her a mother's day present?" "Well she has been taking care of you. providing for the home. Sending you to school. You know. Stuff." "There is that. But she's still my sister. I don't need a special day to show her that I appreciate her. I do so everyday." "Ooooh. sounds like someone's a siscon!" "Shut up!" AT THE SAME TIME AT ANOTHER PLACE "So Chifuyu-san, you plan to get Ichika something for mother's day?" spits out coffee, "Wha-? He's my brother! Why would I get anything for him on mother's day? He's not even female!" "Well, looking back, he does mother you a lot." "Look here. I provide for the house, I send him to school. I make sure nobody butts in to our affairs and protect the home." "Sounds more like a husband to me." "Oh really? What does a mother do?" "Cooks your food, draws your bath, cleans the house, chides you to stop bad drinking habits, always reminds you not to get into trouble. Sees you off at the door everyday as you go to work." "That's not a mother. That's what Ichika--... Oh god..." "Exactly." |
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I am no one
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