Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha Character Creation and Discussion

[Saint X]

Originally Posted by Nightengale

And I'm very afraid at a prospect of a time-space version of C.C... Spoilers indicate that C.C in CG is maybe even the secret manipulator of history lololol.

Nanoha-verse C.C : The immortal who controls all of time-space since time immemorial?

NO...

CC's just your typical Admin AI... of a bureau base...

@LoweGear

It's hard...

Mother Issue:

It's hard to define a device when the device itself is a huge as a space warship...

Chacha Issue:

Still blending in facts from Kha's paused Otome Daisen fic... as one particular item is related to the sister hood of maiden warriors- TSAB Affiliated by StrikerS

[Nightengale]

Originally Posted by Saint X

NO...

CC's just your typical Admin AI... of a bureau base...

I was...joking.

Maybe I should've added a smiley or a strikeout like that 00-Gundam Meisters jab.

[Erio]

If we indeed make a CC character, she would definitely not be in the TSAB. She would be one behind the REBELLION.

... I'll leave it at that.

EDIT:

@tshouryuu Welcome to the thread! I'm glad this thread is becoming more popular. We have to get more people in here.

[Aaron008R]

Originally Posted by Erio

If we indeed make a CC character, she would definitely not be in the TSAB. She would be one behind the REBELLION.

... I'll leave it at that.

You forgot to add Pizza Hut.

[LoweGear]

Originally Posted by Nightengale

Maybe I should've added a smiley or a strikeout like that 00-Gundam Meisters jab.

On that 00 jab: Wait till October. Then jab all you want

Originally Posted by Erio

If we indeed make a CC character, she would definitely not be in the TSAB. She would be one behind the REBELLION.

... I'll leave it at that.

... The Kurono-kishi?

@ Aaron008R:

How can we ever forget. CC is not CC without a steaming hot box of freshly baked stuffed crust PIZZA HUT

@ Saint X:

I don't think it's that difficult to profile a battleship. *turns to Andromeda for inspiration*

[Kha]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

If this keeps up, the TSAB will end up destroying themselves before the bad guys do

And now I'm wondering what Archer and Shiro would think if they knew...

In one of Sophia's flashbacks, she recounts a white-haired guy in a red cape that she calls Oni-chan who brought her to the Alexei Convent when she was 4. Up till now, they still meet every few years. But the most important thing about him, was this phrase that she believes to be true and that Kha completely refutes when he first heard of it: "Saving a life means not saving another."



@Nighty/Saga: Are you flipping now?

@Erio: Well TSAB is the BEST PLACE to screw the histories of MULTA dimensions so why not?

But if you ask this CC, she assures that she has no intention of that sort.

It's not gonna be much of a surprise if you're going to warn use beforehand I'm hyped though

Well first things first, I realized I left something out indeed...

---New intelligence data updated---

Today we look at another of Kha's robot friends, Nagato Mk 2.

Spoiler for I smell Books...:

Name: Nagato Mach Zwei
Alias: M2, The Headless Trooper (CC‘s idea to scare new recruits)
Age: Unknown
Birthday: Unknown
Magic Rank: S+
Height: N/A
Weight: N/A
Hair: Light magenta
Eyes: Grey
Personality: Quiet, contemplative and recitent, masking the haxx0r-ness inside her.
Usual wear: Nothing. A walking suit of armor doesn’t need clothes.
Magic Type: Unknown magic system. Faded magenta.
Caster Class: Natural Intelligience

Device: Zaku 1-3, the prototype battle suit Kha built for his own use, but left on the Silvana after he left the unit.

Brief Background

“Plain on the outside, uber on the inside,” - Col. Gard Redel.

“n00b on the outside, 1337 on the inside,” - Private 1st Class Gendou Ikari Johnston AKA G.I. Joh.

“Headless on the outside, brainy on the inside!” - Private 2nd Class Cona Holmes

Nagato was found by Kha in the flight computer of the mechanical giant that inspired him to build the Zakus. Contrary to popular belief, Nagato wasn’t an AI, but a true born intelligent data being - self-aware programs as old as the multiverse itself. She is only willing to let out that she has been around ever since the civilisation that built the giant developed a cyber network, but due to the computer she was in shutting down suddenly, she had been abandoned by her Patrons, until Kha rebooted her. She also claims that she was one copy of an infinite number of programs created by the Patrons. Her purpose, aim and direction are a total void to the crew, but nonetheless she taught Kha a few lessons on the giant via Whispers.

It is at the thought level when one realizes that Nagato is actually rather chatty. Ideas come and go, and she is eternally occupied with taking snapshots of the world around her, analyzing it to pieces, then repeating the cycle for the next second. She helps Kha straighten several things he had picked up using his ability, but refuses to answer questions that she says was up to his race to find out. She also teaches him ways to use the Whispers. One of which was what Kha calls the “Geass Scan”, and the veritable Web-sense.

As expected, this droid was devoid of emotions. The closest to a tantrum was a sudden disconnection, and a refusal to reconnect for a prolonged period afterwards when Kha asked her why didn’t she return to her kind when she could have. Unlike a droid, she has a Linker Core. In fact, her true body manifests as a Linker Core and nothing else.

She assisted Kha to build the ZAKU, and became Zaku 1-3‘s, the final working prototype, AI which Kha used as a replacement of his Casshern Barrier Jacket for a while until he adapted the ZAKU system for his Jaegerform. Even after he left the Silvana, Nagato remained on Silvana. CC enjoys contemplative sessions with Nagato, while Minerva is freaked out by her stillness, and Chacha calling her a “Headless Monster”, for a walking suit of armor does not have a head anyway.

CC recently had Nagato play tricks on the new Zakum Privates, getting her to drift about the ship during their Orientation Program’s rest hours and scaring the daylights out of them.

After that above bit about CC being a manipulator, I've a feeling that she might known of Nagato is more ways than one... But that's up to X to decide really. I only have control over my AIs.

[Kha]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

@ Saint X:

I don't think it's that difficult to profile a battleship. *turns to Andromeda for inspiration*

Trust me, the Silvana is not called the "Legendary Lost Logia" for no reason... Even Sakurazaki's data was in a way found aboard that ship, as with many secrets about the assault carrier being discovered everyday. Most of it is scrambled junk, so Kha couldn't cheat and Whisper his way through, much less the normal TSAB technicians. And its off limits to personnel below Top Secret clearance, so no help from Aurion either.

[Aaron008R]

Originally Posted by Kha

Trust me, the Silvana is not called the "Legendary Lost Logia" for no reason... Even Sakurazaki's data was in a way found aboard that ship, as with many secrets about the assault carrier being discovered everyday. Most of it is scrambled junk, so Kha couldn't cheat and Whisper his way through, much less the normal TSAB technicians. And its off limits to personnel below Top Secret clearance, so no help from Aurion either.

As much as he'd want to, he has Einsts to worry about.
If you don't mind, I intend him to be one of the main analysts of th new threat and have a bigger role this time. And hopefully, a snapshot in the OP.

[Liingo]

Unit Listing, Enforcer Unit 85 (EU85), aka the Spellbook

Overall Command: Myristic

Squad 1 - Spellweavers

Weaver 1: Meia
(S-) Special Attack: Vandread
Weaver 2: Juliet
(AA) Special Attack: Fortriu
Weaver 3: David
(AA+) Special Attack: Stormrider
Weaver 5: Marion
(AAA+) Special Attack: Clingfire
Weaver 7: Raymond
(AAA-) Special Attack: Crimson Eagle
Weaver 8: Anne
(AA+) Special Attack: Dragon' Flame
Weaver 9: Ian
(AA-) Special Attack: Hedron

-General Details about the Weavers
- Look under the Device/BJ/Spell List.

Squad 2 - Spellhunters

Squad 3 - Spellblades

Blade 1: Isamu (See below)
Blade 2: Iza (See below)
Blade 3: Tuala
Blade 4: Valivis


Story List
A Visit to RF6
Part 1: Training
Part 2: Get Set
Part 3: Exercise Start
Part 4: This is going well….
Part 5: Blades win?
Part 6: The Calm after the Storm
Part 7: Strikers v Aces

Spellblades v Tais

Other OC’s
Akilae
-Character Bio part 2

Links to Meme's
Isamu's Meme
Iza's Meme

-Other Relevant Information

Enforcer- standard ship board grunts 10<x<20 (ie, grunts seen during S1, S2)
Enforcer Spec-Op (ESO) - Higher trained enforcers, capable of working alone, but usually operating in smaller groups 5<x<10. Given more dangerous tasks, ie, hostage rescue, extraction, sabotage- (in RL, the Spec-Ops missions) (Weavers, Hunters )
Agent: The most elite of the bunch, usually working alone, or leads a group of ESO’s on missions. (Fate, Chrono,…….) (Spec-Ops tasks, tasks more suited to one person.)

If I was comparing this to RL, the enforcers are now the equivalent of the US Marines, operating under naval guidance. They do have a few ships available for use when needed, (ie for mass deployments of enforcers) but in general, the standard enforcers are deployed on naval ships scattered thoughout.

The ESO, as the name implies are the special forces arm of the enforcers, which if we follow the thought line of the marines, would be like the force-recon units within the marine structure.

Agents, well they don't really have a direct referenced link to any known RL unit, but they would be ESO level in skill/training. Although they probably would be cases where things like it happen in RL, just that it's a completely black-op.

Currently my OC's are in 2 categories, the Spellblades are normal enforcers, but are being groomed for ESO duties, with the Spellweavers and Spellhunters ESO rank already. (see my OC list)

Originally Posted by Keroko

And the axe, we really need more axe users. Axes are powerfull and awsome weapons (I mean, Fate has one, doesn't that mean something?).

I hear and obey.

I present to you Isamu, Leader of Enforcer Squad 3 of Unit 85 'Spellblades'

Isamu
22 years
172cm
68kg

TSAB Mage Rank (C- when discovered, now A) Belka Mage
Holds the rank of Sergeant
BLADE 1

Hair: Black
Eyes: Dark Brown

Personality: Quiet, well-mannered individual who tries unsuccessfully to stay out of trouble, but always seems to end up solving (dragged into) the problems of people he meets.

Spoiler for Background:

Background: A recent addition to the TSAB. He was scouted by Graham (ex-admiral) on Terra (97th non-administrated world) after helping to retrieve a stolen item for a villager in the English countryside. The methods he used were surprising indeed, using a low level energy attack to reclaim the stolen goods. Graham had been passing through on a business trip/holiday when Lotte detected a small magical reaction.

A student of medieval history before joining the TSAB, Isamu’s weapons and barrier jacket are modelled on the weapons and armour of the period. With no effective ranged attacks at all, Isamu has had to rely on his armour and also agility get close enough to attack. He studied magic under Lotte and Aria while completing his studies and was deemed proficient enough to be raised to a B+ ranking. Also, under the guidance of Admiral Graham, he learnt how to summon and raise a familiar (initially C--) before arriving at the TSAB. His familiar was summoned to address his lack of ranged attacks and also is the reason why he was a B- upon arrival.

Spoiler for Device and Barier Jacket:

Device: Armed device-Daedra. A double bladed battle axe with a pointed hilt between the blades (if there’s a lack of room he can thrust with it as well instead of swinging). 2 Forms are currently available for his device. The forms for his device also alter his BJ. The second device mode is aptly named berserker mode, the axe splits down the middle to from two one handed axes (essentially more damage but less armour).

In sealed mode, Daedra shrinks and hangs beneath the rank badges on his uniform.

Barrier Jacket: As noted before he’s heavily influences by the medieval period and as such his BJ reflects this. Since it’s an enforcer squad I’ve decided to try and keep a common uniform though.

Much like Chrono’s BJ in appearance however his armour is much tougher, including elbow high gauntlets, knee length cuirass, pauldrons and armoured boots similar to Fates. This is the standard BJ form to go with the first mode of his device. His BJ has a red and black colour scheme.

The second mode however involves a slight decrease in armour however with the cuirass shortening to waist length, the removal of the pauldrons as well as decreasing the armour value of his boots.

Spoiler for Spells:

Charge: Used to close ground to the enemy(~10m range). One useful function is the ability to charge in mid-air. This makes aerial insertion a favoured method getting to the battle as he normally gets the first strike. He can also charge to a specific location, making it an okay withdrawal tool.

Imbue blade: As noted, Isamu is unable to use powerful range attacks. This isn’t because he can’t gather the energy necessary for the attack; he is unable to form it outside his body. However he has learnt instead to channel this energy into Daedra to give his attacks a bigger punch. But the energy imparted to the blade only remains for a short period of time.

Flame Strike: (1 cartridge) Daedra is enveloped in flame. Due to the unique nature of imbue blade, both effects can be active simultaneously.

Purge: Isamu’s standard defence breaking attack. Becomes more effective with imbued blade and also cartridges.

Paralyse: Usually used after one of his offensive moves (Purge, ) Requires Imbued blade or 1 cartridge. Channels the energy in the blade into the target. Designed to overload the nerves temporarily to induce paralysis in the body. The use of paralyse with imbued blade and one loaded cartridge has paralysed his CO (AA) for 2 hours. Although a spell to capture, with enough cartridges, is capable of paralysing permanently or even kill.

Deflection: (1 cartridge) He’s capable of deflecting ranged attacks up to a B+ level to other targets. This ability needs Daedra to be imbued with energy to deflect B and greater level attacks. Deflection only works against attacks from one direction as at his current skill level, it only works when he is able to ‘hit’ the attack with ‘’.

Knight’s Armour: (1 cartridge) Combination defensive spell. Strengthens the protective field around the body while casting a barrier directly in front.

Fire’s Embrace: Round protective shield. In addition to a defensive tool, it is capable of hurting the attacker as well.

Tiger’s Eye: Sees’ the world through Iza’s eyes. Outside of combat, this now requires Iza’s permission as well after Isamu’s first test of the spell. The spell was activated while Iza was in the change rooms of the local athletics club. Isamu was discovered lying in a pool of blood, muttering about b***** when Iza returned home…..

Spoiler for Familiar: Iza:

Familiar: Iza BLADE 2 Private 1st class

Iza is Isamu’s familiar and was born on Earth a few months before Isamu joined the TSAB. She was created to help Isamu in the ranged department. Iza is a tiger familiar and quite similar in appearance to Lotte and Aria, due to their help in her summoning.
She is usually seen in cat form, perched on Isamu’s shoulder but she explored her surroundings in humanoid form as well. She loves to run and was a member of the local athletics association before joining the TSAB.

Cat Form: Iza’s preferred form, the least draining on Isamu. Spells are still cast able in this form but she normally shifts to her other forms.

Humanoid Form: Both a battle and out of combat form.

Tiger Form: (white + black stripes) Combat form.

Spell List:
Generic buster: B- in power. Similar to Subaru’s divine buster but has a longer range.
Generic Bind
Shields/Barriers.
(Tiger Form only for the next two spells)
Pounce: Just like charge, read the charge description.
Roar: RAWR! Good for distractions…

Spoiler for Picture of Iza:

Isamu is basically finished but the rest of his squad isn't. I thought up the squad and it's members fairly recently but details aren't going to be fleshed out until after exams..

More info about the squad below, (very likely to change as I think about it more)

Spoiler for Enforcer Unit 85 Squad 3 'Spellblades':

One of the many specialised enforcer squads within the TSAB, the Spellblades is a team of specialists in close combat, in particular storming fortifications (in other words, when you still want the building in one piece after the assault…). Although overall mage rank/power is low many of their opponents have been surprised by the melee abilities of the unit.

The Spellblades is a new unit and was established 8 months prior to the start of SrikerS. Isamu and Iza were it’s first members with Tuala joining 2 months after. Valivis is it’s newest recruit, and has been a blade for three months now.

Consists of:
Melee/Team Leader: Isamu(A)
Isamu's familiar: Iza (B)
Short/Mid Range Attack: Valivis (A-)
Support/Tactical Commander: Tuala (B+)

Whee super long post!
Hope you like it.

[Kha]

Erm... Did anyone notice that I posted a new char up there? The Headless Trooper...?

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

As much as he'd want to, he has Einsts to worry about.
If you don't mind, I intend him to be one of the main analysts of th new threat and have a bigger role this time. And hopefully, a snapshot in the OP.

Ah... Well I picked Kay over Aurion for that shot, but no fear! That was just one version. I'll be releasing another one soon, this time with different characters and ULTIMATE UNISON SHOUNIN! included.

Originally Posted by Liingo

Ugh, way too many posts in this thread....
I come back at the end of each day and there's another couple of pages.

Onward to my chracter then ( that's been in development for the last few weeks and still isn't really finished yet...)



I hear and obey.

I present to you Isamu, member of Enforcer unit 85 'Spellblades'

Isamu
21 years
172cm
68kg

TSAB Mage Rank (C- when discovered, now BB+) Belka Mage

Hair: Black
Eyes: Dark Brown

Personality: Quiet, well-mannered individual who tries unsuccessfully to stay out of trouble, but always seems to end up solving (dragged into) the problems of people he meets.

Spoiler for Background:

Background: A recent addition to the TSAB. He was scouted by Graham (ex-admiral) on Terra (97th non-administrated world) after helping to retrieve a stolen item for a villager in the English countryside. The methods he used were surprising indeed, using a low level energy attack to reclaim the stolen goods. Graham had been passing through on a business trip/holiday when Lotte detected a small magical reaction.

A student of medieval history before joining the TSAB, Isamu’s weapons and barrier jacket are modelled on the weapons and armour of the period. With no effective ranged attacks at all, Isamu has had to rely on his armour and also agility get close enough to attack. He studied magic under Lotte and Aria while completing his studies and was deemed proficient enough to be raised to a B- ranking. Also, under the guidance of Admiral Graham, he learnt how to summon and raise a familiar (initially C--) before arriving at the TSAB. His familiar was summoned to address his lack of ranged attacks and also is the reason why he was a B- upon arrival.

Spoiler for Device and Barier Jacket:

Device: Armed device-Daedra. A double bladed battle axe with a pointed hilt between the blades (if there’s a lack of room he can thrust with it as well instead of swinging). 2 Forms are currently available for his device. The forms for his device also alter his BJ. The second device mode is aptly named berserker mode, the axe splits down the middle to from two one handed axes (essentially more damage but less armour).

In sealed mode, Daedra shrinks and hangs beneath the rank badges on his uniform.

Barrier Jacket: As noted before he’s heavily influences by the medieval period and as such his BJ reflects this. Since it’s an enforcer squad I’ve decided to try and keep a common uniform though.

Much like Chrono’s BJ in appearance however his armour is much tougher, including elbow high gauntlets, knee length cuirass, pauldrons and armoured boots similar to Fates. This is standard BJ form to go with the first mode of his device.

The second mode however involves a slight decrease in armour however with the cuirass shortening to waist length, the removal of the pauldrons as well as decreasing the armour value of his boots.

Spoiler for Spells:

Charge: Used to close ground to the enemy(~10m range). One useful function is the ability to charge in mid-air. This makes aerial insertion a favoured method getting to the battle as he normally gets the first strike. He can also charge to a specific location, making it an okay withdrawal tool.

Imbue blade: As noted, Isamu is unable to use powerful range attacks. This isn’t because he can’t gather the energy necessary for the attack; he is unable to form it outside his body. However he has learnt instead to channel this energy into Daedra to give his attacks a bigger punch. But the energy imparted to the blade only remains for a short period of time.
Flame Strike: (1 cartridge) Daedra is enveloped in flame. Due to the unique nature of imbue blade, both effects can be active simultaneously.

Purge: Isamu’s standard defence breaking attack. Becomes more effective with imbued blade and also cartridges.

Paralyse: Usually used after one of his offensive moves (Purge, ) Requires Imbued blade or 1 cartridge. Channels the energy in the blade into the target. Designed to overload the nerves temporarily to induce paralysis in the body. The use of paralyse with imbued blade and one loaded cartridge has paralysed his CO (AA) for 2 hours. Although a spell to capture, with enough cartridges, is capable of paralysing permanently or even kill.

Deflection: (1 cartridge) He’s capable of deflecting ranged attacks up to a B+ level to other targets. This ability needs Daedra to be imbued with energy to deflect B and greater level attacks. Deflection only works against attacks from one direction as at his current skill level, it only works when he is able to ‘hit’ the attack with ‘’.

Knight’s Armour: (1 cartridge) Combination defensive spell. Strengthens the protective field around the body while casting a barrier directly in front.

Fire’s Embrace: Round protective shield. In addition to a defensive tool, it is capable of hurting the attacker as well.

Spoiler for Familiar:

Iza is Isamu’s familiar and was born on Earth. She was created to help Isamu in the ranged department. Iza is a tiger familiar and quite similar in appearance to Lotte and Aria, due to their help in her summoning.

Humanoid Form:
Generic buster: B- in power.
Generic Bind

Tiger Form: (white + black stripes)
Pounce: Just like charge, read the charge description.
Roar: RAWR! Good for distractions…

(Not finised yet obviously)

Isamu is basically finished but the rest of his squad isn't. I thought up the squad and it's members fairly recently but details aren't going to be fleshed out until after exams..

More info about the squad below, (very likely to change as I think about it more)

Spoiler for Enforcer Unit 85 'Spellblades':

One of the many specialised enforcer units within the TSAB, the Spellblades is a team of specialists in close combat, in particular storming fortifications (in other words, when you still want the building in one piece after the assault…). Although overall mage rank/power is low many of their opponents have been surprised by the melee abilities of the unit.

Consists of:
Team leader: Myristic (AA)
Melee: Isamu(BB+)/Iza(B-)
Short/Mid Range Attack: Valivis (BB)
Support: Tuala (B)

Whee super long post!
Hope you like it.

RARE SPAWN!!!

You call that long? You ain't seen nuthin. Its a great and simple char, and I like the Spellblade idea. Velka are perfect for storming buildings, given their close-combat specialization. And if you guys need grenades to clear rooms, I'm sure Kha'd gladly teach them how to use the "Siegel von Righteousness".

[Erio]

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

You forgot to add Pizza Hut.

That was intentional... because I knew you would bring it up.

Originally Posted by LoweGear

... The Kurono-kishi?

The third chapter of CrosyS.

After the Necrons and the Einsts were overwhelmed by the unholy amount of OCs dispatched by the TSAB, a new threat emerges. This time, it is but a single boy with a power never before seen or thought possible. And by his side stands a very cute girl.

"The union of Al Hazard. Has the legend begun yet again?"


"I've been lying constantly ever since that day... I'm living a lie..."

"My name is a lie... My background is a lie... They are all lies..."

"I'm disgusted with this world that refuses to change, but these lies make me feel so hopeless that I feel like giving up."

"However, I have attained it... Power..."

"That's why...!"


Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha CrosyS chapter three, hajimarimasu!

[Liingo]

Originally Posted by Kha

Erm... Did anyone notice that I posted a new char up there? The Headless Trooper...?

RARE SPAWN!!!

You call that long? You ain't seen nuthin. Its a great and simple char, and I like the Spellblade idea. Velka are perfect for storming buildings, given their close-combat specialization. And if you guys need grenades to clear rooms, I'm sure Kha'd gladly teach them how to use the "Siegel von Righteousness".

Headless trooper. where where!! Nevermind, just found it. At the rate your going Kha, we're going to need SSS mages to take down your OC's.. Looks interesting though

And yes that is long by my standards. I'm not aiming to kill everyone off with a wall of text.

Grenades are a great idea. I'll see is I can integrate it into my mid-ranged attacker later on. We'll have to tone down the power though, he probably won't be able to use it a full power

[Kha]

The Ghost that haunts the Legendary Logia Battleship Silvana is here.

Be afraid. Be very, very afraid...

Originally Posted by Liingo

Headless trooper. where where!!

And yes that is long by my standards. I'm not aiming to kill everyone off with a wall of text.

Grenades are a great idea. I'll see is I can integrate it into my mid-ranged attacker later on. We'll have to tone down the power though, he probably won't be able to use it a full power

Kha's not Vita. He knows what's called restraint (in fact, too much at times.)

[Nightengale]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

On that 00 jab: Wait till October. Then jab all you want

Says the guy with the San-To-Ryu Gundam ava.

Originally Posted by Erio

Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha CrosyS chapter three, hajimarimasu!

What? lol

((Awaken )) Mezame-yo... Chrono Trigger.

Then Chrono can travel back in time with his Trigger power, and change the future where he's NOT married to Amy!

@ Kha...as for Saga flipping...he's technically "in-coma" in duration when those copy-cats pop up. As for me though, I've already referenced like 30 things, why stop there? If it ain't broke, don't fix it.

As for Saga Part IV... I've decided that it's gonna be a short Idera/Signum side-story that also gives a bit of insight on Reinforce. Should be done within 24 hours. Now is sleep time, really.

[Aaron008R]

Originally Posted by Kha

Erm... Did anyone notice that I posted a new char up there? The Headless Trooper...?

Ah... Well I picked Kay over Aurion for that shot, but no fear! That was just one version. I'll be releasing another one soon, this time with different characters and ULTIMATE UNISON SHOUNIN! included.

Ah, no, no. I was only joking about the OP part. There's no need to involve an oji-chan who's not contributing much to the current arc.

Originally Posted by Erio

That was intentional... because I knew you would bring it up.

Don't tell me you've pulled a Lelouch and memorized our behavior and reply patterns.

The third chapter of CrosyS.

After the Necrons and the Einsts were overwhelmed by the unholy amount of OCs dispatched by the TSAB, a new threat emerges. This time, it is but a single boy with a power never before seen or thought possible. And by his side stands a very cute girl.

"The union of Al Hazard. Has the legend begun yet again?"


"I've been lying constantly ever since that day... I'm living a lie..."

"My name is a lie... My background is a lie... They are all lies..."

"I'm disgusted with this world that refuses to change, but these lies make me feel so hopeless that I feel like giving up."

"However, I have attained it... Power..."

"That's why...!"


Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha CrosyS chapter three, hajimarimasu!

I suddenly had the urge of inserting ***** Regisseur after all.

Originally Posted by Liingo

Ugh, way too many posts in this thread....
I come back at the end of each day and there's another couple of pages.

Onward to my chracter then ( that's been in development for the last few weeks and still isn't really finished yet...)



I hear and obey.

I present to you Isamu, member of Enforcer unit 85 'Spellblades'

Isamu
21 years
172cm
68kg

TSAB Mage Rank (C- when discovered, now BB+) Belka Mage

Hair: Black
Eyes: Dark Brown

Personality: Quiet, well-mannered individual who tries unsuccessfully to stay out of trouble, but always seems to end up solving (dragged into) the problems of people he meets.

Spoiler for Background:

Background: A recent addition to the TSAB. He was scouted by Graham (ex-admiral) on Terra (97th non-administrated world) after helping to retrieve a stolen item for a villager in the English countryside. The methods he used were surprising indeed, using a low level energy attack to reclaim the stolen goods. Graham had been passing through on a business trip/holiday when Lotte detected a small magical reaction.

A student of medieval history before joining the TSAB, Isamu’s weapons and barrier jacket are modelled on the weapons and armour of the period. With no effective ranged attacks at all, Isamu has had to rely on his armour and also agility get close enough to attack. He studied magic under Lotte and Aria while completing his studies and was deemed proficient enough to be raised to a B- ranking. Also, under the guidance of Admiral Graham, he learnt how to summon and raise a familiar (initially C--) before arriving at the TSAB. His familiar was summoned to address his lack of ranged attacks and also is the reason why he was a B- upon arrival.

Spoiler for Device and Barier Jacket:

Device: Armed device-Daedra. A double bladed battle axe with a pointed hilt between the blades (if there’s a lack of room he can thrust with it as well instead of swinging). 2 Forms are currently available for his device. The forms for his device also alter his BJ. The second device mode is aptly named berserker mode, the axe splits down the middle to from two one handed axes (essentially more damage but less armour).

In sealed mode, Daedra shrinks and hangs beneath the rank badges on his uniform.

Barrier Jacket: As noted before he’s heavily influences by the medieval period and as such his BJ reflects this. Since it’s an enforcer squad I’ve decided to try and keep a common uniform though.

Much like Chrono’s BJ in appearance however his armour is much tougher, including elbow high gauntlets, knee length cuirass, pauldrons and armoured boots similar to Fates. This is standard BJ form to go with the first mode of his device.

The second mode however involves a slight decrease in armour however with the cuirass shortening to waist length, the removal of the pauldrons as well as decreasing the armour value of his boots.

Spoiler for Spells:

Charge: Used to close ground to the enemy(~10m range). One useful function is the ability to charge in mid-air. This makes aerial insertion a favoured method getting to the battle as he normally gets the first strike. He can also charge to a specific location, making it an okay withdrawal tool.

Imbue blade: As noted, Isamu is unable to use powerful range attacks. This isn’t because he can’t gather the energy necessary for the attack; he is unable to form it outside his body. However he has learnt instead to channel this energy into Daedra to give his attacks a bigger punch. But the energy imparted to the blade only remains for a short period of time.
Flame Strike: (1 cartridge) Daedra is enveloped in flame. Due to the unique nature of imbue blade, both effects can be active simultaneously.

Purge: Isamu’s standard defence breaking attack. Becomes more effective with imbued blade and also cartridges.

Paralyse: Usually used after one of his offensive moves (Purge, ) Requires Imbued blade or 1 cartridge. Channels the energy in the blade into the target. Designed to overload the nerves temporarily to induce paralysis in the body. The use of paralyse with imbued blade and one loaded cartridge has paralysed his CO (AA) for 2 hours. Although a spell to capture, with enough cartridges, is capable of paralysing permanently or even kill.

Deflection: (1 cartridge) He’s capable of deflecting ranged attacks up to a B+ level to other targets. This ability needs Daedra to be imbued with energy to deflect B and greater level attacks. Deflection only works against attacks from one direction as at his current skill level, it only works when he is able to ‘hit’ the attack with ‘’.

Knight’s Armour: (1 cartridge) Combination defensive spell. Strengthens the protective field around the body while casting a barrier directly in front.

Fire’s Embrace: Round protective shield. In addition to a defensive tool, it is capable of hurting the attacker as well.

Spoiler for Familiar:

Iza is Isamu’s familiar and was born on Earth. She was created to help Isamu in the ranged department. Iza is a tiger familiar and quite similar in appearance to Lotte and Aria, due to their help in her summoning.

Humanoid Form:
Generic buster: B- in power.
Generic Bind

Tiger Form: (white + black stripes)
Pounce: Just like charge, read the charge description.
Roar: RAWR! Good for distractions…

(Not finised yet obviously)

Isamu is basically finished but the rest of his squad isn't. I thought up the squad and it's members fairly recently but details aren't going to be fleshed out until after exams..

More info about the squad below, (very likely to change as I think about it more)

Spoiler for Enforcer Unit 85 'Spellblades':

One of the many specialised enforcer units within the TSAB, the Spellblades is a team of specialists in close combat, in particular storming fortifications (in other words, when you still want the building in one piece after the assault…). Although overall mage rank/power is low many of their opponents have been surprised by the melee abilities of the unit.

Consists of:
Team leader: Myristic (AA)
Melee: Isamu(BB+)/Iza(B-)
Short/Mid Range Attack: Valivis (BB)
Support: Tuala (B)

Whee super long post!
Hope you like it.

I like it. Your concept is quite unique since it follows a medieval knight motif.

[Meophist]

Originally Posted by Erio

Say, how does Threshold "infect" her opponents? By physical contact? (Gotta think of a way to fight them )

Nice idea! They sure could turn the tides of any battle.

Threshold casts a spell that's rather quick to cast and done from a distance. If she sees you, she's likely to get you with the spell in short order.

Originally Posted by Kha

One word: OWWWWW!!! That was pretty much my limit. Seems like they fight using psionics as well, being able to share their pain. Hmm... A random encounter with them is in order.

Actually, they don't. They just happen to be very good at inflicting pain upon thier opponents.

I'm glad you guys like my villians. I was actually trying to make them as weak as possible while still making them formidable. Alone, both are quite defeatable. Together, it's much tougher.

[Keroko]

Originally Posted by Meophist

I'm glad you guys like my villians. I was actually trying to make them as weak as possible while still making them formidable. Alone, both are quite defeatable. Together, it's much tougher.

Just like most of the good guys normally are, only evil. That does make it rather hard.

[Fuyu no Sora]

Jeez, sure it's lively here huh? Backlog is killing me @@.

@Everyone: Thanks for the comments . Yeah, finally the whole Blue Flame is finished so now my next projects are:

1) Finish the explanation on Cass's Tranformation Mode, which I'm working on right now.
2) To give exact descriptions on their Barrier Jackets and Knight Armors.
3)Create their weapon's history.
4) Make a mini-fic of sorts to describe the mission they're currently in.

So this means I'll be very busy during exams

@tshouryuu: I know I'm a bit late, but welcome ^^

@dkellis: OO! Hiro Nakamura actually exists? Darn! I didn't know.

@Kha: I'm working on that, so give me time! I managed to finish two charas in 24 hours so give me a little bit of a break . For now, you can play with them as they are (Reasonably of course. If not, someone will pay you a surprise visit ).

@Lowe: Curiously enough, I'm working on an Additional Information section that contains: Team dynamics, Combined Techs, Behaviour with each other, the links they share with other teams, etc etc. I've got some hidden Combined Techs in store, so expect some of them in a while

@Aaron: Thanks ^^. I'm going to make a small fic on the mission they've recently been assigned to and it will contain some battle scenes as well .

[Ratler]

Sorry that I have not been active for the last few days ive been kinda out of it due to a car accident. But I am coming back slowly

WOW there have been a lot of new character posted ok um *sigh* well I have read them and I loved them all. though I don't think I posted on them all ^^


@Meophist Very cool ideas with Threshold and Pain, I love the scythe!

@Nightengale Part three was Awesome!!

@Mulitiple people all this talk of pizza is making me hungry LOL

@Kha “Headless on the outside, brainy on the inside!” that line made me Laugh when i read it. Nice work

@Liingo don't worry about him not being complete ^^ one way that i think on my character is He is never complete until the day he "Retires". For there will always be something new in his life to be worth witting about^^ Great character!! A familiar? wow I might be of but i think that is only the second one in this thread (Cass's Kali was first) <I might be wrong if so please correct me>

@tshouryuu Welcome ^^ I know your pain when i first got here I got so lost and confused, but I am sure you will survive the accursed Backlogs and become a active member of the odd little comunity^^

Originally Posted by LoweGear

"As I see it sir... it's yours anyway".



I'll try doing Staff form next, which'll be easier since I'll be using the Blitz form as a template. And I might even do Clyuno mode as well, although that one will take a while

Thank you ^^

Wow ... I don't think I know the words to properly thank you for this.



Well because I fell i must do something here i will post chapter1 of my "secret" project.

Now before i do I feel I must give a bit of a disclaimer;
1) this is the story of what came to mind when Fuyu asked

Originally Posted by Fuyu no Sora

Interesting, although now you need to think up a good incident that will force him to use the Ancient Belka magic.

2) this was written in one sitting so it is kinda rough due to lack of revision.
3) this is not currently intended for any form of Sound Stage or combined Fic use. for now it is more like a nightmare.
4) Military ranks may be off if so please forgive me ^^
5) general I'm sorry for any mistakes ^^
6) this was written before the team had names^^ Please try and guess who is who^^

there names are in no particular order; Daniel, Aoi, and Ken(currently being renamed, and Treu <the last member>)

Spoiler for I hope you like it comments welome ^^:

Spoiler for the cause Chapter 1:

EDIT: bold speakers name.
EDIT#2: adding spaces and page breaks
PERSONAL LOG Alexander I.

The Day My World Stood Still

Alex was eating lunch with his squad when all of a sudden a class 1 communication window opened in front of him.
Alex: Hu.. what’s this? *begins reading *
Squad member 1: Hay Alex, what’s that?
Squad member 2: It’s a class 1.. What’s going on Alex.
*Alex is oddly quiet*
Squad member 3: Alex??
Alex: I have to go, NOW! *Alex quickly gets up and starts heading toward the exit*
Squad member 1: Something’s up, did you see the look on his face?
Squad member 4: Ya he was pale. Something must be seriously wrong. I’ve never seen him look like that.
Alex: <Azura, Setsuna! I need you now.>
{May 6, xxxx> All communication lost with the “Nadia” last transition leads TSAB officials to believe it was caught in a surprise attack. Information labeled as Classified, leaked to Alex by unknown source.}
*outside of the mess hall, Alex breaks into a dead run*
Alex: Ryu Set UP! Clyuno mode!
Ryu: Yes Sir.
Ryu: What’s going on Sir?
Alex: something’s happened to the “Nadia”, they have lost contact with it.
Ryu: Isn’t Ms. Cassandra on board that ship Sir?
Alex: Yes, yes she is. That is why I need you. I want you to access ALL of the information there is on what is going on. Where that ship was heading , what there mission was, where they were last herd from EVERYTHING, and I don’t care if I have the clearance for it, I want it all.
Ryu: Sir there is more that you are not telling me isn’t there.
Alex: Yes, They higher ups think it was an attack. That is why I need that information, and I meant it I don’t care if I have clearance or not if you have to use brute force entry methods to get it, then so be it.
Ryu: But Sir isn’t that against regulations?
Alex: Yes it is, but right now I don’t care??
Ryu: Yes Sir! … Permission to speak freely Sir?
Alex: Yes of course Ryu.
Ryu: She’ll be ok Sir, I’m sure of it.
Alex: Thanks Ryu.

*Azura and Setsuna arrive, meeting up with Alex as he runs to central command.*

Azura and Setsuna: You called for us Miester?
*without even answering them Alex begins*
Alex: Guardians of the sky and snow, Azura, Setsuna SET UP! *Unison Mode activated*
*Alex continues running down the hall towards command central; he explains what has happened to Azura and Setsuna on the way. *
Ryu: Barrier Jacket Set Up, Uniform mode.
Azura: A barrier jacket? You have never used one of those before. When did you program this? *feels a little useless because she usually set’s up Alex’s Armor*
Alex: About a month ago, I figured it would be useful, for moving around command, it really has no defensive capabilities if just lets me use movement magic safely without standing out to much. But I would never dream of take this into battle, for any combat whatsoever I would need my Armor ^^
Setsuna: I see, but can’t you get in trouble for all of this? Having a barrier jacket set up within the main building, having a device deployed for no apparent reason, well at least you not actuality using magi…
Ryu: Sonic Move. *used to get past a group of people around the corner*
Setsuna: never mind you just did.
Azura: Please calm down Miester, I know you are concerned but…
Setsuna: You wont be able to help find her if you are locked up in the detention facility due to reckless behavior.
Alex: I know girls, but right now I don’t care.
Ryu: I would feel sorry for the person that tried to stand in Master Alex’s way right now.

*Alex reaches the door to command central.*

Ryu: Sir, I have the information you requested.
Alex: Thank you Ryu, show me.
*Ryu begins displaying all of the information he has gathered.”
Ryu: Sir I thought you would want to know I was traced, they know it was me. And I think the trace came from command central, I do not think they will be very happy so see us.
Alex: It’s ok Ryu you are not at fault I am the one who ordered the search.
*Alex opens the door to command central.*
Major Stevenson: ALEX what the HELL do you think you are DOING! You had better have… *is interrupted by Alex*
Alex: *Looking directly at Major Stevenson* Give me a Ship.
Major Stevenson: WHAT!! First you go and hack into our main database and steal classified information, now you are demanding a SHIP. Just who the hell do you think you are?
Alex: I am Lieutenant Alexander IVANOV! And right now my WIFE’S ship is MIA. And I’ll be Damned if you think I am just going to sit here and pray that she is ok, and not do a thing to ensure her safety.
*long silent pause*
Major Stevenson: *Sigh* look Alex I know you are worried about Cass but I can’t just give you a Ship, even if I wanted to there are none in port right now, and…
Unknown voice: The patrol ship “Asura” should arrive in port in about 8 minutes.
Major Stevenson: Who the He…*turns around*!! *cough* Commander Yagami!! Pardon my behaviors I was not aware it was you.
Hayate: Alex, I have already contacted Chrono, he has agreed to help.
Alex: *shocked at what just happened* Thank you Ma’am.
Hayate: Well you had better get going you don’t want to make Chrono wait.
Alex: YES MA”AM! Ryu!
Hayate: But don’t use ma..
Ryu: Teleportation.
Hayate: … well never mind I guess.

I hope you liked it and I look forward to your comments ^^

[Fuyu no Sora]

Originally Posted by Ratler

Well because I fell i must do something here i will post chapter1 of my "secret" project.

Now before i do I feel I must give a bit of a disclaimer;
1) this is the story of what came to mind when Fuyu asked

2) this was written in one sitting so it is kinda rough due to lack of revision.
3) this is not currently intended for any form of Sound Stage or combined Fic use. for now it is more like a nightmare.
4) Military ranks may be off if so please forgive me ^^
5) general I'm sorry for any mistakes ^^
6) this was written before the team had names^^ Please try and guess who is who^^

there names are Daniel, Aoi, and Ken(currently being renamed, and Treu <the last member>)

Spoiler for I hope you like it comments welome ^^:

Spoiler for the cause Chapter 1:

EDIT: bold speakers name.

PERSONAL LOG Alexander I.

The Day My World Stood Still

Alex was eating lunch with his squad when all of a sudden a class 1 communication window opened in front of him.
Alex: Hu.. what’s this? *begins reading *
Squad member 1: Hay Alex, what’s that?
Squad member 2: It’s a class 1.. What’s going on Alex.
*Alex is oddly quiet*
Squad member 3: Alex??
Alex: I have to go, NOW! *Alex quickly gets up and starts heading toward the exit*
Squad member 1: Something’s up, did you see the look on his face?
Squad member 4: Ya he was pale. Something must be seriously wrong. I’ve never seen him look like that.
Alex: <Azura, Setsuna! I need you now.>
{May 6, xxxx> All communication lost with the “Nadia” last transition leads TSAB officials to believe it was caught in a surprise attack. Information labeled as Classified, leaked to Alex by unknown source.}
*outside of the mess hall, Alex breaks into a dead run*
Alex: Ryu Set UP! Clyuno mode!
Ryu: Yes Sir.
Ryu: What’s going on Sir?
Alex: something’s happened to the “Nadia”, they have lost contact with it.
Ryu: Isn’t Ms. Cassandra on board that ship Sir?
Alex: Yes, yes she is. That is why I need you. I want you to access ALL of the information there is on what is going on. Where that ship was heading , what there mission was, where they were last herd from EVERYTHING, and I don’t care if I have the clearance for it, I want it all.
Ryu: Sir there is more that you are not telling me isn’t there.
Alex: Yes, They higher ups think it was an attack. That is why I need that information, and I meant it I don’t care if I have clearance or not if you have to use brute force entry methods to get it, then so be it.
Ryu: But Sir isn’t that against regulations?
Alex: Yes it is, but right now I don’t care??
Ryu: Yes Sir! … Permission to speak freely Sir?
Alex: Yes of course Ryu.
Ryu: She’ll be ok Sir, I’m sure of it.
Alex: Thanks Ryu.
*Azura and Setsuna arrive, meeting up with Alex as he runs to central command.*
Azura and Setsuna: You called for us Miester?
*without even answering them Alex begins*
Alex: Guardians of the sky and snow, Azura, Setsuna SET UP! *Unison Mode activated*
*Alex continues running down the hall towards command central; he explains what has happened to Azura and Setsuna on the way. *
Ryu: Barrier Jacket Set Up, Uniform mode.
Azura: A barrier jacket? You have never used one of those before. When did you program this? *feels a little useless because she usually set’s up Alex’s Armor*
Alex: About a month ago, I figured it would be useful, for moving around command, it really has no defensive capabilities if just lets me use movement magic safely without standing out to much. But I would never dream of take this into battle, for any combat whatsoever I would need my Armor ^^
Setsuna: I see, but can’t you get in trouble for all of this? Having a barrier jacket set up within the main building, having a device deployed for no apparent reason, well at least you not actuality using magi…
Ryu: Sonic Move. *used to get past a group of people around the corner*
Setsuna: never mind you just did.
Azura: Please calm down Miester, I know you are concerned but…
Setsuna: You wont be able to help find her if you are locked up in the detention facility due to reckless behavior.
Alex: I know girls, but right now I don’t care.
Ryu: I would feel sorry for the person that tried to stand in Master Alex’s way right now.
*Alex reaches the door to command central.*
Ryu: Sir, I have the information you requested.
Alex: Thank you Ryu, show me.
*Ryu begins displaying all of the information he has gathered.”
Ryu: Sir I thought you would want to know I was traced, they know it was me. And I think the trace came from command central, I do not think they will be very happy so see us.
Alex: It’s ok Ryu you are not at fault I am the one who ordered the search.
*Alex opens the door to command central.*
Major Stevenson: ALEX what the HELL do you think you are DOING! You had better have… *is interrupted by Alex*
Alex: *Looking directly at Major Stevenson* Give me a Ship.
Major Stevenson: WHAT!! First you go and hack into our main database and steal classified information, now you are demanding a SHIP. Just who the hell do you think you are?
Alex: I am Lieutenant Alexander IVANOV! And right now my WIFE’S ship is MIA. And I’ll be Damned if you think I am just going to sit here and pray that she is ok, and not do a thing to ensure her safety.
*long silent pause*
Major Stevenson: *Sigh* look Alex I know you are worried about Cass but I can’t just give you a Ship, even if I wanted to there are none in port right now, and…
Unknown voice: The patrol ship “Asura” should arrive in port in about 8 minutes.
Major Stevenson: Who the He…*turns around*!! *cough* Commander Yagami!! Pardon my behaviors I was not aware it was you.
Hayate: Alex, I have already contacted Chrono, he has agreed to help.
Alex: *shocked at what just happened* Thank you Ma’am.
Hayate: Well you had better get going you don’t want to make Chrono wait.
Alex: YES MA”AM! Ryu!
Hayate: But don’t use ma..
Ryu: Teleportation.
Hayate: … well never mind I guess.

I hope you liked it and I look forward to your comments ^^

Oh my. I really don't know what to say except: Its great! Really nice and pretty well done. As you mentioned, there may be a few mistakes, but overall, its really great. Keep going, this is interesting!

EDIT: Forgot to mention: I think Chrono's new ship is called "Claudia". Correct me if I'm wrong.