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Twi · 2016-01-21, 15:40

I feel bad for Yuuno... and Arf... and Chrono. They all but disappear. Thus, I write.

Akiyoshi · 2016-01-21, 19:31

With Veyron all but confirmed for being set up with Rosalia as the Tohma/Lily counterpsrt i think is pretty sure there were plans for Tohma to do something big. I still keep my fingers crossed for the hiatus to be lifted on the Nanoha Chronicles manga finishes.

Gx Hero · 2016-01-22, 16:55

I was wondering where can I download that I only have chapter 1.

Also I just meant THoma needed more screen time because it felt like Nanoha and co were taking over, you know what I mean.

Also yeah male cast tend to disappear a lot now a days, if they ever existed at all.

I feel that Thoma needs a male mentor and friend. Veyron seems like a guy that Thoma will connect with in friendship.

I think a Thoma x einheart fanfiction may be a good idea. Thoma living with the nakajama's and instead of vivio Thoma is trying to help einheart through. Add the huklebein in somehow.

Twi · 2016-03-01, 21:12

Power Games updated again. I'm going to go sit in a corner and cry now.

Spoiler for Reasons for sorrow:

SRW-Otaku · 2016-05-29, 03:38

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/1194749...Wars-INNONCENT
Is there still room for INNOCENT x SRW in here?

Twi · 2016-05-31, 18:56

Power Games has updated: https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/posts/6161551/

vic-vic · 2016-06-14, 04:50

The Epilogue of the Power Games was posted.

Twi · 2016-06-14, 20:35

It's a trap.

DKN117 · 2016-06-20, 11:43

Remember that snippet a few months back with Teana turning out to be pregnant? The one that the author said isn't really gonna go anywhere? Well, in my free time for thinking about nothing in particular, I kinda came up with an outline of how it could be made into a proper fic (though I can't write it; I have other projects going and I doubt my ability to really pull it off).

Spoiler for Spoilered for size:

BASIC/BACKGROUND DETAILS:

Teana does not want to have kids. Ever. In her words, "the Lanstar bloodline ends with me". This decision has numerous reasons behind it: she is afraid of the numerous life changes having a child would necessitate, and of the physical changes that pregnancy and motherhood would bring; she believes becoming a mother would jeopardize her dream of becoming an elite Enforcer; she has no living family and no significant ‘support structure’ (in this, at least, she is dead-wrong; she has the entirety of the Takamachi (Nanoha, Fate, & Vivio), Harlaown (includes Erio & Caro), Yagami, and Nakajima families all willing to back her up if she ever needs anything support-wise); she thinks that she just plain wouldn’t make a good mother due to her personality, capabilities, etc… She also wants to keep this desire a secret, since she anticipates the response would invariably be “Oh, you’re way too young to stick to that kinda decision, sweetie; you’re not even 20 yet! Just give it a few years and you’ll change your mind”, even though her mind really is made up on it.

Recently, a very controversial new law (will probably get struck down within a few months… or maybe not) was passed to address issues of slowly falling (due to injury/illness or just old-age retirement) numbers of high-ranking, high-power mages: the controversial law forbids abortions (barring medically-recognized-to-be nonviable pregnancies or cases where the mother’s life is in danger) for female mages of A-rank or higher. Needless to say many people are… upset… about this.

Teana is in a relationship with Subaru, and they are very, very happy together. Though, Subaru occasionally has to help her girlfriend through her low-self-esteem/worth moments…. Anyway, one of the few things they use to further their enjoyment of each other (bow-chicka-bow-wow) is a spell that temporarily/reversibly gives the female caster a, uh, certain ‘extra part’. Now, the basic variant of this spell cannot impregnate; there is an advanced variant that can do so, but it’s very different magical-structure wise, is much harder to cast, and CANNOT be cast on accident. Subaru & Teana don’t use that variant, needless to say…

STORY (OUTLINE):

The story starts as the original snippet, with Teana being inexplicably under the weather and being taken to the doctor for a checkup, and Shamal revealing that she is in fact pregnant. …The cheer and smile on Shamal’s face drops away as Teana proceeds to FREAK THE HELL OUT. Between her mind racing through all the above-mentioned reasons she never wants to be a mother, and knowledge of the law still in place, the shock and panic and terror are so bad it sends her into an actual panic attack. As Shamal goes into ‘Trauma Mode’ and works to keep the girl from hyperventilating or working herself up into a heart attack, Nanoha & Fate, who are visiting this place because [reasons], happen to walk by and come across the scene. They’ve both become rather attached to Teana by now, with Nanoha especially considering and caring for her like a ‘precious little sister’. They hug and try to comfort her, and as Shamal simply answers what happened with “unplanned pregnancy”, Teana starts trembling and sobbing in Nanoha’s arms, sad and panicking and terrified and just plain overwhelmed…

How could this happen? Teana and Subaru use the ‘basic’ variant of “that spell”, the one that cannot impregnate; they don’t even know how to use the ‘advanced’ variant that can induce pregnancy. A bit of cyber-investigation uncovers the shocking truth: someone, a third party, hacked the spell as Subaru was casting it on herself one time, switching it to the advanced variant without her or Teana knowing. Throughout part of the story, investigation steadily uncovers the culprit: a medium-high ranking official in the Bureau military (an OC), and what’s more he’s one of the people who insulted and demeaned Tiida after his death, now feels that Teana is just as worthless because of who she is and who she’s related to, and “at least now she can provide something useful to the Bureau”. …Unfortunately for him, Nanoha is the one who uncovers this and confronts him personally, including setting off his horrifically insensitive motive rant. He awakens the wrath of the White Devil in full Mama-Bear Mode. By the time she’s through with him, it’s possible he’ll never even walk again, much less use magic. The scandal is released to the rest of the Bureau, but unfortunately the law won’t be repealed in time before Teana reaches a point of her pregnancy where aborting the fetus would be dangerous/immoral/whatever.

Meanwhile (at this point my idea for the story becomes fuzzy and undefined), we get several days/weeks/months’ worth of scenes of Teana depressed, scared, etc., constantly going over all the things she’s worried/afraid about – the threat to her dream-career, the incoming physical and lifestyle changes, not believing herself ‘worthy’ to be a mother and thinking that she’ll be a horrible mom, having no living family to support her, worries about stigma against the Lanstar name following whatever child she’ll have in life… However, Subaru sticks by her always, giving her loads of love and patient support whenever she’s scared or crying, letting her know she loves her and will be by her side; meanwhile, everyone else also makes it clear they’re going to support Teana every step of the way, every way they can –Lindy and Amy ready to help guide and support her through pregnancy’s troubles and effects and with the ensuing child, all the Nakajima sisters promising their support and aid, Hayate and the Wolkenritter pitching in to help as well (including Signum and Vita having to break Teana of the thought they didn’t really care about her, ‘thanks’ to their tough training and purposely-distant attitudes during the days of RF6), even Erio & Caro & little Vivio doing whatever they can to help… And of course, Nanoha ready and willing to help her surrogate little sister as much as she needs and then some.

Details leading up to the birth and immediate aftermath are fuzzy; I haven’t thought of anything.

EPILOGUE:

Flash-forward several [can’t decide how many] years… At elementary school, there is a special day where kids get to explain things about their parents; some parents show up to help/participate, though not all. In particular, one girl’s parents are busy at work, so they can’t come. She’s [five/seven/10] years old, and – without naming names – explains the trials and fear that her mama went through, to the sympathy of the listening mothers. Before she can move on to “what happened after I was born”, though, the bell rings; school is done for the day. Within a few minutes, it’s made known that the girl’s mama has come to pick her up, to her joy.

The families watch/follow as the little girl happily runs out to her waiting mama… and they all feel significant shock as the child is scooped up and hugged by none other than Teana Lanstar – the Red Ace of the Bureau, elite Enforcer, S-rank mage, a staggeringly impressive Combat Service Record, as famous as Nanoha Takamachi herself, the kind of ‘hero’ of the Bureau that kids and raw recruits ask for autographs. The young girl is happy to hear from her ‘Tia-mama’ that they’ll be having her favorite meal this evening… “as long as Subaru-mama doesn’t cook” (she’s… less-than-adept in the kitchen). The girl waves goodbye to her friends as she takes her leave, hand in hand with her strong, successful, and happy mama…

Well, what do you think? Anyone wanna tackle it?

Rising Dragon · 2016-06-20, 13:12

That was me. I'd just like to say, I never said it wasn't gonna go anywhere--I said that it's based on a fic I still have in development and is nowhere near ready to be written.

RDNexus · 2016-10-23, 02:58

Excuse me for asking here but are there any other organizations (outside Nanoverse) like TSAB?

Rising Dragon · 2016-10-23, 03:06

There's various big-name business companies, such as Caledfwlch Techniques and the Vandein Corporation. Also the Saint Church, which, while allied with the TSAB, is its own organization governing a region on Mid-childa.

RDNexus · 2016-10-23, 03:32

I asked outside Nanoverse, like in other fictional stories and the likes.
Interdimensional Police/Administration organizations, so to say.

Arcc · 2016-10-23, 18:18

Quote:

Originally Posted by xrick

I asked outside Nanoverse, like in other fictional stories and the likes.
Interdimensional Police/Administration organizations, so to say.

Star Trek's United Federation of Planets has a "Temporal Investigations" division in the 24th century, tasked with preventing time travel-related accidents from damaging the timeline. By the 29th century they have apparently become the "Temporal Integrity Commission," a major enforcement agency equipped with time-traveling starships, like this one:

I personally suspect that the latter organization was in part a reference to the 1994 Jean-Claude Van Damme action flick TimeCop, which featured the protagonist as a member of the "Time Enforcement Commission."

I understand that this post may be a bit too off-topic. If the moderators prefer it, I can commit further discussion to private messages.

RDNexus · 2016-10-23, 18:20

But those are only time-related, right?

Arcc · 2016-10-23, 18:26

Meddling with time tends to create splinter realities and alternate sequences of events, depending on how you view the space time continuum. In most science fiction, interdimensional and temporal affairs are somewhat intertwined. I always assumed it fell within in the TSAB's wheelhouse as well, given their name.

RDNexus · 2016-10-23, 18:56

Well, in Nanoverse's case, it seems TSAB deals more with spatial than temporal matters, since they manage many planets of (what seems) different dimensions.

Rising Dragon · 2016-10-23, 19:10

TSAB's name seems to more accurately translate as the Dimensional Administration Bureau, so yeah.

RDNexus · 2016-10-23, 19:18

Hence me asking if there were other organizations like TSAB in fiction.

TwoZeroTwo · 2016-10-23, 21:18

Hey all, a couple years ago I wrote two stories in the Nanoha universe but with a high amount of original material, both characters and locations - Raze the Stray and its sequel, Raise the Dawn. In the shortest possible description, RtS introduced the main characters and dealt with events set on another administrated planet, and RtD focused on the fallout from those events on Midchilda and an extreme clash of ideologies between members of both planets. Once I finished those up, I didn't have any more to write after that...until now. Yeah, recently I started pulling a bunch of the ideas for another sequel together and now I have the first couple chapters out for my next story, Times of Grace.

It's set a couple years after the other two (same year as Sound Stage X was) on a new planet where the core set of OCs started anew after the last two stories. There, they may get their own chance to save others in the same way they had been saved before. Yes, I believe this story will be all or mostly original material - the canon characters would be either too 'big' for the scale of the plot or too shoehorned-in in my eyes to get them in here. I have a sort-of long author note before the story basically just saying that though this story is the 3rd in the series, I'm writing it so you aren't required to read the previous two to be ready for this. I have put up the first two chapters on fanfiction.net - Chapter 1 and Chapter 2. I've posted solely on ffnet before but I guess I can post other places as well if it seems people want that.

And yes, I know there might not be a huge crowd for this, but hey, it's a new Nanoha-universe story in late 2016 that should update at a decent pace. Hope you guys enjoy.

2016-01-21, 15:40	Link #38701
Twi Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	I feel bad for Yuuno... and Arf... and Chrono. They all but disappear. Thus, I write. __________________

2016-01-21, 19:31	Link #38702
Akiyoshi The Flame Crussader Join Date: Aug 2009	With Veyron all but confirmed for being set up with Rosalia as the Tohma/Lily counterpsrt i think is pretty sure there were plans for Tohma to do something big. I still keep my fingers crossed for the hiatus to be lifted on the Nanoha Chronicles manga finishes. __________________ May 29 2010-2019 ...9 years ago, the day after never would be the same ~The ASFB~

2016-01-22, 16:55	Link #38703
Gx Hero Rambler Join Date: Jul 2013	I was wondering where can I download that I only have chapter 1. Also I just meant THoma needed more screen time because it felt like Nanoha and co were taking over, you know what I mean. Also yeah male cast tend to disappear a lot now a days, if they ever existed at all. I feel that Thoma needs a male mentor and friend. Veyron seems like a guy that Thoma will connect with in friendship. I think a Thoma x einheart fanfiction may be a good idea. Thoma living with the nakajama's and instead of vivio Thoma is trying to help einheart through. Add the huklebein in somehow. __________________ My site full of Nanoha goodies, manga and fanfiction downloads and links http://nanohamanga.webs.com/ Links to other Nanoha stories on animesuki http://www.mediafire.com/view/yp9qlj...e%20links.docx Last edited by Gx Hero; 2016-01-22 at 17:40.

2016-03-01, 21:12	Link #38704
Twi Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Power Games updated again. I'm going to go sit in a corner and cry now. Spoiler for Reasons for sorrow: Aleph killed Linith. And the Cloud Knights. __________________

2016-05-29, 03:38	Link #38705
SRW-Otaku The Corniest Mecha Fanboy Join Date: Jun 2015 Location: SRX's Tronium Engine	https://www.fanfiction.net/s/1194749...Wars-INNONCENT Is there still room for INNOCENT x SRW in here? __________________ The thing that formed my childhood...

2016-05-31, 18:56	Link #38706
Twi Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Power Games has updated: https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/posts/6161551/ __________________

2016-06-14, 04:50	Link #38707
vic-vic Senior Member Join Date: May 2010 Location: forge-world Moscow 1 Age: 37	The Epilogue of the Power Games was posted.

2016-06-14, 20:35	Link #38708
Twi Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	It's a trap. __________________

2016-06-20, 11:43	Link #38709
DKN117 Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Whittier, Southern CA Age: 34	Remember that snippet a few months back with Teana turning out to be pregnant? The one that the author said isn't really gonna go anywhere? Well, in my free time for thinking about nothing in particular, I kinda came up with an outline of how it could be made into a proper fic (though I can't write it; I have other projects going and I doubt my ability to really pull it off). Spoiler for Spoilered for size: BASIC/BACKGROUND DETAILS: Teana does not want to have kids. Ever. In her words, "the Lanstar bloodline ends with me". This decision has numerous reasons behind it: she is afraid of the numerous life changes having a child would necessitate, and of the physical changes that pregnancy and motherhood would bring; she believes becoming a mother would jeopardize her dream of becoming an elite Enforcer; she has no living family and no significant ‘support structure’ (in this, at least, she is dead-wrong; she has the entirety of the Takamachi (Nanoha, Fate, & Vivio), Harlaown (includes Erio & Caro), Yagami, and Nakajima families all willing to back her up if she ever needs anything support-wise); she thinks that she just plain wouldn’t make a good mother due to her personality, capabilities, etc… She also wants to keep this desire a secret, since she anticipates the response would invariably be “Oh, you’re way too young to stick to that kinda decision, sweetie; you’re not even 20 yet! Just give it a few years and you’ll change your mind”, even though her mind really is made up on it. Recently, a very controversial new law (will probably get struck down within a few months… or maybe not) was passed to address issues of slowly falling (due to injury/illness or just old-age retirement) numbers of high-ranking, high-power mages: the controversial law forbids abortions (barring medically-recognized-to-be nonviable pregnancies or cases where the mother’s life is in danger) for female mages of A-rank or higher. Needless to say many people are… upset… about this. Teana is in a relationship with Subaru, and they are very, very happy together. Though, Subaru occasionally has to help her girlfriend through her low-self-esteem/worth moments…. Anyway, one of the few things they use to further their enjoyment of each other (bow-chicka-bow-wow) is a spell that temporarily/reversibly gives the female caster a, uh, certain ‘extra part’. Now, the basic variant of this spell cannot impregnate; there is an advanced variant that can do so, but it’s very different magical-structure wise, is much harder to cast, and CANNOT be cast on accident. Subaru & Teana don’t use that variant, needless to say… STORY (OUTLINE): The story starts as the original snippet, with Teana being inexplicably under the weather and being taken to the doctor for a checkup, and Shamal revealing that she is in fact pregnant. …The cheer and smile on Shamal’s face drops away as Teana proceeds to FREAK THE HELL OUT. Between her mind racing through all the above-mentioned reasons she never wants to be a mother, and knowledge of the law still in place, the shock and panic and terror are so bad it sends her into an actual panic attack. As Shamal goes into ‘Trauma Mode’ and works to keep the girl from hyperventilating or working herself up into a heart attack, Nanoha & Fate, who are visiting this place because [reasons], happen to walk by and come across the scene. They’ve both become rather attached to Teana by now, with Nanoha especially considering and caring for her like a ‘precious little sister’. They hug and try to comfort her, and as Shamal simply answers what happened with “unplanned pregnancy”, Teana starts trembling and sobbing in Nanoha’s arms, sad and panicking and terrified and just plain overwhelmed… How could this happen? Teana and Subaru use the ‘basic’ variant of “that spell”, the one that cannot impregnate; they don’t even know how to use the ‘advanced’ variant that can induce pregnancy. A bit of cyber-investigation uncovers the shocking truth: someone, a third party, hacked the spell as Subaru was casting it on herself one time, switching it to the advanced variant without her or Teana knowing. Throughout part of the story, investigation steadily uncovers the culprit: a medium-high ranking official in the Bureau military (an OC), and what’s more he’s one of the people who insulted and demeaned Tiida after his death, now feels that Teana is just as worthless because of who she is and who she’s related to, and “at least now she can provide something useful to the Bureau”. …Unfortunately for him, Nanoha is the one who uncovers this and confronts him personally, including setting off his horrifically insensitive motive rant. He awakens the wrath of the White Devil in full Mama-Bear Mode. By the time she’s through with him, it’s possible he’ll never even walk again, much less use magic. The scandal is released to the rest of the Bureau, but unfortunately the law won’t be repealed in time before Teana reaches a point of her pregnancy where aborting the fetus would be dangerous/immoral/whatever. Meanwhile (at this point my idea for the story becomes fuzzy and undefined), we get several days/weeks/months’ worth of scenes of Teana depressed, scared, etc., constantly going over all the things she’s worried/afraid about – the threat to her dream-career, the incoming physical and lifestyle changes, not believing herself ‘worthy’ to be a mother and thinking that she’ll be a horrible mom, having no living family to support her, worries about stigma against the Lanstar name following whatever child she’ll have in life… However, Subaru sticks by her always, giving her loads of love and patient support whenever she’s scared or crying, letting her know she loves her and will be by her side; meanwhile, everyone else also makes it clear they’re going to support Teana every step of the way, every way they can –Lindy and Amy ready to help guide and support her through pregnancy’s troubles and effects and with the ensuing child, all the Nakajima sisters promising their support and aid, Hayate and the Wolkenritter pitching in to help as well (including Signum and Vita having to break Teana of the thought they didn’t really care about her, ‘thanks’ to their tough training and purposely-distant attitudes during the days of RF6), even Erio & Caro & little Vivio doing whatever they can to help… And of course, Nanoha ready and willing to help her surrogate little sister as much as she needs and then some. Details leading up to the birth and immediate aftermath are fuzzy; I haven’t thought of anything. EPILOGUE: Flash-forward several [can’t decide how many] years… At elementary school, there is a special day where kids get to explain things about their parents; some parents show up to help/participate, though not all. In particular, one girl’s parents are busy at work, so they can’t come. She’s [five/seven/10] years old, and – without naming names – explains the trials and fear that her mama went through, to the sympathy of the listening mothers. Before she can move on to “what happened after I was born”, though, the bell rings; school is done for the day. Within a few minutes, it’s made known that the girl’s mama has come to pick her up, to her joy. The families watch/follow as the little girl happily runs out to her waiting mama… and they all feel significant shock as the child is scooped up and hugged by none other than Teana Lanstar – the Red Ace of the Bureau, elite Enforcer, S-rank mage, a staggeringly impressive Combat Service Record, as famous as Nanoha Takamachi herself, the kind of ‘hero’ of the Bureau that kids and raw recruits ask for autographs. The young girl is happy to hear from her ‘Tia-mama’ that they’ll be having her favorite meal this evening… “as long as Subaru-mama doesn’t cook” (she’s… less-than-adept in the kitchen). The girl waves goodbye to her friends as she takes her leave, hand in hand with her strong, successful, and happy mama… Well, what do you think? Anyone wanna tackle it?

2016-06-20, 13:12	Link #38710
Rising Dragon Goat Herder Author Join Date: Jun 2008 Age: 36	That was me. I'd just like to say, I never said it wasn't gonna go anywhere--I said that it's based on a fic I still have in development and is nowhere near ready to be written. __________________

2016-10-23, 02:58	Link #38711
RDNexus Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Portugal Age: 36	Excuse me for asking here but are there any other organizations (outside Nanoverse) like TSAB?

2016-10-23, 03:06	Link #38712
Rising Dragon Goat Herder Author Join Date: Jun 2008 Age: 36	There's various big-name business companies, such as Caledfwlch Techniques and the Vandein Corporation. Also the Saint Church, which, while allied with the TSAB, is its own organization governing a region on Mid-childa. __________________

2016-10-23, 03:32	Link #38713
RDNexus Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Portugal Age: 36	I asked outside Nanoverse, like in other fictional stories and the likes. Interdimensional Police/Administration organizations, so to say.

2016-10-23, 18:20	Link #38715
RDNexus Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Portugal Age: 36	But those are only time-related, right?

2016-10-23, 18:26	Link #38716
Arcc Knight who says D'ni Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: -0,-0,-0,-0: The Brink of Time Age: 36	Meddling with time tends to create splinter realities and alternate sequences of events, depending on how you view the space time continuum. In most science fiction, interdimensional and temporal affairs are somewhat intertwined. I always assumed it fell within in the TSAB's wheelhouse as well, given their name. __________________ The more that you resist the tide The more it pulls you in The more you hang on for your life~

2016-10-23, 18:56	Link #38717
RDNexus Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Portugal Age: 36	Well, in Nanoverse's case, it seems TSAB deals more with spatial than temporal matters, since they manage many planets of (what seems) different dimensions.

2016-10-23, 19:10	Link #38718
Rising Dragon Goat Herder Author Join Date: Jun 2008 Age: 36	TSAB's name seems to more accurately translate as the Dimensional Administration Bureau, so yeah. __________________

2016-10-23, 19:18	Link #38719
RDNexus Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Portugal Age: 36	Hence me asking if there were other organizations like TSAB in fiction.

2016-10-23, 21:18	Link #38720
TwoZeroTwo A Past-Life Digression Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: US	Hey all, a couple years ago I wrote two stories in the Nanoha universe but with a high amount of original material, both characters and locations - Raze the Stray and its sequel, Raise the Dawn. In the shortest possible description, RtS introduced the main characters and dealt with events set on another administrated planet, and RtD focused on the fallout from those events on Midchilda and an extreme clash of ideologies between members of both planets. Once I finished those up, I didn't have any more to write after that...until now. Yeah, recently I started pulling a bunch of the ideas for another sequel together and now I have the first couple chapters out for my next story, Times of Grace. It's set a couple years after the other two (same year as Sound Stage X was) on a new planet where the core set of OCs started anew after the last two stories. There, they may get their own chance to save others in the same way they had been saved before. Yes, I believe this story will be all or mostly original material - the canon characters would be either too 'big' for the scale of the plot or too shoehorned-in in my eyes to get them in here. I have a sort-of long author note before the story basically just saying that though this story is the 3rd in the series, I'm writing it so you aren't required to read the previous two to be ready for this. I have put up the first two chapters on fanfiction.net - Chapter 1 and Chapter 2. I've posted solely on ffnet before but I guess I can post other places as well if it seems people want that. And yes, I know there might not be a huge crowd for this, but hey, it's a new Nanoha-universe story in late 2016 that should update at a decent pace. Hope you guys enjoy.