Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by illidan182

...random crack...


Fate: Nanoha! Hurry look up!
Nanoha: *Looks upwards* I don’t see it Fate-chan!
Yuuno: Maybe you should fly up a little to see if you get a better view Nanoha.
Fate & Yuuno: *nods in unison eagerly*
Nanoha: Uhh, ok! *actives flier fin and fly’s up a bit*
Fate & Yuuno: *Stares up at Nanoha, getting a nice panty shot*
Yuuno: This is your best idea yet Fate…
Fate: *looks at Yuuno and nods then stares back up*
Fate & Yuuno: *Nosebleed*
Nanoha: I still don’t see what I’m supposed to be looking at! T__T
Fate & Yuuno: JUST KEEP SEARCHING RIGHT THERE!

Vita: *Dives in with Camera* Just a little to the left

[NorthernFallout]

Originally Posted by illidan182

...random crack...


Fate: Nanoha! Hurry look up!
Nanoha: *Looks upwards* I don’t see it Fate-chan!
Yuuno: Maybe you should fly up a little to see if you get a better view Nanoha.
Fate & Yuuno: *nods in unison eagerly*
Nanoha: Uhh, ok! *actives flier fin and fly’s up a bit*
Fate & Yuuno: *Stares up at Nanoha, getting a nice panty shot*
Yuuno: This is your best idea yet Fate…
Fate: *looks at Yuuno and nods then stares back up*
Fate & Yuuno: *Nosebleed*
Nanoha: I still don’t see what I’m supposed to be looking at! T__T
Fate & Yuuno: JUST KEEP SEARCHING RIGHT THERE!

Haha. I saw where this were going at "Yuuno: Maybe you should fly up a little to see if you get a better view Nanoha."

[wanwan1203]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

XDXDXD awesome

So would Fate be Soccermom!Fate?

Soccermom!Fate: Come on Erio Kick it in the goal or no dinner tonight!

XD Soccermom!Fate! XD lol

Originally Posted by Gillian

corners like Paladin associated with Nanoha
with the last part I got a really crack idea:

Spoiler for don't read it, if you are not used to so much crack:

You were warned!!!

Maybe Nanoha is already a vampire, but she didn't know it. She don't show the vampire symptoms, because the medicine she takes, is to supress the vampire blood and that is why she has that severe disease. Because mostly of her blood is supressed or killed by the medicine she tooks
she gets the medicine from her parents, which could be great fighters by the Paladin *finished*
would give the story a nice twist^^

hope you enjoyed the crack

the crack is good in this one. though it could work in an AU version of this story.. >.> <.< >.>

edit:

Originally Posted by illidan182

...random crack...


Fate: Nanoha! Hurry look up!
Nanoha: *Looks upwards* I don’t see it Fate-chan!
Yuuno: Maybe you should fly up a little to see if you get a better view Nanoha.
Fate & Yuuno: *nods in unison eagerly*
Nanoha: Uhh, ok! *actives flier fin and fly’s up a bit*
Fate & Yuuno: *Stares up at Nanoha, getting a nice panty shot*
Yuuno: This is your best idea yet Fate…
Fate: *looks at Yuuno and nods then stares back up*
Fate & Yuuno: *Nosebleed*
Nanoha: I still don’t see what I’m supposed to be looking at! T__T
Fate & Yuuno: JUST KEEP SEARCHING RIGHT THERE!

EDIT: page claim for Soccermom!Fate xDxDxDxDxD ROFL

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Vita: *Dives in with Camera* Just a little to the left

*wanwan shows up with very own digital camera* fu fu fu...
"you perv!!"
oO;;

[Black_Wolf]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Actually I wrote that short with Older!Vivio and Vita in mind I'm a big fan of that crack pairing. I keep trying to write them something and failing.

Originally Posted by wanwan1203

Vivio and the Eternal Loli???

I'll read that.

Seconded!!! the cute fic you've got would be a good prologue of some sort, then could erm have Vita change or not change? were you gona stick Vita out as the Eternal Loli like Wan Wan said? as if not and Vita changed you could have like a surprised perverted Vivio inherited from Nanoha or something and work from there?

Unless you were in the middle of another fic with different storyline :S just trying to put ideas out there

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

XDXDXD awesome

So would Fate be Soccermom!Fate?

Soccermom!Fate: Come on Erio Kick it in the goal or no dinner tonight!

LOL at Soccermom!Fate imagine her going head to head with SoccerCoach!Nanoha "That was not offside!!!!!"

[Momo Chan]

Originally Posted by wanwan1203

Ah. I think that's a job for Detective!Nanoha.

edit: "corruption (r7) on momo" I just had to comment on that one: LOL. XD

What the--?
*looks down*
O_o
Okay, who tagged this thread as "corruption (r7) on momo"
>.>
<.<
I will find out!

and lol @ the crazy ideas going on in this thread

[Saharet]

Originally Posted by Black_Wolf

Spoiler for Craziness:

The sound of an alarm was blaring across RFS6’s base. A large plume of smoke could be seen coming out of the southern section of the building. Terrified screams could be heard as various members scattered across the complex.

“What the hell is going on?!!!?” Hayate shouted from her desk at the top of the building, looking out her window hopefully for the source of the commotion.

Signum, currently in Hayates office also eyed the surroundings warily, ready to go investigate when suddenly a screen blipped to life. In front of Hayates desk was now a monitor showing Shaml-sensei with a rather sheepish look on her face. “Shamal? Do you know something about this??”

“Ah Hayate, well you see, I had Nanoha in for her regular physical, and I was issuing the new standard vaccine deployed to all TSAB medical institutes….”

“And?....” Hayate was glaring dangerously at the doctor.

“….I was erm, tired and not concentrating properly, and I kind of gave her the wrong thing…..”

“You weren’t concentrating?? You’re a doctor your always focused what the hell happened????”

Signum at this point turned a very dark shade of red, apparently the guilty party of Shamals condition had been found. Hayate turned her attention back to the monitor.

“WHAT!!!...What did you giver her????”

“Hehe, well erm here’s the funny thing, you see it was an erm…”

“SPIT IT OUT!!”

“It was an aphrodisiac, and a er, rather strong one at that…”

“WHAT??? You gave Nanoha an aphrodisiac???? Shes already at it like bunnies with Fate-chan, whats with all the commotion!!!”

“Ah well you see that’s the interesting part, having been with Fate-chan since they were little, it seems to have brought a hidden desire of Nanohas to the surface….”

Hayates eyebrow was twitching beyond control at this point.

“it seems to have awakened……………a loli complex”

Down in the training arena of section six, Vita could be seen running for dear life as a drooling Nanoha seemed to be closing in on her next meal….

Edit



Demands extension into the case of the stolen teddy bear!, who was the culprit, will Nanoha find them what WILL be the consequences? *end booming trailer voice*

Pure win

Originally Posted by Ilya

I see your point. X)




This is getting out of hand. What if we put both Fate and Nanoha in the same team O_o? The whole base would explode

I can already imagine the nanohaxfate scene... -_-'

Spoiler for Major sweatdrop:

"Nanoha!"

Fate ran as fast as she could towards her friend as the referee blew his wistle to signal a penalty.

"Nanoha are you alright?" asked Fate, worried at Nanoha sudden fall.

"I'll be fine Fate-chan, I just tripped a little..."

"Of course not, that guy literally kicked your shin, I almost heard the bones break!"

Nanoha looked up at Fate with a smile.

"I won't be able to play anymore I think..." she said looking at her leg where sure enough, blue started to appear around the bruise.

"Don't worry Nanoha, I'll win this game for you, I swear!" said Fate passionelly.

Nanoha smiled at her friend.

"I know you will"

*Shots herself*


Edit: Wow a lot got posted while I wrote this...

[wanwan1203]

Originally Posted by Black_Wolf

LOL at Soccermom!Fate imagine her going head to head with SoccerCoach!Nanoha "That was not offside!!!!!"

and an EPIC battle ensues!! *brings out popcorn and watches destruction unfold from TSS' mod shelter*

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by Black_Wolf

Seconded!!! the cute fic you've got would be a good prologue of some sort, then could erm have Vita change or not change? were you gona stick Vita out as the Eternal Loli like Wan Wan said? as if not and Vita changed you could have like a surprised perverted Vivio inherited from Nanoha or something and work from there?

Unless you were in the middle of another fic with different storyline :S just trying to put ideas out there

Actually the short is intended to be the second of three parts

1st: Vita giving little Vivio the bunny
2nd: Vivio giving the bunny back
3rd: It's a secret~ but it's VitaxOlder!Vivio so you can guess what it is

Of course I'll probably never get around to writing it
I'm focusing all my energy on finishing MBLZ chapter 3 because it's been so delayed *and I'm in the homestretch ><*

and Btw: I believe the manga mentioned Vita does have an older form she just doesn't use it much

[Gillian]

Originally Posted by Ilya

This is getting out of hand. What if we put both Fate and Nanoha in the same team O_o? The whole base would explode

would be a big improvement, because they would probably too busy with themselves

Originally Posted by illidan182

...random crack...


Fate: Nanoha! Hurry look up!
Nanoha: *Looks upwards* I don’t see it Fate-chan!
Yuuno: Maybe you should fly up a little to see if you get a better view Nanoha.
Fate & Yuuno: *nods in unison eagerly*
Nanoha: Uhh, ok! *actives flier fin and fly’s up a bit*
Fate & Yuuno: *Stares up at Nanoha, getting a nice panty shot*
Yuuno: This is your best idea yet Fate…
Fate: *looks at Yuuno and nods then stares back up*
Fate & Yuuno: *Nosebleed*
Nanoha: I still don’t see what I’m supposed to be looking at! T__T
Fate & Yuuno: JUST KEEP SEARCHING RIGHT THERE!

EDIT: page claim for Soccermom!Fate xDxDxDxDxD ROFL

that's really funny
always abuse the naivety of Nanoha

[wanwan1203]

Originally Posted by Saharet

I can already imagine the nanohaxfate scene... -_-'

Spoiler for Major sweatdrop:

"Nanoha!"

Fate ran as fast as she could towards her friend as the referee blew his wistle to signal a penalty.

"Nanoha are you alright?" asked Fate, worried at Nanoha sudden fall.

"I'll be fine Fate-chan, I just tripped a little..."

"Of course not, that guy literally kicked your shin, I almost heard the bones break!"

Nanoha looked up at Fate with a smile.

"I won't be able to play anymore I think..." she said looking at her leg where sure enough, blue started to appear around the bruise.

"Don't worry Nanoha, I'll win this game for you, I swear!" said Fate passionelly.

Nanoha smiled at her friend.

"I know you will"

*Shots herself*

Fate: Bardiche!
Bardiche: Yes sir.
Fate: Proceed to kick referee's a$$.
Bardiche: Affirmative. (eh does Bardiche say affirmative??)

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Actually the short is intended to be the second of three parts

1st: Vita giving little Vivio the bunny
2nd: Vivio giving the bunny back
3rd: It's a secret~ but it's VitaxOlder!Vivio so you can guess what it is

Of course I'll probably never get around to writing it
I'm focusing all my energy on finishing MBLZ chapter 3 because it's been so delayed *and I'm in the homestretch ><*

and Btw: I believe the manga mentioned Vita does have an older form she just doesn't use it much

She does?? I wanna see that!! *haven't read the manga* Ah why hasn't anyone made use of this "feature" in a fanfic yet? *cries* Maybe Vita is too attached with her loli form.

[Black_Wolf]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Actually the short is intended to be the second of three parts

1st: Vita giving little Vivio the bunny
2nd: Vivio giving the bunny back
3rd: It's a secret~ but it's VitaxOlder!Vivio so you can guess what it is

Of course I'll probably never get around to writing it
I'm focusing all my energy on finishing MBLZ chapter 3 because it's been so delayed *and I'm in the homestretch ><*

and Btw: I believe the manga mentioned Vita does have an older form she just doesn't use it much

Is this the last chapter of MBLZ? or is there more to follow? *jumps up and down in anticipation of 3rd part*

i havent read the first part of the Vivio/Vita trilogy, is that back earlier in this thread somewhere?

Didnt realise Vita had an older form but never used it, i havent read much of the manga other than some of the transitional stuff from A's to Strikers.

Also, to get you into gear, Vita inspiration :P

Spoiler for Vita???:

[IMG][/IMG]

[kasu1127]

Originally Posted by Enraptured

-starlight breaker!-
K no more barriers, thanks! xP



xD Thank you! (:
And now you need to deliver that Lightning / nanofatenum fic!! xD

W-wait, I don't recall making any deals like that!

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

and Btw: I believe the manga mentioned Vita does have an older form she just doesn't use it much

I thought that was simply transformation magic?

@thread: The amount of crack in the last couple of pages is insane. xD I read everything, but I don't know where to begin commenting.

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by Black_Wolf

Is this the last chapter of MBLZ? or is there more to follow? *jumps up and down in anticipation of 3rd part*

i havent read the first part of the Vivio/Vita trilogy, is that back earlier in this thread somewhere?

Didnt realise Vita had an older form but never used it, i havent read much of the manga other than some of the transitional stuff from A's to Strikers.

Also, to get you into gear, Vita inspiration :P

Last chapter of MBLZ *Shock* no no MBLZ is going to have 13 chapters *I have them planned out but I got stuck half way through this one. *

and I found the page where Vita talks about it

Spoiler for Transformation magic:

That's Vita talking in the first box
btw: that page also has my favorite Zafira line. "... a wolf."

Edit:
@Kasu
It is transformation magic but I believe that still counts as an older form *nod nod* It would technically work the same really.

[Black_Wolf]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Last chapter of MBLZ *Shock* no no MBLZ is going to have 13 chapters *I have them planned out but I got stuck half way through this one. *

and I found the page where Vita talks about it

Spoiler for Transformation magic:

That's Vita talking in the first box
btw: that page also has my favorite Zafira line. "I'm a wolf."

Edit:
@Kasu
It is transformation magic but I believe that still counts as an older form *nod nod* It would technically work the same really.

I can't see the page? that just me?

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by Black_Wolf

I can't see the page? that just me?

fixed it sorry

[wanwan1203]

Originally Posted by Black_Wolf

Is this the last chapter of MBLZ? or is there more to follow? *jumps up and down in anticipation of 3rd part*

i havent read the first part of the Vivio/Vita trilogy, is that back earlier in this thread somewhere?

Didnt realise Vita had an older form but never used it, i havent read much of the manga other than some of the transitional stuff from A's to Strikers.

Also, to get you into gear, Vita inspiration :P

Spoiler for Vita???:

[IMG][/IMG]

u-ughh-- @_@ moe meter just shot up.

[Gillian]

Originally Posted by Black_Wolf

I can't see the page? that just me?

you only have to click quote and copy the link into your browser then you can cancel quote

[Satashi]

Nanoha:*walks in her room suddenly* I'm home early, Fate-chan!
Fate:Ahh! *scrambles to close monitors down* Na-Nanoha!
Nanoha:...* looks suspicious* what were you looking at!?
Fate:*voice cracks* nothing!
Nanoha:.... I thought I saw myself?
Fate:*hair friz/speaks fast*I wasn't looking at panty shot pictures I took of you! Specially not the purple ones with flowers all over them!
Nanoha:.....*facepalm*
Fate:.... I did it again. *also facepalms*

(For the record, Angel is very cute when she has the hiccups)

[Black_Wolf]

Originally Posted by Wan Wan

u-ughh-- @_@ moe meter just shot up.

How much blood do you have Wan Wan, ive seen more nosebleeds than i can count over the pages!!!

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

fixed it sorry

Originally Posted by Gillian

you only have to click quote and copy the link into your browser then you can cancel quote

Guess that was rather nooby, could have checked in the source code rather than moaning lol *Its 1.30am over here, im tired! *

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Last chapter of MBLZ *Shock* no no MBLZ is going to have 13 chapters *I have them planned out but I got stuck half way through this one. *

and I found the page where Vita talks about it

Spoiler for Transformation magic:

That's Vita talking in the first box
btw: that page also has my favorite Zafira line. "... a wolf."

Edit:
@Kasu
It is transformation magic but I believe that still counts as an older form *nod nod* It would technically work the same really.

Love Zafira, im a big fan of wolves, as if you couldn't have guessed lol. If only a Zafira harem was present, hes the only old enough male whos not taken or has been earmarked for death *cough Yuuno cough*

So Vita can use transformation magic, hmm, so im assuming its not some sort of illusion then? although i guess in a fanfic it doesnt matter, can just assume its real !! ah the genius of fiction writing!!

But no third part update for a while?

[Junkedcat]

Originally Posted by Black_Wolf

LOL at Soccermom!Fate imagine her going head to head with SoccerCoach!Nanoha "That was not offside!!!!!"

I can think of nothing that would be scarier... well to be on the receiving end of either’s wrath...

and for once i get the chance to comment on some backlog...

Originally Posted by Advent000

I wonder why Yunno doesnt want Fate to turn Nanoha, could it be that he's working on a cure?

I had a suspicion a long time ago against turning Nanoha, reinforced with the revelation of her illness. Their is the possibility, given what kind of illness lupus is, vampire blood may only make it worse, not better. Turning Nanoha in this case would kill her.

Well, thats only one idea...

Originally Posted by Satashi

Nanoha:*walks in her room suddenly* I'm home early, Fate-chan!
Fate:Ahh! *scrambles to close monitors down* Na-Nanoha!
Nanoha:...* looks suspicious* what were you looking at!?
Fate:*voice cracks* nothing!
Nanoha:.... I thought I saw myself?
Fate:*hair friz/speaks fast*I wasn't looking at panty shot pictures I took of you! Specially not the purple ones with flowers all over them!
Nanoha:.....*facepalm*
Fate:.... I did it again. *also facepalms*

Busted...