AnimeSuki Forums

Register Forum Rules FAQ Community Today's Posts Search

Go Back   AnimeSuki Forum > Anime Discussion > Older Series > Retired > Retired M-Z > Nanoha/Vivid Franchise

Notices

Reply
 
Thread Tools
Old 2010-08-21, 01:38   Link #26641
00-Raiser
Burst Mode
*Author
 
 
Join Date: Oct 2009
Location: Windsor, Ontario
Age: 37
Send a message via AIM to 00-Raiser
Quote:
Originally Posted by deathcurse View Post
Ah, interesting that Hayate and Nanoha went through rehab together, I didn't know that....I'll see how that might work into my story ^^.
Well, they both had to re-learn how to walk, but you've already got Nanoha walking in this fic.

It's also amusing to note that Zafira would give both Nanoha and Hayate rides on his back XD
__________________
00-Raiser is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2010-08-21, 02:34   Link #26642
WarpObscura
Bibliophile
 
 
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: There's this dot on the world map...
Chapter One of Reinforce Threshold

Spoiler for Reinforce Threshold Chapter Two:


Spoiler for Author's Notes:
__________________

Yo dawg, I heard you like QB...

Thanks MAEt for the av!
WarpObscura is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2010-08-21, 10:15   Link #26643
Kaijo
Banned
 
Join Date: Oct 2009
Location: Somewhere over the rainbow, in a house dropped on an ugly, old woman.
Send a message via AIM to Kaijo Send a message via MSN to Kaijo
Quote:
Originally Posted by 00-Raiser View Post
Well, they both had to re-learn how to walk, but you've already got Nanoha walking in this fic.

It's also amusing to note that Zafira would give both Nanoha and Hayate rides on his back XD
Well, if Nanoha is a familiar now, she's got a new body so technically she's healed. Just like Arf was sick and dying, but was suddenly all better after being made a familiar. A new body is part of the deal. It's formed with magic, but it apparently pretty much turns normal afterward... well, as normal as a person with magic would be. It just requires upkeep in the form of the master's mana.
Kaijo is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2010-08-21, 11:49   Link #26644
ninryu
It's yuri, bitches
 
 
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Israel
Age: 28
I recommend you guys to post your fics at FF.net.
ninryu is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2010-08-21, 11:55   Link #26645
00-Raiser
Burst Mode
*Author
 
 
Join Date: Oct 2009
Location: Windsor, Ontario
Age: 37
Send a message via AIM to 00-Raiser
Quote:
Originally Posted by ninryu View Post
I recommend you guys to post your fics at FF.net.
Most of us do that already We just post here first so we can get feedback/make changes before uploading the final versions to FF.net.
__________________
00-Raiser is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2010-08-21, 12:22   Link #26646
Rising Dragon
Goat Herder
*Author
 
 
Join Date: Jun 2008
Age: 36
Quote:
Originally Posted by ninryu View Post
I recommend you guys to post your fics at FF.net.
Quote:
Originally Posted by 00-Raiser View Post
Most of us do that already We just post here first so we can get feedback/make changes before uploading the final versions to FF.net.
Or, at the very least, listen to Moczo rage about the site. =X
__________________
Rising Dragon is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2010-08-21, 13:32   Link #26647
ninryu
It's yuri, bitches
 
 
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Israel
Age: 28
Quote:
Originally Posted by deathcurse View Post
Nice catch . That wondering is exactly why I wanted to end the series there originally XD.
oh shit, I knew it!

don't you dare stop it! write MOAR!
ninryu is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2010-08-21, 17:09   Link #26648
Kaijo
Banned
 
Join Date: Oct 2009
Location: Somewhere over the rainbow, in a house dropped on an ugly, old woman.
Send a message via AIM to Kaijo Send a message via MSN to Kaijo
Okay, I suppose it's been long enough; time for another installment of Future Angst!

Future Tense

Chapter 16: To Everything, Turn


In which Nanoha becomes a houseguest for awhile, and several others experience interesting developments... for good or for ill...

Previous chapters can be found here.

Spoiler for Future Tense, Chapter 16: To Everything, Turn:


For those that want less angst and more boom boom, I'll get back to that with my two Crisis continuations. Just kinda exploring this option for now.^^
Kaijo is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2010-08-21, 17:35   Link #26649
Megaolix
Senior Member
 
 
Join Date: Aug 2009
Quote:
Originally Posted by Kaijo View Post
Okay, I suppose it's been long enough; time for another installment of Future Angst!

Future Tense

Chapter 16: To Everything, Turn


In which Nanoha becomes a houseguest for awhile, and several others experience interesting developments... for good or for ill...

Previous chapters can be found here.

Spoiler for Future Tense, Chapter 16: To Everything, Turn:


For those that want less angst and more boom boom, I'll get back to that with my two Crisis continuations. Just kinda exploring this option for now.^^
Future Angst. Good one . Anyway, mmmmm...

mmmmmm...

No omake this time. Not enough suffering for me to use.

Apart from that... Well, I did say Nanoha needed a break, but now that we got it, the chapter itself feels like a breather from all the problems piling up one afer another.
__________________
I hate sad and bittersweet endings. Why? Because I think the real world is sad enough as it is. Must our stories be sad too?
Megaolix is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2010-08-21, 17:38   Link #26650
Rising Dragon
Goat Herder
*Author
 
 
Join Date: Jun 2008
Age: 36
And now Caro's gone...

Also, Erio's really bad at picking out aliases, isn't he? It was kinda obvious when I first read through, and hearing the name "Edward" only cinched it for me.
__________________
Rising Dragon is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2010-08-21, 17:49   Link #26651
vic-vic
Senior Member
 
 
Join Date: May 2010
Location: forge-world Moscow 1
Age: 37
Quote:
Originally Posted by Kaijo View Post
Okay, I suppose it's been long enough; time for another installment of Future Angst!

Future Tense

Chapter 16: To Everything, Turn


In which Nanoha becomes a houseguest for awhile, and several others experience interesting developments... for good or for ill...

Previous chapters can be found here.

Spoiler for Future Tense, Chapter 16: To Everything, Turn:


For those that want less angst and more boom boom, I'll get back to that with my two Crisis continuations. Just kinda exploring this option for now.^^
Yay, detrmination filled Yuuno are pure badass. Hm, i still see a chemistry between him and Fate... a catfight between Fate and Shari

And what Verosa have finded?
vic-vic is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2010-08-21, 18:30   Link #26652
SilentOutlaw
Shhh.....
 
 
Join Date: May 2010
Location: Behind you.
Quote:
Originally Posted by Kaijo View Post
Okay, I suppose it's been long enough; time for another installment of Future Angst!

Future Tense

Chapter 16: To Everything, Turn


In which Nanoha becomes a houseguest for awhile, and several others experience interesting developments... for good or for ill...

Previous chapters can be found here.
Another nice chapter, it's also kinda good to know what happened to Erio and Caro. Although it's sad to learn that one of them died and the other became a hermit.

I can't wait for when Nanoha and Vivio meet up, I feel a CMoH coming.

And with what happening with Verossa I think they may actually earn a happy ending....maybe.
SilentOutlaw is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2010-08-21, 18:48   Link #26653
shiroi mahotsukai
Under Death by College
*Author
 
 
Join Date: May 2010
Location: Where you least expect me
Age: 30
Even a pinprick of light is a blessing in the darkness, and like a candle hope will continue to burn even when it flickers and wanes...that is until it burns down to nothing and has no fuel left to burn. When that happens you get anew candle and begin the proccess all over again.
__________________
"The eyes are the windows that let us gaze upon the soul"
eyes
"When desperate there are two choices: Lock shields for the last stand or draw your sword for the final charge"
"There are no winners or losers, there are only the living and the dead."
shiroi mahotsukai is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2010-08-21, 19:04   Link #26654
Moczo
"Hey, Isaac?"
*Author
 
 
Join Date: Mar 2010
Location: Pennsylvania. It's sort of like a real state.
Age: 39
Send a message via AIM to Moczo
Quote:
Originally Posted by Rising Dragon View Post
Or, at the very least, listen to Moczo rage about the site. =X
Shhhh... everything seems to be fine now, but it took the better part of two days, and I don't want to risk waking the site up and incurring it's wrath again...
Moczo is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2010-08-21, 22:48   Link #26655
00-Raiser
Burst Mode
*Author
 
 
Join Date: Oct 2009
Location: Windsor, Ontario
Age: 37
Send a message via AIM to 00-Raiser
Quote:
Originally Posted by Kaijo View Post
Okay, I suppose it's been long enough; time for another installment of Future Angst!

Future Tense

Chapter 16: To Everything, Turn


In which Nanoha becomes a houseguest for awhile, and several others experience interesting developments... for good or for ill...

Previous chapters can be found here.

Spoiler for Future Tense, Chapter 16: To Everything, Turn:


For those that want less angst and more boom boom, I'll get back to that with my two Crisis continuations. Just kinda exploring this option for now.^^
Lots going on in this chapter, but few things of major severity. Like was said, a needed breather chapter. Good work.
__________________
00-Raiser is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2010-08-21, 23:04   Link #26656
Kaijo
Banned
 
Join Date: Oct 2009
Location: Somewhere over the rainbow, in a house dropped on an ugly, old woman.
Send a message via AIM to Kaijo Send a message via MSN to Kaijo
Thanks for the comments everyone! And Raiser, thanks for the corrections as always. Uploaded a slightly better Chapter 16 to ff.net.

Quote:
Originally Posted by SilentOutlaw View Post
I can't wait for when Nanoha and Vivio meet up, I feel a CMoH coming.
Heh, heh, heh; you have no idea... ^_~

Edit: Well, it should be up soon, anyway. I think ff.net is running a little slow....
Kaijo is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2010-08-22, 10:10   Link #26657
Yasanagi
A Drifter...
*Author
 
 
Join Date: Feb 2010
Location: Brampton
Send a message via AIM to Yasanagi
Posted a new polished chapter of Material Days on my account. Check it out here.
__________________

Thanks to 00-Raiser for hooking me up with the sig!
Yasanagi is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2010-08-22, 11:15   Link #26658
Nanya01
Left for TFF
*Author
 
 
Join Date: Jun 2009
Location: Frozen Hell of the North
Age: 41
Send a message via AIM to Nanya01
Spoiler for More Changes:
__________________

My fics Due to certain things, I am not here, find me over on TFF.
Nanya01 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2010-08-22, 11:20   Link #26659
shiroi mahotsukai
Under Death by College
*Author
 
 
Join Date: May 2010
Location: Where you least expect me
Age: 30
Quote:
Originally Posted by Yasanagi View Post
Posted a new polished chapter of Material Days on my account. Check it out here.
I think the "polishing" is going well, rough edges smoothed and surfaces shined, it's almost like new...but still the same.
__________________
"The eyes are the windows that let us gaze upon the soul"
eyes
"When desperate there are two choices: Lock shields for the last stand or draw your sword for the final charge"
"There are no winners or losers, there are only the living and the dead."
shiroi mahotsukai is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 2010-08-22, 11:52   Link #26660
Moczo
"Hey, Isaac?"
*Author
 
 
Join Date: Mar 2010
Location: Pennsylvania. It's sort of like a real state.
Age: 39
Send a message via AIM to Moczo
Quote:
Originally Posted by Nanya01 View Post
Spoiler for More Changes:
Yup. I guess it just goes to show you that on some level, Fate is always going to be Fate, no matter what her childhood was like.

Poor little thing... but at least now she has someone to take care of her after she pushes herself too far.
Moczo is offline   Reply With Quote
Reply

Tags
authorshipping, befriending, fanfiction, interactive fanfiction, nanoha


Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off

Forum Jump


All times are GMT -5. The time now is 06:06.


Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.11
Copyright ©2000 - 2024, vBulletin Solutions Inc.
We use Silk.