What did the Harvester say to the other Harvester when there was Bluecheesium everywhere? "We must gather all we can!"
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So finally Hikki is an Ace, eh? Good for him.
We have a winner in this thread.
....did I just see a loli villain?
He's very powerful, and I think his personality qualifies as gynous, so yes he's admitted.
Thank you! I think I should do several OPs featuring the characters in groups. But when I have more time first!
Not just a loli villian, but several. I think it has been 7 since u last posted. Mine's the "Kamen Goth Psychic Vampire Loli with a Big Freaking Sword". What a long title.
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Alright, since I had been absent for 3 days (stupid limited Internet availability at village D: ) I'm going to post everything I had worked on along the period of time.
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BEHOLD!!!111oneoneeleven
OMG Fatal Fury, Fate Stay Night, Guilty Gear... And Hikki learned his Reality Marble from Sophia Alexei's half brother?! He really deserves to be one of the Aces.
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At last I was able to finish my little contribution to OC thread, feel free to comment
Spoiler for foreword:
Foreword: As I took quite a lot of liberty messing with the basic principles of how magic works in Nanohaverse I’ll bring a little explanation to the front. So what I did was adding a new element called “magic particles”, which are emitted by Linker Cores and also fly around us freely (instead of raw magic energy as was considered default as far as I understand). Regular mages then convert “magic particles” into the form they need, be it raw magic energy, elemental magic etc. And here I bring up yet another kind of mages who specialize in interacting with “magic particles” directly. The main difference from the raw magic energy would be the thing that “magic particles” being the origin of all kinds of magic are capable of influencing the effects of said magic (mainly by affecting the magically created objects) if shaped into right form and density. The best example would probably be the way how gravitons could affect the matter in real world. Well, here we go:
Spoiler for profile:
Name: Serge Romardo (by birth Serge Blanc)
Gender: male
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A full history with practical descriptions how that all works in combat is yet to follow. So far I'm still able to implement some changes if necessary.
(reading other profiles it seems I managed not to cross the borders of admissible brokeness, did I?)
No worries, original messing is even better, especialy when you have a good idea! By standard, this is an above average character, partly because David Brown and Hikki have pushed the bar so S*******-high. But IMO any character who can manipulate the fabric of time and space should qualify as an SS+, even SSS. For that is a heck load of energy required IMO. The only thing uber about Kha is that his borrowed Light powers makes him next-to-unkillable. Sever his divine link, and he's left with pretty much nothing. Very good character. Nice history and everthing's been thought out. No wall of skills, thankfully. Now to make use of him...
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Alas, my friend, the encounter will have to wait as the road is still pretty much long. But as for now....
Hikki: *casts Unlimited Gale Works* Alexandra: *casts Unlimited Midnight Carnival*
*both stare at each other* Hikki: ....... Alexandra: ..... Both: where did you learn that?!?!!
thank.s :3
Sophia: *summons Unlimited Imperium Vault* Hi~~ Just a little trick my oni-chan taught me. A11 U Tr4c3r b453 4r3 b310ng 2 uz! (Fires a million blades)
That's right, she also has a Reality Marble...
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Originally Posted by Fuyu no Sora
Once again 3 freaking AM in the morning. I have to stop posting so late ><. In anycase. Finally, I present you the last member of the Blue Flame Squad under the command of Cassandra Ivanov, Hiro Nakamura enters the game!
This is the longest of the squad profiles (Not counting Cass and Kali). It contains a very detailed version of some scenes mentioned in other profiles and other additional information.
Spoiler for Hiro Nakamura:
Name: Hiro Nakamura Age: 16 years old Birthday: September 19th Mage Ranks: AA+ Magic Type: Mid-Childa Mage Magic Color: Dark Blue Circle Element Preference: Ice magic Squad Position: Center Guard. Height: 165 cm Weight: 70 Kg Hair Color: Blond Eye Color: Green Zodiac: Virgo Weapons: Kirin, Twin Guns Defense Outfit: Barrier Jacket powered Relationships: Risa Nakamura: Younger Sister; Lucas and Angela Hale: Friends Nickname: Hiro-kun
History:
Hiro had always dreamed of following in his father’s footsteps and become part of the military. Seiji Nakamura was one of the few elite Colonels the Air Forces had seen in a long time and his records were excellent, therefore, inspiring his son to follow him down the same path. He researched and investigated everything about tactics, combat strategies and intensive training, all of whom he dragged Risa into so she could help him out and spar with him, teaching her at the same time. Since Risa practiced martial arts, they used that to create a hybrid combat style that combined Taekwondo, Karate and standard military hand-to-hand combat. Their practices took away most of their free time and whenever they learned a new technique, they immediately went to practice it and try to fit it in their newly created style. When Hiro was 10, his family went for a surprise visit to his mother’s brother’s house, which happened to be in the edge of the woods near their own home, only to be surprised themselves at seeing two other people at their uncle’s. With nothing interesting to do in the house, since the adults were talking about dreary stuff, Hiro went out to take a walk in the woods, not before asking Risa if she wanted to join him though. As they walked through the small forest, they were reminded of all the time that had passed since they last went there and stopped from time to time to watch small groups of little trees that they had planted a few years before. Arriving near the heart of the woods, they sat down for a while and Risa spaced out “Probably composing poems again” Hiro thought to himself vaguely. About two minutes passed until a huge ruckus could be heard from somewhere near them.
Frowning at the noise, Hiro got up and went to see what the heck was causing such a commotion, closely followed by Risa who had snapped out of her reverie and looked as curious as he was annoyed. Soon enough they found out that the cause of such an uproar were a boy and girl about their age that seemed engrossed in a furious fight. The boy was handling a medium-sized scythe, whose blade was shining a bright green color, and the girl carried a two-handed, double-bladed axe that was glowing in a dark yellow shade. They watched each other for a moment before having a go against the other. The girl swung her axe at the boy who countered by veering his scythe in the direction that opposed the place where the axe was supposed to hit, clashing with the said axe. Smirking, the boy jumped a few feet away from her and reared his weapon to thrust it forwards after a few seconds, unleashing a boomerang-like energy wave that missed the girl by inches. Smiling as well, the girl separated her axe in two and used the end that had the blades to throw them at the boy. Evading the deadly blades, the boy looked accusingly at the spot the girl had just been standing in, only to receive a blow from his left flank by the mini-spear that the non-sharp end of the separated weapon formed. Their eyes met and, after a short nod of understanding, their weapons disappeared. Now barehanded, they adopted a combat stance. The girl seemed a bit distracted as she rescanned the area surrounding them. The boy noted this and took advantage of the situation to catch his opponent off-guard by getting behind her and delivering a hasty yet precise kick in the back of her knees to make her lose her balance. The girl responded by jumping away from him and landing on her hands before performing two back flips to regain a proper distance and her footing. She allowed herself two seconds to breathe in before launching herself at the boy, elbowing the spot to her right in which the boy had appeared after sidestepping her attack.
Flinching a little he grabbed the girl’s arm and used it to throw her against a tree. She flipped around in mid-air and used the said tree as a platform of sorts to thrust herself forwards, charging once again against her opponent. Smirking at the motion, he ducked and as the she passed over him, he got up in time to give her a head butt in the stomach. Not expecting that kind of sneak attack, the girl found herself unable to neither dodge nor block it, therefore receiving it in full force. Propelled upwards, she lingered on the sky for a bit before gravity forced her back down towards the earth. Regaining her senses, she grabbed a tree branch before the crash and swung herself a couple of times before letting go and kicking her rival in the shoulder, having missed the neck where she was aiming. The boy was thrown face first into the ground and stayed there for three seconds before rising again and adopting once again his combat stance. The girl landed and did the same as they glared at each other. While all this was going on, Hiro was aghast at what he was witnessing. What were these kids? Where did they learn to fight like that? The battle raged on for five more minutes before the duelists decided to call it a draw and finally noticed him and Risa gawking at them.
Obviously for them that kind of thing was normal, but nor for Hiro and Risa, so when inquired upon what they were, they simply responded “We’re Belka Knights. Isn’t it obvious?” completely lost, the Nakamura siblings asked for further explanations and once they received them, they could not believe their ears, but what their eyes had beheld directed them to believe the things the ‘Belka Knights’ told them. After the explanations, they introduced themselves properly and Hiro felt soon enough that he would like Lucas. As the days passed, he and Risa found themselves more and more interested by the abilities their friends possessed and, after giving it much thought, they both asked of their friends to teach them about magic. They agreed and the training started immediately, all theory of course. A week later, Lucas decided it would be good to put theory into practice and organized a simulated battle. At the end of the ‘test’ the siblings could read the happiness in their friend’s eyes, with perhaps a glint of pride carefully hidden, and they understood that they had done well. After saying good-night to their friends that evening, he and Risa decided to have a serious talk with their parents. They began by telling them all about magic, their meeting with Lucas and Angela, them learning magic and their desire to move to Mid-Childa to continue their magical studies.
Naturally, their parents refused and began to wonder where children went to get that kind of imagination. Frowning at their parents’ closed minds, he and Risa looked at each other and nodded in agreement. They asked their parents to go outside with them for a bit and, though reluctantly, the adults went along wondering what trick they were trying to pull. Out in their garden, the children demonstrated a few of their newly found abilities. After the short demonstration, their parents were aghast at what they had just witnessed. Not being able to believe their eyes, they asked their children to give them some time to discuss and think it over. Grinning, the siblings agreed and they retired for the night. In the morning, their parents told them their decision. Even if they could use magic, it was unreasonable of them to ask all of a sudden to move to a different planet. When the siblings looked at them as though a meteorite had just crashed in front of them, their parents smiled and said that, while they wouldn’t move from Earth, there was no reason their children should stay. Risa’s eyes immediately lit up but Hiro asked for further explanation. It seemed a little fishy that, overnight, they had changed their minds, even if not completely. Their parents explained their plan of talking with their mage friends’ parents and asking them if they could take both he and Risa back to Mid-Childa, expenses paid of course. They organized a meeting while the children played and came to an agreement. About two days later, Angela and Lucas had to go back, not without saying good-bye though and the siblings greeted smiling. Not wanting to ruin the surprise, Risa gave them nothing more than hints about meeting again soon while Hiro stood in the background, not opening his mouth once, and Lucas knew better than to try and get something out from him. After the procedures, the moving and all the details were finished, the siblings started training and studying diligently for the entrance exams that were going to take place soon.
Finally, the time for the exams came and went. They both impatiently awaited the results and it could easily be noted they were very nervous. When the results were displayed, after what seemed an eternity for them, they happily gave each other a high five. Searching for the rest of their squad, they happened to bump into a sergeant that kindly led them towards the lobby where the others awaited. Hiro couldn’t be happier when he saw the other members of the squad. Lucas, looking as cool and serious as always, and Angela pacing around the lobby were the only ones there. The sergeant made the introductions and they played along until he finally went away. As soon as he disappeared from sight, Angela and Risa were on each other, looking as though they were suffocating a little from the strength of their hug. Lucas and Hiro laughed at this after their handshake and laughed even more when both girls looked at them with very angry faces. Four years after this, Warrant Officer Cassandra Alexa Ivanov took command of their squad with Chief Master Sergeant Kali as sub-commander. Two years later, they all received two promotions, the youngsters from Privates Second Class to Leading Privates, Cassandra and Kali respectively from Warrant Officer to First Flight Lieutenant and from Chief Master Sergeant to Second Flight Lieutenant. They are all currently in a investigation mission concerning Lost Logias discovered in the fifth dimension supervised by the TSAB, alongside the warship ‘Nadia’.
Personality: Hiro, A.K.A Hiro-kun, is a proficient Mid-Childa mage that finally entered the military as he always dreamed and is now aiming to become a Sky mage, since when he was on Earth his dream was to become a great pilot. Training since the age of 10, he is one of the few rare Earthlings to possess magical powers and is a very good rival to whoever wishes to pick a fight with him. Thanks to his many achievements on the battlefield, he got promoted very quickly, making a 3 rank jump in 6 years, from Private Third Class to Leading Private, something that is not unheard of but is highly uncommon.
Hiro is very fond of sports, something in which he happens to resemble Angela, in contrast to his sister who prefers to quietly read books or take strolls in the woods, something that Lucas also like to do apart from investigating. He can usually be found playing some sport with Angela, skateboarding or looking to improve his fighting style so the team can rely a bit more on him.
Easy-going and a little of a happy-go-lucky guy, he can also be quite closed and taciturn if he chooses to be. He cares deeply for his sister and he tries to keep an eye open for her in battle, something she does likewise, so she’ll avoid getting hurt. He chose the position of Center Guard because it permitted him to use his specialty, bombardment magic, and so he could give support as much as he could without being a hindrance, something that he would’ve been had he chosen to become a Front Attacker for example. He always watches out for the rest of the team and greatly admires Cass who happens to be an all-purpose magical Knight Summoner.
Bombardment Attacks:
Chained Shot: Multiple magical bullets are fired, one after the other, tied by small chains. When they’re about to hit the target, the chains break and the bullets disperse to hit from different angles.
Icy Bullet: Shoots an ice property bullet that freezes anything in its path until it hits the designated target. If it successfully attains its mark, it slowly starts freezing him/her as well.
Laser: Highly concentrated Energy type shots that when they strike the enemy may have different effects on him/her.
Sniper Cross: Learned from Cassandra, although he sometimes modifies the shot so it will become ice elemental.
Elemental Attacks:
Freeze Lancer: A rift of ice opens in front of Hiro and multiple varied weapons made of solid frost shoot towards the targets.
Frost Hurricane: Creates an ice tornado that shoots medium-sized glaciers against the targets.
Combined Attacks:
Arc Impulse: Hiro casts ice properties into Phoenix, while Risa casts fire magic to Firebrand, then Lucas jumps into the air and turns around in a downward motion, giving a strong slash, just as Angela slashes the enemy in a diagonal way, forming a fire and ice cross-shaped wound on the target.
Freezing Overlord: Lucas and Hiro both cast Water and Ice magic respectively and form a vicious and bitter ice storm with small glaciers crashing towards the targets caught in the area. Area-of effect attack.
Going to sleep. See you guys later and I'll post comments on other characters as well when I come back ^^.
Unison Device Sakura: Wii~~ It's complete desu! Time to play with them desu! Kha: Knowing you, I think they'd be very very scared...
I wonder if Cass treats them like her own children. I get this feeling that she does. Going to need that for her characterisation, which IMO seems like a silent but firm okasan type.
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I'm thinking that the units were probably bearing the main brunt of the work before Yuuno took over, and after he did, he streamlined a lot of the work, which would explain why the 8th IAR is now down to only two members.
Probably all the IAR units in general are but one facet of the corps of clerks assigned to the Infinite Library (which may or may not actually be infinite), and so Yuuno, as Head Librarian, probably only knows Halley and May in a professional manner. (Whether or not he keeps any pictures of Halley under his bed... let's not go there.)
We the 300 will personally skin him for a cashmere jacket if he does that.
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Personally, I'm hoping that we'll see more of Yuuno's work in StrikerS, since otherwise, I'll be going entirely from guesswork. The Infinite Library concept has fascinated me ever since I read about Borges' Library of Babel, and I'd hate to have to keep correcting the story due to new canon information.
On an odd note, I had a random idea about this when creating the 8th IAR, with the 8th IAR and the 37th CIAA joining forces to explore the depths of the Infinite Library for some reason or another, but then I realized that I would have no way of stopping myself from making bad jokes about random orangutans.
Ah yes the Librarian. I do believe he's in there, given that the Library does run through several dimensions. So far, when it comes to Yuuno, I characterize most officer's reactions to Yuuno as that orangutan. Save Chrono for obvious reasons.
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I'm not sure if I'm reading the references correctly here...
Its part H***** and part Imperium of Man from WH40K.
You see, it was rumored that the Holy Immortal God Empress of the old Holy Velka Imperiallon had S.H. for her initials. And when Kha was casually listening to Whispers originating from other dimensions, he heard Her Excellency S******* H*****, once even more damningly GOD EMPRESS S******* H*****. The Saint Church Department for Cultural Recovery and Preservation has yet to prove or disprove this theory, so if something like what I thought of happened...
Kyon comes to the club room and discovers a probational member in his SOS Dan. And he just realized that Haruhi discovered that Magicusers would be rather fun to meet as well.
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Since villians seem to be popular now, here's the profiles of two of them. Code-named Threshold and Pain.
Spoiler for TSAB Profile #47C6: Threshold:
Real Name: Unknown Gender: Female Age: Appears to be 10
Magical Power: B (S without limiter) Magical Style: Belkan (Assumed Neo-Belkan style) Device: None Threat Level: S+
History:
On the eleventh day of the second month of the year 0072 a small village of the name Ghast of the 7th Administered World was attacked by unknown forces. Threshold was found to be the only survivor. The nature of the attack is still unknown as Threshold has refused to talk about the incident. The TSAB has taken custody of her at that point of time. Her magical power was found to be extremely high at the time and due to her unpredictable nature, a limiter was put onto her.
On the sixteenth day of the third month of the same year, Threshold had gone missing. Search efforts ended in failure. On the first day of the next month, a team surveying a mountainous region in the northern hemisphere of the 32nd Non-Administered world encountered Threshold along with another girl of similar appearence and was quickly attacked. The team received no permanent damage from the attack but was subjected to an immense amount of pain.
The two girls appeared again on a number of times, each seemingly randomly and at seemingly random locations. They are prone to attack anybody that they encounter, including TSAB members. It is recommended that anybody who encounters Threshold to retreat immediately and report the incident to the 38th Special Investigations team.
About:
The limiter that was placed on Threshold appears to still by in place. However, she seems to have somehow learned how to distribute the effects of the limiter to others during battle, limiting thier capabilities. In battle, she is known to attach limiters to her opponents, bringing their magical power level to B. This is known to have the side effect of bringing about a large amount of pain at the same time. The limiter is released when the battle is over.
In addition, she has shown to be an expert in barrier and shield spells during combat. As all forces who attempted attack on her were subjected to the limiter, there is no known report of any attack getting through.
She was not known to talk while she was in custody, however, during the recent attacks she is known to complain about pain. The type of pain is not specified. It is unknown how this pain has came about, however it seems to be constant and consistant.
Spoiler for TSAB Profile #47C7: Pain:
Real Name: Unknown Gender: Female Age: Appears to be 10
History:
On the first day of the fourth month of the year 0072 on the 32nd Non-Administered World, Pain was first discovered and was with Threshold. During this encounter, Pain and Threshold fought and defeated the TSAB officers present.
From this time, the two appeared again and again seemingly randomly attacking anybody that they encounter. They do not kill or even cause any permanent injury to the people they attack but often inflict an immense amount of pain. It is recommended that anybody who encounters Threshold to retreat immediately and report the incident to the 38th Special Investigations team.
Her origins are completely unknown, but it is believed that she might be the sister of Threshold due to similar appearence. The two has always appeared together since Pain's first appearence.
About:
Pain is quick and powerful, often using her large scythe-type device for attack. Despite how it may look, even direct attacks with her scythe weapon don't cause any physical damage but is purely magical. In addition, she is known to often use many short and medium-range light beam attacks. Pain has yet to demonstrate capability of attacking from long ranges.
Pain relies on Threshold for defensive capabilities who seems to lack them on her own. However, due to Threshold's limiting spells, Pain often overwhelms her opponents by being at least four and half ranks higher.
As is Threshold, Pain is known to complain about pain often, although Pain is more vocal about it. She seems to also blame the other party, whoever it might be, for the pain, as well as asking them to "stop". The reasons for this are as of yet unknown.
Pain originally had a big sword, but I decided to change the weapon.
One word: OWWWWW!!! That was pretty much my limit. Seems like they fight using psionics as well, being able to share their pain. Hmm... A random encounter with them is in order.
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Part III is here. This time, it's a simple highlight on Saga's device and it's A.I.
Spoiler for Part III : Heart of Golden:
~Part III : Null, Daughter of Kruez~
A young girl, with a light-toned hair, donned in Knight Armor of a Belka Knight, fitted with a black inner-layer with golden trimmings and a white protective overcoat... afloat amidst a indescribable unknown civilization, with gigantic towers of steel and metal towering over and bright lights not from flames or magic illuminating the place.
The beautiful young girl, holding a golden staff adorned with a Belka cross, almost an identical twin of a device to my Schwertkreuz Null, which by nature, was a staff-blade and not a staff. She held out hers and cited a spell aimed at…something I could not see.
My visions turned to the darkness, as I remember only 2 words.
Ragnarok. Breaker.
[Meister.]
[Meister.]
My visions, blurry as they are returned, but I see is not foreign civilizations or unknown mages, but merely my self-made custom device additionally retrofitted with my own raised A.I, Schwertkreuz Null and her voice, calling out to me.
[Are you awake, Meister? You looked like you were dreaming.]
“Null, let me try something for a bit.”
I grabbed hold of Null, but unlike the usual where I held her on the handle of it, located within its surrounding edge of the golden ring, I held it like a staff, just like how the girl did, and closing my eyes, I went into a mental simulation.
I didn’t know for sure what came over me. I just felt like trying what I saw. It felt so real…like a vision. I held out Null, and tried to release Ragnarok Breaker…Nothing happened. Which should be natural, as I’ve never heard of such a spell. The closest thing I have to it is my very own crafted Tri-Heart Break, a tri-status spell which concentrates 3 beams of mass energy into a single attack. I left the simulation, and put Null back on the table, as I went ahead to drink a cup of coffee.
“Ah…so it was just a dream.”
[What was, Meister? And what was it that you did earlier, holding me like that? You’ve never touched and held me that way before, at least not when you aren’t cleaning me.]
“I had this dream…A dream of a young girl knight, wielding you…or at least something that looks extremely similar in the form of a staff and casting off a spell. It was also at some exotic location I’ve never seen, with giant towers and lights all over… I thought like trying, but in the end…it’s just a dream, I suppose.”
[…]
“What?”
[Are you sure that’s not just some half-baked excuse so that you can feel me up?]
“Wha-“
[As in “seku-hara”] (( sexual harassment ))
I spit out my coffee. Literally.
~~~
Unbeknownst to Saga and Null…Astra was using his chains to eavesdrop on the conversation between the master and device…with the entire Zerstroritter listening in. Isdera looked just as he always does, while Wira was confused. On the other hand, Astra was trying to not die from laughter at that moment.
“I wish you could cut out this bad habit of yours. Listening in to private conversations…General Saga’s of all people. Don’t you agree, Zulfiqar?” asked Isdera towards his own device, hoping for a positive response.
[….]
“Zulfiqar?”
[I need to sharpen.]
“Sharpening? But we just reinforced your blade yeste-“
[I. need. sharpening. now.]
“I can’t understand you at times. Alright.”
As Isdera left for his device’s bidding, Volkrux and Vorhang were in a conversation of their own.
[What’s up with the little bugger?]
[It’s that time of the month. You know, the time that comes every time Null rubs Zul off the wrong way, intentionally or not.]
It’s just the way things are with the Zerstroritters.
~~~
“Seku-hara!? Where did you learn that word? Do you even know what it means?”
[Astra taught me, Meister.]
“That lousy…”
“Anyway, even if I put aside the logical differences that I’m a perfectly healthy man who IS NOT having any complex towards non-human life forms while you are a A.I, world of difference there… You’re like a daughter or sister to me. Ever since 15 years ago till today, I raised you and taught you.”
[Doesn’t that make things worse? Astra mentioned stuff like sis-cons and daughter-cons as well.]
“You know what, I give up. Next time, just delete off any idiotic comments Astra feeds you.”
I sighed. To think that the little bubbling A.I that can barely speak coherent sentences 15 years ago has now learned and grown up to be such a naughty little female A.I. Yes…even before I equipped her on my self-designed Schwertkreuz Null, she had been with me for many years now with many different form of devices be it my very first storage training device to my current weapon. Schwertkreuz Null, my yellow golden blade-staff weapon, with a ring around the blade’s hilt along with sharp cross patterns around the ring. It may seem inconvenient and easy to hurt the user, but managing the use of extra blades around the held ring is important. Along with the cross pattern at the end edge of the staff-blade, Schwertkreuz Null is a peculiar form indeed to most people, since it doesn’t really serve as a middle-ground between a sword and a staff despite its looks… My main idea of its designs came from a key pattern anyway…A large-sized key for a weapon…Doesn’t exactly sound intimidating.
Null. 15 years ago, I found her as an inactive A.I in the corners of the library, without any personified data whatsoever. People…did not bother with something that would take years to reach a level where it could just be programmed so instantly, but I didn’t. I took her, raised her, and taught her books and words, adapting our styles together… It was like a transformation from a baby girl to a cheerful, obedient yet smart young girl.
To think she was being corrupted by Astra’s pick-up languages and misleading words… What horrors.
[I’ll forgive you this once, but you better promise me that you won’t play hooky too much with Zwei and Drei.]
“They’re still you…just different forms of Schwertkreuz depending on the battle needs. Besides, Zwei’s TBS Mode and Drei’s Phase Shift Guardner drains a lot of magical power, and is really not that much needed unless dire anyway.”
[Urusai!]
Is this a rebellious phase?
This is one is kinda less dramatic, and more comical as in it's interactions between Null and Saga. A war without some comedy or quirky family bonding is boring anyway.
As for what is Zwei and Drei...that comes much later when Saga's l33t fighting skills get to show itself in full form of Null, Zwei and Drei. The next one should either be the battle between Signum and Isdera that earned them their nicknames, or Saga and Reinforce's first meeting, depending on writing mood.
There's a bunch of references here too, most of which should be quite easy. :P
Ahem. I saw "seku-hara" and my mind pretty much went .
It seems like some CCS here, with the Sakura-witnessing-the-past-but-Clow-can-sense-her idea. That's pretty much what I could, other than the winner Soundstage reference. I like how Swertkreuz grew up over time. And I pity both Null AND Saga. It's that time of a girl's life. At least he should be glad that Null isn't going to be able to bring home dubious Devices. I hope.
Kyon comes to the club room and discovers a probational member in his SOS Dan. And he just realized that Haruhi discovered that Magicusers would be rather fun to meet as well.
And so we meet our Slider.
EDIT: And for something completely different.
Spoiler for Excerpt:
"Yoo-hoo!" Halley yelled across the crowded hallway. Several clerks glanced at her, and a couple began to raise their arms to wave back at her, before realizing that they were not the target of the greeting.
"That idiot," Rancer muttered, but without much rancour.
"Um, Captain LaSalle..."
"Let me introduce the two of you," Rancer said, as Halley stared speculatively at Reiz. "Captain Halley Rainier, this is Corporal Reiz Astra, newly transferred into the 37th CIAA. Reiz, Halley."
Reiz saluted, but shrank back under Halley's intense gaze.
"Well, well," Halley said. "Where'd you pick this one up?"
"You'll have to ask Major Alto about that," Rancer said.
Halley pounced onto Reiz, hugging her tightly. "You'll have to tell me your measurements," she exclaimed. "I have just the perfect outfit for you!"
"Eek!"
"All right, that's enough, Halley," Rancer said firmly, separating the two. "I already have to deal with Ivey as it is. Reiz is not to be harassed, okay?"
Halley glared at him. "Spoilsport. This isn't over yet."
"Reiz, never let yourself be alone with Halley. Or Ivey. Or, gods forbid, both at once. Halley, we're here on business. We need access to certain restricted information, Level D4 type."
"And you need an IAR member with you, right? Come right this way!" Halley cheerfully shoved open the door to the Infinite Library section, nearly walking right over a burly man in an Enforcer uniform. "Hi, Doyle!"
"Don't call me Doyle," the man growled, before stomping off.
"Who's he?" Rancer wondered.
"He's an Enforcer temporarily attached to the 5th IAR. He writes mystery novels on the side, so I call him Conan Doyle. You know? That author from the 97th Non-Administered World? Anyway, he sometimes gets uppity, so when that happens I just sock him one and he gets back in his place."
"Please, no violence on our parts," Rancer sighed. "Hopefully we'll finish what we have to do soon so we don't have to deal with Conan the Librarian."
No worries, original messing is even better, especialy when you have a good idea! By standard, this is an above average character, partly because David Brown and Hikki have pushed the bar so S*******-high. But IMO any character who can manipulate the fabric of time and space should qualify as an SS+, even SSS. For that is a heck load of energy required IMO. The only thing uber about Kha is that his borrowed Light powers makes him next-to-unkillable. Sever his divine link, and he's left with pretty much nothing. Very good character. Nice history and everthing's been thought out. No wall of skills, thankfully. Now to make use of him...
Well, I wasn't sure myself which rank should Serge get, in the end I decided to make his rank represent his level in Mid-Childa style magic disregarding his abilities to manipulate magic particles (they need a shorter name how about magitrons?). So in terms of using regular magic he's just above average (do you see where this thread took us? talking about AAA as something just above average - must rewatch S1 to get things right ), and taking the Device out of consideration he'll be somewhere around B probably (or rather he'll be pretty much dead).
Good point about energy requirements of high-level manipulations, I'll note that I should describe this regarding magitrons (users of regular magic may go add themselves another rank - JoJo's Bizzare Adventures come to mind: No matter how hax0red is a character there'll be always someone who'll find a way around the hax ... well, sometimes with a counterhax ).
And feel free to make use of Serge, I wonder where his not-completely-a-good-guy attitude and disobedient Device would get him
On another topic: was the way the pain-sharing loli imbues her victims with limiters revealed yet? is it pure psionics or there's some material manifestation?
Overall how will the heroes overcome psionic attacks? In Nanoha there were no such occasions as far as I remember, so what should be taken as the basis?
"Magic is the term for the process in which energy is projected to affect things in both levels, physical and energetic. It is also the term for the process in which energy is gathered, given polarity and property, and then realized into the physical world- the reverse of most nuclear processes- which matter turns into energy."
- Unknown
*yes, i'm bored...
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Even divinity has its limits.
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@ CATS:
your Arisa AV rocks - do you have the whole pic?
the device that she's with sparked another alteration to my fan version of Arisa.
... talk about insane backlog.... I think we've had more character profiles made in the past few hours than in the past week combined
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Originally Posted by Meophist
Since villians seem to be popular now, here's the profiles of two of them. Code-named Threshold and Pain.
Spoiler for TSAB Profile #47C6: Threshold:
Real Name: Unknown Gender: Female Age: Appears to be 10
Magical Power: B (S without limiter) Magical Style: Belkan (Assumed Neo-Belkan style) Device: None Threat Level: S+
History:
On the eleventh day of the second month of the year 0072 a small village of the name Ghast of the 7th Administered World was attacked by unknown forces. Threshold was found to be the only survivor. The nature of the attack is still unknown as Threshold has refused to talk about the incident. The TSAB has taken custody of her at that point of time. Her magical power was found to be extremely high at the time and due to her unpredictable nature, a limiter was put onto her.
On the sixteenth day of the third month of the same year, Threshold had gone missing. Search efforts ended in failure. On the first day of the next month, a team surveying a mountainous region in the northern hemisphere of the 32nd Non-Administered world encountered Threshold along with another girl of similar appearence and was quickly attacked. The team received no permanent damage from the attack but was subjected to an immense amount of pain.
The two girls appeared again on a number of times, each seemingly randomly and at seemingly random locations. They are prone to attack anybody that they encounter, including TSAB members. It is recommended that anybody who encounters Threshold to retreat immediately and report the incident to the 38th Special Investigations team.
About:
The limiter that was placed on Threshold appears to still by in place. However, she seems to have somehow learned how to distribute the effects of the limiter to others during battle, limiting thier capabilities. In battle, she is known to attach limiters to her opponents, bringing their magical power level to B. This is known to have the side effect of bringing about a large amount of pain at the same time. The limiter is released when the battle is over.
In addition, she has shown to be an expert in barrier and shield spells during combat. As all forces who attempted attack on her were subjected to the limiter, there is no known report of any attack getting through.
She was not known to talk while she was in custody, however, during the recent attacks she is known to complain about pain. The type of pain is not specified. It is unknown how this pain has came about, however it seems to be constant and consistant.
Spoiler for TSAB Profile #47C7: Pain:
Real Name: Unknown Gender: Female Age: Appears to be 10
History:
On the first day of the fourth month of the year 0072 on the 32nd Non-Administered World, Pain was first discovered and was with Threshold. During this encounter, Pain and Threshold fought and defeated the TSAB officers present.
From this time, the two appeared again and again seemingly randomly attacking anybody that they encounter. They do not kill or even cause any permanent injury to the people they attack but often inflict an immense amount of pain. It is recommended that anybody who encounters Threshold to retreat immediately and report the incident to the 38th Special Investigations team.
Her origins are completely unknown, but it is believed that she might be the sister of Threshold due to similar appearence. The two has always appeared together since Pain's first appearence.
About:
Pain is quick and powerful, often using her large scythe-type device for attack. Despite how it may look, even direct attacks with her scythe weapon don't cause any physical damage but is purely magical. In addition, she is known to often use many short and medium-range light beam attacks. Pain has yet to demonstrate capability of attacking from long ranges.
Pain relies on Threshold for defensive capabilities who seems to lack them on her own. However, due to Threshold's limiting spells, Pain often overwhelms her opponents by being at least four and half ranks higher.
As is Threshold, Pain is known to complain about pain often, although Pain is more vocal about it. She seems to also blame the other party, whoever it might be, for the pain, as well as asking them to "stop". The reasons for this are as of yet unknown.
Pain originally had a big sword, but I decided to change the weapon.
Pain and Threshold are quite mysterious at the moment (obviously due to their rather scant descriptions), still as Villains they are quite powerful already (like Erio, I'm wondering how Threshold places limiters on her opponents), and a scythe user? I like The pair seem to be the Shield and Aegis type, one providing defense, the other offense, very cool
Although Pain is bound to have a lot of pun problems in the future
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Originally Posted by Nightengale
Part III is here. This time, it's a simple highlight on Saga's device and it's A.I.
Spoiler for Part III : Heart of Golden:
~Part III : Null, Daughter of Kruez~
A young girl, with a light-toned hair, donned in Knight Armor of a Belka Knight, fitted with a black inner-layer with golden trimmings and a white protective overcoat... afloat amidst a indescribable unknown civilization, with gigantic towers of steel and metal towering over and bright lights not from flames or magic illuminating the place.
The beautiful young girl, holding a golden staff adorned with a Belka cross, almost an identical twin of a device to my Schwertkreuz Null, which by nature, was a staff-blade and not a staff. She held out hers and cited a spell aimed at…something I could not see.
My visions turned to the darkness, as I remember only 2 words.
Ragnarok. Breaker.
[Meister.]
[Meister.]
My visions, blurry as they are returned, but I see is not foreign civilizations or unknown mages, but merely my self-made custom device additionally retrofitted with my own raised A.I, Schwertkreuz Null and her voice, calling out to me.
[Are you awake, Meister? You looked like you were dreaming.]
“Null, let me try something for a bit.”
I grabbed hold of Null, but unlike the usual where I held her on the handle of it, located within its surrounding edge of the golden ring, I held it like a staff, just like how the girl did, and closing my eyes, I went into a mental simulation.
I didn’t know for sure what came over me. I just felt like trying what I saw. It felt so real…like a vision. I held out Null, and tried to release Ragnarok Breaker…Nothing happened. Which should be natural, as I’ve never heard of such a spell. The closest thing I have to it is my very own crafted Tri-Heart Break, a tri-status spell which concentrates 3 beams of mass energy into a single attack. I left the simulation, and put Null back on the table, as I went ahead to drink a cup of coffee.
“Ah…so it was just a dream.”
[What was, Meister? And what was it that you did earlier, holding me like that? You’ve never touched and held me that way before, at least not when you aren’t cleaning me.]
“I had this dream…A dream of a young girl knight, wielding you…or at least something that looks extremely similar in the form of a staff and casting off a spell. It was also at some exotic location I’ve never seen, with giant towers and lights all over… I thought like trying, but in the end…it’s just a dream, I suppose.”
[…]
“What?”
[Are you sure that’s not just some half-baked excuse so that you can feel me up?]
“Wha-“
[As in “seku-hara”] (( sexual harassment ))
I spit out my coffee. Literally.
~~~
Unbeknownst to Saga and Null…Astra was using his chains to eavesdrop on the conversation between the master and device…with the entire Zerstroritter listening in. Isdera looked just as he always does, while Wira was confused. On the other hand, Astra was trying to not die from laughter at that moment.
“I wish you could cut out this bad habit of yours. Listening in to private conversations…General Saga’s of all people. Don’t you agree, Zulfiqar?” asked Isdera towards his own device, hoping for a positive response.
[….]
“Zulfiqar?”
[I need to sharpen.]
“Sharpening? But we just reinforced your blade yeste-“
[I. need. sharpening. now.]
“I can’t understand you at times. Alright.”
As Isdera left for his device’s bidding, Volkrux and Vorhang were in a conversation of their own.
[What’s up with the little bugger?]
[It’s that time of the month. You know, the time that comes every time Null rubs Zul off the wrong way, intentionally or not.]
It’s just the way things are with the Zerstroritters.
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“Seku-hara!? Where did you learn that word? Do you even know what it means?”
[Astra taught me, Meister.]
“That lousy…”
“Anyway, even if I put aside the logical differences that I’m a perfectly healthy man who IS NOT having any complex towards non-human life forms while you are a A.I, world of difference there… You’re like a daughter or sister to me. Ever since 15 years ago till today, I raised you and taught you.”
[Doesn’t that make things worse? Astra mentioned stuff like sis-cons and daughter-cons as well.]
“You know what, I give up. Next time, just delete off any idiotic comments Astra feeds you.”
I sighed. To think that the little bubbling A.I that can barely speak coherent sentences 15 years ago has now learned and grown up to be such a naughty little female A.I. Yes…even before I equipped her on my self-designed Schwertkreuz Null, she had been with me for many years now with many different form of devices be it my very first storage training device to my current weapon. Schwertkreuz Null, my yellow golden blade-staff weapon, with a ring around the blade’s hilt along with sharp cross patterns around the ring. It may seem inconvenient and easy to hurt the user, but managing the use of extra blades around the held ring is important. Along with the cross pattern at the end edge of the staff-blade, Schwertkreuz Null is a peculiar form indeed to most people, since it doesn’t really serve as a middle-ground between a sword and a staff despite its looks… My main idea of its designs came from a key pattern anyway…A large-sized key for a weapon…Doesn’t exactly sound intimidating.
Null. 15 years ago, I found her as an inactive A.I in the corners of the library, without any personified data whatsoever. People…did not bother with something that would take years to reach a level where it could just be programmed so instantly, but I didn’t. I took her, raised her, and taught her books and words, adapting our styles together… It was like a transformation from a baby girl to a cheerful, obedient yet smart young girl.
To think she was being corrupted by Astra’s pick-up languages and misleading words… What horrors.
[I’ll forgive you this once, but you better promise me that you won’t play hooky too much with Zwei and Drei.]
“They’re still you…just different forms of Schwertkreuz depending on the battle needs. Besides, Zwei’s TBS Mode and Drei’s Phase Shift Guardner drains a lot of magical power, and is really not that much needed unless dire anyway.”
[Urusai!]
Is this a rebellious phase?
This is one is kinda less dramatic, and more comical as in it's interactions between Null and Saga. A war without some comedy or quirky family bonding is boring anyway.
As for what is Zwei and Drei...that comes much later when Saga's l33t fighting skills get to show itself in full form of Null, Zwei and Drei. The next one should either be the battle between Signum and Isdera that earned them their nicknames, or Saga and Reinforce's first meeting, depending on writing mood.
There's a bunch of references here too, most of which should be quite easy. :P
... thanks for making me spit my drink on the monitor
It begs the question of how Astra could learn such words in the distant past of the Zerstoritter, unless there's a dimensional time-space differential involved Nonetheless, Null is now in contention with Sakurazaki as "Most Awesome OC Device Personality" ever
IIRC Saga is still alive in StrikerS right? So I'm wondering how he'll react when he first meets Hayate...
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Originally Posted by USB500
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Alright, since I had been absent for 3 days (stupid limited Internet availability at village D: ) I'm going to post everything I had worked on along the period of time.
[cut for awesome length]
BEHOLD!!!111oneoneeleven
*knocked down*
That was long... and satisfying. Unlimited Blade Works seem to be a VERY popular spell to have these days, but each with their own variation. I wonder what it'll look like if Hikki, Alexandra and Sophia combine their versions into a single all-encompassing attack
*prepares for the end of the world*
BTW, on Whistling Gale, what do you mean..."reset" the target?
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Originally Posted by Ratler
With your permission, I would like to use that image as part of Alex's profile.
"As I see it sir... it's yours anyway".
I'll try doing Staff form next, which'll be easier since I'll be using the Blitz form as a template. And I might even do Clyuno mode as well, although that one will take a while
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Originally Posted by An Hero in Disguise
At last I was able to finish my little contribution to OC thread, feel free to comment
[cut for awesome length]
A full history with practical descriptions how that all works in combat is yet to follow. So far I'm still able to implement some changes if necessary.
(reading other profiles it seems I managed not to cross the borders of admissible brokeness, did I?)
Trying to create a new style of magic and with attacks to boot in such detail... truly that is awesome Serge reminds me of Laplace's Demon though, especially with Aether Insight.
And AO is quite the megalomanic uncooperative device there
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Originally Posted by Fuyu no Sora
Once again 3 freaking AM in the morning. I have to stop posting so late ><. In anycase. Finally, I present you the last member of the Blue Flame Squad under the command of Cassandra Ivanov, Hiro Nakamura enters the game!
This is the longest of the squad profiles (Not counting Cass and Kali). It contains a very detailed version of some scenes mentioned in other profiles and other additional information.
Spoiler for Hiro Nakamura:
Name: Hiro Nakamura Age: 16 years old Birthday: September 19th Mage Ranks: AA+ Magic Type: Mid-Childa Mage Magic Color: Dark Blue Circle Element Preference: Ice magic Squad Position: Center Guard. Height: 165 cm Weight: 70 Kg Hair Color: Blond Eye Color: Green Zodiac: Virgo Weapons: Kirin, Twin Guns Defense Outfit: Barrier Jacket powered Relationships: Risa Nakamura: Younger Sister; Lucas and Angela Hale: Friends Nickname: Hiro-kun
History:
Hiro had always dreamed of following in his father’s footsteps and become part of the military. Seiji Nakamura was one of the few elite Colonels the Air Forces had seen in a long time and his records were excellent, therefore, inspiring his son to follow him down the same path. He researched and investigated everything about tactics, combat strategies and intensive training, all of whom he dragged Risa into so she could help him out and spar with him, teaching her at the same time. Since Risa practiced martial arts, they used that to create a hybrid combat style that combined Taekwondo, Karate and standard military hand-to-hand combat. Their practices took away most of their free time and whenever they learned a new technique, they immediately went to practice it and try to fit it in their newly created style. When Hiro was 10, his family went for a surprise visit to his mother’s brother’s house, which happened to be in the edge of the woods near their own home, only to be surprised themselves at seeing two other people at their uncle’s. With nothing interesting to do in the house, since the adults were talking about dreary stuff, Hiro went out to take a walk in the woods, not before asking Risa if she wanted to join him though. As they walked through the small forest, they were reminded of all the time that had passed since they last went there and stopped from time to time to watch small groups of little trees that they had planted a few years before. Arriving near the heart of the woods, they sat down for a while and Risa spaced out “Probably composing poems again” Hiro thought to himself vaguely. About two minutes passed until a huge ruckus could be heard from somewhere near them.
Frowning at the noise, Hiro got up and went to see what the heck was causing such a commotion, closely followed by Risa who had snapped out of her reverie and looked as curious as he was annoyed. Soon enough they found out that the cause of such an uproar were a boy and girl about their age that seemed engrossed in a furious fight. The boy was handling a medium-sized scythe, whose blade was shining a bright green color, and the girl carried a two-handed, double-bladed axe that was glowing in a dark yellow shade. They watched each other for a moment before having a go against the other. The girl swung her axe at the boy who countered by veering his scythe in the direction that opposed the place where the axe was supposed to hit, clashing with the said axe. Smirking, the boy jumped a few feet away from her and reared his weapon to thrust it forwards after a few seconds, unleashing a boomerang-like energy wave that missed the girl by inches. Smiling as well, the girl separated her axe in two and used the end that had the blades to throw them at the boy. Evading the deadly blades, the boy looked accusingly at the spot the girl had just been standing in, only to receive a blow from his left flank by the mini-spear that the non-sharp end of the separated weapon formed. Their eyes met and, after a short nod of understanding, their weapons disappeared. Now barehanded, they adopted a combat stance. The girl seemed a bit distracted as she rescanned the area surrounding them. The boy noted this and took advantage of the situation to catch his opponent off-guard by getting behind her and delivering a hasty yet precise kick in the back of her knees to make her lose her balance. The girl responded by jumping away from him and landing on her hands before performing two back flips to regain a proper distance and her footing. She allowed herself two seconds to breathe in before launching herself at the boy, elbowing the spot to her right in which the boy had appeared after sidestepping her attack.
Flinching a little he grabbed the girl’s arm and used it to throw her against a tree. She flipped around in mid-air and used the said tree as a platform of sorts to thrust herself forwards, charging once again against her opponent. Smirking at the motion, he ducked and as the she passed over him, he got up in time to give her a head butt in the stomach. Not expecting that kind of sneak attack, the girl found herself unable to neither dodge nor block it, therefore receiving it in full force. Propelled upwards, she lingered on the sky for a bit before gravity forced her back down towards the earth. Regaining her senses, she grabbed a tree branch before the crash and swung herself a couple of times before letting go and kicking her rival in the shoulder, having missed the neck where she was aiming. The boy was thrown face first into the ground and stayed there for three seconds before rising again and adopting once again his combat stance. The girl landed and did the same as they glared at each other. While all this was going on, Hiro was aghast at what he was witnessing. What were these kids? Where did they learn to fight like that? The battle raged on for five more minutes before the duelists decided to call it a draw and finally noticed him and Risa gawking at them.
Obviously for them that kind of thing was normal, but nor for Hiro and Risa, so when inquired upon what they were, they simply responded “We’re Belka Knights. Isn’t it obvious?” completely lost, the Nakamura siblings asked for further explanations and once they received them, they could not believe their ears, but what their eyes had beheld directed them to believe the things the ‘Belka Knights’ told them. After the explanations, they introduced themselves properly and Hiro felt soon enough that he would like Lucas. As the days passed, he and Risa found themselves more and more interested by the abilities their friends possessed and, after giving it much thought, they both asked of their friends to teach them about magic. They agreed and the training started immediately, all theory of course. A week later, Lucas decided it would be good to put theory into practice and organized a simulated battle. At the end of the ‘test’ the siblings could read the happiness in their friend’s eyes, with perhaps a glint of pride carefully hidden, and they understood that they had done well. After saying good-night to their friends that evening, he and Risa decided to have a serious talk with their parents. They began by telling them all about magic, their meeting with Lucas and Angela, them learning magic and their desire to move to Mid-Childa to continue their magical studies.
Naturally, their parents refused and began to wonder where children went to get that kind of imagination. Frowning at their parents’ closed minds, he and Risa looked at each other and nodded in agreement. They asked their parents to go outside with them for a bit and, though reluctantly, the adults went along wondering what trick they were trying to pull. Out in their garden, the children demonstrated a few of their newly found abilities. After the short demonstration, their parents were aghast at what they had just witnessed. Not being able to believe their eyes, they asked their children to give them some time to discuss and think it over. Grinning, the siblings agreed and they retired for the night. In the morning, their parents told them their decision. Even if they could use magic, it was unreasonable of them to ask all of a sudden to move to a different planet. When the siblings looked at them as though a meteorite had just crashed in front of them, their parents smiled and said that, while they wouldn’t move from Earth, there was no reason their children should stay. Risa’s eyes immediately lit up but Hiro asked for further explanation. It seemed a little fishy that, overnight, they had changed their minds, even if not completely. Their parents explained their plan of talking with their mage friends’ parents and asking them if they could take both he and Risa back to Mid-Childa, expenses paid of course. They organized a meeting while the children played and came to an agreement. About two days later, Angela and Lucas had to go back, not without saying good-bye though and the siblings greeted smiling. Not wanting to ruin the surprise, Risa gave them nothing more than hints about meeting again soon while Hiro stood in the background, not opening his mouth once, and Lucas knew better than to try and get something out from him. After the procedures, the moving and all the details were finished, the siblings started training and studying diligently for the entrance exams that were going to take place soon.
Finally, the time for the exams came and went. They both impatiently awaited the results and it could easily be noted they were very nervous. When the results were displayed, after what seemed an eternity for them, they happily gave each other a high five. Searching for the rest of their squad, they happened to bump into a sergeant that kindly led them towards the lobby where the others awaited. Hiro couldn’t be happier when he saw the other members of the squad. Lucas, looking as cool and serious as always, and Angela pacing around the lobby were the only ones there. The sergeant made the introductions and they played along until he finally went away. As soon as he disappeared from sight, Angela and Risa were on each other, looking as though they were suffocating a little from the strength of their hug. Lucas and Hiro laughed at this after their handshake and laughed even more when both girls looked at them with very angry faces. Four years after this, Warrant Officer Cassandra Alexa Ivanov took command of their squad with Chief Master Sergeant Kali as sub-commander. Two years later, they all received two promotions, the youngsters from Privates Second Class to Leading Privates, Cassandra and Kali respectively from Warrant Officer to First Flight Lieutenant and from Chief Master Sergeant to Second Flight Lieutenant. They are all currently in a investigation mission concerning Lost Logias discovered in the fifth dimension supervised by the TSAB, alongside the warship ‘Nadia’.
Personality: Hiro, A.K.A Hiro-kun, is a proficient Mid-Childa mage that finally entered the military as he always dreamed and is now aiming to become a Sky mage, since when he was on Earth his dream was to become a great pilot. Training since the age of 10, he is one of the few rare Earthlings to possess magical powers and is a very good rival to whoever wishes to pick a fight with him. Thanks to his many achievements on the battlefield, he got promoted very quickly, making a 3 rank jump in 6 years, from Private Third Class to Leading Private, something that is not unheard of but is highly uncommon.
Hiro is very fond of sports, something in which he happens to resemble Angela, in contrast to his sister who prefers to quietly read books or take strolls in the woods, something that Lucas also like to do apart from investigating. He can usually be found playing some sport with Angela, skateboarding or looking to improve his fighting style so the team can rely a bit more on him.
Easy-going and a little of a happy-go-lucky guy, he can also be quite closed and taciturn if he chooses to be. He cares deeply for his sister and he tries to keep an eye open for her in battle, something she does likewise, so she’ll avoid getting hurt. He chose the position of Center Guard because it permitted him to use his specialty, bombardment magic, and so he could give support as much as he could without being a hindrance, something that he would’ve been had he chosen to become a Front Attacker for example. He always watches out for the rest of the team and greatly admires Cass who happens to be an all-purpose magical Knight Summoner.
Bombardment Attacks:
Chained Shot: Multiple magical bullets are fired, one after the other, tied by small chains. When they’re about to hit the target, the chains break and the bullets disperse to hit from different angles.
Icy Bullet: Shoots an ice property bullet that freezes anything in its path until it hits the designated target. If it successfully attains its mark, it slowly starts freezing him/her as well.
Laser: Highly concentrated Energy type shots that when they strike the enemy may have different effects on him/her.
Sniper Cross: Learned from Cassandra, although he sometimes modifies the shot so it will become ice elemental.
Elemental Attacks:
Freeze Lancer: A rift of ice opens in front of Hiro and multiple varied weapons made of solid frost shoot towards the targets.
Frost Hurricane: Creates an ice tornado that shoots medium-sized glaciers against the targets.
Combined Attacks:
Arc Impulse: Hiro casts ice properties into Phoenix, while Risa casts fire magic to Firebrand, then Lucas jumps into the air and turns around in a downward motion, giving a strong slash, just as Angela slashes the enemy in a diagonal way, forming a fire and ice cross-shaped wound on the target.
Freezing Overlord: Lucas and Hiro both cast Water and Ice magic respectively and form a vicious and bitter ice storm with small glaciers crashing towards the targets caught in the area. Area-of effect attack.
Going to sleep. See you guys later and I'll post comments on other characters as well when I come back ^^.
And Blue Flame is complete, and it ends in awesome as well
Maybe you should do a combined profile for all four of them as a team, to better understand their dynamic (although their team attacks are awesomely dynamic enough XD).
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Originally Posted by Saint X
Bored... and it's 4PM local time here...
I introduce one of the many androids that frequent the bureau.
i can see Kha now, jumping like a kid.
Spoiler for TSAB Central Controller AI: CC:
Name: Cecile Claire, Charise Cannes, Cleo Calpin, Catherine Campers- any female names with C and C in first and last name fields- just call her CC for convenience- reason later. Age: Visual age of 24 Gender: Female Birthday: Production Identity Plate Indicated: Manufacture Date: December 25, CE XXX Hair: Green Eyes: Green Build: Similar to a namesake Height: Similar to a namesake Weight: Similar to a namesake Home World: Mid-childa Magic System: Variable Mid-Type Magic Color: Green Mage Rank: Rank undetermined due to her status and role, as well as age. Probable S- up Personality: The cold and slient Tsundere type, often talking in a cold voice- even when happy. Loves kids. Affiliation: Time-Space Administration Bureau Heaquarters Space Base, "Macross". Chief AI, Systems Administrator, Defense Director, TSAB Central Controller (the reason her being named CC). Device: The 'Macron Cross' Device Type: Intelligent Device, Shielding/Control Maxim Description: The simple tiara on her head. with this device, she controls the functions of the Bureau space HQ, life support, lighting, etc- even clerk and ace movements... due to her extremely fast processing capability, she can process as if she's not, thus allowing her not to be tied to her podium in central control. She also commands the bureau's superweapon, the CDD- Controlled Dimensional Dislocator, a weapon that can create a controlled Time-space rip in an area, sucking and destroying everything in the effect area- though she needs the authorization keys from at least 3 of the bureau's directors or authorized officers. So far, Chrono, Kyla and Lindy are the ones known to have keys, though Carim is reported to have one as well.
History:
CC refuses to release her personal information due to citing dictum 36.5- allowance of confidential information- since she's a high authority, she's allowed to conceal her information. We are still securing permission from the Bureau directors to retrieve her historical and personal info. So Far: 3-3-5
Spoiler for Arias:
Arias: These are the commands that CC can chant to use the device's abilites, using various weapons at the base or on her to achieve results. The ones shown here are the important two words ('title') of the aria- that is spoken using an mysterious tongue.
Iri`en Mit'ol (Crushing Aria): A powerful spell that crushes anything targeted in her psychic grip. G-forces involved can be as high as 1000G
Il`tras Meo (Repulsion Aria): Creates a field in which all magic is repulsed, for a short time- creating a condition similar to the sufferers of a rare Midchildan disorder coined as 'Asunaric Temperance'- in which all harmful magic is either ineffective, repulsed or reflected back to the caster- though sufferers rarely live beyond the age of 14.
Reflect Aria: (Title unheard) Creates a shield in which all magic is reflected, for a short time- creating a condition similar to the sufferers of a rare Midchildan disorder coined as 'Asunaric Temperance'- in which all harmful magic is either ineffective, repulsed or reflected back to the caster- though sufferers rarely live beyond the age of 14.
It`on Sai'met`s (Total Destruction Aria): Her chant when unleashing the CDD upon a target area. The target area is marked with a giant mid-type seal that is colored black and the spheical space is bounded by spell rings. then after a set amount of time, the rip opens and all inside the target area will be sucked into null space.
Ac'ti`um Min'is`trae (Retrieve Persons Aria): A major teleporation spell, allowing masses of people to be inserted or evacuated, though she can only use this while inside of bureau areas- base or ship.
I`ren dai (Unforgivable/Killing Aria): This is the MC equivalent of the famed A***a K*****a curse, in which CC simply erases the person. She rarely uses this and damages her systems when she does it- greatly.
Silence Aria: (Title unheard) a spell that silences an area or an individual.
Raze Aria: (Title unheard) Using the base's defense systems, she can store a huge amount of energy in some dimensional pocket and bring it out over the target area as a sweeping beam from the sky, hitting a row of enemies. It is first seen during the Planet Earl mission, when CC defeated a horde of Slaves when they attempted to invade Windbloom City.
Bombardment Aria: (Title unheard) Using the base's defense systems, she can store a huge amount of energy in some dimensional pocket and bring it out over the target area as a rain of beams from the sky, hitting masses of enemies. It is also first seen during the Planet Earl mission, when CC defeated a horde of Slaves when they attempted to invade Windbloom City.
Shielding Aria: Her longest spell, and the only one needed constant chanting. The title is unheard because the aria is constantly changed each cast. It is a perfect defensive shield, blocking all and every spell or attack that comes- around her or the base when she's there. Its weakness is when the tiara is broken, which rarely happens.
Unbreakable Hold Aria: (Title unheard) a multi-form bind, a combination of struggle, chain, restrict, lightning, and almost every other magical lock in the multiverse- the only way to beat it is to be empty of thoughts- which is hard because she usually uses this along with the next spell.
Torture Aria: Stil unseen.
Miscontrol Aria: Still unseen.
C...C??
I like her concept very much, as the central element of one of the most complex network systems in the TSAB, and in command of a space base no less
And in charge of her own Rift Generator?!?!?! *jawdrop*
I suddenly see her "eating" lots of Pizza Hut...
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As promised, the Cleric is back!
EDIT: HOLY S******* I just got a very weird brain wave...
A powerful burst of mana was detected on Earth some time ago, but it's cause was never ascertained by the TSAB. However, Saint Church had been monitoring a unique wave signature from the planet ever since, and when an archaeological dig turns up the Gospel cartridges, the extremely divine ones supposedly etched with the entire Velka Bible on a nano-scale and tempered with the God Empress' blood, the Church discovers that the signature of the mana stored in the cartridges is the exact same one as the low energy one from Earth. The 21st is sent to investigate... And the question they answer will change the path of the New Velka forever...
Does the God Empress live?
... Our God Empress is truly powerful for her will to reach even the TSAB
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I like her concept very much, as the central element of one of the most complex network systems in the TSAB, and in command of a space base no less
And in charge of her own Rift Generator?!?!?! *jawdrop*
I suddenly see her "eating" lots of Pizza Hut...
CC: Why is everyone afraid of me? It's not I'm going to mind control you guys or something?
She's only the AI admin, not the base commander... in a sense, she's part IT dept, Part maintenance, part accounting- basically part office, part living android, part living daycare teacher.
Like i said, she needs authorization before she even looks at an area as a target for being sucked into kingdom come. She a superweapon alright, but not a manic, unrestrained one.
I can see Rein and CC eating together... toss in Tessa and Mashiro and you get...
... talk about insane backlog.... I think we've had more character profiles made in the past few hours than in the past week combined
Yeah took me a while to clear them all.
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*knocked down*
That was long... and satisfying. Unlimited Blade Works seem to be a VERY popular spell to have these days, but each with their own variation. I wonder what it'll look like if Hikki, Alexandra and Sophia combine their versions into a single all-encompassing attack
*prepares for the end of the world*
Sophia: As if! Mines an original Noble Phantasm rather than a Traced clone, so don't put me in the same league as them. Kha: Don't say that! That--
Sees fuming Alexandra and Hikki
Kha: (swallows hard)
Suffice to say, her "holier-than-thou" attitude classic of her caster-class gives Kha Chrono-sized headaches sometimes...
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C...C??
I like her concept very much, as the central element of one of the most complex network systems in the TSAB, and in command of a space base no less
And in charge of her own Rift Generator?!?!?! *jawdrop*
I suddenly see her "eating" lots of Pizza Hut...
Yeah Kha spots, the directors turn the Key, and CC fires. She's one of the 3 AI aboard the legendary Silvana, the others being Ship Navigator Minerva and her "daughter" Chacha. Together they have played a major role in tending to Kha's wounds during the AlternateS arc, helped Sakura settle in after her hasty rebirth, and were the life of the ship during their darkest times. Kha treats them like family.
Sakura, for one, finds Chacha the annoying little sister...
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... Our God Empress is truly powerful for her will to reach even the TSAB
She's the God Empress after all... I think.
@Moe debate: MOEGATON!!! ROFL!!! That has just been saved in my dictionary. Man I couldn't resist. I'm posting first, now to work on my "surprise".
Sophia: As if! Mines an original Noble Phantasm rather than a Traced clone, so don't put me in the same league as them. Kha: Don't say that! That--
Sees fuming Alexandra and Hikki
Kha: (swallows hard)
Suffice to say, her "holier-than-thou" attitude classic of her caster-class gives Kha Chrono-sized headaches sometimes...
If this keeps up, the TSAB will end up destroying themselves before the bad guys do
And now I'm wondering what Archer and Shiro would think if they knew...
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Yeah Kha spots, the directors turn the Key, and CC fires. She's one of the 3 AI aboard the legendary Silvana, the others being Ship Navigator Minerva and her "daughter" Chacha. Together they have played a major role in tending to Kha's wounds during the AlternateS arc, helped Sakura settle in after her hasty rebirth, and were the life of the ship during their darkest times. Kha treats them like family.
Sakura, for one, finds Chacha the annoying little sister...
... suddenly I demand a full profile on Chacha...
And more of their interaction
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@Moe debate: MOEGATON!!! ROFL!!! That has just been saved in my dictionary. Man I couldn't resist. I'm posting first, now to work on my "surprise".
It's not gonna be much of a surprise if you're going to warn use beforehand I'm hyped though
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If this keeps up, the TSAB will end up destroying themselves before the bad guys do
...
Saga's Drei mode is technically a disposable variant of UBW as well... And since Null is shaped like a Keyblade...
Keybladers/Archer/Shirou : YOU THIEVING BASTARDS!!!
TSAB : We're detecting a heavy dimensional rip in time-space from 2 spatial coordinates!
*runs away*
And yeah, Saga's alive in StrikerS...though personally, he doesn't want to meet Hayate and Rein. Why? It's a secret, though it's not hard to figure out if you look at the "history" of my characters...
And I'm very afraid at a prospect of a time-space version of C.C... Spoilers indicate that C.C in CG is maybe even the secret manipulator of history lololol.
Nanoha-verse C.C : The immortal who controls all of time-space since time immemorial?
Maybe once I'm done with Saga, I'll do a OF (( original faction )) composed of 4 Old Belka Meisters who are a private secret intervention force of dimensional wars.
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The sleeping lion shall awaken beyond the depths of time, crossing ten billion lights, come to Terra.
Well, I wasn't sure myself which rank should Serge get [...]
You know, I think we should make clear in the profiles if the rank letter we give to our characters is a military rank or an estimate of their ability. Yours is an estimate of his magical prowess and ability, and as Kha has pointed out, his abilities are that of a SS rank mage or better.
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On another topic: was the way the pain-sharing loli imbues her victims with limiters revealed yet? is it pure psionics or there's some material manifestation?
Overall how will the heroes overcome psionic attacks? In Nanoha there were no such occasions as far as I remember, so what should be taken as the basis?
My first idea of a counter to such attacks would be some kind of Field-type defensive spell. I'm not sure how this type of attacks "deal" the damage, though. (Sound waves, maybe?)
Wow, very interesting this place is. Trying to read all the post from the beginning is "difficult". I gotta say, everyone's character's are so interesting and powerful. Is it ok for me to post mine once i'm done with him?
Btw this is my first time getting involved in something like this. Please correct me if I make mistakes.
Wow, very interesting this place is. Trying to read all the post from the beginning is "difficult". I gotta say, everyone's character's are so interesting and powerful. Is it ok for me to post mine once i'm done with him?
Btw this is my first time getting involved in something like this. Please correct me if I make mistakes.
Yep, this is an incredibly active thread, thankfully most of the character profiles have been neatly compiled by Erio, so if you wish to check on a particular character at least it's easy to find. Trying to keep up with what the rest of us are talking about is another matter entirely.
And that's what this thread is for is it not? Of course you can, why not?
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Just reading up the characters aren't hard...actually, the combined Bluecheesium force is pretty hard on the eyes and the running clock, so who knows.
But the list itself isn't perfect as a lot of random character trivia interaction tidbits and stuff aren't listed in the compilation, so it may be weird to suddenly see various forms of discussions that seem way ahead of what's written.
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Night~and~Gale: ~ The Final Mythology of the Man who Defied Destiny.
The sleeping lion shall awaken beyond the depths of time, crossing ten billion lights, come to Terra.
Wow, very interesting this place is. Trying to read all the post from the beginning is "difficult". I gotta say, everyone's character's are so interesting and powerful. Is it ok for me to post mine once i'm done with him?
Btw this is my first time getting involved in something like this. Please correct me if I make mistakes.
Irrashai! New member.
And please, you don't need our permission for posting anywhere in here.
And we'll be glad to help out in case you hit some problems with your character.
@Fuyu: Finally completed! You sure weren't kidding when you said that you'd go hard with the details. Nice work!
@Saint X: An extremely powerful battleship AI character... Awesome.
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Now to make use of him...
A11 U Tr4c3r b453 4r3 b310ng 2 uz! (Fires a million blades)
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how about magitrons?). So in terms of using regular magic he's just above average (do you see where this thread took us? talking about AAA as something just above average - must rewatch S1 to get things right 
