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Old 2010-06-27, 22:36   Link #25681
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Parts 1-6

Spoiler for Vivid Life pt. 7:
Spoiler for Vivid Life pt. 8:
Spoiler for Vivid Life pt. 9:
Spoiler for Vivid Life 10:
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Old 2010-06-27, 22:47   Link #25682
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A of course!
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Old 2010-06-27, 22:52   Link #25683
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I vote for A. Why not Corona/Yuuno, after all? Well, except for the crazy age difference, but...they can sit on the sidelines and snuggle while the main cast gets the spotlight! Give her your support, Vivio!

And in other news, it's time for another chapter of

Will Fate Find The Lost Logia Before A Title?

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Previous chapters:

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3

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Old 2010-06-27, 22:56   Link #25684
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I'm choosing the same As those above me.
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Old 2010-06-28, 00:20   Link #25685
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I'll go with A as well.
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Old 2010-06-28, 03:46   Link #25686
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A is best imo

Also...
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"I'd like to see a love-puppy!Einhart-san."
That makes me want to draw an embarrassed Einhart cosplaying as puppy-girl (personality-wise, she's kinda like a disciplined dog/lone wolf ) with Vivio, Rio and Corona going "squeeee~"
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Old 2010-06-28, 03:48   Link #25687
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A is best imo

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That makes me want to draw an embarrassed Einhart cosplaying as puppy-girl (personality-wise, she's kinda like a disciplined dog/wolf ) with Vivio, Rio and Corona going "squeeee~"
... you realize, of course, that by telling us this you have to do it now, right?
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Old 2010-06-28, 04:13   Link #25688
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... you realize, of course, that by telling us this you have to do it now, right?
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That's why I said it
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Old 2010-06-28, 06:54   Link #25689
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And in other news, it's time for another chapter of

Will Fate Find The Lost Logia Before A Title?
This is one of those chapters where a couple things happen, but I get frustrated because just as things get moving the chapter ends

So... that's actually good, since now I'm basically GIMME CHAPTER NAO.
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Old 2010-06-28, 07:35   Link #25690
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And in other news, it's time for another chapter of

Will Fate Find The Lost Logia Before A Title?

Spoiler for But mostly just eats breakfast and chats:
Fate is sooo darn cute :0 Can I keep her?

And here's a preview (I think) of a series of illustrations for how the Wolkies met. I'm not sure how much explanation I'd have to give for these to make sense, so I'm just going to throw them out here and see how you guys interpret them

The series is going to be called Before Dawn - hope nobody else is using that one at the moment!

Spoiler for Before Dawn (preview):


That's Signum, btw :P

No apologies for crude linework. Speed over cleanliness I'm afraid, or I'll never finish.
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Old 2010-06-28, 07:52   Link #25691
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That makes me want to draw an embarrassed Einhart cosplaying as puppy-girl (personality-wise, she's kinda like a disciplined dog/lone wolf ) with Vivio, Rio and Corona going "squeeee~"
want!!!!

Kind of reminds me of that one hentai pic where Einhart is the "doggy" *brick'd*

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Of course
That's why I said it
I wanna seeeeeeeeeeeeee
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Old 2010-06-28, 08:30   Link #25692
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Old 2010-06-28, 09:00   Link #25693
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Here's the continuation of chapter of my fanfic.



Spoiler for Chapter 3: Friends or Foe Part 4:


Be careful, the second visual aid has some... fanservice. Make sure that no one is around before you click the spoiler tag.
Having not read parts 1-3, I had no idea what was going on here, but it seemed interesting enough to make me want to know! I think I'll go read the rest.

And can I express my envy of your art skills? If I tried to draw 'visual aids' for my stories, the only thing they would 'aid' is anyone who wanted to ruthlessly mock my horrible nasty stick figures.

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Will Fate Find The Lost Logia Before A Title?

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Previous chapters:

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3

The dark man smiled cruelly. "Fate Testarossa," he purred softly. "Did you think you had the slightest prayer of defeating me? I have absorbed all of the knowledge in the Circlet, and knowledge is, of course, power. I am as a god, and you? You don't even have a title for your story!"

[Damn...] Fate thought, wiping sweat and blood from her brow. [He's right! Can I beat him if the story doesn't have a title to hint at the general tone of the narrative? I'm not even sure if this is supposed to end on a downer or a high note!]


... sorry about that. Couldn't resist.

I shall, of course, be requiring more chapters. Our assumed villain seems to finally be hitting the really dangerous kind of crazy, so now my interest is growing exponentially as he becomes more and more of a genuine threat. Write on, sir, write on. I shall eagerly await future endeavors.
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Old 2010-06-28, 09:19   Link #25694
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Parts 1-6

Spoiler for Vivid Life pt. 7:
Spoiler for Vivid Life pt. 8:
Spoiler for Vivid Life pt. 9:
Spoiler for Vivid Life 10:
Spoiler for Vivid Life pt. 11:
A, please and thank you. The thought of a lovesick Einhart amuses me.

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I vote for A. Why not Corona/Yuuno, after all? Well, except for the crazy age difference, but...they can sit on the sidelines and snuggle while the main cast gets the spotlight! Give her your support, Vivio!

And in other news, it's time for another chapter of

Will Fate Find The Lost Logia Before A Title?

Spoiler for But mostly just eats breakfast and chats:


Previous chapters:

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Nice touch bringing up that many things involving crime and criminals tend to get sidetracked due to feelings of pride. It comes up a lot in every crime show ever aired, but no one ever really mentions that it happens on both sides involved in the problem; and while Fate is right in saying that if pride wasn't involved, less criminals would be loose, it's kind of hard to turn off a human emotion like that.

Also.... seriously, that guy is treading a dangerous line. It seems he's completely given in to the Lost Logia at this point, so he's getting into some bad territory. I'm curious to see if he'll be caught before he kills someone.
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Old 2010-06-28, 10:14   Link #25695
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FROM A DIFFERENT POINT OF VIEW

Spoiler:


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Being hated or forgotten? Which is worse? ...Ouch, horrible question, but, yeah, Yuuno's funeral would be attended by a lot of people, regardless of what SOME people think.
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Old 2010-06-28, 10:34   Link #25696
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I meant that as a thinking point: Is it worse to be forgotten, or to be remembered as someone to hate? It is not something simplistic maths can solve. You will notice that I did not attempt to answer the question inside the work itself, possibly to its detriment.

Are there any (major) flaws you think need to be addressed, outside of the inherently cracky premise of the Reinno pairing?
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Old 2010-06-28, 13:14   Link #25697
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Fate is sooo darn cute :0 Can I keep her?

And here's a preview (I think) of a series of illustrations for how the Wolkies met. I'm not sure how much explanation I'd have to give for these to make sense, so I'm just going to throw them out here and see how you guys interpret them

The series is going to be called Before Dawn - hope nobody else is using that one at the moment!

Spoiler for Before Dawn (preview):


That's Signum, btw :P

No apologies for crude linework. Speed over cleanliness I'm afraid, or I'll never finish.
....

This.

This looks epic. There will be more, yes?
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Old 2010-06-28, 17:16   Link #25698
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Fate is sooo darn cute :0 Can I keep her?
You may have to get in a long line for that.

Lindy: Actually, I paid for Chrono and Amy's wedding by selling Fate plushies!

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And here's a preview (I think) of a series of illustrations for how the Wolkies met. I'm not sure how much explanation I'd have to give for these to make sense, so I'm just going to throw them out here and see how you guys interpret them
Niiiiice. I especially like the last one. Signum with what looks like her Agito-unison flame wings, and that "glance back" in the inset frame looked really good.


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And can I express my envy of your art skills? If I tried to draw 'visual aids' for my stories, the only thing they would 'aid' is anyone who wanted to ruthlessly mock my horrible nasty stick figures.
Ditto on that! I envy all these artistically talented types (though if I was blessed with Miraculous Art Skills, I'd probably do my My-HiME fics first).

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The dark man smiled cruelly. "Fate Testarossa," he purred softly. "Did you think you had the slightest prayer of defeating me? I have absorbed all of the knowledge in the Circlet, and knowledge is, of course, power. I am as a god, and you? You don't even have a title for your story!"

[Damn...] Fate thought, wiping sweat and blood from her brow. [He's right! Can I beat him if the story doesn't have a title to hint at the general tone of the narrative? I'm not even sure if this is supposed to end on a downer or a high note!]
Well, we know that RadiantBeam is voting for downer.

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Also.... seriously, that guy is treading a dangerous line. It seems he's completely given in to the Lost Logia at this point, so he's getting into some bad territory. I'm curious to see if he'll be caught before he kills someone.
Told you.

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Being hated or forgotten? Which is worse? ...Ouch, horrible question, but, yeah, Yuuno's funeral would be attended by a lot of people, regardless of what SOME people think.
Yeah, Yuuno has friends coming out of his ears, honestly. The only people who don't like him seem to be those who exist IRL.

(Speaking of which...given that Yuuno is, apparently, a college professor among other things...can't you just see a passel of student fangirls squeeing over him?)

And on a complete side-note:

(Man, Griffith and Luceno? I totally did not see that coming. But then again, I always have serious trouble remembering who Luceno is! Hey, Shiny ought to do some of her Vice/Zaffy/Griffith crack fics. Griffith as a married man would really add to the perspective on these. )
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Old 2010-06-28, 17:26   Link #25699
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want!!!!

Kind of reminds me of that one hentai pic where Einhart is the "doggy" *brick'd*
Is that so? sounds...interesting

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Ok ok

Took me a while, but I finished it...came out quite good imo

Spoiler for Danger! High moe levels!:

Unfortunately, that's as far as I can go.
I still haven't picked up tracing, coloring and other skills to make it better

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And on a complete side-note:

(Man, Griffith and Luceno? I totally did not see that coming. But then again, I always have serious trouble remembering who Luceno is! Hey, Shiny ought to do some of her Vice/Zaffy/Griffith crack fics. Griffith as a married man would really add to the perspective on these. )
During the first half of StrikeS, Lucino was one of the "Bridge Bunnies" along with Alto, then became Arthra's helmsman. She's the one with short purple hair.
By the end of StrikeS, she and Griffith are working together.

Though, Shari is Griffith's childhood friend, I guess that's as far as it goes.


Page claim for "fallen childhood friends" and maximum moe damage!
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Old 2010-06-28, 17:31   Link #25700
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Took me a while, but I finished it...came out quite good imo

Spoiler for Danger! High moe levels!:

Unfortunately, that's as far as I can go.
I still haven't picked up tracing, coloring and other skills to make it better
Totally. Frickin'. Awesome.
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