2013-04-08, 07:31 | Link #37761 | |
Dark Energy
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2013-04-08, 07:35 | Link #37762 |
The Unpronounceable
Join Date: Apr 2012
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^ I wasn't planning to have them compatible at first. They've known each other before, and the girl liked to - well, not bully the guy, but tease him and get on his nerves a lot when they were young - but they lost contact since he moved away. (Cliche, I know) He recently returned for some projects and inevitably runs into her again - he works with her sister.
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2013-04-08, 07:40 | Link #37763 | |
Resident Tentacle Monster
Join Date: Apr 2013
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Well the thing is that breaking Shirou and painting him into a corner was the only way to make him Fate's father. If he didn't abandon his ideals he would probably run off again and bring trouble to his family. Well I wanted to give Fate a father, rebuild her family and give her a happy ending. All the suffering along the way is a price for that happiness. Also this is STILL Fate, Nanoha and Hayate's story. Shirou is a very prominent character but the focus is on the three girls. Furthermore while I said that Shirou is limited he isn't powerless. Spoiler for the Plot:
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2013-04-08, 07:40 | Link #37764 | |
Dark Energy
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One thing that might be beneficial is to have another couple to compare/contrast your main one with as they grow. It can be anyone, just so long as they're in close enough proximity to one of the main characters to actually warrant including said couple in the story.
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2013-04-08, 07:45 | Link #37765 |
The Unpronounceable
Join Date: Apr 2012
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@HK
Then don't give him a Device or anything at all. Just have him as his badass magus self. Iron pulled it off in the Vajira continuity. @Kuroi Huh, thanks. I already have an extra couple in mind. Guess I'll come clean: The main is Yuuno/Due, while the extra is Chrono/Carim. |
2013-04-08, 07:47 | Link #37766 | |
Labda Prakarsa Nirwikara
Join Date: May 2010
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Easier explanation would be that they bleach their hair so they would look like daddy. (wait, what was the premise again? I only took notice on the white hair part)
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2013-04-08, 07:48 | Link #37767 |
Resident Tentacle Monster
Join Date: Apr 2013
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[QUOTE=Lhklan;4626440]@HK
Then don't give him a Device or anything at all. Just have him as his badass magus self. Iron pulled it off in the Vajira continuity. Well his device doesn't amount to much really. He can't really use Nano magic, his device only gives him Barrier Jacket, flight and some minor magic which is actually cast by the device. It can use illusion magic to change his appearance and Maybe produce some weak protection spells. Nut much besides that. Tiresias Shirou thrown into Nano dimension, meeting Precia before she gave birth to Alicia and Shirou being Alicia and Fate's biological father. Oh well I'll just go with "It's wacky genetics at play" |
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2013-04-08, 07:59 | Link #37771 | |
Resident Tentacle Monster
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The thing is Shirou is SUPPOSED to be powerful and have a reputation. He is in the story to be a father, wise guy teaching others, intimidating father to those who get close to his daughter. The fighting is mainly on the main cast's shoulders. This isn't Teenager or early-20 Shirou who while already pretty good is still inexperienced. Also I might have accidentally make you misunderstand. Shirou's device serves mainly as his Snarky Companion while Agito doesn't help out with the fighting. She is a grateful girl whom he saved who looks after him... at least until the Wolkies will get involved. She can't even unison with him because of the differences in their magic styles. |
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2013-04-08, 08:01 | Link #37772 | ||
Labda Prakarsa Nirwikara
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FYI Shirou would be a shitty father/family man. Hero complex, remember? Always going out there, trying to save people without caring for his own self?
For reference, EMIYA version of Shirou died leaving behind a lover (not one of the three heroines) Quote:
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2013-04-08, 08:06 | Link #37773 |
Resident Tentacle Monster
Join Date: Apr 2013
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You should Really read through all the stuff I wrote because all of the things you mentioned are brought up there. Shirou no longer has hero complex, or rather no longer surrenders to it. He was crushed by his ideals just like Kiritsugu. Also the hair color won't change. We were only talking How is it possible that Precia and Shirou's child had blond hair and I simply decided to go with the "wacky genetics" |
2013-04-08, 08:12 | Link #37775 | |
Labda Prakarsa Nirwikara
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... ... ... Wut? That's...going to need a really big elaboration. Canon Shirou never went bitter about his ideals until after death. Archer died in the execution place with a smile in his face.
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2013-04-08, 08:14 | Link #37777 | |
The Unpronounceable
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... And I have to agree with Tiresias here. Since this is UBW Shirou, he should know that his ideals are inherently impossible in the first place, but still strive toward it. Beside, I doubt Shirou received an eye opener like Kiri did at the end of the 4th War. |
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2013-04-08, 08:16 | Link #37778 | |
Resident Tentacle Monster
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