Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha Character Creation and Discussion

[Nightengale]

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Nah, AU is not my style... I prefer working on existing worlds...

But no, I think I'll keep that relationship, but this is before the corruption... Unless that's been brought up alreadY?

Read.Saga.of.Saga.

You see, the way my story was constructed, the Tome was never really corrupted. The pinnacle of Belka lifeform magitech is the creation of Unison Devices, but why did the Tome possess that, and more (( Program Knights, etc ))? I made it so that the Tome, linked with the bloodline of the Night Sky possessed the power of Absolute Emulation, where with enough power, understanding, etc, ANYTHING can be emulated... magic, people, even worlds in a sense. It's not a perfect emulation, but it can draw very very close if it needs to be. But such a power that derives very deeply from the deepest essence of humanity to their deepest emotions and souls uncontrollable, and no one... no one can ever hope to use its full power without being corrupted by it, because it is human's nature that no one is truly light.

Saga sacrificed his life to be technically a sealing device that prevents its full power from being used like a lock on 80% of its abilities, and only so that it could be just a Tome for the sake of studies and magic-learning, and not something that with enough magical powers... can create life. However, when the 3rd generation successor of the Tome betrayed that trust, he ripped away the sealing device, and thus restored the Tome to its complete, yet already corrupted by nature form.

Unless you want to make Sipher the EBIL 3rd Meister, you cannot do anything about it.

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Btw, now that Summer's love is over, I'm curious as to what you guys are planning to watch this Fall

For me...

Spoiler for Guaranteed watch:

1. PRISM ARK!!!!
2. Clannad
3. Shakugan no Shana II

Spoiler for VERY interested:

1. Bamboo Blade
2. ef - a tale of memories
3. D.C.II ~Da Capo II~ (Even though I didn't watch the first two )
4. Myself;Yourself
5. Dragonaut -The Resonance-
6. Mobile Suit Gundam 00

Spoiler for Slightly interested, but no promise...:

- Suteki Tantei Labyrinth
- Night Wizard The ANIMATION
- Goshuushousama Ninomiya-kun
- Taiho Shichauzo Full Throttle
- Rental Magica

Here's the list... http://randomc.animeblogger.net/2007...-2007-preview/

Spoiler for 120% guareented:

• Neuro
• Shana II
• Clannad
• Gundam 00
• KimiKiss
• Prism Ark
• Ghost Hound

I give every show a go for at least 3 episodes, but those are shows I'm sticking with even if it turns into the worse crap ever.

I don't think it can top Spring 07, (( Terra, GL and Seirei were godly )) but I'll be damned if there's even one that can reach 80% of any of those 3.

[USB500]

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Then excellent It would go as I've planned...

What are you planning to do?

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Originally Posted by Reiji Tabibito

...Damn Takeru. Damn him (and Chrono) straight to MILF-less HELL!!!

But points for Freya's swimsuit... and for Aura proving that she isn't the Little Miss Innocent everyone though she was...

Good thing you noticed it.

Originally Posted by Reiji Tabibito

Oh. My. God.

You MUST get the 82nd in on ONE of these!!!

If it's Halloween, I can describe what costumes everyone'd be wearing... and I could give you a scene for the Christmas/New Year's...

Thanks. I see if I can come up with a plan.

Originally Posted by Reiji Tabibito

Oh. My. God.

How in the world do you manage to come up with such posts of WIN?!

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Originally Posted by LoweGear

OOOOH Numero Uno Amigos!!!!!!!

Uno is quite... well developed there

True, true.

*runs*

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Bow down before me, your Dark God of Fan Service. >:"D

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Glad to be of service.

And angry Irui expression? WANT

Yeah, I know I've wanted to do an Annabelle one-shot, since Zengar/Irui shipping always appears inside my mind whenever I think of Armstrong & Anna.

Now I need to edit this one Irui artwork (hint: cosplaying Anna-chan? ), and all the whole things will be complete.

Just like this.

*runs from angry Irui Annabelle*

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Isn't that what Nanoha and A's were about?

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Yup. Most of us here type out our scenarios in a word processor (I use MS Word), and then post it here. Prevents internet related posting headaches, and ensures that you always have a copy of the scenario for future reference. Of course, always remember to save (pressing ctrl+s every few minutes should become second nature to you ).

What he said.

finally got working on Super Robot WARS LW 01. Phew.

@ Chaos2Frozen: not sure as of this fall, but right now Ms Gundam 00 is in my top list. Besides, I still need to finish Hayate no Gotoku, Seto no Hanayome & Sky Girl. Oh, yeah, forgot Clannad.

What's this? Two more pages?

[Chaos2Frozen]

Originally Posted by Nightengale

Read.Saga.of.Saga.

Never! I resist!

Originally Posted by Nightengale

You see, the way my story was constructed, the Tome was never really corrupted. The pinnacle of Belka lifeform magitech is the creation of Unison Devices, but why did the Tome possess that, and more (( Program Knights, etc ))? I made it so that the Tome, linked with the bloodline of the Night Sky possessed the power of Absolute Emulation, where with enough power, understanding, etc, ANYTHING can be emulated... magic, people, even worlds in a sense. It's not a perfect emulation, but it can draw very very close if it needs to be. But such a power that derives very deeply from the deepest essence of humanity to their deepest emotions and souls uncontrollable, and no one... no one can ever hope to use its full power without being corrupted by it, because it is human's nature that no one is truly light.

Saga sacrificed his life to be technically a sealing device that prevents its full power from being used like a lock on 80% of its abilities, and only so that it could be just a Tome for the sake of studies and magic-learning, and not something that with enough magical powers... can create life. However, when the 3rd generation successor of the Tome betrayed that trust, he ripped away the sealing device, and thus restored the Tome to its complete, yet already corrupted by nature form.

Unless you want to make Sipher the EBIL 3rd Meister, you cannot do anything about it.

Hmmm.... Damn, you thought this out all the way... Okay, Plan C - Drop the corruption: If I can't changed the past, I'll affect the present!!


...That is, I assume you didn't touch on anything about the previous, or the previous' previous meister before Hayate ?

Originally Posted by Nightengale

Spoiler for 120% guareented:

• Neuro
• Shana II
• Clannad
• Gundam 00
• KimiKiss
• Prism Ark
• Ghost Hound

I give every show a go for at least 3 episodes, but those are shows I'm sticking with even if it turns into the worse crap ever.

I don't think it can top Spring 07, (( Terra, GL and Seirei were godly )) but I'll be damned if there's even one that can reach 80% of any of those 3.

I've placed high hopes on my Guaranteed Three... Shana for being Shana - My first tunsdere/Loli love Clannad for being KyoAni/Keys (I don't care if I'm called shallow, anything by KyoAni is gold to me ) Prism Ark for that REALLY good feeling I had when I first discovered the game

- ef, because the game had sure a hype
- Bamboo Blade, because I was attracted to the book cover
- Da capo II... I like the first opening song to the game


Originally I do intend to watch almost all of them, but that's quite a problem for me being where I am...

I don't trust Omni's hastily done summary, but what's the attraction of KimiKiss, Neuro and Ghost Hound ?

Originally Posted by USB500

What are you planning to do?

===========================

Something that I've should've done a long time ago

Sipher: "Lets just say that their meisters won't be too please with me..."

Originally Posted by USB500

@ Chaos2Frozen: not sure as of this fall, but right now Ms Gundam 00 is in my top list. Besides, I still need to finish Hayate no Gotoku, Seto no Hanayome & Sky Girl. Oh, yeah, forgot Clannad.

What's this? Two more pages?

Hayate goes all the way to 50 episodes Seto is already over, so quickly catch up

[Erio]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

I personally liked the Final Gurren Lagann Cascade better. But yes, Genome WINS

Hehe, I personally believe that Lord Genome stole the show in that last episode. Sure, the Cascade was an interesting way to end the fight, but when Lord Genome got out and shouted LAZENGANN OVERLORD!!! (Yeah, I believe its Overlord too) it was when I went HOLY SHIT!!!!

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

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Off-topic...


...But now that Summer's love is over, I'm curious as to what you guys are planning to watch this Fall

For me...

Spoiler for Guaranteed watch:

1. PRISM ARK!!!!
2. Clannad
3. Shakugan no Shana II

Spoiler for VERY interested:

1. Bamboo Blade
2. ef - a tale of memories
3. D.C.II ~Da Capo II~ (Even though I didn't watch the first two )

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4. Myself;Yourself
5. Dragonaut -The Resonance-
6. Mobile Suit Gundam 00

Spoiler for Slightly interested, but no promise...:

- Suteki Tantei Labyrinth
- Night Wizard The ANIMATION
- Goshuushousama Ninomiya-kun
- Taiho Shichauzo Full Throttle
- Rental Magica

Here's the list... http://randomc.animeblogger.net/2007...-2007-preview/

Gundam 00 is a most, and probably what the OCverse will evolve into next, now that Gurren Lagann is over.

I never finished Shana, even though I got up to episode 16 or so... I guess this is a good time to finish it.

I will surely download everything I see and then give them all a try, just like how Nighty does it.

...But why do I find Goshuushousama Ninomiya-kun the most..."interesting"...? Maybe for Lowe too...

[Nightengale]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

I find that the Anti-Spiral's voice FREAKING ROCKS Who knew that the main Anti-Spiral would have the most HOTBLOODED MANLY EPIC voice in GL?

Hard to believe he's doing it for the first time too.

Well, he is a professional live-action actor, but damn... that's still something.

Originally Posted by LoweGear

What's a "leave"? Think you meant leaf or something Asides from that minor nit, nice already EPIC piece there

Noted.

40%...

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Never! I resist!

Well, it's just a matter of time. Since you're trying to link with Reinforce anyway, and since you're intent on following the OC-canon route...

Saga of Saga is the one piece that defines it.

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Hmmm.... Damn, you thought this out all the way... Okay, Plan C - Drop the corruption: If I can't changed the past, I'll affect the present!!

...That is, I assume you didn't touch on anything about the previous, or the previous' previous meister before Hayate ?

Go ahead. I've only touched on the first 3 Meisters.

I'll say this again. Read Saga of Saga first before linking Reinforce and save the potential trouble of writing something only to be retconned by my story.

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

I've placed high hopes on my Guaranteed Three... Shana for being Shana - My first tunsdere/Loli love Clannad for being KyoAni/Keys (I don't care if I'm called shallow, anything by KyoAni is gold to me ) Prism Ark for that REALLY good feeling I had when I first discovered the game

- ef, because the game had sure a hype
- Bamboo Blade, because I was attracted to the book cover
- Da capo II... I like the first opening song to the game


Originally I do intend to watch almost all of them, but that's quite a problem for me being where I am...

I don't trust Omni's hastily done summary, but what's the attraction of KimiKiss, Neuro and Ghost Hound ?

• Well, Shana is Shana, that's its own charm. Nothing great, but it's entertaining.
• I don't really give a damn about the Kyoto Animation fangasm, but Daisuke Sakaguchi and Okiayu is enough reason for me to watch Clannad, not to mention I'm a sucker for simple, subdued and emotional 'family' stories.
• Prism Ark. Sucker for such fantasy stuff, that has mixes of mecha, knights and all that.
• KimiKiss... well, Mao-nee = Eriko = Yuumi = I've read a little of the manga and played the game a little. There's like...no real story, but the characters are damn cute.
• Neuro is one of the few good things left in Shonen Jump other than HxH, One Piece, Eyeshield 21 and D.Gray-Man. Not to mention it's sick, dark lolol comedy.
• Ghost Hound... I.G Anniversary Production + Masamune Shirow + Lain + I'm a sucker for those spiritual stuff thingies. I liked Ghost Hunt as well for one.

[USB500]

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Something that I've should've done a long time ago

Sipher: "Lets just say that their meisters won't be too please with me..."

Should... have.............. done?

Ayashi na......

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Hayate goes all the way to 50 episodes Seto is already over, so quickly catch up

Yes, sir. *goes to watch Seto 15*

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Originally Posted by Erio

Hehe, I personally believe that Lord Genome stole the show in that last episode. Sure, the Cascade was an interesting way to end the fight, but when Lord Genome got out and shouted LAZENGANN OVERLORD!!! (Yeah, I believe its Overlord too) it was when I went HOLY SHIT!!!!

What happened here anyway?

Originally Posted by Erio

Gundam 00 is a most, and probably what the OCverse will evolve into next, now that Gurren Lagann is over.

Originally Posted by Erio

...But why do I find Goshuushousama Ninomiya-kun the most..."interesting"...? Maybe for Lowe too...

Can you elaborate?

Although the way you're hinting it...

[Chaos2Frozen]

Originally Posted by Erio

Gundam 00 is a must, and probably what the OCverse will evolve into next, now that Gurren Lagann is over.

I-I see...

Originally Posted by Erio

I never finished Shana, even though I got up to episode 16 or so... I guess this is a good time to finish it.

I sort of burn through the history chapter Now I regreted because I have no clue what happened

When you're done with Shana, you show watch Shana-TAN

Originally Posted by Erio

I will surely download everything I see and then give them all a try, just like how Nighty does it.

I wanna do that too... Can I steal some from you ?

Originally Posted by Erio

...But why do I find Goshuushousama Ninomiya-kun the most..."interesting"...? Maybe for Lowe too...

Hopefully it'll be the next best harem/comedy now that Seto is over...

And i swear that's the Over-size version of Null/Rein/Agito

Originally Posted by USB500

Should... have.............. done?

Ayashi na......

Lets put it this way...




Now do you get it ?

Originally Posted by USB500

Yes, sir. *goes to watch Seto 15*

15? Isn't that... OHHHHH !!!!


P.S - Don't eat anything... Wouldn't want you to choke.

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Originally Posted by USB500

Can you elaborate?

Although the way you're hinting it...

Think dirty... REAL dirty.

[Wibbles]

Alright, folks. Here it is, the finale between Ignatius and Satsuhito:

Spoiler for Finale!:

“And with this, our age-old conflict is ended” Satsuhito sneered, leering at the young man skewered on his claws. “A fitting end, ‘Spirale der Flamme’. You are the first to truly experience my dream. Tell me, what does complete and utter despair taste like?”
Ignatius whispered something, unheard by his opponent.
“Oh? What did you say?” asked Satsuhito, shifting his position in order to slide Ignatius further down his claws, grinning at the blood that spilled out.
“I said… fuck you!” Ignatius ground out, and lifted Flame Braver up, resting the point of the now cracked drill against the center of the insane cyborg’s chest. Satsuhito was silent, then his grin widened.
“My, my… whatever are you planning? That poor device… using it once more will surely reduce it to mere shards. And even then, will it do anything? I doubt it. Look, you barely have any strength left in you. You have no chance of victory! You will most likely die from the stress that another attempt will enact on your pathetic carcass!”
Ignatius ignored him. “Come on… Flame. Will you give me… one last spin?”
“Ja. Abschied, Meister.” was the static-filled reply. Ignatius closed his eyes.
“Thanks, man. It’s… been great. Alright… Flame Braver! Spin… ON!” Even as it made it’s final rotation, the device shattered. Satsuhito started to laugh.
“AHAHA—ggah!” He stopped short, however, and look down, an expression of sheer terror slowly spreading across his face. Ignatius’s arm was apparently submerged to the elbow in the body of the cyborg, a glowing light surrounding the limb instead of blood. Ignatius looked up slowly.
“You’re… probably right. My body… probably won’t… be able to handle it. I’m… probably going… to die here. But before I go…” Ignatius finally looked Satsuhito in the eyes, and the last thing the madman ever saw were the eyes of his opponent, a glowing green spiral reflected in each orb.
“I’M TAKING MY BROTHER BACK!!!” Ignatius roared, and ripped out Satsuhito’s linker core.

[Aaron008R]

Originally Posted by Reiji Tabibito

NOOOOOOOOOOOO!

Hayate can't have a harem! She already has her knights!

Who are all girls...

Zafira?

Apalis: [No, says ME!!]

Sounds like a fun device to have around.

Since... well...

Apalis: [Everybody talks about how awesome my little brother is, but NOT ME!! He's just a damn STORAGE DEVICE!! I'm better than he is!!]

As you can see, he has a massive complex from Durandal seeing action while he was in storage...

Well...
Let me get some facts straight...
Graham made Durandal. (Team of designers? Whut? When? >_<)
It's an extremely powerful device that is designed to use ice magic and also specifically designed to seal the Meister of the Book of Darkness (which was one of the most dangerous Lost Logias EVER) directly around the time it loses control.

Apalis IS an overall inferior model. [Unnecessary Rant](No. I am NOT letting Apalis be the superior device of the two. Do you think Aurion could simply hand out devices of Durandal's caliber just because someone of Arcas' rank requested it? Don't get full of your self and don't screw around with me. Nothing short of an extremely high rank in the military AND a legitimate reason of the need utilization shall warrant a request of such a high-caliber device.)[/Unnecessary Rant] Though I'm sure you understand. I just lengthened my post.

Though I don't know if this would help in curing his little complex.
Hey, at least he HAS cartridges.

*Runs from Blazing Arrow Ray-Storm/Buring Over-Storm Breaker*

Pssht. You all just freaked out over it because it was written in highly suggestive terms...

Yeah, go ahead and say what you want. I'm not freaked out but I still like how it was suggestively done. I just sometimes happen to like things that sound so wrong but is perfectly worksafe. The beauty of false innuendo is such an interesting device to get people reeling that it somehow even surpasses the real things sometimes.

And before you start with another 'Pshht. You're just a-<insert description>', That's a mentality I learned in order to make things more interesting for my works in the OC thread. Too goody-goody is a character type that I try to avoid for my characters (maybe except Liana and Vinson).

I guess I got to learn that mentality from some of my sempai's here in Animesuki forums. (Chaos, Nighty, Lowe, Kha and some more)

Re: Disclaimer: I read it. But that does not stop me from exclaming outrage from such acts!

Hayate = Konata

Aurion = Izumi-papa?

DOES NOT COMPUTE!!!

WHAT?! You want me to make a Kanata character (i.e. an already deceased colleague of Aurion who happens to look like Hayate)?!?! Totally cliche and NOT the type of Father-Daughter relationship I'm gunning for!!! (Though I could use Daishi Prime's route for Takashi and how he sees Hayate in Academy Blues... But I'd rather not rip off any more similar ideas from him.)

Originally Posted by Nightengale

Read.Saga.of.Saga.

Seconded.

C'mon, Chaos! It can't be that bad for ya!

THE POWER OF EPIC COMPELS YOU!!!
THE POWER OF EPIC COMPELS YOU!!!
THE POWER OF EPIC COMPELS YOU!!!
THE POWER OF EPIC COMPELS YOU!!!
THE POWER OF EPIC COMPELS YOU!!!
THE POWER OF EPIC COMPELS YOU!!!

Read it with ALL YOUR STRENGTH!


As for new anime's... Maybe Shana and Gundam 00. And perhaps Clannad... I'll take a more in-depth checking of the new shows to come later.


@Wibbles: Nice finale. Now I get it since I've been watching GL recently.

[Erio]

Originally Posted by USB500

What happened here anyway?

Havent watched 27 yet?

Can you elaborate?

Although the way you're hinting it...

See for yourself: (unless hotlinking is not permitted )

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

I sort of burn through the history chapter Now I regreted because I have no clue what happened

When you're done with Shana, you show watch Shana-TAN

Oh, I couldnt stand Shana-tan... OMG, just remembering that gives me a headache.

I wanna do that too... Can I steal some from you ?

Not enough HDD space?

Hopefully it'll be the next best harem/comedy now that Seto is over...

And i swear that's the Over-size version of Null/Rein/Agito

Haha, I'm not really expecting anything from that one...or from any of those harem animes... but of course, by not expecting anything from them, the better they are if they are actually decent.

[FieryAeon]

*flooded by backlog* Nooooooo......*takes out sledgehammer* DIE!

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Thanks.
He makes devices/gadgets/tools/utilities to be used in the MILITARY.

And about a new weapon testing session...

Spoiler for weapon testing:

Keroko: <holding a new cannon weapon> Yosh. Ikuyo~!

Aurion: <at the data screen> Now remember. Be sure to regula-

Nanoha: Ikinasai, Keroko-chan! Zenryoku Zenkai!!!

Aurion: Chott-

Keroko: Hai, Onee-chan! Hasha!

<BOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMM!!!!>

(Everyone is charred. The cannon shot and then exploded due to power overload after shooting a beam that homed in on Aurion and the others location.)

Almaria: [The defensive measures were 32.46% successful]

Nanoha/Keroko: <coughs> Oopsie...

Aurion: <covered with soot> Zenryoku Zenkai... Datto? What happened to good old regulation, huh? Takamachi kyoudai?

N/K Ehto...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Though I'm still not sure on what the punishment would be...

He could try another sekuhara counseling session.

Originally Posted by USB500

DIARY OF A WINDTALKER
SUMMER ARC SPECIAL, FINALE

Spoiler for length:

*snip*

Phew, it finally ends. Well, not the kind of ending one would expect, but what the heck.

And a fitting conclusion to a great arc. *thumbs up*

Originally Posted by USB500

Let me see for holiday special:

• Halloween: undecided; might be another cosplay party goes wrong? Or time for Hikki getting his true revenge? Or is it...
  Spoiler:

  Hayate going dere-dere with Hikki? UNPOSSIBLE!!!!!
  
  Hayate: Oniisama.... mou, dame....
  Hikki: what are you doing, Hayate?
  Hayate: *turns away* please... be gentle....
  Hikki: *head overheats*
  
  *behind the corner*
  Widuri: *gasps* Hikki-sama........
  Fate: uh-oh.
  Nanoha: is he....
  Keroko: going to...
  Fate/Nanoha/Keroko: DO IT TO HER!!!??????
  
  

EEK! Hayate nooo! Don't succumb to evil!

Originally Posted by USB500

• Christmas/New Year: a vacation trip to Alexandra's hometown, maybe. Perhaps the Gemini Sisters returns as Santa Sisters?
  
  Spoiler:

  Aura/Freya: everyone! MERI KURISUMASU~~~ *winks*
  Hikki/Yutaro/Takeru/Erio/E: so.... so kawai...... *blushes*
• Valentine's Day: has anyone done this with OC yet?

Hmm...why not do it chronologically? Halloween should be after summer in Japan right? You could start with that.

Originally Posted by USB500

As if it wasn't enough, how about Armstrong/Hayate scenario? Hint: Armstrong somehow is given a make-over and returns to his Colossal Blade look?????

Spoiler for cracky time again:

Hayate: *gasps* you....
Armstrong: *shrugs* don't ask.
Hayate: I never see you before. Have we met?
Armstrong: huh?

*behind the corner*
Hikki: (yes, he's the culprit for this scenario ) ZOMG! Hayate's totally fallen into the makeover!!
Nanoha: and she doesn't even recognize Ojiichan, too!
Fate: this does not compute.... *palms face*
Keroko: we're so screwed up....

??????: oneechan-tachi.....
*everybody turns to see Annabelle fuming in anger*
Hikki/Nanoha/Fate/Keroko: Anna-chan... can we talk????
Anna: Miata! Vios! Meteor!
Miata/Vios: Admis d'Odre.

Hayate goes dere-dere over make-over GAR Armstrong? USO DA!!!!!!

*runs from Zankantou Inazuma Juryooku no Otoshi*

Errr...don't quite understand Annabelle's reactions. *runs off to re-read Annabelle's profile*

Originally Posted by Nightengale

Spoiler:

Hmm...so does Null go around trying to spread love too? *runs away*

Originally Posted by haiz123321

Spoiler for New Character:

*snip*

Anything else i need to add and yes, the weapon is Exeter from FF8
Oh yeah is the new way of typing clearer? As in putting a title and stuff cause i personally like it myself

Err...Exeter? Isn't that a shotgun class? Personally I like Vincent's weapon from FFVII better.

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

*Pillow talk*


Spica: "That's silly, everyone is afraid of something..."

Jeno: "Well... Other than [mumble]losing you[/mumble], there is one thing..."

Spica: "...?"

Jeno: "Lets just say I would rather be stuck with a room full of period-time, hungry, annoyed, Super Tsundere with 99% Tsun for 1 whole week, than be stuck with THAT GUY for one hour..."

Spoiler for Sipher of the Blood Dawn:

*snip

Really sounds a lot like Disgaea's Laharl.

Originally Posted by Erio

Here's something some of you might find interesting...

Dunno if it was posted on the Image Thread, since I dont go there much, but surely they wont appreciate it since its not NXF crap.

Anyway, how about some Uno?

*plugs nostrils with cotton before expanding spoiler tag*

Originally Posted by Erio

Spoiler for Kinda-NSFW Uno:

*runs*

*cotton is soaked red almost immediately after expanding spoiler tag*

Originally Posted by FlameSparkZ

Hmmm, let's see:

• Being seen in underwear/Changing clothes. (Face turns red)
• When someone finds out something embarrassing that she's trying to hide. (ie. a secret)
• Getting caught wearing a full-body animal suit
• Being the center of attention when 'accidents due to clumsiness' happen (those that cause chain reactions).
• Seeing something she shouldn't have. <---- Do ignore this one, too dangerous

Don't most girls react that way? Except those tsunderes who probably shoot/bash/kill first I guess.

Originally Posted by FlameSparkZ

Warning: Goes crazy (In a 'must eat them all!' kind of way) when it has strawberries.

There's just something about strawberries that make certain girls go crazy. I personally know someone like that. Not that I mind since I kinda like strawberries myself.

Originally Posted by Nightengale

Spoiler for Isdera vs Zest:

As the tornado continued blowing, creating a ring with them as the center, a unsuspecting leave flew into the circle from the walls of the typhoon...

It was less than a second. The leave blocked their eye-contact, but they felt the glint of each other’s eyes behind that wall of green, as the sounds of their weapons was enough proof.

[Explosion.]

A simultenous sound of loading cartridges, the sound of steam being released in the air, and the clink of metal falling to the ground...

That was the signal.

Heh, I'm finally getting back some feel on writing the Knights.

Yes! More please.

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Possible Carim's barrier jacket?

Spoiler for before:

Spoiler for after:

OMG! Lovely! She kinda looks like a valkyrie. It wouldn't really fit though since I doubt she's capable of combat. But then again canon didn't really confirm that. (or did it?)

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

After that, Uno than officially becomes...

Spoiler:

Uno neesama upgrade to Uno Ka- *shot*

Uno as a mo----? Does not compute! Don't tell me its baby Jail... *faints*

Originally Posted by haiz123321

The hell? That's what you guys do?

Err...shouldn't that be the normal way to do it? Well you could lose your story still if you didn't bother to say constantly and there's a black out in your house.

Originally Posted by Reiji Tabibito

NOOOOOOOOOOOO!

Hayate can't have a harem! She already has her knights!

Who are all girls...

You seemed to have forgotten Zafira, but then again he's a guardian beast and not a knight. No to harem! I'd like to see Hayate experience romance for once.

Originally Posted by Reiji Tabibito

Pssht. You all just freaked out over it because it was written in highly suggestive terms...

Highly suggestive is actually extremely understated.

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Off-topic...


...But now that Summer's love is over, I'm curious as to what you guys are planning to watch this Fall

For me...

Spoiler for Guaranteed watch:

1. PRISM ARK!!!!
2. Clannad
3. Shakugan no Shana II

Spoiler for VERY interested:

1. Bamboo Blade
2. ef - a tale of memories
3. D.C.II ~Da Capo II~ (Even though I didn't watch the first two )

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4. Myself;Yourself
5. Dragonaut -The Resonance-
6. Mobile Suit Gundam 00

Spoiler for Slightly interested, but no promise...:

- Suteki Tantei Labyrinth
- Night Wizard The ANIMATION
- Goshuushousama Ninomiya-kun
- Taiho Shichauzo Full Throttle
- Rental Magica

Sometimes I really rather not depend on a single anime blogger's opinion on what I want to watch. After all they are rather bias in their taste and opinion.

But if you ask me I'll probably watch,

Spoiler for Fall season watch list:

1. Shakugan no Shana II
2. Prism Ark
3. Gundam 00
4. ef - a tale of memories
5. Sketchbook ~full color’s~
6. Dragonaut -The Resonance-
7. Goshuushousama Ninomiya-kun (not too sure about this, sounds like pure fanservice stuff)
8. CLANNAD
9. Rental Magica
10. Kimikiss
11. Ghost Hound

Yes, my list is long.

Originally Posted by USB500

Yeah, I know I've wanted to do an Annabelle one-shot, since Zengar/Irui shipping always appears inside my mind whenever I think of Armstrong & Anna.

Now I need to edit this one Irui artwork (hint: cosplaying Anna-chan? ), and all the whole things will be complete.

Just like this.

*runs from angry Irui Annabelle*

Is there any full body picture of Anna? Instead of just the close up of her cute face.

*sigh* That took quite awhile...I'm still not used to this backlog tackling.

[Erio]

Since some here appear to be interested in Goshuushousama Ninomiya-kun, here's a special IMAGE TIME for you guys.

Spoiler for Moe and Hawtness Overload:

I died by the second pic...

*me is KO'ed* (Where is that Hayate gif when I need it? )

BTW Lowe, if the blue-haired looks like Mai, and the other one like Gwen...

[Tk3997]

Not much time to comment on other peoples stuff sadly and I’ve been awake mostly during the threads off hours recently due to having some stuff to do, and I'm going to sleep in like 10 minutes now.


Anyway Small content update:

Still Unnamed Post-StrikerS Arc Chapter 1.5:

Spoiler for Length:

Chapter Two:
The massive blue energy beam lanced out and slammed into the cruisers reinforced forward shields and barriers like a freight train. Excess energy washed over and around the shields creeping aft until the hull confirming shield was glowing a near blinding white from almost stem to stern as it desperately tried to redirect and radiate away the massive amount of energy it was absorbing across the entire electromagnetic spectrum. It nearly dead it, but as the beam died away the shields flickered and collapsed across the entire ship the last vestiges of the beam tore into the ship slagging the ships starboard engine nacelle, the ship was now effectively a cripple with only one engine and minimal steering.

This made it all two easy for both Railguns to lock on and strike the ship dead on the nose. The impact was again horrific and the vessel reeled under the hit her nose thrown nearly 30 degrees to port by the slightly off center impact that destroyed a large portion of her bow leaving only an outward facing cone composed of a mess of twisted wreckage where the ships sleek prow had once been.

Still this ship was probably around five to six times the weight of the destroyers and despite the magnitude of the hits it was still fairly intact and had a number of weapon systems remaining. Thus despite the massive damage and it’s almost certain doom the cruiser brought every still intact gun it had online and returned fire. No escape pods or other attempt to evacuate were noted and so it seemed the crew was determined to fight to the death no matter how futile it was.
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“I’m never working as a PMC again, I’m done with fighting other peoples’ wars, the money isn’t worth…. I said all that didn’t I?”

“Something to that effect yes.” Pixy agreed.

“So how the FUCK did I end up on a planet in the ass end of no where getting shot at by a bunch of killer robots and mages!?” Felix cursed as he popped his device up over the top of the thick concrete wall he was hiding behind and fired a couple energy blasts timed to detonate near the enemy position. The shots blasted some chunks out of a couple of structures they where hiding but didn’t seem to do much else.

“Probably because you suck at contact negotiations… oh and incoming!”

Both of them quickly raised barriers as a barrage of high powered magic projectiles arced out of the sky and slammed down in their general area demolishing several buildings and obscuring the entire area in smoke from the blasts as well as hurling them to the ground despite their shields.

“That fucking bombardment mage is getting annoying.” Felix mumbled as he quickly regained his feet.

“Agreed, I think it’s time to do something about him.” Pixy replied darkly.

“We don’t have orders to go hunting him.” Felix remarked casually.

“When has that ever stopped us?” Pixy shot back gamely.

“Let’s roll.”

Seconds later both of them shot out of the thinning smoke cloud and straight past the surprised enemy forces skimming the ground at an altitude of about 5 feet and sticking behind terrain to cover their movements as they sped in the general direction most of the indirect fire seemed to be coming from.

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Mitchell and his team where making good progress through the base thus far only having encountered a few weak drones and easily dispatched goons. The doors had proved slightly more a hassle but Carter had gotten past most of them easily enough, as she was going right now. She disconnected her device from the doors controls and signaled it was opened. She performed a quick scan of the area and located three mobile contacts on the other side.

Mitchell quickly ordered the team to stack up on either side of the door with Teal’c and Alan taking point. He opted to bring the kid since he felt a second melee fighter would be more useful in these tight corridors then a support caster like Daniel who could help better by holding down the fort outside. So far his planned seemed to be panning out the kid did exactly what he was told and when and seemed competent enough.

With the team in position Teal’c palmed a stun grenade and nodded at Alan who hit the door control. The barrier slid open and the grenade was quickly tossed inside were moments later a blinding flash and deafening roar was heard quickly followed by several voices confused shouting. The team piled in within moments Teal’c went left, Alan went right, and Mitchell the third man inside took the center. Alan and Teal’c both proceeded to
close in and savagely maul the hapless guards with their devices; Mitchell housed the third man with a stream of bolts knocking him to the ground and out cold.

“Well this doesn’t seem so tough.” Alan remarked happily as his target slumped to the ground after a through pummeling via his device.

“Don’t say stuff like that!” Mitchell chastised him wincing.

“Why not— hey what happened to the lights?” Alan pondered aloud as all the lights in the store room suddenly died plunging it into darkness.

“Get down!” Mitchell shouted as he tackled the dufus behind some crates moments before energy bolts filled the air around them tearing into the walls and the various storage containers in a storm of sparks and pyrotechnics.

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Cipher deftly blocked another hard hit by his enemies device with his own before quickly pushing off and unleashing a series of unguided medium powered bolts to force him to fall back a bit to evade them. A moment later he jinked left and out of the line of a beam blast from his third opponent situated on the ground below him before spinning on his center of gravity to zoom head first toward the ground and out of the line of fire.

Flipping right side up again as he landed between a set of buildings he felt a presence racing up behind him… He whirled Blue Eagle around to rest on his right shoulder facing backward into the face of his would be attacker several feet behind him with a fair sized charge already held at its tip. The man froze in surprise and Cipher cut loose the low level buster spell forcing the enemy fighter to erect a barrier to blunt the beam that erupted from the weapon but despite this defense he was still hurled away by the hit and slammed through the outer wall of a nearby building and probably out of the fight.

Predictably his other two opponents were racing in for another attack and nearly upon him. The approaching pair summoned up a storm of magic projectiles and set them loose on him. He quickly took back to the air scooting backward and around a building before leveling out and accelerating away shaking a fair number of the bolts as they impacted the ground or the building and forcing most of the others to make radical coruse changes to avoid the same fate and letting him open the distance.

Most of these guys where not very good pretty much the rabble you’d expect from pirates, if rather numerous. Even so checking his tactical displays it looked like their forces had already incapacitated the majority of the defenders and in a few more minutes it would just be mopping up and they could move to assist Mitchell and the others inside.

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“This doesn’t make any kind of sense…” Felix mumbled as he surveyed the area ahead through a set of field glasses from the second floor of an administrative building. From this position he could see the bombardment mage mostly concealed in some cover toward the outskirts of the base, but he also saw not a single guard in sight. “Who the hell leaves a bombardment specialist hanging out in the open like that?”

“No one smart, so there’s a 99% chance it’s a trap but I must admit I can’t tell what kind exactly.” Pixy replied with a frown as he also surveyed the scene. “Normally I’d advise hanging back and watching some more…” The mage powered up and fired off another salvo of projectiles into the distance. “But time isn’t really something we have at the moment I think we’re just going to have to spring it.”

“So ‘blunder into the enemy trap’ is your plan?” Felix questioned skeptically.

“Knowing it’s a trap is half the battle.”

“Which stills leaves about 50% of the battle to fight and 50% is plenty of room for things to go terribly, terribly wrong.”

“Don’t worry about I’m going to spring it, you just need to cover me.”

“Yeah, yeah, fine but don’t come blaming me if you get fucked up!”

”I’m going to try and get closer stay here and wait for my signal.” Pixy replied ignoring the remark as he rose and headed for the door.

“What’s the signal?” Felix asked idly as he continued to observe the scene.

“When stuff start’s exploding, target the bomber first.”

“Should be hard to miss then.” Felix replied flatly.

Pixy moved out heading back down the stairs and out the back of the building and skirting its edge heading east. He’d already planned his route after looking over the area from above as he neared the corner he spotted his first way point. He passed at the corner and quickly ducked his head out to check it was clear before quickly sprint across a short open area and sliding in behind a low wall that ran toward his target at a slight angle he began moving along it as quickly as he could in the hunched position he had to maintain to keep behind it.

Felix watched him move from his elevated perch for a few seconds before shouldering his weapon and focusing on the target area. He quickly noted the range to several land marks and mentally catalogued them so he wouldn’t need to waste time trying to gauge them later, at the same time he kept scanning the area trying to figure out what they might be up against.

Pixy halted at the end of the wall and got down on his belly to begin crawling hand over hand into some tall grass. Apparently pirates weren’t big on grounds keeping as the stuff grew totally out of control all over perimeter of the base. As he neared the edge of it he found himself within 50 meters of his target. He gripped Morgan in his left hand and then bounced to his feet and charged <Explosion, zerborsten Schuss! > Morgan drawled as it loaded a cartridge and formed a large glowing sphere of energy which Pixy smacked like a baseball with the blade sending hurtling toward the mage.

The target reacted quickly throwing up a barrier against which projectile smashed into and exploded with terrific force shattering it and hurling the mage away almost 50 meters. Pixy whirled though as a barely visible blur slammed into him form the side and the sounds of grinding metal was heard as he blocked his new assailants first strike. Even at point blank range he could barely feel a magic presence from his enemy, but the visual cloak fell away revealing an armored and helmeted man wielding a broadsword. His armor bore some odd markings in a writing he didn’t recognize but other then that was a flat black from head to toe. The pair pushed off each other and bounced a few meters to stare each other down after a few seconds Pixy nodded in acknowledgement of his opponent who swiftly charged again.

The bombardment mage meanwhile was reeling from the hit but had regained his feet now and begun charging a spell, but he was targeting Pixy and thus showing his back to Felix. Felix had him lined up dead in his sights and was preparing to fire when a flash to his right caught his attention. He dove forward out of the window he was looking out of as a beam tore into his former position blowing apart the corner of the building and showering the area with debris and smoke. Felix didn’t quite manage to arrest his fall completely and impacted the ground fairly hard busting open his nose in the process.

Shaking it off he quickly got moving dragging along the ground for several feet before getting into the air, but he had one thing to do before he could get payback on this new chump for the bloody nose. He popped up to a higher altitude and drew a bead, the enemy mage was still focused on Pixy and had his back to him. <Load Cartridge, Shield Breaker!> A pair of large shells where quickly punted from his device a moment before the spell discharged. The beam sliced across the distance between him and his target at a blinding speed and speared the enemy mage straight through the gut dropping him to the ground like a sack of bricks.

He dove back for the ground just as another high powered yellow beam sliced past him, he saw roughly where it came from and sticking low the ground began maneuvering toward the area.

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“Damn it Carter where the hell are they?!” Mitchell shouted angrily as he wildly fired back in the general direction the fire seemed to be coming from. Alan was focusing on keeping a barrier over their cover keeping it intact and effective against the barrage.

“I can’t tell they must have some sort of stealth system!” She shouted back furiously working on a holographic window.

“You think! You’re a genius right so do something about it!” He yelled back.

“Well if I reverse the polarity and then…” She began thoughtfully.

“How long?!” Mitchell cut her off.

“5 minutes, maybe.”

Mitchell frowned he didn’t really think they had five minutes, the fire seemed to be spreading out now and he expected they’d be flanked shortly. Then he suddenly noted what he was hiding next too and a preverbal light bulb appeared over his head. A few seconds later a metal can went sailing out of their hiding place toward the area he expected the enemy to be located. Said enemies probably thinking it was some kind of bomb swiftly blew it apart with energy blasts… and spilled bright white paint all over the place including onto a formally invisible silhouette. A moment later the robot was blasted by a hail of return fire that overloaded its shield and toppled it to the ground in pieces.

“Ha! Stupid improvsioation-1 High technology-zip!” Mitchell crowed triumphantly before being forced to scramble back down by a hail of fire from the remaining and still quite invisible attackers.

I have the entire first few chapters pretty much roughed out, but writing out the battle scenes is pretty time consuming as I often go over them several times (and I'm easily distracted...) to make sure they clear and fairly descriptive, the curse of being a bit of a perfectionist in such things. Only a tiny bit of space combat in this tidbit as it focuses more on the ground battle. It’s shorter then some of my pieces too at under 3,000 words, but I’m considering perhaps writing in smaller blocks from now on as sometimes banging out those huge longcat posts can start to get a little tiring.

I think this section probably has about 5 to 6 thousand mores words in it, maybe a bit more if I get on a real descriptive roll at some point and then we slow right back down into allot of dialogue and explanation and stuff as they try to figure out who the hell these guys were and are. Also might want to hijack a few OCs and CCs at that stage too, but I’ll discuss that when the time comes.

[Chaos2Frozen]

Originally Posted by Nightengale

Go ahead. I've only touched on the first 3 Meisters.

I'll say this again. Read Saga of Saga first before linking Reinforce and save the potential trouble of writing something only to be retconned by my story.

Okay, so 11, 22 years ago is free for the taking, right?


I'll keep it simple

Originally Posted by Nightengale

[*]KimiKiss... well, Mao-nee = Eriko = Yuumi = I've read a little of the manga and played the game a little. There's like...no real story, but the characters are damn cute.[*]Neuro is one of the few good things left in Shonen Jump other than HxH, One Piece, Eyeshield 21 and D.Gray-Man. Not to mention it's sick, dark lolol comedy.[*]Ghost Hound... I.G Anniversary Production + Masamune Shirow + Lain + I'm a sucker for those spiritual stuff thingies. I liked Ghost Hunt as well for one.[/LIST]

- I... See...
- I guess you can't judge from the image...
- Spiritual stuff is find for me, but if it turns out to be a mindfuck...

Originally Posted by Erio

Oh, I couldnt stand Shana-tan... OMG, just remembering that gives me a headache.

Infidel !!!

Originally Posted by Erio

Not enough HDD space?

Not enough protection from the law

Originally Posted by Erio

Haha, I'm not really expecting anything from that one...or from any of those harem animes... but of course, by not expecting anything from them, the better they are if they are actually decent.

Who knows... Who knows...

Originally Posted by FieryAeon

Really sounds a lot like Disgaea's Laharl.

I don't see how

Originally Posted by FieryAeon

Don't most girls react that way? Except those tsunderes who probably shoot/bash/kill first I guess.

You can never be too sure.

Originally Posted by FieryAeon

There's just something about strawberries that make certain girls go crazy. I personally know someone like that. Not that I mind since I kinda like strawberries myself.

I don't get it, but can I assume the Severity of it isn't constant?

Because that would be quite complicating...

Originally Posted by FieryAeon

OMG! Lovely! She kinda looks like a valkyrie. It wouldn't really fit though since I doubt she's capable of combat. But then again canon didn't really confirm that. (or did it?)

It should be fine if you remove the sword and shield. Canon never shown if she does have combat abilities, but I would like to think that she could still defend herself to an extend.

Originally Posted by FieryAeon

Uno as a mo----? Does not compute! Don't tell me its baby Jail... *faints*

Erm... No

Originally Posted by FieryAeon

You seemed to have forgotten Zafira, but then again he's a guardian beast and not a knight. No to harem! I'd like to see Hayate experience romance for once.

Behind door No. 1: Chrono "Migratory-Bird" Haralown
Behind door No. 2: Acous "She's-Mah-Sistar" Verossa

Originally Posted by FieryAeon

Sometimes I really rather not depend on a single anime blogger's opinion on what I want to watch. After all they are rather bias in their taste and opinion.

You're mistaken, my top shows have long been chosen before hand, but there are some that I've never heard before...

Originally Posted by FieryAeon

But if you ask me I'll probably watch,

Spoiler for Fall season watch list:

1. Shakugan no Shana II
2. Prism Ark
3. Gundam 00
4. ef - a tale of memories
5. Sketchbook ~full color’s~
6. Dragonaut -The Resonance-
7. Goshuushousama Ninomiya-kun (not too sure about this, sounds like pure fanservice stuff)
8. CLANNAD
9. Rental Magica
10. Kimikiss
11. Ghost Hound

Yes, my list is long.

More or less a very similar ones

Originally Posted by FieryAeon

Is there any full body picture of Anna? Instead of just the close up of her cute face.

Second, I need to see want she looks like when I intro another rival ...

[haiz123321]

Originally Posted by Erio

The idea is that the forces should be evenly spread throughout the TSAB's divisions. Concentration of power is against these rules, and thus Limiters were used so RF6 could cheat the system and have such amount of high-ranked officers in a single squadron.

But in any case, your character is only ranked A... He is nowhere near a "high-ranked officer", so even if he was part of RF6, he wouldnt have been limited... no need to do so.

Oh, ok then

Originally Posted by LoweGear

27 secures GL as the most EPIC mecha anime of this year It's a shame that only a few people realize how much more profound the ending is underneath the EPICNESS.

Basically it sucks ???

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Lets put it this way...

Vice got pwned twice

Originally Posted by FieryAeon

Err...Exeter? Isn't that a shotgun class? Personally I like Vincent's weapon from FFVII better.

I'm not bringing the WHOLE exeter in here dude =X Though Takusa was based of Irvine Kinneas

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Yup. Most of us here type out our scenarios in a word processor (I use MS Word), and then post it here. Prevents internet related posting headaches, and ensures that you always have a copy of the scenario for future reference. Of course, always remember to save (pressing ctrl+s every few minutes should become second nature to you ).

o_O I just click post reply and then type stuff out, cause if u use ms word, won't you need to insert the bold code and stuff again?

[Nightengale]

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Okay, so 11, 22 years ago is free for the taking, right?


I'll keep it simple.

Sort of. 11 years ago's stuff link in with Clyde's, so you'll have to take some control with how you deal with it. 22 years ago is different...

Regardless, it depends on how you deal with the aspect of the link.

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

- I... See...

More than enough reason for me to watch KimiKiss.

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

- I guess you can't judge from the image...

Well... if there's gonna be any other reason...

Aurion x Ha-

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Not enough protection from the law

ODEX-ed, huh?

[Chaos2Frozen]

Originally Posted by haiz123321

Vice got pwned twice

Actually, there's still 2 more times, I just didn't post them

And this is where my idea of Vice/Rein is born... And it is along this line that I intend to bring in Sipher/Rein (Sipher X Rein = Sin )

[Keroko]

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

My early attempts at making someone moe...

And succesfull at crushing a large part of the tsundere image I accidentally gave her.

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

RevivalS.

Oh yes.

So many different timelines.

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Though let's not abuse this. -_- (besides, only Hayate knows of this)
I still have more plans by the end of RevivalS.

I'm not planning too, don't worry.

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Quite fun to have one, huh?
Though Almaria pretty much suffices for me.

Quite fun indeed. Though since I'll be starting to plan the storyline of the Legend of Ancient Belka, I might still have a chance at this. No Ancient Belka without unision devices, after all.

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

They're sisters, alright.

Oh yes, woe to those between them and a new weapon to be tested.

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Wasn't there a Japanese audio option for Disgaea 1?
I only got to play Disgaea 2.

If there is, I haven't found it yet. If someone knows of it, please tell me.

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

I doubt anybody has created an un-moe unison device before

Not as far as I can remember.

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

No no You misunderstood, that 90% is when he drains their life You'll rarely find a destroyer with 90% hp intact in the middle of a crisis so it'll rarely happen.

So what if he drains one before the battle even starts?

Originally Posted by USB500

I can already imagine her summoning steamrollers instead of Stingers.

Cute girls doing badass move = DOES NOT COMPUTE

So Nanoha, Fate, Hayate, Vita doing badass moves does not compute with you?

Who are you, and what have you done with USB?

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

THough I also think that she's not the melee type, so away with the weapons!

What? Ditching those lovely shield and sword?

Originally Posted by Reiji Tabibito

Sure.

It won't. Trust me.

Originally Posted by Erio

Since some here appear to be interested in Goshuushousama Ninomiya-kun, here's a special IMAGE TIME for you guys.

Spoiler for Moe and Hawtness Overload:

I died by the second pic...

*me is KO'ed* (Where is that Hayate gif when I need it? )

Yum, that certainly is on my 'keep an eye on' list.

Originally Posted by Tk3997

Not much time to comment on other peoples stuff sadly and I’ve been awake mostly during the threads off hours recently due to having some stuff to do, and I'm going to sleep in like 10 minutes now.


Anyway Small content update:

Still Unnamed Post-StrikerS Arc Chapter 1.5:

Spoiler for Length:

Chapter Two:
The massive blue energy beam lanced out and slammed into the cruisers reinforced forward shields and barriers like a freight train. Excess energy washed over and around the shields creeping aft until the hull confirming shield was glowing a near blinding white from almost stem to stern as it desperately tried to redirect and radiate away the massive amount of energy it was absorbing across the entire electromagnetic spectrum. It nearly dead it, but as the beam died away the shields flickered and collapsed across the entire ship the last vestiges of the beam tore into the ship slagging the ships starboard engine nacelle, the ship was now effectively a cripple with only one engine and minimal steering.

This made it all two easy for both Railguns to lock on and strike the ship dead on the nose. The impact was again horrific and the vessel reeled under the hit her nose thrown nearly 30 degrees to port by the slightly off center impact that destroyed a large portion of her bow leaving only an outward facing cone composed of a mess of twisted wreckage where the ships sleek prow had once been.

Still this ship was probably around five to six times the weight of the destroyers and despite the magnitude of the hits it was still fairly intact and had a number of weapon systems remaining. Thus despite the massive damage and it’s almost certain doom the cruiser brought every still intact gun it had online and returned fire. No escape pods or other attempt to evacuate were noted and so it seemed the crew was determined to fight to the death no matter how futile it was.
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“I’m never working as a PMC again, I’m done with fighting other peoples’ wars, the money isn’t worth…. I said all that didn’t I?”

“Something to that effect yes.” Pixy agreed.

“So how the FUCK did I end up on a planet in the ass end of no where getting shot at by a bunch of killer robots and mages!?” Felix cursed as he popped his device up over the top of the thick concrete wall he was hiding behind and fired a couple energy blasts timed to detonate near the enemy position. The shots blasted some chunks out of a couple of structures they where hiding but didn’t seem to do much else.

“Probably because you suck at contact negotiations… oh and incoming!”

Both of them quickly raised barriers as a barrage of high powered magic projectiles arced out of the sky and slammed down in their general area demolishing several buildings and obscuring the entire area in smoke from the blasts as well as hurling them to the ground despite their shields.

“That fucking bombardment mage is getting annoying.” Felix mumbled as he quickly regained his feet.

“Agreed, I think it’s time to do something about him.” Pixy replied darkly.

“We don’t have orders to go hunting him.” Felix remarked casually.

“When has that ever stopped us?” Pixy shot back gamely.

“Let’s roll.”

Seconds later both of them shot out of the thinning smoke cloud and straight past the surprised enemy forces skimming the ground at an altitude of about 5 feet and sticking behind terrain to cover their movements as they sped in the general direction most of the indirect fire seemed to be coming from.

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Mitchell and his team where making good progress through the base thus far only having encountered a few weak drones and easily dispatched goons. The doors had proved slightly more a hassle but Carter had gotten past most of them easily enough, as she was going right now. She disconnected her device from the doors controls and signaled it was opened. She performed a quick scan of the area and located three mobile contacts on the other side.

Mitchell quickly ordered the team to stack up on either side of the door with Teal’c and Alan taking point. He opted to bring the kid since he felt a second melee fighter would be more useful in these tight corridors then a support caster like Daniel who could help better by holding down the fort outside. So far his planned seemed to be panning out the kid did exactly what he was told and when and seemed competent enough.

With the team in position Teal’c palmed a stun grenade and nodded at Alan who hit the door control. The barrier slid open and the grenade was quickly tossed inside were moments later a blinding flash and deafening roar was heard quickly followed by several voices confused shouting. The team piled in within moments Teal’c went left, Alan went right, and Mitchell the third man inside took the center. Alan and Teal’c both proceeded to
close in and savagely maul the hapless guards with their devices; Mitchell housed the third man with a stream of bolts knocking him to the ground and out cold.

“Well this doesn’t seem so tough.” Alan remarked happily as his target slumped to the ground after a through pummeling via his device.

“Don’t say stuff like that!” Mitchell chastised him wincing.

“Why not— hey what happened to the lights?” Alan pondered aloud as all the lights in the store room suddenly died plunging it into darkness.

“Get down!” Mitchell shouted as he tackled the dufus behind some crates moments before energy bolts filled the air around them tearing into the walls and the various storage containers in a storm of sparks and pyrotechnics.

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Cipher deftly blocked another hard hit by his enemies device with his own before quickly pushing off and unleashing a series of unguided medium powered bolts to force him to fall back a bit to evade them. A moment later he jinked left and out of the line of a beam blast from his third opponent situated on the ground below him before spinning on his center of gravity to zoom head first toward the ground and out of the line of fire.

Flipping right side up again as he landed between a set of buildings he felt a presence racing up behind him… He whirled Blue Eagle around to rest on his right shoulder facing backward into the face of his would be attacker several feet behind him with a fair sized charge already held at its tip. The man froze in surprise and Cipher cut loose the low level buster spell forcing the enemy fighter to erect a barrier to blunt the beam that erupted from the weapon but despite this defense he was still hurled away by the hit and slammed through the outer wall of a nearby building and probably out of the fight.

Predictably his other two opponents were racing in for another attack and nearly upon him. The approaching pair summoned up a storm of magic projectiles and set them loose on him. He quickly took back to the air scooting backward and around a building before leveling out and accelerating away shaking a fair number of the bolts as they impacted the ground or the building and forcing most of the others to make radical coruse changes to avoid the same fate and letting him open the distance.

Most of these guys where not very good pretty much the rabble you’d expect from pirates, if rather numerous. Even so checking his tactical displays it looked like their forces had already incapacitated the majority of the defenders and in a few more minutes it would just be mopping up and they could move to assist Mitchell and the others inside.

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“This doesn’t make any kind of sense…” Felix mumbled as he surveyed the area ahead through a set of field glasses from the second floor of an administrative building. From this position he could see the bombardment mage mostly concealed in some cover toward the outskirts of the base, but he also saw not a single guard in sight. “Who the hell leaves a bombardment specialist hanging out in the open like that?”

“No one smart, so there’s a 99% chance it’s a trap but I must admit I can’t tell what kind exactly.” Pixy replied with a frown as he also surveyed the scene. “Normally I’d advise hanging back and watching some more…” The mage powered up and fired off another salvo of projectiles into the distance. “But time isn’t really something we have at the moment I think we’re just going to have to spring it.”

“So ‘blunder into the enemy trap’ is your plan?” Felix questioned skeptically.

“Knowing it’s a trap is half the battle.”

“Which stills leaves about 50% of the battle to fight and 50% is plenty of room for things to go terribly, terribly wrong.”

“Don’t worry about I’m going to spring it, you just need to cover me.”

“Yeah, yeah, fine but don’t come blaming me if you get fucked up!”

”I’m going to try and get closer stay here and wait for my signal.” Pixy replied ignoring the remark as he rose and headed for the door.

“What’s the signal?” Felix asked idly as he continued to observe the scene.

“When stuff start’s exploding, target the bomber first.”

“Should be hard to miss then.” Felix replied flatly.

Pixy moved out heading back down the stairs and out the back of the building and skirting its edge heading east. He’d already planned his route after looking over the area from above as he neared the corner he spotted his first way point. He passed at the corner and quickly ducked his head out to check it was clear before quickly sprint across a short open area and sliding in behind a low wall that ran toward his target at a slight angle he began moving along it as quickly as he could in the hunched position he had to maintain to keep behind it.

Felix watched him move from his elevated perch for a few seconds before shouldering his weapon and focusing on the target area. He quickly noted the range to several land marks and mentally catalogued them so he wouldn’t need to waste time trying to gauge them later, at the same time he kept scanning the area trying to figure out what they might be up against.

Pixy halted at the end of the wall and got down on his belly to begin crawling hand over hand into some tall grass. Apparently pirates weren’t big on grounds keeping as the stuff grew totally out of control all over perimeter of the base. As he neared the edge of it he found himself within 50 meters of his target. He gripped Morgan in his left hand and then bounced to his feet and charged <Explosion, zerborsten Schuss! > Morgan drawled as it loaded a cartridge and formed a large glowing sphere of energy which Pixy smacked like a baseball with the blade sending hurtling toward the mage.

The target reacted quickly throwing up a barrier against which projectile smashed into and exploded with terrific force shattering it and hurling the mage away almost 50 meters. Pixy whirled though as a barely visible blur slammed into him form the side and the sounds of grinding metal was heard as he blocked his new assailants first strike. Even at point blank range he could barely feel a magic presence from his enemy, but the visual cloak fell away revealing an armored and helmeted man wielding a broadsword. His armor bore some odd markings in a writing he didn’t recognize but other then that was a flat black from head to toe. The pair pushed off each other and bounced a few meters to stare each other down after a few seconds Pixy nodded in acknowledgement of his opponent who swiftly charged again.

The bombardment mage meanwhile was reeling from the hit but had regained his feet now and begun charging a spell, but he was targeting Pixy and thus showing his back to Felix. Felix had him lined up dead in his sights and was preparing to fire when a flash to his right caught his attention. He dove forward out of the window he was looking out of as a beam tore into his former position blowing apart the corner of the building and showering the area with debris and smoke. Felix didn’t quite manage to arrest his fall completely and impacted the ground fairly hard busting open his nose in the process.

Shaking it off he quickly got moving dragging along the ground for several feet before getting into the air, but he had one thing to do before he could get payback on this new chump for the bloody nose. He popped up to a higher altitude and drew a bead, the enemy mage was still focused on Pixy and had his back to him. <Load Cartridge, Shield Breaker!> A pair of large shells where quickly punted from his device a moment before the spell discharged. The beam sliced across the distance between him and his target at a blinding speed and speared the enemy mage straight through the gut dropping him to the ground like a sack of bricks.

He dove back for the ground just as another high powered yellow beam sliced past him, he saw roughly where it came from and sticking low the ground began maneuvering toward the area.

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“Damn it Carter where the hell are they?!” Mitchell shouted angrily as he wildly fired back in the general direction the fire seemed to be coming from. Alan was focusing on keeping a barrier over their cover keeping it intact and effective against the barrage.

“I can’t tell they must have some sort of stealth system!” She shouted back furiously working on a holographic window.

“You think! You’re a genius right so do something about it!” He yelled back.

“Well if I reverse the polarity and then…” She began thoughtfully.

“How long?!” Mitchell cut her off.

“5 minutes, maybe.”

Mitchell frowned he didn’t really think they had five minutes, the fire seemed to be spreading out now and he expected they’d be flanked shortly. Then he suddenly noted what he was hiding next too and a preverbal light bulb appeared over his head. A few seconds later a metal can went sailing out of their hiding place toward the area he expected the enemy to be located. Said enemies probably thinking it was some kind of bomb swiftly blew it apart with energy blasts… and spilled bright white paint all over the place including onto a formally invisible silhouette. A moment later the robot was blasted by a hail of return fire that overloaded its shield and toppled it to the ground in pieces.

“Ha! Stupid improvsioation-1 High technology-zip!” Mitchell crowed triumphantly before being forced to scramble back down by a hail of fire from the remaining and still quite invisible attackers.

I have the entire first few chapters pretty much roughed out, but writing out the battle scenes is pretty time consuming as I often go over them several times (and I'm easily distracted...) to make sure they clear and fairly descriptive, the curse of being a bit of a perfectionist in such things. Only a tiny bit of space combat in this tidbit as it focuses more on the ground battle. It’s shorter then some of my pieces too at under 3,000 words, but I’m considering perhaps writing in smaller blocks from now on as sometimes banging out those huge longcat posts can start to get a little tiring.

I think this section probably has about 5 to 6 thousand mores words in it, maybe a bit more if I get on a real descriptive roll at some point and then we slow right back down into allot of dialogue and explanation and stuff as they try to figure out who the hell these guys were and are. Also might want to hijack a few OCs and CCs at that stage too, but I’ll discuss that when the time comes.

Yes, large pieces of text on a constant basis can be very tiring.

I'll be using these pieces for inspiration every once in a while in the future, as a lot of these guys actions are very similar to the Rogues.

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

It should be fine if you remove the sword and shield. Canon never shown if she does have combat abilities, but I would like to think that she could still defend herself to an extend.

Yeah, but just the armor without weapons is a bit... eh.

Besides, Schach didn't exactly look combat ready before she went tonfa-wielding either. Apearances can be decieving.

Originally Posted by haiz123321

Vice got pwned twice

I don't think it's Vice that got pwned in the third comic....

[Chaos2Frozen]

Originally Posted by Nightengale

Sort of. 11 years ago's stuff link in with Clyde's, so you'll have to take some control with how you deal with it. 22 years ago is different...

Regardless, it depends on how you deal with the aspect of the link.

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Good good... I'll keep it simple

Btw, how many years has the Book of Darkness 'rampage' been going on ?

Originally Posted by Nightengale

Spoiler for size:

More than enough reason for me to watch KimiKiss.

I-I see...

Originally Posted by Nightengale

Well... if there's gonna be any other reason...

Aurion x Ha-

Originally Posted by Nightengale

ODEX-ed, huh?

So far, Chinese subs work

But certain shows like Clannad and ef needs me to watch the english to get the full picture

Originally Posted by Keroko

And succesfull at crushing a large part of the tsundere image I accidentally gave her.

Aaron! What have you done ?!

Originally Posted by Keroko

Not as far as I can remember.

Originally Posted by Keroko

So what if he drains one before the battle even starts?

He won't, because he's BEYOND Haughty

Draining into S ranks would mean that he accepts the opponent as an equal and a threat

So unless the enemy has proven himself, which can only happen during the later parts of a fight, he won't admit.

Originally Posted by Keroko

What? Ditching those lovely shield and sword?

Well unless it's a spellcaster's sword

Like...Erm, what's the guy's name from CCS again?

Originally Posted by Keroko

Yeah, but just the armor without weapons is a bit... eh.

Besides, Schach didn't exactly look combat ready before she went tonfa-wielding either. Apearances can be decieving.

I would like to think of Carim as Sakura With her cards and all...

The sword can stay I guess, but the shield...

[Aaron008R]

Originally Posted by FieryAeon

Really sounds a lot like Disgaea's Laharl.

Except Laharl can't take fanservice.

And since we're on it. That sekuhara part in one scenario was the ONLY time Aurion used such a tactic. So please don't get the wrong impression.

You seemed to have forgotten Zafira, but then again he's a guardian beast and not a knight. No to harem! I'd like to see Hayate experience romance for once.

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Behind door No. 1: Chrono "Migratory-Bird" Haralown
Behind door No. 2: Acous "She's-Mah-Sistar" Verossa

Originally Posted by Nightengale

Well... if there's gonna be any other reason...

Aurion x Ha-

NIGHTY!!!!!!
Wait, does that mean Neuro has-

Originally Posted by Keroko

And succesfull at crushing a large part of the tsundere image I accidentally gave her.

Glad to be of service.

Oh yes, woe to those between them and a new weapon to be tested.

Aurion: <sighs> There goes my savings...

If there is, I haven't found it yet. If someone knows of it, please tell me.

Well... In Disgaea 2 there was an option in the settings... You point at the audio/language which states English and press right to change it. I don't know fo Disgaea 1 though...

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Don't mind it.

Aaron! What have you done ?!

Showing that Keroko is not Tsundere?
Besides, If you want tsundere, go for Kha's Sophia.