2013-02-04, 08:32 | Link #40164 |
That one guy
Join Date: Nov 2011
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"I am the shade that abates the scorching light,
I am the malice that reflects your will, I am the despair you wield as hope. Remember well as you take me in hand. You are not I. And I, not you. We act as one but we think as two."--IS core 0 |
2013-02-04, 12:50 | Link #40165 | |
Just another Idiot
Join Date: Sep 2009
Location: Delusion world
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Which is why I end up keep adding stuff. -_-|||. I think I will cancel that conspiracy and cut down some of the story plan. == However, since I have a problem with the tone of voice being use.... I will make the narrator be as lemony as possible, expressing his own opinion about events and people. The narrator's full name is Cyril Alfred. = Title of story: Vantier Project: Optimizer Story plan: > Heroine introduction > Male IS pilots: Introduction of Joan, Edelwiss, Winner. > Female IS pilot stuff (probably include bullying part) > Tanteshi Arrive! > Kanzashi arc including second Golem attack on ISA > Vantier deployment (Same time as Golem attack....) >Cannonball fast. > Phantom Task attack. > Battle against Phantom Task. The rest are cut for sequel hook: Project Maelstrom.... = Cyril: "Here is a list of OC which one certainly would not find interesting considering that it is most the same as what the author posted few post back but with names to fill in the blanks..." Spoiler for cut for length:
Might include other OCs to make it a fanfic of fanfic just for the lol but I really need to read up on them first.
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2013-02-04, 13:02 | Link #40166 |
I am no one
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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I can understand what Stratos mean though, most author puzzled when they saw mountainous pile of infodump even if it contained the entire concept and summary their own works. Hmm, what could I say, Step by Step
But once again, your fic your style
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2013-02-04, 20:59 | Link #40167 | |
Just another Idiot
Join Date: Sep 2009
Location: Delusion world
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Also base concept are ran through so many times in my head that I actually memorize some of them (not in detail though but since I post my concept and idea here, I can always use search function to refer back to them if I can't recall the full detail). Also, You keep mentioning it before: They are quite vague because it give me the freedom to alter things along the way. So long as I reach the same conclusion, it's fine. ==== Lemony comment practice: Spoiler for For main cast?:
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2013-02-05, 00:31 | Link #40168 |
I am no one
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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Taking cues from Prototype and Guyver...
What if Charles is not exactly human but a Terminator-esque I.S. that convince itself to be Charlotte's brother? Granted, since it's body construct operate on molecular level, the I.S. is perfectly human when it want to (except the core embedded inside the brain). The reason of this is because Charlotte made contact with it and felt her loneliness, thus imagining a scenario where it can be her companion.
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2013-02-05, 07:01 | Link #40173 |
Just another Idiot
Join Date: Sep 2009
Location: Delusion world
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A little more dept reason why New Edge send in Plush toy instead of a human being:
There is a critical patch which somebody(Cyril) forgot to apply. Since all female employees who are avail on the ground, don't know how to apply the patch, he has to go there himself but he can't go to ISA as a guy because Males aren't allowed in ISA ground. Reason why males aren't allowed in ISA because they have no reason to be there (to explain why Ichika can't find any male staff on ISA). To enter, males need to apply permit (another gender discrimination thing) and that take a long time so the New Edge decide to go for a loophole in the rule. @Eratas: I am about 10% more productive now. Currently trying to find time to type out the whole stuff.
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2013-02-05, 07:40 | Link #40174 | |
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Join Date: Apr 2010
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@ Eras
Well, nothing new but it's still quite productive, actually. Quote:
....Until he met Gunwolf, cue epic match to the death (They came from opposite faction in their original world) FemIchika and Charlotte thankfully managed to intervene.
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2013-02-05, 10:34 | Link #40177 | |
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Join Date: Apr 2010
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Hence I nerf all inhuman mecha in specific areas and boost them in others ------------------------------- Spoiler for Possible Reflections ending:
Yeah, way to go there.
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2013-02-05, 20:27 | Link #40179 | |
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Join Date: Sep 2009
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Blue Tear might work.... (Teardrop) Shenlong might work....(Eastern Dragon?) Akatsubaki might work(Flower motif) But what about Byakushiki and Schwarzer Regen?
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2013-02-05, 23:03 | Link #40180 |
I am no one
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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@ Staples
I dunno, I always have that picture for years and forgot the sauce name. Sorry. Sacred Twins ending may apply too. @ Age It got worse, you have like... snowflake-shaped sword (Yukihira?) Schwarzer Regen... "Black raindrop"? And lets proceed to Silver Gospel...
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