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Fireminer · 2013-10-11, 00:33

Now, my turn!

"Lying there in front of Ichika is the lifeless bodies of his sisters. Madoka, arm broken, legs twisted. Chifuyu, several deep slashed imbued on her body. But what scare the most...

"Ichika, why...did...you...do this to...us?"

"No, No, NO!!! Please tell me that this is just a dream!!!"

"Look at what you are holding!" Yes... On his hand is a Katana stained with his sisters blood. The smell of its almost make Ichika puked... The world is now whirlwed around his eyes.

"Remember this: One day or another, you will kill your sisters. There is no way to stop it."

"... No, there is still a way... Forgive me, Madoka, Chifuyu..."

*YAHHH*

... Dream or not, that scene still created a deep gash in Ichika's heart. Looking at the naked body of his sisters occupied both side of Ichika, it's tormented him to end when thinking about the future. Maybe commiting Sepuuku would be less hurtful...

"Ichika... I love you... Don't you think that is.. Ah! Not so rough."

... Maybe not today... It isn't anyday that you see your sisters bringing your image into their dream...

"Madoka, Chifuyu... How foolist of you to love a beast like me... But that is both my pleasure and my burden..."

blitz1/2 · 2013-10-11, 00:38

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fireminer

Now, my turn!

"Lying there in front of Ichika is the lifeless bodies of his sisters. Madoka, arm broken, legs twisted. Chifuyu, several deep slashed imbued on her body. But what scare the most...

"Ichika, why...did...you...do this to...us?"

"No, No, NO!!! Please tell me that this is just a dream!!!"

"Look at what you are holding!" Yes... On his hand is a Katana stained with his sisters blood. The smell of its almost make Ichika puked... The world is now whirlwed around his eyes.

"Remember this: One day or another, you will kill your sisters. There is no way to stop it."

"... No, there is still a way... Forgive me, Madoka, Chifuyu..."

*YAHHH*

... Dream or not, that scene still created a deep gash in Ichika's heart. Looking at the naked body of his sisters occupied both side of Ichika, it's tormented him to end when thinking about the future. Maybe commiting Sepuuku would be less hurtful...

"Ichika... I love you... Don't you think that is.. Ah! Not so rough."

... Maybe not today... It isn't anyday that you see your sisters bringing your image into their dream...

"Madoka, Chifuyu... How foolist of you to love a beast like me... But that is both my pleasure and my burden..."

Lol, naked swordplay gone wrong? xD

ZeroXSEED · 2013-10-11, 00:38

Choose one

It's my headcanon that Ichika is monogamous

Fireminer · 2013-10-11, 00:45

Simple! Chain reaction: Madoka, Ichika and Chifuyu were born as the Maverick Virus hub. Let's just say that now their synch is on the highest, and just only little push from Maverick is enough to broke all three of them.

If anyone has watch Kamen Rider Wizard, you would find the concept similar to Phantom.

And why mono, not polygamous? It's such a waste of his vitality!

Fireminer · 2013-10-11, 03:23

Ok, here goes another:

"...

- MWHHAAAA~ Give up to despair and let a new Maverick to born!!!

- Damn you! What have you done to Charlotte?

- Nothing! I just simply told her that you are playing with her love. Which is the true anyway!

- You!!!.... I WON'T FORGIVE YOU WITH THIS!!! HENSHIN!!!

READY

OPEN UP!

- Foolish boy! Have you forgot that I'm immortal? Anyway, I'm going to enjoy your scream when you are burned in my blazing flame. Come and let this battle begun!

..."

ZeroXSEED · 2013-10-11, 04:08

Spoiler for ASSPULL!:

Icchan as played by Nana Mizuki

DarkJak2050 · 2013-10-11, 04:14

Okay, what did I just read?

Fireminer · 2013-10-11, 04:16

Quote:

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

Spoiler for ASSPULL!:

Icchan as played by Nana Mizuki

Once again, your twisted mind got my compliment!

MeisterBabylon · 2013-10-11, 04:20

Jung Kari called. She wants her plot progression device back.

ZeroXSEED · 2013-10-11, 04:22

Quote:

Originally Posted by DarkJak2050

Okay, what did I just read?

Basically a rendition of this

Quote:

Originally Posted by MeisterBabylon

Jung Kari called. She wants her plot progression device back.

*Whistles innocently*

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fireminer

Once again, your twisted mind got my compliment!

Not as good as you, blitz, or Tempest of course.

DarkJak2050 · 2013-10-11, 04:29

Obviously, things are not going to go well...

I don't know exactly what, but it won't go well that's for sure.

At least that's what I'm getting.

When are you going to update again?

Fireminer · 2013-10-11, 05:05

@Zero: You flattered me! Blizt and Tempest got a knack for plot situation, while I'm just a bit overdramatic.

@Jak: Umn... What do you mean?

ZeroXSEED · 2013-10-11, 05:05

@ Jak
On the plus side, Swan Song + Dual Core Sync = a temporary portal that summon reinforcement from the original world.On the downside, bloody catfight ensues, and Icchan is comatose and half dead.
Back to topic, I need to complete the bare bones before Tempest can flesh it out. The bare bones should be complete by tomorrow or Sunday, but Tempest is a busy man, he already have to work with the first three chapter. I don't want to rush it

DarkJak2050 · 2013-10-11, 05:07

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fireminer

Umn... What do you mean?

I mean, I'm getting a bad feeling of what's going to happen in Zero's fic just by reading that last scene.

I don't know exactly what, but it's going to be bad for sure.

Edit:
Zero already explained it...

Atleast you guys are doing well. I don't know what to do, man...

Fireminer · 2013-10-11, 05:30

(Continue where we left)

READY

FINAL HISSATSU!

*ERROR*

- Mwhahaha! You fool! That flashy attack won't hurt me. I could play this game for enternal... But you! The clock is ticking!

- Gwwaaa... I won't lose! Not this time!

- You ALWAYS lose! Since the Mondo Grosso, you have spent your entire life behind everyone shadow for them to be slained by me instead of you. But now, standing here, two of us, you're nothing more than a worthless existance. I'm going to enjoy the sound of ripping flesh of your sisters.

- ... What did you just say?

- Since you will die anyway, so I guess that telling you my plan won't hurt. Now, with all IS under my thumb, I'm going to tear down this world. While your girls having the grand seats until the day I decide to get rid of them. Or better, I could make them my personal whore! Mwhaha!

-... You... YOU WILL NEVER TOUCH MY SISTERS, NOT UNTIL I STILL COULD HOLD MY SWORLD!

READY

KURENAI MODE ACTIVATED!

- If I can't kill you, I will now make your life miserable to the point that you will wish that you could die!

READY

HYPER HISSATSU

- BROKEN FANG!

(Ichika delivered a barriage of kick and punches, each imbued with the power of red Ki. Finally, he made a round house kich that sent his enemy directly to the sun)

- May the flame of Amateratsu will burn you enternally!

DarkJak2050 · 2013-10-11, 05:36

If only Canon Ichika's like that...

Reading that reminds me of Kirito from Sword Art Online.

ZeroXSEED · 2013-10-11, 05:39

Kirito is overrated, but he's definitely not a psychopath.

Anyone can think of 'plausible' means (by anime standard) to redeem Madoka?

My left brain is nonfunctional right now, she's basically a criminal after all.

Tempest35 · 2013-10-11, 05:41

Spoiler for for spoiler:

...Actually, try to rush me.

I work well under pressure but I'll be feeling too much of it when I start training for a new department at my job. Gonna last a few months so the more I can get done now, the better. Although, today, I'm gonna crash as soon as I get home... #_# 16 hr shift at work.

Yay for money, almost no sleep. 8 hrs after I leave here, I gotta be back so I only got about 6 hrs to sleep. #_#

DarkJak2050 · 2013-10-11, 05:42

I can't think of anything for Madoka, because I don't have much info about her.

I wonder why... [Looks at Izuru]

Now then. This slump I'm in...

I'm actually getting ideas for a oneshot from it. You guys might be disgusted by them though...

Fireminer · 2013-10-11, 05:45

Tch... Tabane brainwashed her, anyone?

Well, just as usual: Let the girls round up her and almost defeated Madoka until she entered beast mode. Then Ichika came in, exchanged some words, slashinh and hack and thrusting until Madoka finished.

In the end, all could be solve with a French kiss...

Well, except his Harem's rage seeing him kissing (and presumably even more indecent things) with his sister.

By the way, Zero, did you made that Icchan image on your sig yourself?

2013-10-11, 00:38	Link #46703
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Choose one It's my headcanon that Ichika is monogamous __________________

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Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	Simple! Chain reaction: Madoka, Ichika and Chifuyu were born as the Maverick Virus hub. Let's just say that now their synch is on the highest, and just only little push from Maverick is enough to broke all three of them. If anyone has watch Kamen Rider Wizard, you would find the concept similar to Phantom. And why mono, not polygamous? It's such a waste of his vitality! Last edited by Fireminer; 2013-10-11 at 01:07.

2013-10-11, 04:08	Link #46706
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Spoiler for ASSPULL!: "[Gatrandis babel ziggurat edenal]" "That stupid f-" "[EmNstolronzis fine el balal zizzl]" "ICHIKAAAAAAAAAAA!!!" "[Gatrandis babel ziggurat edenal]" "STOP IT!" "[EmNstolronzis fine el zizzl]" "No...." Power surge throughout academy, causing a spectacular, if momentary blackout. The intense silence following the end of the song is broken by a howling unearthly sound of propulsion system. High pitched engine cries followed by flame trail and shockwave caught everyone in awe and horror. One of the behemoth fell, slashed thoroughly into pieces in a blink of an eye, the second, the third... the carnage continues until what's left is metallic components trying to move, but lacked the required integrity to do so. The flame trail ended with an explosion, standing on the field is none other than female Ichika Orimura, her machine glowing hot red and her shield flickering. Ikkun quickly approached her, as one by one, her I.S. parts are falling apart and disappear into data. "WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU THINKING?!" Her hand, calloused hand softly rub his cheek. "Gomennasai... Ichika...I.... like..." Ikkun's blood rushed so fast that it feel like the time itself momentarily stopped as her unconscious, battered figure landed on his armored palms. Blood trails form alongside her lips... "Ichika... you stupid idiot..." he growled. Anger, sadness, disappointment... revenge. "Raijin... Commence Overshift" His wings spread and lightning cackled between the armor pieces as he laid the heavily injured girl near the closest building, he clenched his hand as he walked back toward the arena. His eyes glowing red as fresh blood mixed with tears flow from the corner of his eyes Icchan as played by Nana Mizuki __________________

2013-10-11, 04:20	Link #46709
MeisterBabylon ~ Your Smile ~ Author Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: 346Pro Age: 38	Jung Kari called. She wants her plot progression device back. __________________ 白露型駆逐艦の４番艦、夕立です。第三次ソロモン海戦では、けっこう頑張ったっぽい★？

2013-10-11, 04:29	Link #46711
DarkJak2050 Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2011	Obviously, things are not going to go well... I don't know exactly what, but it won't go well that's for sure. At least that's what I'm getting. When are you going to update again? Last edited by DarkJak2050; 2013-10-11 at 04:47.

2013-10-11, 00:33	Link #46701
Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	Now, my turn! "Lying there in front of Ichika is the lifeless bodies of his sisters. Madoka, arm broken, legs twisted. Chifuyu, several deep slashed imbued on her body. But what scare the most... "Ichika, why...did...you...do this to...us?" "No, No, NO!!! Please tell me that this is just a dream!!!" "Look at what you are holding!" Yes... On his hand is a Katana stained with his sisters blood. The smell of its almost make Ichika puked... The world is now whirlwed around his eyes. "Remember this: One day or another, you will kill your sisters. There is no way to stop it." "... No, there is still a way... Forgive me, Madoka, Chifuyu..." YAHHH ... Dream or not, that scene still created a deep gash in Ichika's heart. Looking at the naked body of his sisters occupied both side of Ichika, it's tormented him to end when thinking about the future. Maybe commiting Sepuuku would be less hurtful... "Ichika... I love you... Don't you think that is.. Ah! Not so rough." ... Maybe not today... It isn't anyday that you see your sisters bringing your image into their dream... "Madoka, Chifuyu... How foolist of you to love a beast like me... But that is both my pleasure and my burden..."

2013-10-11, 03:23	Link #46705
Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	Ok, here goes another: "... - MWHHAAAA~ Give up to despair and let a new Maverick to born!!! - Damn you! What have you done to Charlotte? - Nothing! I just simply told her that you are playing with her love. Which is the true anyway! - You!!!.... I WON'T FORGIVE YOU WITH THIS!!! HENSHIN!!! READY OPEN UP! - Foolish boy! Have you forgot that I'm immortal? Anyway, I'm going to enjoy your scream when you are burned in my blazing flame. Come and let this battle begun! ..."

2013-10-11, 04:14	Link #46707
DarkJak2050 Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2011	Okay, what did I just read?

2013-10-11, 05:05	Link #46712
Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	@Zero: You flattered me! Blizt and Tempest got a knack for plot situation, while I'm just a bit overdramatic. @Jak: Umn... What do you mean?

2013-10-11, 05:05	Link #46713
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	@ Jak On the plus side, Swan Song + Dual Core Sync = a temporary portal that summon reinforcement from the original world.On the downside, bloody catfight ensues, and Icchan is comatose and half dead. Back to topic, I need to complete the bare bones before Tempest can flesh it out. The bare bones should be complete by tomorrow or Sunday, but Tempest is a busy man, he already have to work with the first three chapter. I don't want to rush it __________________ Last edited by ZeroXSEED; 2013-10-11 at 05:23.

2013-10-11, 05:30	Link #46715
Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	(Continue where we left) READY FINAL HISSATSU! ERROR - Mwhahaha! You fool! That flashy attack won't hurt me. I could play this game for enternal... But you! The clock is ticking! - Gwwaaa... I won't lose! Not this time! - You ALWAYS lose! Since the Mondo Grosso, you have spent your entire life behind everyone shadow for them to be slained by me instead of you. But now, standing here, two of us, you're nothing more than a worthless existance. I'm going to enjoy the sound of ripping flesh of your sisters. - ... What did you just say? - Since you will die anyway, so I guess that telling you my plan won't hurt. Now, with all IS under my thumb, I'm going to tear down this world. While your girls having the grand seats until the day I decide to get rid of them. Or better, I could make them my personal whore! Mwhaha! -... You... YOU WILL NEVER TOUCH MY SISTERS, NOT UNTIL I STILL COULD HOLD MY SWORLD! READY KURENAI MODE ACTIVATED! - If I can't kill you, I will now make your life miserable to the point that you will wish that you could die! READY HYPER HISSATSU - BROKEN FANG! (Ichika delivered a barriage of kick and punches, each imbued with the power of red Ki. Finally, he made a round house kich that sent his enemy directly to the sun) - May the flame of Amateratsu will burn you enternally!

2013-10-11, 05:36	Link #46716
DarkJak2050 Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2011	If only Canon Ichika's like that... Reading that reminds me of Kirito from Sword Art Online.

2013-10-11, 05:39	Link #46717
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Kirito is overrated, but he's definitely not a psychopath. Anyone can think of 'plausible' means (by anime standard) to redeem Madoka? My left brain is nonfunctional right now, she's basically a criminal after all. __________________

2013-10-11, 05:42	Link #46719
DarkJak2050 Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2011	I can't think of anything for Madoka, because I don't have much info about her. I wonder why... [Looks at Izuru] Now then. This slump I'm in... I'm actually getting ideas for a oneshot from it. You guys might be disgusted by them though...

2013-10-11, 05:45	Link #46720
Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	Tch... Tabane brainwashed her, anyone? Well, just as usual: Let the girls round up her and almost defeated Madoka until she entered beast mode. Then Ichika came in, exchanged some words, slashinh and hack and thrusting until Madoka finished. In the end, all could be solve with a French kiss... Well, except his Harem's rage seeing him kissing (and presumably even more indecent things) with his sister. By the way, Zero, did you made that Icchan image on your sig yourself?