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ZeroXSEED · 2012-03-12, 09:58

In the case of cool big sis, usually she was quiet when he lashed out for little to no reason, or just smirked mockingly. The little brother is usually protective of her despite his usual assholishness. His on-off way of showing affection might be mistaken for sister complex by wrong demographic.

Isn't that what people call 'snap'?

Eratas123 · 2012-03-12, 10:00

What if they act this way, bit they're friends?

I meant if this is possible this happens constantly?

demino_hellsin · 2012-03-12, 10:02

No, no, no. I meant if you just look at them both with a portrait style picture in mind. The way Cecilia carries herself is that of a mature lady, it inspires a feeling of grandeur and beauty. Tatenashi just looks outright playful and mischievous(at most behaved: she looks like one of those nice side characters that are nice to their elders and stuffs).

agetreme · 2012-03-12, 10:03

Currently,

there is only one Male OC IS pilot, he is Joan

Other IS pilots are girls.

Original machine don't need no pilots....

===
Screw it, I keep the original characters and the tech while scraping the story everything again to start from beginning.

Will be focusing on character development this time.....

In spite of the fact that I didn't even know where to start developing.... the girls are static, Ichika is technically a rock....and there are more food porn than actual character development.

Eratas123 · 2012-03-12, 10:04

Yet both of them seem to love flaunting their "Adult underwear" at Ichika. Neither seem proper at all.

@ Treme - So it's the IS novel with Joan just included? Most fics like that go downhill fast.

demino_hellsin · 2012-03-12, 10:06

ohohohoho!

Which reminds me... Why can't I find any innocent fanservice nowadayas? It's all boobs and pantyshots in your face?

Not that I'm complaining to Tate and Cecilia. Just that when I imagined the whole cast's base personalities turned up to eleven. Well, they're even better behaved than canon version.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-03-12, 10:10

Vitriolic best buds? Like brother and sister?

Well, if it happens constantly, something is wrong in the head.

@ Demi
Bah, with rule 34, anything can be sexualized. Even Kimono, of all things, are this, despite the main attraction is elegance and modesty.

Eratas123 · 2012-03-12, 10:11

Laura's inncoent fanservice. Everybody else is deliberate.

Senpai - Would it count as Oedpus complex if you fell for your aunt? Blood related or no?

I need to capture how Irish and Tatenashi would act as the story goes on. The first is teeth cleched teamwork, then it gets more friendly.

About once or twice every few fights.

demino_hellsin · 2012-03-12, 10:17

It's just that outright flashing can get boring.

Imagine Cecilia with the 0-sword... Basically a huge ass beam shot... which is actually a beam saber the length of ISA's diameter or more.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-03-12, 10:19

Depends, if the aunt already become a mother figure, then it counts as Oedipus Complex. If it's a sudden crush, then it's can be relegated to Kissing cousin, but somewhat more taboo.

Well, Tatenashi is likely getting on his nerves and made him uncomfortable, and he retorted with jackassery. :3

Again, that might count as slasher smile, and something is wrong in the head.

@ Dermi
Ichika from I.S. Abridged would call her for penis envy....

Eratas123 · 2012-03-12, 10:25

@ Demi - No. She's a sniper and ranged fighter. No more no less.

@ Senpai - I might dabble into this in FI. Think about it: THese kids are nearing puberty and now they have aunts or parents who are young and attractive? Something's gonna get screwed up.

Wouldn't she get pissed at points as well?

This is a sign I'm gonna use for diminishing sanity. For Irish, he seems to laugh and smile whenever he thinks he can get close to Autumn. For Future Kazuma's story, he starts laughing and slasher smiling the more the story goes. This gets intensely creepy when by the finale he stops talking all together and just laughs or makes grunt noises.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-03-12, 10:29

Tatenashi might be pissed if Irish hit something too close to home, she will quickly regain her composure though.

Same concept with Rin, mind you she already stop being a volatile yandere ever since the Twincest kissing incident. And yet finding her enemies never tried to repent.... cue hidden eyes of doom and broad, fanged smile.

agetreme · 2012-03-12, 10:29

*facepalm*

Joan, Not important.

He is not a self-insert.
He is just a tool.
His personality is simplified to shy and timid so that I can develop him as a character.
He is just a male IS pilot in ISA.

Problem is:
Male IS pilot receive special attention and privilege just for being a guy.

===

I give up.

Edit: How do you develop a character who main aspect revolve around a guy? And that guy is a stone who get aroused by food.

Until I had new idea, I will be playing Mass Effect 3 or working on my Shakugan no Shana fanfic instead.

demino_hellsin · 2012-03-12, 10:33

Male OC's don't need special attention. What blasphemy is that?

A male OC should be male by circumstance, as should a female OC be female. Unless you have the intention of writing for the sake of fetish/ego boost! That or just plain go crazy.

I doubt an OC like Lyon would get any special attention. Though he's technically not IS pilot, Gospel chiefly listens to him and won't calm down without him.

Eratas123 · 2012-03-12, 10:34

@ Senpai - What do you think hits close to home? Something about Kanzashi?

Isn't Rin already a Yandere? No major changes there.

@ Treme - Okay, if you're just gonna react negatively to criticism, I might as well not talk anymore. Good luck with your fic, hope you get what you need.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-03-12, 10:38

Maybe that, or anything that potentially upset Tatenahsi... unless she really has no weakness or problem to begin with.

Nope, after Ichika eschew her for throwing her sword at his direction, she never act violent again, and not angry at him for little to no reason. However, meeting her old enemy made her sorta ax crazy, especially that Yankee girl is abusing another when they met again, which is a great deal of trauma for Rin. Behind her bob hair, there are burnt marks courtesy of bullying.

Eratas123 · 2012-03-12, 10:42

How about insinuating she's just a puppet leader? Also, how long can a healthy human male go without sleeping?

Uh....Laura's canonically Ax crazy. Autumn as well.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-03-12, 10:45

Yes, that will work.

Human can go without sleep for exactly 1 days and most people will have problem of doing their activities.

Well, I changed these two more into Proud Warrior and Smug Snake.

agetreme · 2012-03-12, 10:45

Quote:

if you're just gonna react negatively to criticism, I might as well not talk anymore

Criticism is okay for me..... but you are basically accusing me of creating generic OC who are automatically cool and awesome..... when most of them are nutcases.

Why am I not angry?

Edit: Seriously, you can call any of my character idiots or stupid, I don't really mind because they are really idiots.....or that stupid

demino_hellsin · 2012-03-12, 10:47

@age: don't argue with the dude whose OC gets at least one terminal disease/recurring injury every time he gets a new tool/weapon to stay relevant in the story.

2012-03-12, 09:58	Link #25541
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	In the case of cool big sis, usually she was quiet when he lashed out for little to no reason, or just smirked mockingly. The little brother is usually protective of her despite his usual assholishness. His on-off way of showing affection might be mistaken for sister complex by wrong demographic. Isn't that what people call 'snap'? __________________

2012-03-12, 10:00	Link #25542
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	What if they act this way, bit they're friends? I meant if this is possible this happens constantly? __________________

2012-03-12, 10:03	Link #25544
agetreme Just another Idiot Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Delusion world	Currently, there is only one Male OC IS pilot, he is Joan Other IS pilots are girls. Original machine don't need no pilots.... === Screw it, I keep the original characters and the tech while scraping the story everything again to start from beginning. Will be focusing on character development this time..... In spite of the fact that I didn't even know where to start developing.... the girls are static, Ichika is technically a rock....and there are more food porn than actual character development. __________________ Ara Han

2012-03-12, 10:04	Link #25545
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Yet both of them seem to love flaunting their "Adult underwear" at Ichika. Neither seem proper at all. @ Treme - So it's the IS novel with Joan just included? Most fics like that go downhill fast. __________________

2012-03-12, 10:10	Link #25547
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Vitriolic best buds? Like brother and sister? Well, if it happens constantly, something is wrong in the head. @ Demi Bah, with rule 34, anything can be sexualized. Even Kimono, of all things, are this, despite the main attraction is elegance and modesty. __________________

2012-03-12, 10:02	Link #25543
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	No, no, no. I meant if you just look at them both with a portrait style picture in mind. The way Cecilia carries herself is that of a mature lady, it inspires a feeling of grandeur and beauty. Tatenashi just looks outright playful and mischievous(at most behaved: she looks like one of those nice side characters that are nice to their elders and stuffs).

2012-03-12, 10:06	Link #25546
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	ohohohoho! Which reminds me... Why can't I find any innocent fanservice nowadayas? It's all boobs and pantyshots in your face? Not that I'm complaining to Tate and Cecilia. Just that when I imagined the whole cast's base personalities turned up to eleven. Well, they're even better behaved than canon version.

2012-03-12, 10:11	Link #25548
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Laura's inncoent fanservice. Everybody else is deliberate. Senpai - Would it count as Oedpus complex if you fell for your aunt? Blood related or no? I need to capture how Irish and Tatenashi would act as the story goes on. The first is teeth cleched teamwork, then it gets more friendly. About once or twice every few fights. __________________

2012-03-12, 10:17	Link #25549
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	It's just that outright flashing can get boring. Imagine Cecilia with the 0-sword... Basically a huge ass beam shot... which is actually a beam saber the length of ISA's diameter or more.

2012-03-12, 10:19	Link #25550
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Depends, if the aunt already become a mother figure, then it counts as Oedipus Complex. If it's a sudden crush, then it's can be relegated to Kissing cousin, but somewhat more taboo. Well, Tatenashi is likely getting on his nerves and made him uncomfortable, and he retorted with jackassery. :3 Again, that might count as slasher smile, and something is wrong in the head. @ Dermi Ichika from I.S. Abridged would call her for penis envy.... __________________

2012-03-12, 10:25	Link #25551
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Demi - No. She's a sniper and ranged fighter. No more no less. @ Senpai - I might dabble into this in FI. Think about it: THese kids are nearing puberty and now they have aunts or parents who are young and attractive? Something's gonna get screwed up. Wouldn't she get pissed at points as well? This is a sign I'm gonna use for diminishing sanity. For Irish, he seems to laugh and smile whenever he thinks he can get close to Autumn. For Future Kazuma's story, he starts laughing and slasher smiling the more the story goes. This gets intensely creepy when by the finale he stops talking all together and just laughs or makes grunt noises. __________________

2012-03-12, 10:29	Link #25552
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Tatenashi might be pissed if Irish hit something too close to home, she will quickly regain her composure though. Same concept with Rin, mind you she already stop being a volatile yandere ever since the Twincest kissing incident. And yet finding her enemies never tried to repent.... cue hidden eyes of doom and broad, fanged smile. __________________

2012-03-12, 10:29	Link #25553
agetreme Just another Idiot Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Delusion world	facepalm Joan, Not important. He is not a self-insert. He is just a tool. His personality is simplified to shy and timid so that I can develop him as a character. He is just a male IS pilot in ISA. Problem is: Male IS pilot receive special attention and privilege just for being a guy. === I give up. Edit: How do you develop a character who main aspect revolve around a guy? And that guy is a stone who get aroused by food. Until I had new idea, I will be playing Mass Effect 3 or working on my Shakugan no Shana fanfic instead. __________________ Ara Han

2012-03-12, 10:33	Link #25554
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	Male OC's don't need special attention. What blasphemy is that? A male OC should be male by circumstance, as should a female OC be female. Unless you have the intention of writing for the sake of fetish/ego boost! That or just plain go crazy. I doubt an OC like Lyon would get any special attention. Though he's technically not IS pilot, Gospel chiefly listens to him and won't calm down without him.

2012-03-12, 10:34	Link #25555
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Senpai - What do you think hits close to home? Something about Kanzashi? Isn't Rin already a Yandere? No major changes there. @ Treme - Okay, if you're just gonna react negatively to criticism, I might as well not talk anymore. Good luck with your fic, hope you get what you need. __________________

2012-03-12, 10:38	Link #25556
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Maybe that, or anything that potentially upset Tatenahsi... unless she really has no weakness or problem to begin with. Nope, after Ichika eschew her for throwing her sword at his direction, she never act violent again, and not angry at him for little to no reason. However, meeting her old enemy made her sorta ax crazy, especially that Yankee girl is abusing another when they met again, which is a great deal of trauma for Rin. Behind her bob hair, there are burnt marks courtesy of bullying. __________________

2012-03-12, 10:42	Link #25557
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	How about insinuating she's just a puppet leader? Also, how long can a healthy human male go without sleeping? Uh....Laura's canonically Ax crazy. Autumn as well. __________________

2012-03-12, 10:45	Link #25558
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Yes, that will work. Human can go without sleep for exactly 1 days and most people will have problem of doing their activities. Well, I changed these two more into Proud Warrior and Smug Snake. __________________

2012-03-12, 10:47	Link #25560
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	@age: don't argue with the dude whose OC gets at least one terminal disease/recurring injury every time he gets a new tool/weapon to stay relevant in the story.