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ZippyDSMlee creations of wut!
UPDATE 12/19/08
Have a picture to go with the character thats been in my head most of my life. Also Have a new synopsis. ====================================== I give the picture a 8 accounting for the style used, the solid work of the artist and my whack ass direction. With this I can tune the art direction of further works and thats one good thing about having a few commissions done as you can see the details and tweak them as needed. Artist is http://www.ivstudios.net/index.html ====================================== New synopsis=12/18/2008 What is chronicles of the lord of power well let’s start with the foundation of the universe in the beginning there was only darkness a murky congealed existence that offered nothing but chaotic and random spurts of existence to form. After time Lightness came forth an ever growing, progressive, evolutionary existence that expanded the universe and its multiple layers called dimensions. The Lord of power is the main character a self doubting character unsure about himself, his powers and his direction but always caught up in things larger than his comprehension but always winds up seeing to a end due to his kindness and savant like tenacity. At first he is flung to a far off world one of medieval themes and magic, his task simple save the brunt of the world from the encroaching darkness but he is cast into the world unprotected and is wounded losing not only his powers but his memories and even his personally. Within the prologue he is a disenfranchised young man filled with sorrow at his lot in life as the book starts he is relived of that sadness for a time able to relearn about himself and learn about his new found powers. He learns in part the history of the war of creation and some basic themes of the past like the 5 key elements of power represented in 5 orbs set in a 4 point star. Each primary element has a sibling element and each has a sign derived from the path it takes, for instance Blue is the color of good its element water its sign kindness its righteousness tempered with humility. Its sibling element is ice its sign stoicism making its path one of nobility and leadership. He learns each element has a theme and personality of its own during these journeys he develops a split personality that shows itself when he is all but broken upon the rocks of life, they come to him as polar opposites the personality known merely as Good is stoic, arrogant and bears the quirky honor of nobility he says “Sternness is noble, it is not arrogance as others would lead you to believe, I must walk above all others to walk on the path of nobility and justice.: L.O.P:Pale Knight”. Evil on the other hand and yes that is “its” name is a lust driven maniac its favorite quote ” Darkness is despair and perversion, I prefer perversion with a taste of madness, either one keeps me from boredom.:L.O.P:Shade Knight” and the lust that drives him takes its form in carnage on battlefield it turns to groping and entemperous wordplay in the bars and around “worthy” females, for all of its talk of bedside conquest it’s not known if he has managed to initiate bed side carnage for the instant the target of his affections is wooed his personally snaps back to normal turning most off….severely. These personalities subside outside of the first book and are later found in his main weapons the staff of darkness and the sword of light, but before then he has to find his place in the universe and that’s the start of book 2 where he enters Light Forces the army and governing body of creation, they find a place for him and grind him into their ranks to the point he cannot take it anymore and goes awol. DOL is the Dragon of Light while he has a high rank in Light Forces he’s become displeased with their endless red tape and inaction and tries to balance the main characters sanity with training him to be a true warrior of creation. D.O.L himself is a wise yet perverted old “man” he is after all the culmination of lightness wit and humor, this with a entertaining green horn it cannot lead to anything but “entertainment”. Eventually the main character comes to his senses but only after being stranded, crashed alone on a broken and forgotten world for almost a century passes when he finally leaves that place hes a bit more sure of himself and with the assistance of a strange AI becomes a rag tag band of detective mercenaries doing odd jobs for either Light Forces and even Dark forces are unwilling or unable to take. -edited it up a bit 12/20/08 All copyright ZippyDSMlee ---------------- Putting this here since fan creations does not cover self made stuff but stuff based off anime, with a forum with such skilled users(minus self of course) shouldn’t we have a forum for user made stuff their own manga/comics,writings,ect? (ok so fan creation is for anything fan made lulz) Move it where it needs to be I am just here to have another place for my stuff to be laughed at.... MA AHHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAH First off Character bio edit Edited waist size some. edit ------------- Working on overhauling this, with my pension to jump the gun I am see le faults in it, still I like this bio more than I have the others I have tried to spew out :P ------------- Quote:
Chap 0/ prologue Chap 1 And yes I know there are issues with the grammar to say the least both(all) these took months to write,layer and the proof with tnt a hammer and a welding torch, but the main focus of them is to aid me in improving my grammar and train of thought...mostly train of thought since they like derailing each other all the time, also after 20ish years of musing over it I thought I'd start writing abotu it. Also beginnings suck you have to set so much up but its good mental exercise if just to get the drool out. edit BTW I seem to be taking this in the direction of light fanatsy/sci fi novels a couple hundred pages a book,with 3-7 books,I have 6 or so planed out with enough plot points to put 200ish worth of pages around... edit I have about 6 characters that need to be drawed, only have 1 decent bio put up right now, heresaquick description. 1.Lord of power above 2.Sandy: Female android(fully human looking),6 foot blond with DDish chest,hair is either mid back or sholders, clothing style a mix of leather and uniform, she ahs a strong personalty to make up for her creator/brother(lord of power) lack of a stable one, shes strong mentally,caring, fun and passionate, she also has a slightly warped sense of humor. also have 2 other AI/androids that need a drawn body onces like a male version of sandy minus the gaudy wears and the other is a short brunette female who has double energy daggers not really thought abotu their clothing style since I have not decided on a uniform setup for the Lord of power ship crew. 3.Zherais Dark lord of power, 6.6 foot tall blond male with mid of back length hair, a well built male with bishi like features, he wears black and prefers his dark armor sets of black,dark blue and violet, he sword the only weapon he ever uses other than his powers is a large fantasy swords with eyes on it. Thats it for the old characters unless someone wants to take a stable at warped mirrored ghostly figures of Lightness and Darkness The new character in my COTLOP world are the new 3 main sub characters in chapter 1 of book 1 4.The bishi Captain Persious Laurence, tall(6.2?) alil lanky a prefect bishi in most respects, he is blond with shoulder length hair, his personally is a stren strict but caring, he has a reserved sense of humor. He has dress wear befitting a prince, altho his battle outfit is more or less standard but for a few things. 5.The rebel Drake evermore,not quite a bishi but handsome non the less the base for this character is Rengi from Bleach, which should be enough if you want to contact me for further info. 6.Alucia/Elucia is our(voices meh)jail bait firebrand ,a petite(a foot shorter than Drake) red headed girl with a spear and the personality of flames, really love Kallens hair style from Code gease for her. Theres also weapon,symbol and other designs that can be done, I am willing to pay for msot work but I am in no way rich but that dosent mean we can't work something out(50ish a character 2-5 sketches and 1-3 colored drawings) probably need to build some refrances up as to save sketch time.
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2008-07-18, 06:11 | Link #2 | |
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Drawingz
Lord of Power drawing
Title: Dual Pain (indavenidal names I dunno...think of something lulz) Have a 2 pane picture on the left side a gristled Lord of power looks out onto the fading horizon as the suns sets wearing his normal garb of tattered fedora, trench coat, random shirt, worn blue jeans , and black leather belt with matching boots. Standing with his leg up on something (rocky out crop or edge of a roof on a building in the city perhaps) slightly hunched over with one hand on his knee, his bandaged sword by his side leaning on it a bit, its bond in rags or bandages with 3 random in length bandages being pushed by the wind, one is near the bottom the other near the hilt where the scabbard is the other under his hand, over where the hilt and scabbard would meet is alil tag with the kanji seal written on it, he has a sad longing expression in his eyes as he looks out in the distance, his face unshaven but not quite a bred. In the panel next to it wearing the same getup he stands looking forward at you, as dusk falls the darkness almost comes from him and not the encroaching blackness of the nights sky, he has his staff, that has runes on it (either normal round pole like staff or with 4-8 edges)holding it in a diagonal position one end has a scythe blade on a rectangular box on the end away from him the other a chain that wraps around him without touching him and encircles out around him. Or the staff is help in one hand to the side half going behind him in a slight diagonal tilt with the scythe blade on a rectangular box on the end away from him the other a chain that wraps around him without touching him and encircles out around him. The wind flapping his coat because of the angel you can’t see what’s in the coat all to well because of shadows you can see alil of his jeans but not make out much else but a evil toothy grin and eyes glowing red or purple, with a slight matching aura around him. Thinking 30$(might can do 60$ ea if its godly qaulity) for each one since they are pretty much whole pics, want to haggle send me a message and we can work out a deal that doesn’t kill both of us :P. --------------------------------------------------------------- Some crappy but fun story I hammered out today. Quote:
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2008-09-02, 08:10 | Link #3 | |
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My fevered and funky bwain over the last few days have been working on Damion Crevasse lyrics here's the near final lyrics for them, the main thing I did was change the focus of the song from the direct lyric theme of all encompassing/altruistic love to where the the singer is dieing, I was trying for a direct one but the muses took it of in a sad love song direction first, I may yet can do a more direct version but this is somehow fitting all things considered.
I still need to polish this up and format it better, by each of my lyric sentences(ya I know not grammatical correct :P) I put one word comment in () YT video for the song if you don't have it on hand. Quote:
Spoiler for Word play work file for it.:
My Real folk blues lyrics with some changes. YT video for the song if you don't have it on hand. Code:
real folk blues –do over Too much time has passed | to lament | the past Aishiteta to | nageku | ni wa ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- When we were | still | so very | much in love Amari ni mo | toki | wa sugi | te simatta ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- The restless wind| still | blowing threw my heart | can never heal all of these | tears within it. Mada kokoro | no | hokorobi o | Iyasenumama kaze ga | fuiteru ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- One eye sees nothing | but tomorrow | the other sees nothing but | yesterday. Hitotsu no me de | asu o mite | Hitotsu no me de kinou | mitsumeteru ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I hope I can | gently rest in the | cradle of your loving arms | once again Kimi no ai no | yurikagode | Mo ichido yasurakani | nemuretara ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- So sadly please | cry for | me | with dry and | weary | eyes Kawaita | hitomi | de | dareka | naite | kure ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- The real folk blues ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I really want to know | to understand | what true sadness is Honto no | kanashimi ga | shiritai dake ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Living in | muddy | and cold water | Is not such a bad life | after all Doro no | kawa ni | tsukatta | Jinsei mo waruku | wa nai ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- As long as it | ends | after the first time. Ichido kiri | de | owaru nara ================================= ================================= Hopeless hope and | a life filled with | falling in and out of traps never to | have a chance Kibou ni michita | zetsuboto | Wanagashikakerareteru | kono chansu ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- What is right or | what is wrong | Like a coin rolling forever | on its side Nani ga yoku te | warui no ka | Koin no omoi to kuram | itaita ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- How long must | I live until | I am released from this | misery Dore dake | ikireba | iyasareru no | darou ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- The real folk blues ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- change to----and pleasure is--- I really want to know | what true happiness | and pleasure really is Honto no | yorokobi ga | shiritai dake ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Blinded by | rainbows | in muddy reflections | All that glitters is not gold. Hikaru | mono | no subete ga | Ougen to wa kagiranai ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- The real folk blues ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I really want to know | to understand | what true sadness is Honto no | kanashimi ga | shiritai dake ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Living in | muddy | and cold water | Is not such a bad life | after all Doro no | kawa ni | tsukatta | Jinsei mo waruku | wa nai ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- As long as it | ends | after the first time. Ichido kiri | de | owaru nara ************************************************
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2008-09-03, 12:09 | Link #4 |
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Was looki through my stuff and found this LOL
I forgot I did I will a few months back. Code:
Zippy’fan’Lyrics FMA:I will In final stages of editing before I post it on my DA page. Notes: this is an interesting song a lot of things potentially work here, for instance “tame ni” can be set to once again or for you or OooOoo, they all kind of work, I go into song writing with the mentality all songs are “love” songs be it objects people, feelings or emotions it’s going to be one of them, this is not a full on love song more a skirting sorrowing type so I hesitated to use “for you, I will”, once again goes with the flow of this song since it’s about overcoming more than “love”. Link to full song http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YqVXM8QmVYQ ============================ ===================== ============================ ===================== If they are overflowing tears, Afuredasu namida nara -------------------------------------- it's okay that they don't stop just now ima wa tomenakute ii -------------------------------------- At the end of this sorrow Kanashimi no saigo ni wa -------------------------------------- light will shine down upon me hikari ga sashikomu hazu -------------------------------------- ============================ ======= stay... stay... stay... stay... ============================ ======= -------------------------------------- So, we felt the same feeling Sou Onaji kimochi -------------------------------------- We gazed at the same erased memory Shinjiteta Keshita MEMORI -------------------------------------- Now I cannot meet you anymore Mitsumeteta Ima anata ni -------------------------------------- But I conceal those painful feelings aenai kedo Setsunai omoi -------------------------------------- I want to make it clear more clear kakushite Tsuyoku nareru motto -------------------------------------- I will become stronger Tashikamete yuku no -------------------------------------- ============================ ======= ============================ ======= -------------------------------------- If they are overflowing tears, Afuredasu namida nara -------------------------------------- it's okay that they don't stop just now ima wa tomenakute ii -------------------------------------- At the end of this sorrow Kanashimi no saigo ni wa -------------------------------------- light will shine down upon me hikari ga sashikomu hazu -------------------------------------- ============================ ======= ============================ ======= -------------------------------------- All the things that I destroyed Isogisugite -------------------------------------- When I was too busy rushing around Kowashite kita mono -------------------------------------- I will regain them all, to stand up and walk like myself Torimodosu no Watashi rashiku aruku -------------------------------------- once again tame ni -------------------------------------- ============================ ======= ============================ ======= -------------------------------------- Hey, when we meet again Say to me first a sad 'goodbye’ Nee Mata anata ni Ano toki wa Saki ni sayonara -------------------------------------- There is a new tomorrow I am sure iwasete Shinjiteru kitto -------------------------------------- for us and our feelings. atarashii asu o -------------------------------------- ============================ ======= ============================ ======= -------------------------------------- Time that passes by, without haste or hurry Mayowazu ni aserazu ni -------------------------------------- is changing my sorrow”s” sugite yuku jikan wa -------------------------------------- I will not forget the pain that Yasashisa ni kawatteku -------------------------------------- changes into pure kindness itami mo wasurenai -------------------------------------- ============================ ======= ============================ ======= -------------------------------------- My innocent heart that I left behind when Muchakisugite kizutsuita kokoro -------------------------------------- I was too reckless I’ll embrace it and be reborn Dakishimeru no Umarekawaru jibun no -------------------------------------- once again. tame ni -------------------------------------- ============================ ======= I Will ============================ ======= -------------------------------------- If they are overflowing tears, Afuredasu namida nara -------------------------------------- it's okay that they don't stop just now ima wa tomenakute ii --------------------------------------- At the end of this sorrow Kanashimi no saigo ni wa light will shine down upon me hikari ga sashikomu hazu -------------------------------------- ============================ ======= ============================ ======= -------------------------------------- Time that passes by, without haste or hurry Mayowazu ni aserazu ni -------------------------------------- is changing my sorrow”s” sugite yuku jikan wa -------------------------------------- I will not forget the pain that Yasashisa ni kawatteku -------------------------------------- changes into pure kindness itami mo wasurenai -------------------------------------- ============================ ======= ============================ ======= -------------------------------------- All the things that I destroyed Isogisugite -------------------------------------- When I was too busy rushing around Kowashite kita mono -------------------------------------- I will regain them all, to stand up and walk like myself Torimodosu no Watashi rashiku aruku -------------------------------------- once again tame ni -------------------------------------- ============================ ======= I Will ============================ ======= -------------------------------------- ============================ ======= ============================ ======= Also “I have cleared my resolve to be more to become stronger I want to make it clear more clear I will become stronger “ Work damn well and I can’t figure out which is “better” =================================================== If it's the overflowing tears, it's okay that they don't stop now Light should be shining into the finale of the sadness It's okay if I don't stop my overflowing tears At the end of this sadness, the light will surely shine me If they are overflowing tears, it's okay that they don't stop just now Afuredasu namida nara ima wa tomenakute ii Light should be shining into the finale of sadness Light should embrace you in the finale of sadness At the end of this sadness light will shine down on me At the end of this sorrow light will shine down upon me Kanashimi no saigo ni wa hikari ga sashikomu hazu ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- stay... stay... stay... stay... ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Yes, I've believed in the same feeling I've gazed at the memory that has been erased Although I cannot meet you right now I conceal those painful feelings I wanna make it more clear that I can become stronger Right, we believed in the same feeling We gazed at the vanished memory Now I can't meet you But I can hide my painful thoughts And become stronger I'll go ascertain that So, we felt the same feeling Sou Onaji kimochi We gazed at the same faded memory We gazed at the same erased memory Shinjiteta Keshita MEMORI Now I can't meet you Now I can't see you anymore Now I cannot meet you anymore Mitsumeteta Ima anata ni But I can hide my painful thoughts And become stronger I'll go ascertain that But I can hide my sorrowful feelings But I conceal those painful feelings aenai kedo Setsunai omoi And become stronger I'll go ascertain that I wanna make it more clear that I can become stronger I have cleared my resolve to be more to become stronger I want to make it clear more clear I will become stronger kakushite Tsuyoku nareru motto Tashikamete yuku no ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- If it's the overflowing tears, it's okay that they don't stop now Light should be shining into the finale of the sadness It's okay if I don't stop my overflowing tears At the end of this sadness, the light will surely shine me If they are overflowing tears, it's okay that they don't stop just now Afuredasu namida nara ima wa tomenakute ii Light should be shining into the finale of sadness Light should embrace you in the finale of sadness At the end of this sadness light will shine down on me At the end of this sorrow light will shine down upon me Kanashimi no saigo ni wa hikari ga sashikomu hazu ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Those things that have been broken from hurrying too much I will regain them in order to still be myself as I walk on The things that I destroyed when I was too rushed I'll regain them, to walk like myself All the things that I destroyed Isogisugite When I was too busy rushing around Kowashite kita mono I will regain them all, to stand up and walk like myself once again Torimodosu no Watashi rashiku aruku tame ni ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Hey, when I meet you again Say 'goodbye' to me first I believe in a newer tomorrow Hey, let me say goodbye first To you again back then I believe that surely, there's a new tomorrow Hey, let me say goodbye first To you again Hey, when I meet you again Say 'goodbye' to me first Hey, when I meet you again Say to me first a sad 'goodbye’ first as we meet Hey, when I meet you again Say to me as we meet a sad 'goodbye’ first as we meet Hey, when I meet you again Say to me as we meet a somber ‘goodbye’ . Hey When we see each other again say to me a first “goodbye” to hide the pain Hey, when I meet you again Say to me first a sad 'goodbye’ Hey, when we meet again Say to me first a sad 'goodbye’ Nee Mata anata ni Ano toki wa Saki ni sayonara There is a new tomorrow for us and our feelings. There is a new tomorrow I am sure for us and our feelings. iwasete Shinjiteru kitto atarashii asu o ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- The time that is passing by, without haste nor hurry Is changing into kindness, while not forgetting the pain Time that passes by unhesitatingly and unhurriedly I won't forget the pain that changes into kindness Time that passes by without thought or care I won't forget the pain that changes into kindness Time that passes by, without haste or hurry is changing my sorrow”s” Mayowazu ni aserazu ni sugite yuku jikan wa I won't forget the pain that changes into pure kindness I will not forget the pain that changes into pure kindness Yasashisa ni kawatteku itami mo wasurenai This overly-innocent heart that has been hurt I will hold it tightly for my new self to be reborn My heart that I wounded when I was too reckless I'll embrace it, for the reborn me I My innocent heart I left dead when I was reckless I’ll embrace it and be reborn My innocent heart I left behind when I was reckless I’ll embrace it and be reborn My innocent heart that I left behind when Muchakisugite kizutsuita kokoro I was too reckless I’ll embrace it and be reborn once again. Dakishimeru no Umarekawaru jibun no tame ni ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I Will ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- If it's the overflowing tears, it's okay that they don't stop now Light should be shining into the finale of the sadness It's okay if I don't stop my overflowing tears At the end of this sadness, the light will surely shine me If they are overflowing tears, it's okay that they don't stop just now Afuredasu namida nara ima wa tomenakute ii Light should be shining into the finale of sadness Light should embrace you in the finale of sadness At the end of this sadness light will shine down on me At the end of this sorrow light will shine down upon me Kanashimi no saigo ni wa hikari ga sashikomu hazu The time that is passing by, without haste nor hurry Is changing into kindness, while not forgetting the pain Time that passes by unhesitatingly and unhurriedly I won't forget the pain that changes into kindness Time that passes by without thought or care I won't forget the pain that changes into kindness Time that passes by, without haste or hurry is changing my sorrow”s” Mayowazu ni aserazu ni sugite yuku jikan wa I won't forget the pain that changes into pure kindness I will not forget the pain that changes into pure kindness Yasashisa ni kawatteku itami mo wasurenai Those things that have been broken from hurrying too much I will regain them in order to still be myself as I walk on The things that I destroyed when I was too rushed I'll regain them, to walk like myself All the things that I destroyed Isogisugite When I was too busy rushing around Kowashite kita mono I will regain them all, to stand up and walk like myself once again Torimodosu no Watashi rashiku aruku tame ni ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I Will =============== =============== =============== =============== =============== ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- http://www.animelyrics.com/anime/fmalchemist/fmaiwill.htm Afuredasu namida nara ima wa tomenakute ii Kanashimi no saigo ni wa hikari ga sashikomu hazu stay... stay... stay... stay... Sou Onaji kimochi shinjiteta Keshita MEMORI mitsumeteta Ima anata ni aenai kedo Setsunai omoi kakushite Tsuyoku nareru motto Tashikamete yuku no Afuredasu namida nara ima wa tomenakute ii Kanashimi no saigo ni wa hikari ga sashikomu hazu Isogisugite Kowashite kita mono Torimodosu no Watashi rashiku aruku tame ni Nee Mata anata ni Ano toki wa Saki ni sayonara iwasete Shinjiteru kitto atarashii asu o Mayowazu ni aserazu ni sugite yuku jikan wa Yasashisa ni kawatteku itami mo wasurenai Muchakisugite kizutsuita kokoro Dakishimeru no Umarekawaru jibun no tame ni I Will Afuredasu namida nara ima wa tomenakute ii Kanashimi no saigo ni wa hikari ga sashikomu hazu Mayowazu ni aserazu ni sugite yuku jikan wa Yasashisa ni kawatteku itami mo wasurenai Isogisugite Kowashite kita mono Torimodosu no Watashi rashiku aruku tame ni I Will If it's the overflowing tears, it's okay that they don't stop now Light should be shining into the finale of the sadness stay... stay... stay... stay... Right, we believed in the same feeling We gazed at the vanished memory Now I can't meet you But I can hide my painful thoughts And become stronger I'll go ascertain that If it's the overflowing tears, it's okay that they don't stop now Light should be shining into the finale of the sadness The things that I destroyed when I was too rushed I'll regain them, to walk like myself Hey, let me say goodbye first To you again back then I believe that surely, there's a new tomorrow Time that passes by unhesitatingly and unhurriedly I won't forget the pain that changes into kindness My heart that I wounded when I was too reckless I'll embrace it, for the reborn me I Will If it's the overflowing tears, it's okay that they don't stop now Light should be shining into the finale of the sadness Time that passes by unhesitatingly and unhurriedly I won't forget the pain that changes into kindness The things that I destroyed when I was too rushed I'll regain them, to walk like myself I Will ======================================== ====================================== New Dark/Light Forces Uniforms and stuff. COTLOP Uniforms and stuff. And ow I shall bombard you with today's musings ================================================== ========= LF uniform is a overcoat uniform theme, mostly white with black outlines. The shirt is more like a jacket folds over and velors to the side, where the edges overlap it "velcros down" it opens from right to left the overcaot opens from left to right. Its made in 2 sizes common and girth, both expand and contract to fit the wearer though the nano compression tech within the seams on the uniform. Shirts that can expand to long sleeve have a larger seam/cord on the sleeves the seams run along the back of the arm to the sleeve that has a seam on it. The elbow area had a multi seam on it akin to a elbow pad to provide support for joints when needed. All the seams are lined with a cord fabric like matreail. Each shirt has a seam on the opposite fold side the top and the bottom and along the curved diagonal in the front. The pants are pretty much the same as the shirts but the seams are at the top,front to back in the middle of the top,sides of the pants leg u to the top,knees in a knee pad like fashion to provide, bottom of pants leg. Coloring can be easily changed at a clothing station or using a personalization device, in general the color scheme the shirt seams are black/cream, with a proration of the fold is black/cream and a wide strip along the back is black/cream. The pants outer seams are black/cream (top/sides,bottom)with a wide strip of black/cream along the seams to the sides, a seam around the knee the also black/cream but not all of them. DF uniforms use many of the same themes altho they use a biological nano tech for compression rather than a straight up tech version. Their uniforms folds from top down and adjusts into place creating a snug fit it has much more pronounced shoulders, around the edges on the folds near the bottom is a half circle or oval dark spot. There is a black strip down the middle of the top both front and back. The color of the top is purple,red,violet the darker it is the higher the rank or prestige of the member.The pants are all black or very dark color the seams are purple. The overcoat mirrors the shirt but tis larger and folds in from the opposite side this comes from the saying "Knowing both sides of a argument is prosperous." the designers race was known for(add details later?) where as the DF designers made the coast more like a large mantel that rests on your shoulders the saying that comes with it is "Authority comes from the top down never forget those above you and use those below you to fulfill your obligations." . Both have 2-4 medium to long Vs at the base of coat that reaches to just above the ankle. Basic overcoats offer more protection from the environment almost doubling the protections given by the clothing. Pockets can be changed and added per person shirts default to one pocket on the side opposite of its fold down part so you can get to it when you open the overcaot. Pants default to 2 on the sides and 2 on the front of the thighs. Overcoats default to 2 internal breast pockets and 2 pockets to the sides, these can be easily customized and doubled. The Compression system runs on static and ambient power and only really needs power to change size,compress joints or compress bones or repair or when its just active. More advance uniforms offer better protection and medical functions, the cords are more pronounced and have ridges on them. The clothing offers hygiene control and some temperature control up to 20 degrees plus or minus of the environment you are in. Shoes and boots use nano tech to manage the feet completely, they offer magnetic/gravity lock and kinetic dampening. Accessories: Utility belts and straps communication and small lapel sized equipment mounted on the folds where the color change is near the edges, medals are worn on the shoulders a small device can replicate them on the clothing when you ever wish to show off. The Lord of power wears simple earth based clothing jeans generally blue, any short sleeve shirt he can get his hands on. Accessories are brown fedora and leather belt, suspenders black or brown, shoes or boots. He loves his trench coat and hat rarely goes without wearing it, the trench coat is lined with pockets and place holders for all sorts of gadgets and what not. His hat a wider than normal brim fedora sometimes has a band or belt on it and sometimes not but its non frilly so no ribbons or bows. His trench coat is brown and goes alil below his knees, dose not have a duster on the back its a cross between a cowboy and detective coat with lots of stuff on the inside :P. His main 2 weapons of choice is a light based golden brown shirsaya(katana with a wood hilt and scabbered, is slightly curved) and a dark based black sectional staff that can extend out as black chain, one end has a small box on it where a scythe blade appears from. The Lord of power is a simi tall (6.2) white male so so completion fair looking and alil overweight(2750/290LB), brown hair and marble blue eyes, disheveled in appearance he generally dose not care how he looks as his mind is occupied with other matters. Image panel 1:High detail Standing with his Sword of light over his shoulder like a cowboy its wrapped in cloth and has alil bandage trailing off both ends the one behind him is caught by a breeze, theres a kanji tag(seal) tied to the hilt that mgith be caught in a breeze as well. He's standing there looking toward you at a slight angel, go with whatever works, would like this to be as large/detailed as it can be for the panel size/price. Shoes: shall simi worn out sneakers for this. Image panel 2:Comic detail Same setup but with him aiming and shooting it as a rifle with 2 hands, there is no bandage on the weapon(want to see how it looks visually), would also like a side by side with him mirrored ont eh other side using it like a sub machine gun. Shirt: how about a upper body armor either metal or leather based which either looks better under the coat. Shoes:Worn out black boots with white socks. Image panel 3:Comic detail Holding the staff behind him is in a martial arts kind of pose, I'd like the top end of the staff with the small rectangle box on it bandaged up it might show up better on the bottom of the staff as how its posed. Then whipping it out in the sectional chain mode grabbing something in the distance, the sections can show up every few feet, whatever looks good. Shoes:Shiny black boots Image panel 4:High detail For the "by side" I'd like him standing their staring at you the brim of the at and head is tiled in a way his face is covered in shadow he is holding the staff upright with both hands one arm trails down the staff while the other crosses the chest almost making his face that much darker his eyes are glowing(red) in the darkness with a evil intent to them. The top of the staff is unbound with some bandages loosely clinging to it and falling off, the blade is out and is as long as his hat maybe alil longer, its just above the the brim of the hat but not over the top of it the blade is not to long but not very wide. the rectangle box and staff has runes on it, the staff is a hex or quad sided staff with sections every 3-4 inches every other section has a rune on and the "box" is covered in them. Would like this to be as large/detailed as it can be for the panel size/price. boot black, this might make a better torso/half body picture tho. Image panel 5 The Black staff in full dark scythe mode the, Caleb from Blood is a good example of the look http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Shial http://postmortem.edgegaming.com/?page=b1_cuts The Dark Scythe in full mode changes from the Scythe mode, the staff is becomes more wood/bio matter like losing a good bit of its sections and runes, the blade is 3-5 times bigger and longer with a ton of runes on it. Posing would be to the viewer with the scythe held with one hand and the blade in front of him with his other hand over the tip end of the blade his face is totally evil looking and his eyes glowing much more than in the other picture the back end of the staff has mutated into chain and theres a bunch of gnarled chain in the back ground Would rally like a brown and black clothing version and would like this to be as High detail as it can be. shirt can be normal anything shirt that comes to mind (good to be evil,killing is business and business is goo..,ect whatever might fit and be a funny compliment to it) Shoes:Black Boots of coarse. Image panel 6 Minion spell Stands in the middle of the picture using his sword as a cane with both hands on it, its wrapped up neatly with the kanji tag stuck over the hilt, witch is positioned to the viewer so the sword is on tis "side" shown to the viewer it has a slight curve to it, he is grinning. The minions fill the background around him they are alil bigger than head size orbs with a round colored spot in their middle as an "eye" the orb is clear and translucent but filed with "clouds" not really sure how to explain it a cloud in a orb shape also works. At the bottom have him scream Minion Froces or not I dunno the cheese factor is rising Labor/laborus:A handful. Works:A few dozen. Forces:A few hundred. Armada:Thousands of minions. So meh it might be to much. Shoes: almost new sneakers Image panel 7 Would like to do weapon specs have the sword/staff with and with out the bandages, previous versions and such. I have been writing for the past few hours so I am drained of details right now I'll write them out in time. ================================================== == And Yes having some commissions done for 15-20 a pop :P Mmm but for the uniforms been trying to find a futuristic retroish style thats simi unique yet non sucky and thats enough to overload zippy kitty dino bwains :P and I need to write out detail on the ceremonial combat armor which are loosely based on 50s styles suits and pelted skirts...... yes I kow...mew brains...they go blow up ><
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Besides the new update above I am working on my fan lyrics started up Rental Magica lyrics Sora ni Saku, finishing up Damion Crevasse, and FMA's I WILL, might tweak Rewrite some more.
Not much new stuff for COTLOP as I am deveolping and working on layering its fiction and what not, really should get off my ass update my word press properly with the 5 or 6 simi finished stuff I have done, the half arsed unfinished stuff on it now sucks....then again so dose the simi finished stuff :P ==================== Edit As a develop this "thing" called COTLOP I write out all the quotes and what not that come into my head some I can tag to characters some I can not. Heres acoupel based on the alt personalities of my main character. “Sternness is noble, it is not arrogance as others would lead you to believe, I must walk above all others to walk on the path of nobility and justice.: L.O.P:Pale Knight”. ------------------ ” Darkness is despair and perversion, I prefer perversion with a taste of madness, either one keeps me from boredom.:L.O.P:Shade Knight” While darkness is corruptive I might change perversion to disdain since I wrote this new saying/quote a few days ago and its sticking with me "Darkness is despair and disdain of lights hope and vigor, Darkness is not in as much evil as seeing things as hopeless." In my museing I am trying to blur the lines of good/evil as things are never quite fully black and white.
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Updated my word press writing project page with some "lite drafts".
http://zippydsmlee.wordpress.com/wri...ting-projects/ Now if I could only do something about the fiction being better than the grammar >>
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Started on a couple more fan lyrics.
Hikari to Kage to just to awesome for words but I can't find all of its lyrics or song, so i guess it the one I really want to do will be finished later, I just have a partial lyrics for the current opening Aoi Hana right now will switch to a full more direct translation and start banging the whole lyrics sooner rather than later, also plan on doing the other end songs end song. Spoiler for Casshern sins-basic draft FL Op1 and Ed3:
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New synopisis
Semi refined synopisis
----- What is COTLOP What is COTLOP well let’s start at the start of the universe light creation itself was born from nothingness born from the nightmares of darkness itself. Darkness is not chaos but utter despair from the sorrow hope brings it is the end where as light is the beginning. Within this new universe Lightness was fruitful and scattered life and wisdom out. When Darkness arose from its slumber it wonder why it had such terrifying dreams of creation, it sought out Lightness and they fought destroying everything around them sending everything back to basic forms of matter and energy. After a few more fistdecuffs they realized they cannot win in a direct battle as they are complete equals so decided to raise vast armies and evolve warriors to battle for them. When the balance shatters and one side gains so much power as so the other can never win that’s when everything will return to darkness, or so it’s said that balance has never been broken even when the first age of war of creation ended. Called the birth war, first breath wart or still borns war in darker parts of existence, even as the new age matures into the war of creation a new age is about to begin one of lawlessness one of strife…one of hope and despair. The factions within this universe are of light and darkness, Light’s forces are bureaucratic and stern focusing more on “gardening” creation in its entirety while defending what they can against darkness. Dark Forces are casts of mostly honor bound warriors, those who have lost hope and seek the peace that despair brings for those of darkness only see suffering in hope and wish to bring an end to creation and return all to the peace and harmony of the void. The story revolves around a human chosen to be another pawn in the war of creation but unlike the others before him he is path is less certain as his power his mere existence disturbs the placation of the light and the veracity of the dark. Sent to a trail word he manages to save it from complete destruction only after undoing the harm darkness done and it’s this altering of reality this near absolute and corruptive power that will haunt him throughout his adventures. He overcomes his curse but too late to be cursed by it. Feared and hated he leaves the cold comfort of the light to wander existence heeding the call for help no matter who calls out in the endless night of space, time and dimension……. ------------ Anymore new COTLOP stuff I'll stick in this post,any new Fanlyrics I'll stick in the post above,until I hit post size limits, do apologize if I am fudging any rules..
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Xris:kkaayyyy =^^=
======================= Some new stuff First off the final version of the above picture http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6...-1-3-final.jpg Artist:Ivstudios , I am paying about 15-20 a pic still trying to get a feel for the charatcer designs. --------------------- 2 new pictures with the Staff of Darkness http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6.../lop-SOD-1.jpg http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6.../lop-SOD-2.jpg Artist:Ivstudios , I am paying about 15-20 a pic still trying to get a feel for the charatcer designs. ----------------- Acouple sketches drawn by be http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6...-SOD-1-old.jpg http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6...TLOP-SOD-1.jpg --------------------------- Did these on the computer http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6...COTLOP-SOD.jpg ========================= and this one I did last night, I am having Ivstudios re do this one, maybe polish up how I have it laid out. http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6...SOL-doodle.jpg After he gets done with this I'll move on to doing one for the Staff of darkness. ===================== Also simplified and polished the synopsis more Quote:
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Xris:kkaayyyy =^^=
======================= Some new stuff First off the final version of the above picture http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6...-1-3-final.jpg Artist:Ivstudios , I am paying about 15-20 a pic still trying to get a feel for the charatcer designs. --------------------- 2 new pictures with the Staff of Darkness http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6.../lop-SOD-1.jpg http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6.../lop-SOD-2.jpg Artist:Ivstudios , I am paying about 15-20 a pic still trying to get a feel for the charatcer designs. ----------------- Acouple sketches drawn by be http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6...-SOD-1-old.jpg http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6...TLOP-SOD-1.jpg --------------------------- Did these on the computer http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6...COTLOP-SOD.jpg ========================= and this one I did last night, I am having Ivstudios re do this one, maybe polish up how I have it laid out. http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6...SOL-doodle.jpg After he gets done with this I'll move on to doing one for the Staff of darkness.
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Had a new picture commissioned
http://fav.me/d2twn9z And drew this a few days ago. http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6...P-Minoin-2.jpg http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6...noininhand.jpg The spell spell/ability couriers up a energy based drone able to use a cutting beam,energy/molecular tool, tractor beam and self storage space in a mini pocket dimension. The ultimate slacker tool to fix stuff you break when you try to make it "better". What better "pet" to go with a grimy hat and trench coat wearing drunk looking space/time traveler? LOL
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