2009-10-18, 00:57 | Link #17221 | |
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Join Date: Jun 2006
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This is one of the bests 'first encounter' scenes I remember reading... right now I only can compare it with the one from "My Fate, Our Destiny" by smiggers (an excellent fic too). You really are transmitting a lot of feelings with this. I can wait for the last 2 parts of the first chapter to be done so you can share it with the rest of the world ^^ By the way, I love your signature, the original image is just one of the most beautiful things I've seen. Thanks Evil Rick for making it. About the Fishermen!Fate pic, it's just me or Fate is holding the fish like a guitar? The idea is funny xD Cute pic, though. Cuídense y sigan sonriendo |
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2009-10-18, 01:05 | Link #17224 |
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Join Date: Jun 2009
Location: quien sabe xd
Age: 31
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.. Just how much I missed? I'm off for one day and i'm behind for like four pages already
@Alavon: Loved your new signature! I'm pretty much with Haru about you posting Animal Instincs on ff.net, gah, I love it already XD
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2009-10-18, 01:53 | Link #17231 | |
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Join Date: Mar 2009
Location: Place of rocks and trees, and trees and rocks...and water.
Age: 33
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....and music by KOTOKO.... I'M SO THERE! (or so there again, since I'm kinda already there ) Yes, watch the OVA Then you can visualize the Miyuki fighting scene from "Day in the Life" with real imagery
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2009-10-18, 02:28 | Link #17236 | |||||||
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Great! Been waiting for this.
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And speaking more of the Heimdall sats, perhaps it would good idea to order them to point their weapons away from the planet and shift into orbits that take the surface beyond their firing range? Anything that buys extra time should be used. Quote:
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On the other hand, if you haven't found the AMF, what would you see if the scrying spell passed over it? Would the scryer get a sensation that says, "I just passed over something I can't identify, although I have no trouble identifying the things around this area."? Quote:
All in all, good changes that deal with most of the problems in the previous draft. |
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2009-10-18, 08:07 | Link #17237 | |
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Join Date: Jul 2008
Location: The Great Down Under!
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*laughs evilly in the background* Un-freakin'-believable.. hahahahahahaha... well done well done *claps* |
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2009-10-18, 13:28 | Link #17238 | |||||
Beta by Accident
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Join Date: Oct 2008
Location: Maine
Age: 52
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...the true problem here is that your lack of Triangle Hearts knowledge is actually keeping you from realizing that Triangle Hearts has nothing to do with the point I was making. Quote:
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Of course, if the reader disagrees, it actually makes the terrorists' threat more effective and dangerous, which better supports the effect I'm trying to produce with the story...a slight rephrasing to make the issue more ambiguous. Quote:
Here's the way I see it: when we see scrying magic used in A's, a window opens up filled with a cloudy field. The scrying field will show what it is the caster is looking for: people, for example. What it doesn't show is everything else. For example, in Chapter 18, Vivio scanned the area to locate the various people within the building, and was able to identify their locations in real space with respect to each other and to her. But she had to have Parsifal map those to a plan because her scrying spell can't find the people and the building at the same time. It doesn't function like a remote-viewing camera, for example. If there had been an AMF field within the building, it doesn't appear on the scrying spell as a blank spot where the magic doesn't penetrate. It just appears as somewhere where she doesn't find any results. Unless a person moves through the building, and enters the AMF area, they'll vanish from the results, which will tip off the scryer that something happened. But the AMF itself isn't detectable on its own; it can only be located by testing the environment around it and seeing where things they should be able to find no longer appear. And if you don't know what should be within the AMF (particularly since the Nest's AMF radius is not large), there's no practical way to conduct these kind of tests over the entire city at a rate of speed. |
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2009-10-18, 13:32 | Link #17239 |
Vividly Vivio
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I lost a whole section of what I wrote for Amber Dreams. I'm skipping past that part and still writing, I should hopefully have it done soon so I can go back and re-write some parts... After that, its off to be reviewed by Dezo (love you), and beta read by... *sighs* Angel isn't available now due to her rotation. I'll try and bribe Dezo with home made fudge if he'll beta read it as well :3
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2009-10-18, 13:34 | Link #17240 |
Test Drive
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Plus, you know, if by some chance you follow my story "Bless the Broken Road" it's kind of helpful to know about some small facts of Triangle Hearts since the whole story was inspired by the OVA and actually has characters from said OVA involved along with the main Nanoha cast.
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authorshipping, befriending, fanfiction, interactive fanfiction, nanoha |
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