2011-11-27, 01:56 | Link #9863 |
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@ Eratas: In the case of Kyuukai's love triangle... Canan sees Kyuukai as a potential "mate" even though she doesn't know the meaning of the word, and she also sees Laura as a mother. Laura sees Canan as a lovable child (even though she's older than her) who likes to violate her personal space, and doesn't really know how to classify Kyuukai.
And Kyuukai loves the both of them somehow. But he doesn't know how to classify that love. BOOOO! Though I admit, I'd be pretty happy with Houki being the end girl. Incest creeps me out though. Unless it's as handled as well as you do. |
2011-11-27, 02:01 | Link #9864 | |
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This is the reason ByakuShiki removed from Ichika in Chapter 11, it undergo various frame adjustment and many internal parts is replaced (though the external appearance is almost unchanged). Not anti Charlotte so to speak, just that many, MANY fanfic already choose this pairing (including Daydreams IIRC), overused LOL. (And she's semi-canon official pairing, so I actually expect you for being unconventional and creative) @Rain & Box See above.
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2011-11-27, 02:03 | Link #9865 |
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Rain - I almost forgot! Chifuyu is also a potential end girl!
Anyway, so Canan pretty much replaces Tatenashi? Seems that way for this story. Also, why not just say she sees Kyuukai as a father since the way she acts and how she sees Laura points to this?
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2011-11-27, 02:08 | Link #9866 |
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@ Eratas: That's due to certain actions between the two, and how she's learned things from other people.
Tabane has defined a mother (more like an older sister figure) as a woman who cares for your needs and emotions: her understanding links that to Laura after Chifuyu explains the concept to her in Layman's terms. Rin, on the other hand, has to explain what's a lover, so she defines it as someone you personally care for with a passion, someone you want to spend the rest of your life with: And she links that to Kyuukai after Cecilia explains it to her, and again, in Layman's terms. @ Zero: My top 3 list of favorite pairings for Ichika: 1. Charlotte 2. Madoka (after reading your fic ) 3. Houki |
2011-11-27, 02:22 | Link #9871 | |
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Anybody can help me write Cecilia oneshot? I though 76.67% Readers will go D'awwwww~!
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2011-11-27, 02:24 | Link #9872 |
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@ Eratas: Canan classifies him as an older brother, since that's what Koyomi explains to her.
No, she classifies Ichika as her Daddy. Why? Since Koyomi says a daddy fights for you, protects you when your lover can't. Ichika protects her from a bunch of pissed off fangirls of his and Kyuukai's and a few of Irish's. So guess who's now a father? And guess who's the newest addition to Canan's cuddle list? |
2011-11-27, 02:33 | Link #9874 |
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@ Box - What do you think of the ending?
@ Zero - Just draw them going on a date or getting married and trying to save the Alcott family line. If you know what I mean @ Rain - Chances are, Irish would help her more since Ichika has shown to never hit a girl no matter what happens (Just look at Laura) while Irish has no limitations. Besides, it would probably heckle Kyuukai more if she calls Irish dad. (If he goes with her, she'll tell him to call Irish dad which he'll obviously refuse to do )
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2011-11-27, 02:45 | Link #9877 |
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@ Rain - Even more stressful: She wants to go to the amusement park with her "mom" and "dad" since Koyomi tells her families do it all the time. So we get these two chibi's holding hands and trying to guide a girl who's older than them and making sure she doesn't wreck anything. Combine that with the lack of social skills, and we get a family comedy show
@ Zero - Follow demino_hellsin's suggestion. It works out fine and I'll use it for Cecilia's daydream re-write.
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2011-11-27, 02:50 | Link #9878 |
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^ Hmm, maybe, but if you gonna use it then...
Maybe I should just depicted Cecilia 'living as a commoner' (including cook for her family) as part of Chifuyu's challenge (it's ironic that Chifuyu can't cook or washing clothes properly....) if she wanted to marry Ichika.
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2011-11-27, 02:57 | Link #9879 |
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@ Eratas: And then you get the time Canan wants to go out on a date with Kyuukai. She hears the guy always has to ask the parents... So she "forces" Kyuukai to bow down before her "parents" and ask them if he can take her out. She threatens to cry and sob for the rest of eternity if he doesn't.
So he bows down before Irish, almost kissing the floor, and asks if he can take his "daughter" out, in full view of Laura. He's going to rage for a long time. And his chances with Laura just took an express flight to Antarctica. |
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