Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[SpaceBrotha]

Well, why not?
B
Let's see how this turns out...

[ghazghkull]

LOL Yay! We're breaking Satashi-sama's streak of page claims! XD

[PhoenixG]

Originally Posted by Keroko

This stabs me particularely hard, especially because I know how this feels, getting one of those scoldings not too long ago. It was my fault, I know that, but that only makes it worse. You can't do anything except look at the floor feeling absolutely misserable, wishing for a time-machine so you could just turn back and do it over again.

Anyway, on a more happy note, I decided to get started on the Nanoha Dating Sim I promised a while back. Exam Projects are finished (one of the few who passed, woo!) so I think I can get this started.

The title, cornily, is Raising Heart. Yet, it fits somehow, no?

Spoiler for Raising Heart:

snip

Something refreshing....

A from me.

[Keroko]

Of to a good start, I see. Even Haru voted, I must be doing something right.

Also, an important note: This choice is far from defining, and nowhere near final. However, choosing certain options or going with certain people may unlock aditional characters. For example, if an option to go home with Chrono apears, there is a chance to unlock characters related to Chrono.

And I'll emphasize this once more: I have no moral compass to hold me back. Any character that is not in a relationship is a potentional pairing, regardless of age or sex.

Originally Posted by Sam the Onion

Tasty. Another dating-sim. Might be hard to keep votes for two different sims once Satashi-sama returns to hers. (Everybody is female until proven otherwise. Logic of Sam.)

I've lived a greater part of my time here in Outer Cadia. Trust me, I can handle large amounts of posts.

Originally Posted by Sam the Onion

Is it just a coincidence that every anime/game has an english teacher as the home room teacher? Well you can't mispronounce in text so there's nothing to lose

Well, it was more a 'who to pick for a teacher?' idea and ending up with Leti. She may have apeared only a few times in A's, and in a few chapters of the manga, but I like her. And with her foreign name, her being an English teacher was the next logical step.

Originally Posted by Gillian

is this the story, in which Fate-chan got a boyfriend and Nanoha dates somebody else?

ps: i thought chrono has blue hair or is this a new char?

Yup, this is that sim. As for Chrono's hair, its dark with a blue tint, but mostly dark. Describing him with 'blue hair' somehow welded the image of Tomoya from Clannad in place, which is not what I want to use.

[Sam the Onion]

Originally Posted by Keroko

Of to a good start, I see. Even Haru voted, I must be doing something right.

Also, an important note: This choice is far from defining, and nowhere near final. However, choosing certain options or going with certain people may unlock aditional characters. For example, if an option to go home with Chrono apears, there is a chance to unlock characters related to Chrono.

And I'll emphasize this once more: I have no moral compass to hold me back. Any character that is not in a relationship is a potentional pairing, regardless of age or sex.

I hear the legion swarming already...

Originally Posted by Keroko

I've lived a greater part of my time here in Outer Cadia. Trust me, I can handle large amounts of posts.

Actually what I meant was that if people post something like:

Well, why not?
B
Let's see how this turns out...

B has my vote XD

(Names left out to protect the innocent.)

It might get hard to define that which sim it was they voted for.

Originally Posted by Keroko

Well, it was more a 'who to pick for a teacher?' idea and ending up with Leti. She may have apeared only a few times in A's, and in a few chapters of the manga, but I like her. And with her foreign name, her being an English teacher was the next logical step.

Makes sense.

Originally Posted by Keroko

Yup, this is that sim. As for Chrono's hair, its dark with a blue tint, but mostly dark. Describing him with 'blue hair' somehow welded the image of Tomoya from Clannad in place, which is not what I want to use.

I use 'blue haired' in my fic as he's the only male with that color so it gets easier to see who's the one I'm writing about. Also using 'blue haired' takes less words than 'dark haired with a hint of blue' as using black would be incorrect and anything else would be in the class of eggplantish, rosemarinneily, peachily, ect. that nobody would get without visiting wiki.

[Gillian]

Originally Posted by Keroko

Yup, this is that sim. As for Chrono's hair, its dark with a blue tint, but mostly dark. Describing him with 'blue hair' somehow welded the image of Tomoya from Clannad in place, which is not what I want to use.

ah good

*feel relieve*
so I made the right choice


let the show begin

PS: May I ask again, about the original Manga from Nanoha*changed*?

edit1: jupp mean Nanoha
*should sleep, too confused*

thx Keroko
tomorrow*today* they are mine

I should start counting my missed page claims...

[ghazghkull]

Originally Posted by Gillian

ah good

*feel relieve*
so I made the right choice


let the show begin

PS: May I ask again, about the original Manga from Nanaho?


I should start counting my missed page claims...

Nanaho? Unless you're talking about Nanaho Katsuragi the voice actress, I believe you mean Nanoha. instead of Nanaha.

Manga? Are you talking about where you can find it or something?

[Keroko]

Originally Posted by Sam the Onion

I hear the legion swarming already...

Which is why I put Fate in a relationship.

Originally Posted by Sam the Onion

Actually what I meant was that if people post something like:



(Names left out to protect the innocent.)

It might get hard to define that which sim it was they voted for.

I'm sure they'll specify it by then, otherwise they'll end up voting for things they don't want to.

Originally Posted by Sam the Onion

I use 'blue haired' in my fic as he's the only male with that color so it gets easier to see who's the one I'm writing about. Also using 'blue haired' takes less words than 'dark haired with a hint of blue' as using black would be incorrect and anything else would be in the class of eggplantish, rosemarinneily, peachily, ect. that nobody would get without visiting wiki.

My logic is simple: Chrono's hair is 'dark with a hint of blue' but mostly dark. Ergo, he has dark hair.

Originally Posted by Gillian

PS: May I ask again, about the original Manga from Nanaho?

Oh, you hadn't noticed? I uploaded them and posted the link in the manga thread a few days ago.

[Gillian]

Originally Posted by Sam the Onion

I hear the legion swarming already...

whats the legion?
*maybe I'm a member of the legion *

Originally Posted by ghazghkull

Nanaho? Unless you're talking about Nanaho Katsuragi the voice actress, I believe you mean Nanoha. instead of Nanaha.

Manga? Are you talking about where you can find it or something?

thx for the hint

[Kagerou]

OH OH KEROKO-KUN.

I VOTE A!!!

We need some YuunoNano up in this piece.

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by Gillian

whats the legion?
*maybe I'm a member of the legion *

Legion is the name given to the rabid N/F fans. the 300 were the Yuunoha fans. but that's all offtopic so anyway...

Keroko, I hope you update this a lot I'm really looking forward to all the new ideas and stuff you're bringing. Already I respect your courage for many characters. I could barely handle my top three >.< Best of luck

edit:SbtB update
length:4.7k words
status:90% complete

O.< wrote fast this time.

fun fact: Fate makes a face like she does in my avatar in this chapter XD

edit x2:
SbtB chapter XI
status: Complete, pending spell check and revisions
ETA: tomorrow

[Krinen]

My god. They started another without me!

In that case; B for Raising Heart.

[Gillian]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Legion is the name given to the rabid N/F fans. the 300 were the Yuunoha fans. but that's all offtopic so anyway...

thx for the info
*goes to the legion section*

Originally Posted by Satashi

fun fact: Fate makes a face like she does in my avatar in this chapter XD

I'm looking forward to it

Originally Posted by Satashi

edit x2:
SbtB chapter XI
status: Complete, pending spell check and revisions
ETA: tomorrow

very mean

[FlareKnight]

Originally Posted by Krinen

My god. They started another without me!

I know how you feel. Not being alerted sooner is just wrong .

Will give Chrono some support with C.

[Satashi]

Saved by the Bell XI
Length: 7,244 words
Status: 100% done
Post time: Monday afternoon.

[Liingo]

Looks good Satashi. I'll read it at the same time I do chapter 10....

Keroko, nice stuff XD.

I'll put a vote down for A (Raising Heart)

[Keroko]

Curent vote tally:

A IIIII
B IIIIII
C I

Chrono gets no love. close match between Yuuno and Hayate, though. I'll leave the votes open for just a while longer.

[Kimmie-chan]

Just your luker here ^^ seeing how the voting's really close and I really want to see something between Hayate and Nanoha, thought I'd vote up.

I vote B for Raising Heart

[Master Kosa]

vote B, wanna see Nanoha x Hayate

[Keroko]

*notes* more votes for Hayate, check.

Dang, Satashi was right, this really is a good way to lure out the lurkers.

Originally Posted by Satashi

Keroko, I hope you update this a lot I'm really looking forward to all the new ideas and stuff you're bringing. Already I respect your courage for many characters. I could barely handle my top three >.< Best of luck

If there is one thing I learned, is that the best way to get better at something you want to learn is to make it hard for yourself. I'm not at all experienced at writing romance (one of the reasons I started this was to practice) and by including lots of potentional characters, I force myself to keep everything in mind. I mean, if people vote in the right way for specific characters, then even characters such as Shari, Arf, the Lieze twins or even Graham can be unlocked.