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Old 2008-02-15, 02:30   Link #19761
LoweGear
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I've stopped writing for a loooooooooo~ng time, so a refreshment of sorts.

Spoiler for Blank of 6 Months : Pilot Prologue:


Some things didn't work out like I wanted, so there might be changes.
So nothing much happens here asides from the usual EPICNESS that Nighty brings even in these kinds of introspective stories. Aaah it has been missed indeed

This chapter seems like a prelude or prologue to a much larger story, so I'll see how it sets up

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*Facepalms*

While I agree the Astray Girls deserved better, but...BEKLARANGERS?!!! What is this? Mahou Sentai, Belkarangers or something?!!!!!! XD
Asagi: EXACTLY THE POINT!!!!

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Almaria: C-creator-san! W-what’s happening to you?!
Your creator-san is turning to the Dark Side more and more

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Approved. :3 Why? Look below.

Spoiler for AURION?!:


Aurion: Kurashi no naka ni shugyō ari. (There is training in one's livelyhood.)

{And it holds true.}

*sees Asagi and the Belkarangers*

OSHI-!

*RUNS!!!*


First, Aurion naturally snares Asagi with his Boukenred impression... now he's got Mayura's utmost attention with Sha Fu

Mayura: Sensei!

Next thing you know, Aurion does a Shaider or Shurikenger to catch Julie

*watches Belkarangers chase after Aurion*

On the bright side, at least you have girls after Aurion who's NOT out to kill him

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Originally Posted by Aaron008R
Give Hayate some proper love on her profile later… OR ELSE…

*coughs* >.>
I concur with this statement

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Originally Posted by Aaron008R
Actually, I’m doing something toabout Hayate now.()
... and Aaron's descent into the Dark Side continues ever slowly

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Originally Posted by Aaron008R
No, no! He just had a super-handy hammerspace briefcase that had EVERYTHING from ladders, food, bikes and even airplanes!!!
Someone rip this idea now...

Although asides from Airplanes, I think Kay and Jeno already have something similar

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Originally Posted by Aaron008R
Don’t let it get to ya! I don’t have a date as well, so were all on the same boat!



……

………

<sigh>……. >.>
*pats Aaron's back*

Pare pareho lang tayo pre'

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Originally Posted by Aaron008R
*sweatdrops* >_<;

First, in the Fanfic thread with Chaos, now in the OC thread with Kha… You’re sure getting into this Trap Business, huh, Keroko?
If this goes on, the term Keroko-chan will refer to the poster as well

*runs*

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Originally Posted by Aaron008R
And here's Aurion's combat capability assessment.

Going along the lines of HAXX that is not HAXX, I present you....

Spoiler for LONG:


Hopefully, it'll come thru as acceptable. I lowered his stamina further and batted off some more unacceptable capabilities. And I also made sure to properly cite the limitations of each aspect. So, how is it?
How is it? It's BRILLIANT, as expected, covers all of the relevant points, and truly puts Aurion at the top of his game

Although this line I think sums up Aurion's entire style for me:

"is not afraid to play dirty as well"

Especially in regards to binds

*runs*

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Originally Posted by Kagerou View Post
Spoiler for Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha Alpha, Scene V:
Is Keroko fighting... ZERG?!?!?!

This fight is EPIC Though Keroko's last act reminds me of the Space Marines defeat in Dark Crusade

MOAR PLEASE!

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Originally Posted by FieryAeon View Post
Guess I need to start watching Aria myself.


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Originally Posted by FieryAeon
Right! Why didn't anyone ever thought of porting them over anyway?
Port them over then

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Technically he isn't my master, since he never shares his knowledge with me.
Even if you don't admit it, his influence is insidious

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Originally Posted by FieryAeon
He did once, to alternate different siggy versions of Spica.
Aaah those sigs I did for him

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Originally Posted by FieryAeon
So they're a LL recovery team? Belka-backers! Never mind...
In a sense, that's how the real SGS does it

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Originally Posted by FieryAeon
Well yes, it isn't. Its just given the funny eye thats all.
Funny eyes that can't get enough of the scene

*runs*

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Originally Posted by FieryAeon
Ahh....pray tell why are they only wearing the bare minimum down there? *cough*
Because this amounts to essentially their Barrier Jacket underwear?

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Originally Posted by Aaron008R
Aren't all of us? The sekuhara part made Aurion who he is after all. JK
Truth

*runs*
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Old 2008-02-15, 02:36   Link #19762
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I like this idea! I'll add it to Subaru's pre-completion data.
Because only i can do a trick in which her IS can activate fully without any berserk effects...

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Thomas Kluize pulls an eyelid at Andrei.

Hey wait a minute! I just realized something!

Initials of Tom Kluize is TK!

TK is our most h4xx'd h4xxbuster!

Therefore, TK is Thomas Kluize!

*RUNS*
Alicia Florence Testarossa: Ara ara... *giggles* Kha-kunnn...

*shadow of an oar appears behind her*

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Canoness: (rubs her hand clean after smacking Ryand) You called?
Natsuki: The Inquisition may have fallen apart, but the Convent remains standing.
Sophia: What's everyone doing here all lined up nicely...?

Adeptae Belkarum is the OC equivalent of the Adepta.

*runs*
They have been waiting for you... please entertain them...

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Yes Pleas-

*dodges Anita's paper knives*

When the *dodges* paper *dodges* masters *dodges* stop... *gets hit by Maggie's familiar*

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I don't think that's gonna help much
just the a thought...

next thing you know a superweapon even more powerful than Throne Ein with a GN cannon is already orbiting space...



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Actually... Yes he does

Which'll interact with his intelligent Device Dynames voiced by Donna Burke
THAT DOES NOT COMPUTE

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Yes, her divinity is a mystery mere mortals like us cannot possibly comprehend...

*praises Golden Alicia*





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*plays catchy GunxSword theme*
You know what that brings, right Lowe?

Claw Man: Yes... Very good... Very Good...

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@ Saint X. Ignore it. I probably deleted the wrong tag when working on the texts.
Noted

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Now, about those marines... if someone makes them, we need a Solid Snake.

Spoiler for SNAAAKE!!! -AAAAKE-AAAKE...:


-CACKLE-

There's no place he can't sneak into.
first thing that i thought was THIS

Note: please give thanks to the creator-san of this work as well...

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Originally Posted by LoweGear View Post
I'd like to see how much of a role Alicia T. will be playing in Rebuilt

But... me and Saint X were talking about The Goddess of the Neo-Venezian waterways, the White Fairy, Snow White, hailing from Aqua, aka the planet formerly known as Mars...

ALICIA FLORENCE

Spoiler for Behold!:
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Originally Posted by LoweGear View Post
You need to watch Aria to see more of her

I can give you her protege though, and main character Mizunashi Akari

Spoiler for Hohe!:
All Hail ALICIA-SAMA



ALL HAIL AKARI-SAMA




Creator-Kun: Original HQ source NAO

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Originally Posted by LoweGear View Post
Wake Up, Dann

*runs*

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She's from the Aria series, currently in its 3rd season, and one of the main characters, along with the 5 others you'll see in my sigs

And... do I need to tell you to watch it?
GEASS them, My Lord...

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Originally Posted by Erio View Post
Also the new attacks are BTW, just wondering, why "Cat One ~ Five"? Are those a reference for something?
You mean...

Spoiler for THIS is CAT-5?:


LART SHELTER HOOOOOOO~ *runs*

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Originally Posted by Erio View Post
Nice!

I had actually been planning to watch Aria for some time, especially since I had the chance to visit Venice. Too bad, though, that the gondoliers were not as HAWT and SEXY as Aria's...

*runs*
IT IS THE ABSOLUTE TRUTH...

*rows fast*

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Originally Posted by LoweGear View Post


Wow, ever since Aria I've had this desire to go to Venice... didn't know you already had

Although unfortunately Venice's water guides are all male, nothing like the wonderful and sexy Undines of Neo-Venezia



*rows faster*
IT IS THE ABSOLUTE TRUTH...

*rows faster*

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Originally Posted by USB500 View Post
This reminds me to watch Aria the Animation. >___<
WE COMMAND YOU TO WATCH IT... NAO

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Originally Posted by USB500 View Post
Wow, you did go to Venice. Wish I could go overseas as well.
Woe those with light pockets....

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Originally Posted by USB500 View Post
Yeah, all gondoliers need to be as HAWT and SEXY as Aria's...

*RUNS REALLY FAST*

IT IS THE ABSOLUTE TRUTH...

"Jump into my Gondola, Quick!!!"

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The Power of Suteki compels you
The Power of Suteki, Kinshi and Dekkai compels you
The Power of Suteki, Kinshi and Dekkai compels you
The Power of Suteki, Kinshi and Dekkai compels you
The Power of Suteki, Kinshi and Dekkai compels you
The Power of Suteki, Kinshi and Dekkai compels you
The Power of Suteki, Kinshi and Dekkai compels you
The Power of Suteki, Kinshi and Dekkai compels you

===

Currently working on Bridget and her involvement in Kha's Rebuilt- probably as a practical demonstration on Dei-Type magic... and maybe score a couple of Number kills as well...

"We need to get out of the building!!"

"But how?"

"We have to fight them if needed..."
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Old 2008-02-15, 03:25   Link #19763
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"We've seen tiberium, blight, creep, bluecheesium..." Taiyo poked the fungus-like goo that seemed to carpet every inch of terrain around the pod's landing site right up to the horizon. And some of the green gum clung to the blunt end of his long scythe. "But what in Seiou's name is this?"

"I think I know, and I don't like any bit of it." Gimmy snarked a reply, both tonfas in Revolver mode already at hand.

"Why don't you ask the welcoming party?" Foy said next, VF5 to his shoulder and laser-pointing from one creature to another as they emerged from the creepy goo. They as in humanoid creatures with really really bad plastic surgery done. And like Keroko had mentioned before ComOps lost contact with her, something clearly had busted out of their thorax. Even the silent Hiro stopped to gaze into the eye-like glints peeping from within the aliens.

Gimmy took one look then kicked his head back and groaned audibly. "Oh hell no, what are you guys doing here in a Yellow Zone?!"

The leader reared up for a resounding roar.

"EHK! WRONG ANSWER!"

A pistol shot from Gimmy's black Night cleaned the creature's clock for it midway, unleashing a ripple over the creatures as they all pounced together.

But as Grey Knights Cleric-knights, these guys were easy-pie.

"Yui Hiro, commencing backlog purification..."


~~~~~~

Sorry Kagerou, I had to start off like this. Really great work you got there!

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*staggers in with an old raggedy cloak and leaning on a old wooden staff*

Much activity this past two days and I can see the the thread's plenty healthy with new crack and ideas being injected in. Though frankly, I'm much too tired to comment on the new stuff but rest assured I have read(or going to read) them all. That said, let me rest.

*falls over dead from Triple All-Nighter Breaker*
Oh poor you... Take care and we'll see ya tmr!

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Originally Posted by USB500 View Post
You just made me go and cry hotblooded tears of manliness at this Fate remake.

TADASHI!!

Did I just see the infamous ZXO Sword???? In before....

HISSATSU!!!!

TENJOU TENGA!!! N***** M**** KEN!!!!



This reminds me to do remake as well, although...

*imagination goes wild over Signum Loveless remake*



I leave it to you, Kha.

*runs*
A little too much remade here...

But yeah I jumped on the ZXO pronto. :3

Yeah you'll love Signum less.

*runs*

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Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen View Post
On the bright side, at least I won't be TOO alone tonight...


... Wanna make our characters do something awkward for this day ?
1. Tsundere's in Switzerland, and I discovered that wintry cloud actually makes them more dere than usual.

2. No I'm busy working on Fate and Signum...

...

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Originally Posted by AdmiralTigerclaw View Post
Now, about those marines... if someone makes them, we need a Solid Snake.

Spoiler for SNAAAKE!!! -AAAAKE-AAAKE...:


-CACKLE-

There's no place he can't sneak into.
Graham was once the Snake. :3

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Originally Posted by LoweGear View Post
Why not? Asagi is IN CHARGE of the construction...

Asagi: Would you like hidden hatches with that? Secret entrances maybe? Long conveyor corridors with internal wall lighting? I can also do hydraulically transforming hallways and rooms... How about a rotating hangar bay, or retractable launch runway by the waterfront? Or maybe...

Hayate: I think regular would be fine
It perfectly fits the crack I'm working on then!

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Originally Posted by LoweGear View Post
[Sure Nanoha, Sure Nanoha]

:eyspin:

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Originally Posted by LoweGear View Post
I'd like to see how much of a role Alicia T. will be playing in Rebuilt

But... me and Saint X were talking about The Goddess of the Neo-Venezian waterways, the White Fairy, Snow White, hailing from Aqua, aka the planet formerly known as Mars...

ALICIA FLORENCE

Spoiler for Behold!:


Ah... Kk... Which anime is she from?

And you'll be surprised who Alicia plays as. :3

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Originally Posted by LoweGear View Post
Just have Regius as Regius, then we can have the Thrones sic him with no ill feelings
I'd gladly sic everything on him!

But a little crack for Rebuilt, this is Rebuilt of Regius:
Spoiler for Rebuilt of WHAAAA---?!:
I wonder... Does Zest being obsessed with muscles seem to have any surprise now?

*runs*
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NOT THAT!
HAI!

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Originally Posted by LoweGear View Post
...

Der Kleriker has been identified as a source of conflict.

Beginning intervention.

Mai Enna, exterminating target.


*Mai pwns Kha for 9999999 damage*
I think I now have a negative lifespan...

*runs back to claim corpse again*

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Originally Posted by LoweGear View Post
He should just think he's... unique
Guys remember Skane's winner about Fate feeling like she was the odd one out? :3

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Originally Posted by LoweGear View Post
That's... quite the change
I think I got it, but I don't quite get it...

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Originally Posted by LoweGear View Post
...



Take note Setsuna F. Seiei, THAT's how you use SEVEN SWORDS
That'll be H4XX if Hiro can pull something like that off now! But give him a few years... :3

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MUCH APPROVED WINNER!!!!!!!!!!!



I'm sure Papa Testarossa is going to be proud...

*cries manly tears*

And nice explanation for why we haven't seen Arf out of being loli for the while now

More Rebuilts please
I'll be improving on Fate, and I'm working on Signum later, but I guess you guys notice a pattern now... :3

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Originally Posted by LoweGear View Post


Yes, we're waiting for Rebuilt of Lamia Signum

*runs*
Thanks for waiting! I'll be done soon! :3

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....drills that pierce their heavens?
Well um...

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To be honest, until Alpha came about, I just couldn't see any reason for the TSAB to have Marines. COIN operations in Iraq notwithstanding, Marines are basically used to hit hard and fast, deploying from sea as an invasion force, storming the beachheads (or flying past the beachheads and landing en masse) and kicking ass, blowing up crap, and taking names.

Let me put it this way: Marines, especially US Marines, are concentrated badass.

Enforcers.... not so.

Frankly, Marines are anathema to the TSAB's policy. COIN in Iraq to the contrary, you don't use Marines for soft operations, you use them to kick doors down, shoot crap, and kill people. (although Army officers are surprised and amazed at how good the Marines in Iraq are at COIN, which was never a part of Marine syllabus.)

...but if you want to make them, go right ahead. Just remember that they'll be viewed with much WTF since they're shock troops. (Also, Marines tend to emphasise speed over armor/firepower. Marines will drop armor and go for speed and firepower.) That means plenty of movement, supression fire...

When Kagerou and I reveal our version of the TSAB Marines, the TSAB will be screaming bloody murder, because the Marines are pissing all over the Air Force and Army.

Especially since TSAB Marines won't exist for quite a while.
Oh so they are gonna be a new force? I think that's really possible, especially after having a dramatic change of leadership.

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Well, she was still trying to arrest them. "You're under arrest for magical discharge etc etc."

Franz/Ivanovich/Chief: *snipes Quattro & Deici*
I know. I thought it was just Fate. I'd imagine Chrono or Graham doing just that.

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Originally Posted by Wild Goose View Post
Great crack. Overload. Will comment tomorrow. Too tired.

But...jesus, Kha, there's so much Zengar there. *shakes head* Although I loled at the tongue in cheek descriptions of the Catagories of Tatsumaki Zanber. (Tatsumaki is Tornado. Unless you deliberately wanted Hurricane instead.)
Yes I chose Hurricane over Tornado if only because I could scale it using the ranking system the US Meteorology use for hurricanes.

Besides, Riot Zamber II is now called Tornado Zamber, as if Fate were to fully utilize this Zamber form, it being a pair of really cool sword-chucks made me realize Fate is gonna do lots of spinning, and Tornado fits perfectly.

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Originally Posted by Wild Goose View Post
Or to put things into context/perspective: When Yuuno is in the Infinity Library, he's the Chief Librarian. But outside, when discussing/lecturing on archaeology, he's Professor Scrya.
Ah kk. Let's have the Infinite Library as a Charter on its own?

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Originally Posted by Erio View Post
And I thought you already ported the entire 00 cast... at least we got Lockon.
No I only got Setsuna, the rest were from other mecha series altogether. And yeah good choice on "Lockon". Now Lockon Stratos is gonna have lots to say to his friend like:

Dynames: (shoots down last target with hand gun then looks to Neil) "Nice gun."

(the Grade Meister flies off)


Neil: (watches him go) Thanks...

Kudos to those who knows where that comes from.
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lol I thought you'd say that. If you want to give them frames, go ahead. I am not good at creating that kinda thing, so they are all up to you.
It'll look like SEED then...

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Originally Posted by Erio View Post
So now even Shinnji will make an appearance...

Haha, I guess we do have to create this second gen ERWs now...
Well if the 2nd gen appears, so will Shinnji.

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Originally Posted by Erio View Post
And so, the KhaXSophia timeline has finally been created... Who's gonna die in this one?

*runs*


Well, Yuuno actually, when you unlock the Nice Boat ending.

*runs*

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Originally Posted by Erio View Post
I forgot Kha had boomerang blades, but they are a nice ranged alternative for him.
That and a bow to shoot Traces with. I'm shifting Kha away from a lot of unique spells to only a handful, having a mountain of copied spells (even the Libram was copied) then rely on a lot of gadgets.

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Originally Posted by Erio View Post
Gotta give Teana some love.

But who are you referring to as "Gakis"?
Neil and the other competitor?

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Originally Posted by Erio View Post
Why does this bit here remind me of Sakuya from Hayate no Gotoku?
Because... it is her?

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Originally Posted by FieryAeon View Post
There'll be the Number VII flirt, and the Number X trap. Then also the Number I onee-sama.
Tre and Sette are a lot more open about their relationship in Rebuilt, something like Shizuru and Natsuki Otome that is.

And yeah this time I'm making Otto a lot more obviously a Trap.

But Uno...? Given the new crack, I'd doubt that could survive...

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Actually, the reasoning is if you have a gun that doesn't need reloads, that'd be haxxed. I don't think Gimmy's device is under the same category.
Well the idea for black and white tonfas were because of Ebony and Ivory, so that's why I thought having no reload except for spinning the drum was fitting.

Then again, if they needed to reload, then I could throw in a nifting reloading clip.

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Originally Posted by FieryAeon View Post
Next episode as in episode 19? I'm only up to 17 really.
Yeah.

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Originally Posted by FieryAeon View Post
You know we Chinese like to use the term "muddying the waters"? Yeah throwing irregulars into an equation does that.
I like how that sounds.

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I'd actually like to see more appearances then. And Shizuru as well, just not the Mai Hime version.
Oh definitely. Just need to find screentime. :3

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Sophia is based on Rin, no? Actually its my believe that many people misunderstand Rin as being bipolar, as in a tsundere. But anyway, I see Sophia giving the person the 1000 harisen hit treatment rather than lay there going all dere-dere.

Well, its your OC though so you know best. Just thinking out loud.
Indeed. It was that link, and several more, and of course Kyou being subjected to the same magical girl transformation as Tohsaka to Kaleido-ruby cemented the crack that Tohsaka=Kyou=Sophia.

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Your life expentancy just got lower.
It's already negative, and now I'm going by average repair costs.

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One can't forget the scene where she defeated many with her violin. "Her weapon is the violin. It takes 0.2 seconds to propagate, and has defeated many."
That was just awesome too.

[QUOTE=FieryAeon;1398789]Think of yourself as the normal one, you'll feel better. /quote]

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Firstly, the GAR part feels...unnecessary. I like Bardiche the way he/it is.

Reality marble again?

Armor Slave? The kind of slave from Otome? =O
1. Ok I'll drop that. Can't we live with some Kyosuke Nanbu-ism though...?

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Kha
Spoiler for Cleaved!:


You have given me a morning of GAR, Guts, and hotblood for the last, 3 days now? I mean, its like a breakfast of Champion*is shot by lawyer*. JHow long untill Rebuild 1, 3 years shakes fist at Ganiax Ginga, at least in my story, is more based on Getter Robo/early GGG, but I'm saving the hotblooded fights for later. Now for Arado... Oh what would a bunch of girls do to a captured guy...

runs into VF-111


Well lets see how this crack goes.

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All the OCs?! DO WANT!!
No time, no ideas, and Keroko is doing one already so I'm leaving it to her.

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Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki View Post
...FATE-CHAN!!
And sword-chucks FTW
Sou ne? Deshou ne?

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Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki View Post
Absolutely nothing wrong with that...nothing at all...

*cough*
()

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Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki View Post
*sulks on chair playing WoW late into the night...*
Isn't that the best thing in the world? Why sulk?

Of course, having a girlfriend that understands the need for you to raid and even celebrates your uber drop win is priceless.

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.... Explain. Now.
Really. Random. Crack. That will never make the final cut so rest easy. ...

...Don't blast me please... I'm wearing PLATE. I've been running low on gold from all the repair costs.

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I'll just wait for the PM before crying havoc, then.
I'm getting a little dizzy too. Need to iron things out, but at least I got like more than half a year for development and plot before all the hardcore action and fanservice kick in.

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You mean apart from the fact that Quint didn't know that Ginga and Subaru were based of her genetic data? Or the fact that Jail knew next to nothing about Type-0?
I didn't know that Quint didn't know that the sisters were based off her DNA! Where was this mentioned?

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But... but... The drill is what made Ginga unique!
...Quite true... Hmm...

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*sweet face* You called?


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The most confusing part for me was that from reading the profile, it had seemingly been redirected towards Artei.
Well no, Teana is still adolent to Keroko, except maybe there's Neil in the equation now.

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Originally Posted by Keroko View Post
You tried, and you failed.

But... easy of on the Zengar, please? I mean... her background is great, but once we get to the spells, we get Bardiche going 'chestooo' which is just wrong on so many levels. The whole connection to Wodan makes me twitch, and Fate and Arf climbing any conveniently placed high spot gives me Amelia vibes.
Going easy on the Zengar I will. But Wodan is Zone in Rebuilt anyway, so I don't see the problem there...

Amelia?

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Originally Posted by Nightengale View Post
I've stopped writing for a loooooooooo~ng time, so a refreshment of sorts.

Spoiler for Blank of 6 Months : Pilot Prologue:


Some things didn't work out like I wanted, so there might be changes.
It's still good, and I like how things fit in better than I could've ever done. I forgot that Megane had to be exiled, and I still dunno why... until now.

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Originally Posted by ghazghkull View Post
*Facepalms*

While I agree the Astray Girls deserved better, but...BEKLARANGERS?!!! What is this? Mahou Sentai, Belkarangers or something?!!!!!! XD
You missed quite a bit, my friend.

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Almaria: C-creator-san! W-what’s happening to you?!
Kha, Lowe, Nighty wearing evil grins in the background.

Aaron008R: (holds face) What's happening to me! I'm not like this!



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Originally Posted by Aaron008R View Post
Ohoh? Do we get to see Aurion as a teacher then? Ala-Takahata?
Hell yes. OMFG that computes like crazy!!!

Keroko you read this?

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NO! JUST NO!!!
TOUSEN DA!!!

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Well, that scene finally clinched Kyou’s (who was really starting to REALLY grow on me) higher ranking compared to Ryou in my list.
Ryou has been rather low for me... I guess these kind of girls aren't my type.

[QUOTE=Aaron008R;1399962]She still ranks number one in the CLANNAD MOE! Meter for me too![/qutoe]

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The pains of being normal…
Fate:

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Approved. :3 Why? Look below.

Spoiler for AURION?!:


Aurion: Kurashi no naka ni shugyō ari. (There is training in one's livelyhood.)

{And it holds true.}

*sees Asagi and the Belkarangers*

OSHI-!

*RUNS!!!*
Mariel: Nice choice of disguise, Sempai.

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Oh dear… Here we go…

*facepalm at the Sanger references* -_-



Anyway, I did like how this was done compared to even Teana’s. It’s quite obvious that your love has been infused with this profile a lot more compared to others. And the plight of Asian women to be personified here will be much appreciated.

Give Hayate some proper love on her profile later… OR ELSE…

*coughs* >.>

But REALLY, do you need that Tatsumaki Zamberto?! And Donna burke doing a Haro computes a helluva lot more than a GARlock Bardiche…-_-;
Okok I'm dropping GARLock Bard...

ANd yeah Hayate's gonna get a real good licking over...

...wait.

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What’sa happening to meh?!
Join us...

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And here's Aurion's combat capability assessment.

Going along the lines of HAXX that is not HAXX, I present you....

Spoiler for LONG:


Hopefully, it'll come thru as acceptable. I lowered his stamina further and batted off some more unacceptable capabilities. And I also made sure to properly cite the limitations of each aspect. So, how is it?
Whiffy.

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Hmm, delicious Nighty writing *eats*.
I like it, at any rate; looks like a good beginning to me

RADIO EDIT: Finished Scene V. Keroko's introduction and pwnage/pwnd. Hope you all enjoy (insert obligatory question to Keroko-kun here if I got her character right).

Spoiler for Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha Alpha, Scene V:


Wow the awesome that has been appearing in this thread is just off the charts! I really felt for Keroko there, and even kicked off my own crack spinoff!

Thanks for the good work! I must measure up! ...

Somehow.

Working on Fate's profile now, will post the updates later.
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Question from left field I need some help with.

What was the medical name for the temporary effect of a shockwave on a person's hearing and equalibrium?

The symptoms are temporary loss of hearing (asside from being able to hear your heartbeat), confusion, and dizzyness associated with having a massive rush of air slam down your inner ear.

Usually the kind of momentary side effect you'd get if you were dumb enough to stand next to an M1A1 Abrams without hearing protection when someone decided to fire it's 120 milimeter cannon.

EDIT:

Never Mind, Found it searching through hearing protection.

It is 'Tinnitus'.

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Approved. :3 Why? Look below.

Spoiler for AURION?!:


Aurion: Kurashi no naka ni shugyō ari. (There is training in one's livelyhood.)

{And it holds true.}

*sees Asagi and the Belkarangers*

OSHI-!

*RUNS!!!*





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*sweatdrops* >_<;

First, in the Fanfic thread with Chaos, now in the OC thread with Kha… You’re sure getting into this Trap Business, huh, Keroko?
In other words, stop it.


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I've stopped writing for a loooooooooo~ng time, so a refreshment of sorts.

Spoiler for Blank of 6 Months : Pilot Prologue:


Some things didn't work out like I wanted, so there might be changes.


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You mean...

Spoiler for THIS is CAT-5?:


LART SHELTER HOOOOOOO~ *runs*

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The Power of Suteki, Kinshi and Dekkai compels you
The Power of Suteki, Kinshi and Dekkai compels you
The Power of Suteki, Kinshi and Dekkai compels you
The Power of Suteki, Kinshi and Dekkai compels you
The Power of Suteki, Kinshi and Dekkai compels you
The Power of Suteki, Kinshi and Dekkai compels you
The Power of Suteki, Kinshi and Dekkai compels you
It's compelling me!

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Yeah you'll love Signum less.

*runs*
Indeed!

*runs*

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2. No I'm busy working on Fate and Signum...
HELL YES!!

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Well, Yuuno actually, when you unlock the Nice Boat ending.

*runs*
what?????

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Question from left field I need some help with.

What was the medical name for the temporary effect of a shockwave on a person's hearing and equalibrium?

The symptoms are temporary loss of hearing (asside from being able to hear your heartbeat), confusion, and dizzyness associated with having a massive rush of air slam down your inner ear.

Usually the kind of momentary side effect you'd get if you were dumb enough to stand next to an M1A1 Abrams without hearing protection when someone decided to fire it's 120 milimeter cannon.
I think its called shell shock or auditory trauma. But I'm more sure of the latter bit more than the later one...


@Lowe: I believe though things were the Flood. I do hope Keroko is alright. The junior Knights don't show it, but they, as the best Daemonjaegers available at that time, were drop-podded in all at once, and that means Kha's (and me) really worried.


@Kagerou: Its just me running on inspired crack to kick off my backlog busting, so don't have to make changes to your continuum to accomodate the gray Knights' appearance.


@Erio: Er... No one knows for sure if Kha and Fate are married officially... yet.


~~~New intelligence data updated~~~

Fate's profile has been updated! Click here for more info.

A quick look at the changelog:

Spoiler for Fate awesomeness:
Any other issues to point out?

Library closing! BRB in a while!
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When the *dodges* paper *dodges* masters *dodges* stop... *gets hit by Maggie's familiar*
That's gotta hur-

*gets pinned by Michelle's arrows*

Ow


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just the a thought...

next thing you know a superweapon even more powerful than Throne Ein with a GN cannon is already orbiting space...

Won't that already be their GN-Drive equipped mothership?

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You know what that brings, right Lowe?

Claw Man: Yes... Very good... Very Good...
Someone needs to port this man just so we can have a good villain to smackdown

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Creator-Kun: Original HQ source NAO
Those are the only ones I have unfortunately

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The Power of Suteki, Kinshi and Dekkai compels you
The Power of Suteki, Kinshi and Dekkai compels you
The Power of Suteki, Kinshi and Dekkai compels you
The Power of Suteki, Kinshi and Dekkai compels you
The Power of Suteki, Kinshi and Dekkai compels you
The Power of Suteki, Kinshi and Dekkai compels you
The Power of Suteki, Kinshi and Dekkai compels you


Although you're forgetting the power of "Ara ara" and "Suwa!"

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Administrated World 52, Area 51
Operation Devilcore commenced for 5 mins


"We've seen tiberium, blight, creep, bluecheesium..." Taiyo poked the fungus-like goo that seemed to carpet every inch of terrain around the pod's landing site right up to the horizon. And some of the green gum clung to the blunt end of his long scythe. "But what in Seiou's name is this?"

"I think I know, and I don't like any bit of it." Gimmy snarked a reply, both tonfas in Revolver mode already at hand.

"Why don't you ask the welcoming party?" Foy said next, VF5 to his shoulder and laser-pointing from one creature to another as they emerged from the creepy goo. They as in humanoid creatures with really really bad plastic surgery done. And like Keroko had mentioned before ComOps lost contact with her, something clearly had busted out of their thorax. Even the silent Hiro stopped to gaze into the eye-like glints peeping from within the aliens.

Gimmy took one look then kicked his head back and groaned audibly. "Oh hell no, what are you guys doing here in a Yellow Zone?!"

The leader reared up for a resounding roar.

"EHHH, SHAAADDAAAP!"

A pistol shot from Gimmy's black Night cleaned the creature's clock for it midway, unleashing a ripple over the creatures as they all pounced together.

But as Grey Knights Cleric-knights, these guys were easy-pie.

"Yui Hiro, commencing backlog purification..."


I think I'll just post Zone Operations Command on standby just in case

(Yes, C&C3: Kane's Wrath is coming )

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1. Tsundere's in Switzerland, and I discovered that wintry cloud actually makes them more dere than usual.
Yes, European weather does good for any girlfriend

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Graham was once the Snake. :3


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It perfectly fits the crack I'm working on then!
Der Kleriker could approach Colwell Construction Works (CCW) for some... modifications to the basic structure...



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Ah... Kk... Which anime is she from?

And you'll be surprised who Alicia plays as. :3
She's from the Aria series, currently in its third season "the Origination"

And who Alicia plays as?

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I'd gladly sic everything on him!

But a little crack for Rebuilt, this is Rebuilt of Regius:
Spoiler for Rebuilt of WHAAAA---?!:
I wonder... Does Zest being obsessed with muscles seem to have any surprise now?

*runs*



Regius as Zangief DOES NOT COMPUTE... but at the same time, DOES COMPUTE

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I think I now have a negative lifespan...

*runs back to claim corpse again*


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Guys remember Skane's winner about Fate feeling like she was the odd one out? :3
:3

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That'll be H4XX if Hiro can pull something like that off now! But give him a few years... :3
Omnislash ver. Hiro?

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No I only got Setsuna, the rest were from other mecha series altogether. And yeah good choice on "Lockon". Now Lockon Stratos is gonna have lots to say to his friend like:

Dynames: (shoots down last target with hand gun then looks to Neil) "Nice gun."

(the Grade Meister flies off)


Neil: (watches him go) Thanks...

Kudos to those who knows where that comes from.
Somehow, scene doesn't ring a bell

But it sounds awesome

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...Don't blast me please... I'm wearing PLATE. I've been running low on gold from all the repair costs.
Mai: ...

Your fault.

*sharpens chainsaw blades*


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Well no, Teana is still adolent to Keroko, except maybe there's Neil in the equation now.
The idea is, while Teana looks to Keroko as an IDOL, she'll be looking to Neil as a potential love interest

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Kha, Lowe, Nighty wearing evil grins in the background.

Aaron008R: (holds face) What's happening to me! I'm not like this!

*whistles*

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ANd yeah Hayate's gonna get a real good licking over...

...wait.
Yes... a very delicious licking over...

*RUNS*

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Join us...
WE HAVE COOKIES!!!
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Okay, I've skipped ahead of my current chapter to start working on completing the dogfight from the begining.

This is exchange one, I call it the Wakeup Call.

Spoiler for We is awake nao?:


So this is how that sequence is broken down in my head.

The opening strike comes from BANSHEE (Temporary designation for Crash and EDI). Stars and Lightning Units (Nanoha and Fate Respectively, we know this.) Are giving the duo the rookies benifit and not really starting with any seriousness. However, Crash has already clicked into test mode (he's trying to BREAK nanoha and fate, an interesting way to think about his objectives) and has come to the conclusion ahead of time that against ACES, a conventional head on attack will not work.

The offscreen plan that occures right before this sequence is that Crash will provide a distraction while EDI gives the girls a high speed Buzz, keeping his magical weapons offline to keep his stealth profile. Instead, using the rather significant shock force generated by a high mach pass as the method of attack. (A body passing through the air at five times the speed of sound generates a rather nasty concussion wave. Good thing the girls are aces with barriers and barrier jackets, but that won't completely stop something like a SONIC BOOM!

After that, they are pretty much woken up to the fact that this may not be such a simple 'Aces VS Rookies' fight. And the (mock) battle begins in earnest.


Any comments/suggestions? Girls too stationary? Or is their mindset right for the situation here?
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I didn't know that Quint didn't know that the sisters were based off her DNA! Where was this mentioned?
She didn't, at first. It was only after Ginga and Subaru were examined that they confirmed that the sisters were based on her genetic data. That was shown in ep23.
I wonder if that examination was before or after she showed them to Genya?
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Okay, I've skipped ahead of my current chapter to start working on completing the dogfight from the begining.

This is exchange one, I call it the Wakeup Call.

Spoiler for We is awake nao?:


So this is how that sequence is broken down in my head.

The opening strike comes from BANSHEE (Temporary designation for Crash and EDI). Stars and Lightning Units (Nanoha and Fate Respectively, we know this.) Are giving the duo the rookies benifit and not really starting with any seriousness. However, Crash has already clicked into test mode (he's trying to BREAK nanoha and fate, an interesting way to think about his objectives) and has come to the conclusion ahead of time that against ACES, a conventional head on attack will not work.

The offscreen plan that occures right before this sequence is that Crash will provide a distraction while EDI gives the girls a high speed Buzz, keeping his magical weapons offline to keep his stealth profile. Instead, using the rather significant shock force generated by a high mach pass as the method of attack. (A body passing through the air at five times the speed of sound generates a rather nasty concussion wave. Good thing the girls are aces with barriers and barrier jackets, but that won't completely stop something like a SONIC BOOM!

After that, they are pretty much woken up to the fact that this may not be such a simple 'Aces VS Rookies' fight. And the (mock) battle begins in earnest.
Not one to nit much on the basics of combat, and I find the use of air combat terms awesome here Also, nice tactics and maneuvers used (offensive use of Sonic Booms, now that's good use of sound )

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Question to those knowledgeable:

How do you spell "Belka" in japanese text?
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Kanji, Katakana, or Hirigana?
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All three if possible
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I think I'll just post Zone Operations Command on standby just in case

(Yes, C&C3: Kane's Wrath is coming )
indeed.

*deletes junk in HD to make room*

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Der Kleriker could approach Colwell Construction Works (CCW) for some... modifications to the basic structure...

Actually, yeah I believe he did. And Hayate approved it. Which will ultimately save many lives from my Hand of Tomino.

*runs*

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She's from the Aria series, currently in its third season "the Origination"

And who Alicia plays as?
1. I see... Gosh how many episodes have I missed? And why are almost every Alicia character I know have golden hair...?

...are they the same person...?

*runs*

2. Stay tuned.

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Regius as Zangief DOES NOT COMPUTE... but at the same time, DOES COMPUTE
Yeah.

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Omnislash ver. Hiro?
The year is MC 0079.

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Somehow, scene doesn't ring a bell

But it sounds awesome
Spoiler for Batman Begins Spoiler:


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Mai: ...

Your fault.

*sharpens chainsaw blades*
*relocates shoulder*



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The idea is, while Teana looks to Keroko as an IDOL, she'll be looking to Neil as a potential love interest


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Yes... a very delicious licking over...

*RUNS*
Hayate: Aaron-sama~~ Gohan taberu?~~



*RUNS*

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She didn't, at first. It was only after Ginga and Subaru were examined that they confirmed that the sisters were based on her genetic data. That was shown in ep23.

I wonder if that examination was before or after she showed them to Genya?
Good lord, now I don't know...

Looks like Dr Wily did it on his own accord, then after he got busted, Jail came across his Gadgets, and Due the sisters' whereabouts.
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Post song ATM: Dragonforce - Through the Fire and Flames



It's been a while since I last paused, and how here's the thing I've strived to write down (although it came out as less spectacular as I had previousluy expected). Oh, well, it can't be helped, can it?

besides, by the time I finished this, my hands and brain were frozen due to the airconned room.

Spoiler for the end?:


finally acquired SRW Alpha 3 OST & Dragonforce CD. Awesome to the max!
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indeed.

*deletes junk in HD to make room*


*rolls out Shatterers*

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Actually, yeah I believe he did. And Hayate approved it. Which will ultimately save many lives from my Hand of Tomino.

*runs*
Hand... of... Tomino?



*imagines giant hand-shaped building rolling out armies of Ideons*



*ehem*


The problem now is... where'd Kha get the funding?

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1. I see... Gosh how many episodes have I missed? And why are almost every Alicia character I know have golden hair...?

...are they the same person...?

*runs*
12 episodes for the first season "Aria the Animation"
26 episodes for 2nd season "Aria the Natural"
1 episode OVA "Aria the Arietta"

And currently 6 episodes out for 3rd Season "Aria the Origination"

And yes, why do Alicias tend to have golden hair?

Bloodline trait?

*runs*

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The year is MC 0079.
The start of the One Year War?

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Spoiler for Batman Begins Spoiler:
AAAAH THAT SCENE

Now I'd like to see this scene:

Grunt: WHERE ARE YOU?!?!?!
Lockon: Over here




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Hayate: Lowe-sama~~ Gohan taberu?~~



*RUNS*
FIXED

...

...



*headshot >>>> Lowe*

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It's been a while since I last paused, and how here's the thing I've strived to write down (although it came out as less spectacular as I had previousluy expected). Oh, well, it can't be helped, can it?

besides, by the time I finished this, my hands and brain were frozen due to the airconned room.

Spoiler for the end?:


finally acquired SRW Alpha 3 OST & Dragonforce CD. Awesome to the max!
Exceed Mode is not just for show? The White Devil's blood continues to manifest itself more and more every second

And nice, touching resolution for Widuri there

Now where's our after-battle make out scene

*runs*
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It's been a while since I last paused, and how here's the thing I've strived to write down (although it came out as less spectacular as I had previousluy expected). Oh, well, it can't be helped, can it?

besides, by the time I finished this, my hands and brain were frozen due to the airconned room.

Spoiler for the end?:


finally acquired SRW Alpha 3 OST & Dragonforce CD. Awesome to the max!
IT'S SPREADING!!!

EXCEED MODE REALLY IS NOT FOR SHOW!!!

*runs*
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Hand... of... Tomino?



*imagines giant hand-shaped building rolling out armies of Ideons*



*ehem*


The problem now is... where'd Kha get the funding?
Oh t3h H4XX!!!

And funding? You're asking Batman about funding? >_>/<_<

*ahem*

Suffice to say, Kha has enough coming from somewhere...
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12 episodes for the first season "Aria the Animation"
26 episodes for 2nd season "Aria the Natural"
1 episode OVA "Aria the Arietta"

And currently 6 episodes out for 3rd Season "Aria the Origination"

And yes, why do Alicias tend to have golden hair?

Bloodline trait?

*runs*
I hope there are still seeds left.

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The start of the One Year War?
I think that's what Kagerou's after. 8 years after StrikerS is 0079 isn't it?

I need to get the CKs' profiles done fast.

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AAAAH THAT SCENE

Now I'd like to see this scene:

Grunt: WHERE ARE YOU?!?!?!
Lockon: Over here


It's a little hard to get Dynames into melee, but I see in my mind, and I like it.

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FIXED

...

...



*headshot >>>> Lowe*
Hiro: Zero, Gun mode release.

Zero: [Roger.]

Hiro: Intervention complete.

OK... Looks like Mai's interventionist spirit of that nature has rubbed off on someone.

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Exceed Mode is not just for show? The White Devil's blood continues to manifest itself more and more every second

And nice, touching resolution for Widuri there

Now where's our after-battle make out scene

*runs*


*RUNS*
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well, my last reply for today before scramming home. Need to rest my head out. besides with election day coming around the corner-

I better shut myself before the ISA catches me redhanded.

Oh, yeah. Now I finally realized that Touhou is awesome, after testing their doujin fighting game on my friend's laptop. Sakuya is .

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IT'S SPREADING!!!

EXCEED MODE REALLY IS NOT FOR SHOW!!!

*runs*
That's why Nanoha is the White Demon, deshou?

*runs from Nanoha & Amuro*

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Hand... of... Tomino?



*imagines giant hand-shaped building rolling out armies of Ideons*



*ehem*


The problem now is... where'd Kha get the funding?
Tomino? DO NOT WANT D:


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12 episodes for the first season "Aria the Animation"
26 episodes for 2nd season "Aria the Natural"
1 episode OVA "Aria the Arietta"

And currently 6 episodes out for 3rd Season "Aria the Origination"

And yes, why do Alicias tend to have golden hair?

Bloodline trait?

*runs*
Now these make me even more excited to watch Aria series.

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The start of the One Year War?
Then where's Char Quattro?

Oh, wait. Is it the other series?

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AAAAH THAT SCENE

Now I'd like to see this scene:

Grunt: WHERE ARE YOU?!?!?!
Lockon: Over here


I forgot the scene, but I like to see this happening.



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Exceed Mode is not just for show? The White Devil's blood continues to manifest itself more and more every second

And nice, touching resolution for Widuri there

Now where's our after-battle make out scene

*runs*
1: Indeed. Exceed Mode is not just for show. Well, too bad the rest of the casts didn't get their screen time.

2: Oh. You mean this? Shh. There's always the DVD special.

*runs*
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Old 2008-02-15, 06:18   Link #19778
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Not asking you to
Just saying.

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Spoiler for Gundam 00:


Ah. Why am I getting Ruri flashbacks all of a sudden?

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wow...that's utterly cute XD

I'm surprised that I hadn't looked at it until now LOL.

Perchance we can see some more of these...Keroko moments in manga format? LOL XD
Not sure, this one came together just fine, and was made before Keroko 'apeared' in StrikerS through Vivio (hence why she looks more Nanoha-like then most of my other art). And Vivio 4koma art is rare.

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*Ryotaro is sent flying*

Mayura: I thought you'd dodge that
Oh come on, this is Ryotaro we're talking about.

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In terms of name, yes I based off the Astray Girls from SEED, just because they deserved better

And these will be my Super-Sentai Inspired female trio the Belkarangers
The images, though, where do they come from?

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I've stopped writing for a loooooooooo~ng time, so a refreshment of sorts.

Spoiler for Blank of 6 Months : Pilot Prologue:


Some things didn't work out like I wanted, so there might be changes.
Hmm, hmm, nice little reflection. Isedra's part was the biggest surprise. The explanation for Lutecia's banishment was kinda lame though.

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Ohoh? Do we get to see Aurion as a teacher then? Ala-Takahata?
If Kha's verson is indeed mostly paralel to mine, then yes we will. We've compared him to Takahata too often not to do so. I was thinking sience or math teacher, what about you?
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*sweatdrops* >_<;

First, in the Fanfic thread with Chaos, now in the OC thread with Kha… You’re sure getting into this Trap Business, huh, Keroko?
Hmm

Never has that emote been more apropriate.


Maybe I should edit my profile too, and have people wonder and wonder untill they finally decide to ask.

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Spoiler for LONG:


Hopefully, it'll come thru as acceptable. I lowered his stamina further and batted off some more unacceptable capabilities. And I also made sure to properly cite the limitations of each aspect. So, how is it?
'While not an outright tactical genius, Aurion is actually on par with those like Tesla in tactical abillity' A bit of a paradox, concidering Tesla is a tactical genius.

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RADIO EDIT: Finished Scene V. Keroko's introduction and pwnage/pwnd. Hope you all enjoy (insert obligatory question to Keroko-kun here if I got her character right).

Spoiler for Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha Alpha, Scene V:
The only thing that really glared at me was Keroko calling Yuuno 'Scrya' Keroko is on the same level of friendship as Nanoha with him.

On the subject of Orbital Bombardement, I feel a little more in-dept explanation is long due. the spell's apearrance could be described similar to a low-powered but faster Hraesvelgr. A large magical cirle apears in front of Keroko, with six slightly smaller circles around it. Magical beams then form on the edge of the circles, and fire. When firing, the beams follow the circle's pattern, giving it somewhat of a resemblanse to a lot of gattling guns firing at a slow rate. The area of effect is dependant on the height of which the attack is fired. The higher it is, the wider the area of effect.

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Hmm...though you have to admit Aurion and Takahata are quite different. Their personality fits though.
They both share the easy going nature, and the oji-chan attitude though.

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Aren't all of us? The sekuhara part made Aurion who he is after all. JK

Will read the rest later, hopefully I can find a bit of free time in the office.
Not me, I like his Oji-chan part more.

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If this goes on, the term Keroko-chan will refer to the poster as well

*runs*
<--- wouldn't mind if not for the confusion it'd cause.

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Is Keroko fighting... ZERG?!?!?!
Again. Yes. She's somewhat of a bug magnet (Zerg, Scrin, Tyranids)

Keroko-chan:
Why am I a bug magnet!?

Coincidentally, in her last fight with the Tyranids she also suffered heavy injuries.

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This fight is EPIC Though Keroko's last act reminds me of the Space Marines defeat in Dark Crusade
You too huh?

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But a little crack for Rebuilt, this is Rebuilt of Regius:
Spoiler for Rebuilt of WHAAAA---?!:
.... That scarilly computes.

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Really. Random. Crack. That will never make the final cut so rest easy. ...

...Don't blast me please... I'm wearing PLATE. I've been running low on gold from all the repair costs.
Right, right, just don't let it get beyond crack.

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I'm getting a little dizzy too. Need to iron things out, but at least I got like more than half a year for development and plot before all the hardcore action and fanservice kick in.
Just let go of any crack that doesn't make sense. You'd be surprised how much that makes a difference.

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I didn't know that Quint didn't know that the sisters were based off her DNA! Where was this mentioned?
Episode 23.

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Well no, Teana is still adolent to Keroko, except maybe there's Neil in the equation now.
Simpelest answer would be two idols. *shrug*

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Going easy on the Zengar I will. But Wodan is Zone in Rebuilt anyway, so I don't see the problem there...
The problem is Fate having them, and executing them exactly thus.

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Amelia?
Amelia Wil Tesla Seyruun, a hero obsessed girl who often climbs high places in order to make 'heroic entrees'

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It's still good, and I like how things fit in better than I could've ever done. I forgot that Megane had to be exiled, and I still dunno why... until now.
I always prefer to think that they combined the need for both of them to recover (Lutecia was tampered with, and Megane needed to recover for obvious reasons) and examine them.

Funny thing though, why would they send Lutecia to an, according to Yesy, uninhabited planet for examination and care? Either way, this does not make sense, so I'm willing to call translation flaw (or Seven Arcs) on this one.

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Hell yes. OMFG that computes like crazy!!!

Keroko you read this?
I read, I read.

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In other words, stop it.
One of the main rules with traps you should remember is that they don't just 'stop' being traps, because to stop being a trap would mean changing who they are.

So no, I'm not going to stop.

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She didn't, at first. It was only after Ginga and Subaru were examined that they confirmed that the sisters were based on her genetic data. That was shown in ep23.
I wonder if that examination was before or after she showed them to Genya?
Well, they already live with Quint and Genya, so I'd say after.

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It's been a while since I last paused, and how here's the thing I've strived to write down (although it came out as less spectacular as I had previousluy expected). Oh, well, it can't be helped, can it?

besides, by the time I finished this, my hands and brain were frozen due to the airconned room.

Spoiler for the end?:


finally acquired SRW Alpha 3 OST & Dragonforce CD. Awesome to the max!
... All is well on Hikki's part, but you do realise that you just blew up another few percentages of Nanoha's magic capacity, right? You may not have made her use Starlight Breaker, but simply using Blaster 3 already puts tremendous strength on the user.
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Old 2008-02-15, 07:25   Link #19779
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Smooth. And easy to understand. Aurion's strengths and limits are quite clearly defined here.
Thanks.

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Your creator-san is turning to the Dark Side more and more

... and Aaron's descent into the Dark Side continues ever slowly
Almaria: *turns and glares tearfully* NO! Creator-san's will is stronger than this! He won't give up!

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First, Aurion naturally snares Asagi with his Boukenred impression... now he's got Mayura's utmost attention with Sha Fu

Mayura: Sensei!

Next thing you know, Aurion does a Shaider or Shurikenger to catch Julie

*watches Belkarangers chase after Aurion*

On the bright side, at least you have girls after Aurion who's NOT out to kill him
Aurion: Hoh yeah? *keeps running*

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How is it? It's BRILLIANT, as expected, covers all of the relevant points, and truly puts Aurion at the top of his game
Thanks!

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Although this line I think sums up Aurion's entire style for me:

"is not afraid to play dirty as well"

Especially in regards to binds

*runs*
>.>

<sigh....> -_-

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Kha, Lowe, Nighty wearing evil grins in the background.

Aaron008R: (holds face) What's happening to me! I'm not like this!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO~!!!!:eyesp in:

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Hell yes. OMFG that computes like crazy!!!

Keroko you read this?
It's a go then!

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Mariel: Nice choice of disguise, Sempai.
Aurion: Sou-nanja. (<-talking like an old man)

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ANd yeah Hayate's gonna get a real good licking over...

...wait.
*sharpens Tyrfing*

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Join us...
NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU~~~~!!!!

*grabs onto Almaria for support*

Almaria: Hold on! Creator-san! Please don't give in!

*musters willpower*

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~~~New intelligence data updated~~~

Fate's profile has been updated! Click here for more info.

A quick look at the changelog:

Spoiler for Fate awesomeness:
Any other issues to point out?
Do a Kyousuke Nanbu instead.
The names are also more computable now.

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Hayate: Aaron-sama~~ Gohan taberu?~~



*RUNS*
Does not compute.

Good. I'm now regaining my sanity! HWAHAHAHAHA!!! XD

Almaria: Creator-san's recovering!

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It's been a while since I last paused, and how here's the thing I've strived to write down (although it came out as less spectacular as I had previousluy expected). Oh, well, it can't be helped, can it?

besides, by the time I finished this, my hands and brain were frozen due to the airconned room.

Spoiler for the end?:


finally acquired SRW Alpha 3 OST & Dragonforce CD. Awesome to the max!
Okay... The powerlevels here are even more imblanced than Yakitate!!! Japan's reactions!!!:e yespin::eyespi n::ey espin:

I mean, Who? Wha? How? Wait! Stronger? Weaker suddenly?




Anyway, liked it.

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FIXED

...

...



*headshot >>>> Lowe*
Me: Yoroshiku, Sniper-san.

Neil: Don't call me Sniper-san. I have a name, you know.

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If Kha's verson is indeed mostly paralel to mine, then yes we will. We've compared him to Takahata too often not to do so. I was thinking sience or math teacher, what about you?
Any of the two would be fine. Though I'd prefer he teach maths. So he'll be part of the Raising Heart storyline too?

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Hmm

Never has that emote been more apropriate.


Maybe I should edit my profile too, and have people wonder and wonder untill they finally decide to ask.
Amusingly enough...

Why not? :3 It'll be fun seeing their reactions.

Not me though, the only people whom I mistook in their genders were Nagumo (I thought she was a he) and PhoenixFlare (whom I thought was a girl). Remember feeling scammed, Tormenk?

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'While not an outright tactical genius, Aurion is actually on par with those like Tesla in tactical abillity' A bit of a paradox, concidering Tesla is a tactical genius.
Editing it as well. I'll factor in more experience in even the tactical sense for Aurion's case.

So...

Aurion = Quick learner that excelled in tactics thru extensive study

Tesla = Natural tactical genius

Of course, if you'd rather have the old version, than just tell me.:P

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Not me, I like his Oji-chan part more.
KOKORO TOMOYO!!!

*remembers Keroko is a trap*

*shuffles away for some distance...*

Since your so adamant about your new role, I might as well play along.

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One of the main rules with traps you should remember is that they don't just 'stop' being traps, because to stop being a trap would mean changing who they are.

So no, I'm not going to stop.
Oh dear...
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Old 2008-02-15, 07:47   Link #19780
Keroko
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Aurion: Sou-nanja. (<-talking like an old man)
... Which does not compute. We now Aurion is the old guy, but making him go 'washi' would make him the old geezer, which does not compute.

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Any of the two would be fine. Though I'd prefer he teach maths. So he'll be part of the Raising Heart storyline too?
Minor character, I need teacher names. He's not going to be seriously involved (at least not in Raising Heart, I don't know about Kha's project).

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Amusingly enough...

Why not? :3 It'll be fun seeing their reactions.

Not me though, the only people whom I mistook in their genders were Nagumo (I thought she was a he) and PhoenixFlare (whom I thought was a girl). Remember feeling scammed, Tormenk?
Unfortunately I can only switch it to 'unspecified' oh well, we'll just have to make do.

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Editing it as well. I'll factor in more experience in even the tactical sense for Aurion's case.

So...

Aurion = Quick learner that excelled in tactics thru extensive study

Tesla = Natural tactical genius

Of course, if you'd rather have the old version, than just tell me.:P
I was thinking more along the lines of 'while quick to learn, Aurion is not a tactical genius. Most of his victories against tactical genius Tesla are due to the fact that their competitions range from normal games to mind games, in which Aurion excells'

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KOKORO TOMOYO!!!

*remembers Keroko is a trap*

*shuffles away for some distance...*

Since your so adamant about your new role, I might as well play along.
Bah, I'm not going to act different then from how I am now. There are various levels of traps, Jun for example is the most extreme case, a typical 'girl in a guys body' I myself am more the 'guy with a few feminine quallities' type. Or so I choose to believe.
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