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It's like KyoAni needed to be faithful to the source and yet be totally unfaithful at the same time. It's just crack anyway, even for me. The most I'd do is having a short-term animal-mayhem with Hayate!raccoon. :3 Quote:
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Awesomeness. Although I thought the details were more than needed near the middle-part, it's all-around a great battle writing. And a leech + Biohazard + Kimimaro hybrid monster? Keroko had it tough... now to wonder about her physical check-up. And I loled at "where's Scrya"... Reminded me of that one crack line... dunno how many pages ago... Quote:
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Sette-Tre dynamic imo should be closer to... say, Kalinin/Sousuke. After all, I can just imagine Sette going... "Sousuke". Spoiler:
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Ubershort breaker. Too tired to really sit down and sift through it.
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Basically, TSAB Army/AF as I see them is as follows: Army #1: "We need air support! Where's the air force?" Army #2: "Fuck the air force! We don't need them!" *pwnt* Air Force #1: "Fuck you Army, we're taking our own sweet time in getting here; who cares about the Ground Forces?" Marine Air and Ground is as follows: Marine Ground: "This is Golf 3 Charlie, we need air support NOW! Is anyone in the neighbourhood?" Marine FAC: "Stand by Golf 3 Charlie, we are routing your Air support and VTOL in now." Marine Air: "Golf 3 Charlie, this is Hammer Flight, hang in there! We are on the way, eta five minutes! Semper fi Marines!" Marine Ground: "Semper Fi! You kick their asses, ya hear?" Marine Air: "I hear ya, brother! Oorah!" Quote:
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Mai: *tests Ivanovich's flamethrower Emili: *hikes her skirt higher, in preparation for Emili Kicku Chief: "..." *racks the pump of his shotgun* Quote:
Yep, Yuuno would be really useful here. *thumbs up* Good scene, IMO. Will beta later and send it to you. Quote:
Franz: "A genius of hard work! This proves that nothing is impossible at all!" Naomi: "Except for you finishing your thesis." Franz: "Don't remind me." -_- Quote:
...one of my problems with writing is that Franz is in some ways an avatar of mine, with the burning need to deliver justice and kick the ass of evildoers. -_- I've been working on toning down him so as not to be my mouthpiece, by taking him in directions I don't go. (which is to say, Lowe, Nighty, that there is a possibility of Franz being a siscon. However... his hot blood is jamming his emotional siscon transmitter, so only the barest amounts of siscon are getting into his system.) Quote:
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*dodges sniper fire from Lockon, Jenkinski, Master Chief, Ivanovich, and everyone in the OFM who has a scoped Battle Rifle* *looks up and sees Emili brandishing a Rocket Launcher* Oh shi-
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2008-02-15, 08:49 | Link #19783 | |
Adeptus Animus
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Also, why only Lutecia? The Cyborgs were suggested to be free to go after rehabillitation, and Agito even joined the TSAB. Seven Arcs just looooves confusing us with last minute statements. |
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Waiting for the extras in the DVD version =) *runs* Ruri? Quote:
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2008-02-15, 09:15 | Link #19786 | |
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Oh, and Megane is there as her guardian or monitor. Her movements aren't restricted like Lutecia, but she's unlikely to leave that world unless Lutecia does. SS4 suggests she may eventually be allowed to leave that world, someday. |
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2008-02-15, 09:18 | Link #19787 | |||
Der Erbe zu Altem Belka
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What are the rules for using already established OCs in one's own storylines? Do I have to directly ask that OCs owner, or what (i.e if I have to use Kha and Keroko, do I have to ask...Kha and Keroko?)
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I have to go more indepth on how the Imperial/Saint Belkan religions evolved, but to the Saint Church, Vivio/The Saint is the ONLY Deus Imperis, while in the Imperial system, she's just one of a few hundred since the formation of the Empire (granted she's fairly important with the whole "saving Belkan civilization from destruction" thing). What *does* "hotbloodedness" mean anyway? Same with "bluecheesium"? I'm not sure, and i'm not sure *either* of them sound too good. |
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2008-02-15, 09:24 | Link #19788 | |
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There's a lot of uncertainties and unknowns here, so any help filling in the blanks will be appreciated. Any corrections for errors in terminology (except for the "Private Second Class" thing) will also be appreciated. Regarding Private/Private Second Class: I'll be using "Private Second Class", despite the non-existence of such a rank in Real Life. After all, beam-spamming magic doesn't exist in Real Life either. I know that a lot of it may seem stupid, but I'm sticking with the canon, as stupid as it may be. Because it's the canon, and this is meant to be a guide: distracting new writers with fanon will be a bad idea. Spoiler for Cut for space:
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2008-02-15, 09:34 | Link #19789 | ||
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It's what she said when Nanoha asked what's her name. It's almost certainly the name she remembers having, like how she remembers having a "mother". I can't imagine the people who made her bothering to tell her, "By the way, your name's Vivio. Remember that when people ask you." before stuffing her in that pod. |
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2008-02-15, 10:27 | Link #19790 | ||
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It is. I ripped the scene directly from the anime. Personally, I'd say that DestinyS will have a number of FMP references. I'm making out the Orphans (( yes, there's more than one )) of Alhazred to be something sort of like Whispered, but rather carrying the magic and memories of Alhazred's remnants of sorts with a implanted mental stimulus to restore their world, and Jail came out somehow wrongly due to an incident, which is why his 'desire' for his own world is vague and not clear-cut Al-hazred. Quote:
Either way, Lutecia and the Numbers have their personal battles ahead of them even after all's dealt and done. I know the words. I also know it's not all negative. I don't recall much anyway which is why I mistaken the meeting again thing, but the most striking part was the decisiveness of her punishment without a trial. I guess I must've taken that part most negatively.
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Heh, tables turn quickly here. I meant this Ruri.
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Will do. Bursting the bubble is the best part, though. I always love telling people that characters like Bridget or the Utawarerumono twins are traps. Go ahead, its Aurion's profile after all. Quote:
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2008-02-15, 11:39 | Link #19793 | ||
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Short backlog breaking is short.
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I'd like to, but I currently have my hands full with my own stuff. Any takers? His influence? I think I'm already half corrupted before I joined this thread anyway. Yeah those. :O Interesting...ideas ideas... Quote:
Motivated! To rebuilt my OCs myself. Or rather, I really just need a bunch of tweaks here and there.
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"most permutations of a given name have the same properties" Just so happens that somewhat, Alicia T of one is the Alicia F of another... And i'm trying to compute it... Quote:
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Back for more crack and roll.
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The only one I ever mistook a gender mistake of was PF. His post about Leona had me thinking from the start he was a girl. Though I'm starting to not able to shake the impression of Keroko being female lately. "Wait. Is he a guy or a girl? Oh yeah ." *later that day* "Which sex is Keroko again ?" And repeat everyday and you'll see why I'm confused.
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Ryotaro: *mumbles something* Urataros! Henshin!
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Hey, it's better than the original idea. I was gonna make Keroko-chan activate Ethereal Mode, but figured it'd kill her in this state. Quote:
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...and I have no idea what any of those are, but sure. Oh lawd, FMP reference much? XDDD Love it. Depends on the person, really. I already explicitly stated my desire to use just about every OC conceived, so yeah .
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2008-02-15, 14:15 | Link #19798 |
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And after some delays, finally starting off PROFILE TIME
for the second of the Belkarangers, the Honest Heart, and Ebony Justice, Mayura Lee Labatt Here's Part I: History Spoiler for Chronicles of the Roaring Fist:
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2008-02-15, 14:48 | Link #19799 | |
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2008-02-15, 15:33 | Link #19800 | |
Der Erbe zu Altem Belka
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It ends up on Midchilda after the War of the Lords and Saints. |
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