SOTM 2010 - December (Weapons, Alice in Wonderland, Sketches) - Entry Thread

[Kagayaki]

@PreSage, Hooves: Thanks!

Final Entry

[Squarecrow]

Haven't made a sig in awhile, didn't really have a clue what I was doing.

[Aurelie]

Does this fit? I know you can't really see the ribbon in her hair, but it is there.

[JuJuBeez]

Of course it does as long as everyone can recognize her and you have a good stock which can be easily identified

[KiNA]

Wow, I just realised I can picked a lot of oldies from my thread






Good old days .. Now I'm just a lazy SoB

[JRendell]

Originally Posted by Raildex

would this fit the weapon theme? the thing on his back is a gun, plus he just killed someone.
if it does, C&C please

I may be being childish here, but how can this be allowed yet my previous one not? Surely you shouldn't have to state the object on his back is gun for it to fit with the theme.

Final Entry.

[Raildex]

Originally Posted by JRendell

I may be being childish here, but how can this be allowed yet my previous one not? Surely you shouldn't have to state the object on his back is gun for it to fit with the theme.

Final Entry.

hmm well your right. i just watched a gameplay video and its looks more like a sheath.

i wont be entering because its impossible for me to show his sword without making the render small.

[JuJuBeez]

Unless u lay him horizontally x.x but boy are there a load of weapons xD

[Squarecrow]

Final:

Originally Posted by Lord Crow

Don't have time for touch-ups, my laptop needs to be sent back for repair.

[Raildex]

Originally Posted by JuJuBeez

Unless u lay him horizontally x.x but boy are there a load of weapons xD

laying him horizontal wouldn't work, i would have to redo the whole sig and im not doing that since I'm lazy :/

i may do another entry sig when i am bored though

[Suomi]

Originally Posted by Raildex

laying him horizontal wouldn't work, i would have to redo the whole sig and im not doing that since I'm lazy :/

i may do another entry sig when i am bored though

personally I think it looks like a weapon already, or enough like one...
perhaps you should ask Naimey-san?

[Raildex]

Originally Posted by Illusore

personally I think it looks like a weapon already, or enough like one...
perhaps you should ask Naimey-san?

i looked it up and ALOT of people think it is a railgun, but its actually just a sheath. :/
I don't think it has been confirmed as just a sheath, but that's all raiden uses it as.

ill ask Naimey-san just to make sure... i probably wont since i don't know who that is -_-

[Ichigo-Sora]

My entry this month ^^ Hopefully, it's clear that she's Alice.



EDIT: Final Entry

[Raildex]

C&C

[PreSage]

Originally Posted by Ichigo-Sora

My entry this month ^^ Hopefully, it's clear that she's Alice.

Yes, you can clearly tell she's Alice. The dress is a dead giveaway, and you can see slightly see the bow, too.

Originally Posted by Raildex

C&C

Nice sig. Interesting render use and lighting. The only comment I would make is the empty white space behind her; it seems out of place with the rest of the sig.

[Raildex]

better?

[felix]

First one is better.

[Marina]

Originally Posted by Ichigo-Sora

My entry this month ^^ Hopefully, it's clear that she's Alice.

Ahh, very pretty as usual I always love your soft touch. To answer your question, yes, it is very clear that the girl is Alice.

Originally Posted by Raildex

better?

Originally Posted by felix

First one is better.

Agreed with felix here...mostly because the 2nd one makes it look too much like a slapping of a render on top of a set background. The 2nd doesn't have enough blending between the two to fix the color and lighting differences.

However, like PreSage noted, the 1st does look awkward with the plain white corner. Is there some way to get a happy medium between the two versions? Try fixing the lighting in such a way that it's coming in from only one direction.

[Raildex]

Originally Posted by Marina

Ahh, very pretty as usual I always love your soft touch. To answer your question, yes, it is very clear that the girl is Alice.





Agreed with felix here...mostly because the 2nd one makes it look too much like a slapping of a render on top of a set background. The 2nd doesn't have enough blending between the two to fix the color and lighting differences.

However, like PreSage noted, the 1st does look awkward with the plain white corner. Is there some way to get a happy medium between the two versions? Try fixing the lighting in such a way that it's coming in from only one direction.

i have no idea what to do next on fixing the white part (its actually part of the stock) i may just try using c4d.

[Frailty]

valid entry or not?
C&C would be appreciated as well~