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ZeroXSEED · 2011-12-15, 02:06

Whichever is plausible

agetreme · 2011-12-15, 02:08

More adjustment to the story: Never mind about Tabane.

THE CREATOR OF BS CORE end up being his own undoing when he announced the BS core has the ability to boost IS but forgetting to tell the world that it can be only be used by guys....

It is more funny that way.

Anyway, the white knight statement.... should I make a male lead with that incident as his background story instead of having that Shota boy being the witness?

Eratas123 · 2011-12-15, 02:09

@ Treme - Tabane seems like a person who can never see two steps in front of her.

@ Senpai - I know they all seem plausible, I'm wondering more on what fits Kanzashi's view best as romantic. She's the person who gets romance from fairy tales and Manga.

Saint X · 2011-12-15, 04:49

Well just a quick introduction to a group that I have been building up- sort of.

Spoiler for A Secondary Trio:

*waits for anything*

Eratas123 · 2011-12-15, 04:52

No comment, sorry. Too tired from sleep deprivation and getting Skyrim to focus. Will read with more focus tom.

HasuMasu · 2011-12-15, 05:47

And thus, my fic was put on hold for the time being due to "A Certain 11-Dimensional Orchestra" which is currently in progress.

Not that it means I'll be taking time off this thread, I don't feel comfortable with the To aru fanfic thread anyway.

Eratas123 · 2011-12-15, 05:56

@ Demi - Anything to talk about?

@ Box - What's wrong with the TAMNI thread? All of them are friendly enough.

demino_hellsin · 2011-12-15, 05:59

@era-era: Not much... I got something going on with Honne and Ichika but I can't manage to make them in character and make the moment unique to the two of them. BTW gratz on the chapter release XD

Eratas123 · 2011-12-15, 06:13

What's the idea? Maybe I can help.

HasuMasu · 2011-12-15, 06:20

I don't know, it just intimidates me.

Eratas123 · 2011-12-15, 06:22

@ Box - Not really. Just don't say nonesense and pointless things and nothing bad happens.

ZeroXSEED · 2011-12-15, 06:44

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Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Senpai - Alright then, how should I end the story? Eloping, Getting into a secret relationship, getting a public relationship? Dropping it and going to IS academy?

Quote:

Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Senpai - I know they all seem plausible, I'm wondering more on what fits Kanzashi's view best as romantic. She's the person who gets romance from fairy tales and Manga.

Sorry I just woke up from my early nap (which translates to I'M NOT SLEEPING TONIGHT

) Considering this is Kanzashi, the ending must be rather optimistic but still mundane, dropping it but reunited in I.S.A. might be a good idea, as her parents would be silly enough not to approve the first male I.S. pilot (and while Ichika is amateur, he has decent potential and promising future)

Eratas123 · 2011-12-15, 06:45

@ Senpai - I'm making the next part of Future Imperfect and I have a question: How do you think Charlotte would be as a mom? Also, can she cook?

ZeroXSEED · 2011-12-15, 06:47

Quote:

Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Senpai - I'm making the next part of Future Imperfect and I have a question: How do you think Charlotte would be as a mom? Also, can she cook?

If anything, Charlotte is a perfect mom (unless you count her hidden Yandere size, which is scarier than Linying), IIRC she can cook well as demonstrated by V4.

Eratas123 · 2011-12-15, 06:51

@ Senpai - So how about a chapter where Ichika and Charlotte try to be good parents? Ichika and Charles tend to be too rowdy........then Charlotte shows her smile and the two of them cling to each other in fear.

ZeroXSEED · 2011-12-15, 06:52

I wholeheartedly approve that concept

EDIT: The old To-Love-RU Stratos is officially deleted, Will upload chapter 1 of the new one soon.

Eratas123 · 2011-12-15, 07:01

@ Senpai - What about Tatenashi and Ichika? That'll be awkward.

Tat Jr: Mom, why are you still wearing a shirt? Most of the time you and dad go to the bedroom after you eat.

Ichika: U-Uh....what did we do exactly?

Tat Jr: I dunno, but mom always said you had a big-

Tatenashi: *Covers Tat Jr's mouth* Ehehehehehehe~ I think we should finish our food first before talking.

Ichika: A-Agreed.

Side note - I thought you were going to give it to me for Beta reading first?

ZeroXSEED · 2011-12-15, 07:07

Quote:

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Side note - I thought you were going to give it to me for Beta reading first?

Tatenashi & Ichika's daughter... that'll be very awkward...

That aside, yes, of course I'll upload it... to yahoo. Wait, I forgot your email too.

(According to demi there's omnipresent tense problem, you'll have a hell of a work considering you're busy right now

)

Eratas123 · 2011-12-15, 07:12

@ Senpai - Laura's and Ichika's child will probably be the worst, though. Seriously, you have the person who's the daughter of someone who yelled at the guy she likes "You will be my wife!". Then comes Chifuyu's and Tabane's kids

Side note - Nah, it's alright

Just tell me when you're done with the draft and I'll give you my email.

demino_hellsin · 2011-12-15, 07:28

@eratas: Ichika and Honne are walking up a steep inclined hill(you know, those annoying uphill roads

). They just came back from putting back the IS equipment in storage after practicals. Ichika reaches the top of the hill and realizes Honne is still slowly making her way up to the top. She reaches the top and Ichika comments that she really is slow. Honne pouts and says that sounds mean. Ichika quickly apologizes and didn't mean anything bad by it. He urges her that the dorms are close by and suddenly he is stopped by the light tugging on the back of his shirt. He sees that it's Honne and barely hears her whisper "Don't leave me behind.". Ichika doesn't think he heard it right but suddenly grabs her into a piggy back ride. Honne's surprised and Ichika says that she must be tired from moving all those IS, so he's lending her his services as a human taxi this time.

The story would be separated into two parts. Slow: from Ichika's point of view, and Dense: from Honne's point of view.

Ichika's point of view during the events on that hill is that Honne is really slow and easygoing. But when he sees her climbing up the hill with a smile, he notices that she's actually concentrating real hard, almost forcing herself. He thinks to himself what this means. Realizing the possibility that there may be more to Honne than he normally sees, he comes to his senses when Honne reaches the top. He comments on her slowness and she pouts. Ichika starts to walk again while saying the dorms should be close. He's stopped by Honne and somehow her words of not to leave her behind cut deep into him. He doesn't say anything, thinking that he probably heard wrong but keeps them in his heart. Wordlessly he settled her onto his back for a ride. She is surprised and Ichika explains that he's helping her since she must be tired. To Ichika, no one was going to be left behind, ever.

Honne's point of view starts from her climbing up the hill. She's thinking to herself that Ichika is amazing, being the only male thus far to be able to pilot IS. She remembers that his academic excellence, great athletic ability, as well as hardworking attitude. She feels that any girl would be lucky to find themselves with him. She remembers when she first saw him, thinking that maybe he'd like to play. Honestly, when her friends said that he was a good catch, Honne didn't think much of it. He was someone new, a new friend. But one day, her mistress came back to the room with a weird look on her face. She had asked to be alone and Honne couldn't help but worry. The maid realized that her mistress was in love and with, of all people, Ichika Orimura. Honne reached the top and thought as she stared at him that he was very dense, not knowing the number of girls who liked him. Back in reality, Ichika commented she was slow and Honne took this personally. She remembered always being left alone because she was so slow. The only people that really took her seriously at all was her two friends, she wanted Ichika as a friend, not another person who'd leave her. She grabbed him when he was about to walk away and begged him not to leave her alone too. Honne is surprised when Ichika moves her onto his back. He carries her and she asks why he's doing such a thing. He explains that he thinks she's tired from all the physical labor. Honestly, Honne was exhausted. She snaked her arms around his neck and enjoys the warmth of Ichika's back. Honne is thankful that Ichika's dense, because if he wasn't he'd notice how hard Honne's heart was beating at that time.

D:

2011-12-15, 02:06	Link #13101
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Whichever is plausible __________________

2011-12-15, 02:08	Link #13102
agetreme Just another Idiot Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Delusion world	More adjustment to the story: Never mind about Tabane. THE CREATOR OF BS CORE end up being his own undoing when he announced the BS core has the ability to boost IS but forgetting to tell the world that it can be only be used by guys.... It is more funny that way. Anyway, the white knight statement.... should I make a male lead with that incident as his background story instead of having that Shota boy being the witness? __________________ Ara Han

2011-12-15, 02:09	Link #13103
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Treme - Tabane seems like a person who can never see two steps in front of her. @ Senpai - I know they all seem plausible, I'm wondering more on what fits Kanzashi's view best as romantic. She's the person who gets romance from fairy tales and Manga. __________________

2011-12-15, 04:49	Link #13104
Saint X VxR Productions IT Support Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Philippines	Well just a quick introduction to a group that I have been building up- sort of. Spoiler for A Secondary Trio: Name: Ange Uriel Nickname/s: Ange, Annie, Ann, Angel IS Unit: Angelion, Hybrid Melee/Range. Name: Eimi Terasu Nickname/s: Eimi, Eimin (this ticks her off a bit), Ei IS Unit: Illumina, Ranged/Offensive Support. Name: Alexis Sanctum Nickname/s: Alexis, Alex, Allie, Al IS Unit: Pallas, Defensive Support. Age: 16, all three of them. Home Country: Unknown, they always say that they are Aliens. Affiliation: “Special Volunteer Employees” of C’rnadyne Technologies. “Transfer” IS Academy Students, assigned to a random class/can enter any section of first year, may it be 1-1, 1-2, or even 1-3. Calling themselves “Aliens from another dimension”, Ange, Eimi and Alexis are some of those so called “sudden arrivals due to circumstances” indivuduals. They were part of an agreement between the IS Academy, C’rnadyne Technologies and amazingly, STRATOMAG via Gerard Archangel. They are meant to have a “crash course” in IS Operations- as it was needed as per international law. This particular trio of students are often seen together as a group at times, but they are very cheerful, and are very active. They have yet to be put against the general ISA population in IS Combat. Their actual purpose is shrouded in mystery, but some associate their arrival with the appearance of the [Guardian Angels], a trio of mysterious “IS-like” objects that often appear to stop conflicts and rescue people in need. The UN has been investigating deeply to identify who these “Angels” are and put them in their place for violating the Alaska Treaty. The ISA have been cooperating by means of assigning a team of students into the case- as Orimura et.al. are assigned into the Phantom Task case, the “Second best” students were assigned to the Guardian Angels case, of them, the two PH IS Holders, Maria Estevez and Elena Tan. waits for anything

2011-12-15, 04:52	Link #13105
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	No comment, sorry. Too tired from sleep deprivation and getting Skyrim to focus. Will read with more focus tom. __________________

2011-12-15, 05:47	Link #13106
HasuMasu Senior Member Artist Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: The Middle Way	And thus, my fic was put on hold for the time being due to "A Certain 11-Dimensional Orchestra" which is currently in progress. Not that it means I'll be taking time off this thread, I don't feel comfortable with the To aru fanfic thread anyway. __________________

2011-12-15, 05:56	Link #13107
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Demi - Anything to talk about? @ Box - What's wrong with the TAMNI thread? All of them are friendly enough. __________________

2011-12-15, 05:59	Link #13108
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	@era-era: Not much... I got something going on with Honne and Ichika but I can't manage to make them in character and make the moment unique to the two of them. BTW gratz on the chapter release XD

2011-12-15, 06:13	Link #13109
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	What's the idea? Maybe I can help. __________________

2011-12-15, 06:20	Link #13110
HasuMasu Senior Member Artist Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: The Middle Way	I don't know, it just intimidates me. __________________

2011-12-15, 06:22	Link #13111
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Box - Not really. Just don't say nonesense and pointless things and nothing bad happens. __________________

2011-12-15, 06:45	Link #13113
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Senpai - I'm making the next part of Future Imperfect and I have a question: How do you think Charlotte would be as a mom? Also, can she cook? __________________

2011-12-15, 06:51	Link #13115
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Senpai - So how about a chapter where Ichika and Charlotte try to be good parents? Ichika and Charles tend to be too rowdy........then Charlotte shows her smile and the two of them cling to each other in fear. __________________

2011-12-15, 06:52	Link #13116
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	I wholeheartedly approve that concept EDIT: The old To-Love-RU Stratos is officially deleted, Will upload chapter 1 of the new one soon. __________________

2011-12-15, 07:01	Link #13117
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Senpai - What about Tatenashi and Ichika? That'll be awkward. Tat Jr: Mom, why are you still wearing a shirt? Most of the time you and dad go to the bedroom after you eat. Ichika: U-Uh....what did we do exactly? Tat Jr: I dunno, but mom always said you had a big- Tatenashi: Covers Tat Jr's mouth Ehehehehehehe~ I think we should finish our food first before talking. Ichika: A-Agreed. Side note - I thought you were going to give it to me for Beta reading first? __________________

2011-12-15, 07:12	Link #13119
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Senpai - Laura's and Ichika's child will probably be the worst, though. Seriously, you have the person who's the daughter of someone who yelled at the guy she likes "You will be my wife!". Then comes Chifuyu's and Tabane's kids Side note - Nah, it's alright Just tell me when you're done with the draft and I'll give you my email. __________________

2011-12-15, 07:28	Link #13120
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	@eratas: Ichika and Honne are walking up a steep inclined hill(you know, those annoying uphill roads). They just came back from putting back the IS equipment in storage after practicals. Ichika reaches the top of the hill and realizes Honne is still slowly making her way up to the top. She reaches the top and Ichika comments that she really is slow. Honne pouts and says that sounds mean. Ichika quickly apologizes and didn't mean anything bad by it. He urges her that the dorms are close by and suddenly he is stopped by the light tugging on the back of his shirt. He sees that it's Honne and barely hears her whisper "Don't leave me behind.". Ichika doesn't think he heard it right but suddenly grabs her into a piggy back ride. Honne's surprised and Ichika says that she must be tired from moving all those IS, so he's lending her his services as a human taxi this time. The story would be separated into two parts. Slow: from Ichika's point of view, and Dense: from Honne's point of view. Ichika's point of view during the events on that hill is that Honne is really slow and easygoing. But when he sees her climbing up the hill with a smile, he notices that she's actually concentrating real hard, almost forcing herself. He thinks to himself what this means. Realizing the possibility that there may be more to Honne than he normally sees, he comes to his senses when Honne reaches the top. He comments on her slowness and she pouts. Ichika starts to walk again while saying the dorms should be close. He's stopped by Honne and somehow her words of not to leave her behind cut deep into him. He doesn't say anything, thinking that he probably heard wrong but keeps them in his heart. Wordlessly he settled her onto his back for a ride. She is surprised and Ichika explains that he's helping her since she must be tired. To Ichika, no one was going to be left behind, ever. Honne's point of view starts from her climbing up the hill. She's thinking to herself that Ichika is amazing, being the only male thus far to be able to pilot IS. She remembers that his academic excellence, great athletic ability, as well as hardworking attitude. She feels that any girl would be lucky to find themselves with him. She remembers when she first saw him, thinking that maybe he'd like to play. Honestly, when her friends said that he was a good catch, Honne didn't think much of it. He was someone new, a new friend. But one day, her mistress came back to the room with a weird look on her face. She had asked to be alone and Honne couldn't help but worry. The maid realized that her mistress was in love and with, of all people, Ichika Orimura. Honne reached the top and thought as she stared at him that he was very dense, not knowing the number of girls who liked him. Back in reality, Ichika commented she was slow and Honne took this personally. She remembered always being left alone because she was so slow. The only people that really took her seriously at all was her two friends, she wanted Ichika as a friend, not another person who'd leave her. She grabbed him when he was about to walk away and begged him not to leave her alone too. Honne is surprised when Ichika moves her onto his back. He carries her and she asks why he's doing such a thing. He explains that he thinks she's tired from all the physical labor. Honestly, Honne was exhausted. She snaked her arms around his neck and enjoys the warmth of Ichika's back. Honne is thankful that Ichika's dense, because if he wasn't he'd notice how hard Honne's heart was beating at that time. D: