2009-10-25, 01:39 | Link #17561 |
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I still think there's something wrong with your master file.
Part 1: "If we could." Wendi laughed. "We've been trying to make stuff on our own, but everything we've been doing at home keeps reminding us of Ginga."[/QUOTE] Never mind, got fixed while I read part two. As for Mach Calibur, I thought it was because the magic style is New Belkan, as opposed to Ancient Belkan like the Wolkenritter. Page Claim: For awesome stories! |
2009-10-25, 02:19 | Link #17563 |
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After a long Haitus. It returns! the Epic thriller of Jail's innocent and pure first love! (Disclaimer: The following part does not actually include Jail) Spoiler for Someone for Everyone part 12:
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Previously: Part 1 Part 2 Part 3 Part 4 Part 5 Part 6 Part 7 Part 8 Part 9 Part 10 Part 11 |
2009-10-25, 02:24 | Link #17564 | |
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2009-10-25, 03:13 | Link #17565 | |||
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2009-10-25, 03:17 | Link #17566 | |
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Sette gets some long overdo character development, and it's nice to see Cinque becoming the big sister she was supposed to be to her. And of course, Nove and Wendi continue to trip and stumble along through their odd relationship. So totally worth the wait, Shiny. So totally worth it.
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2009-10-25, 04:59 | Link #17568 | ||
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Somehow I don't think this is the last we'll see of Ginga's injury... |
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Oh, and reocurring spelling mistake that cropped up in the previous 2 chapters: manner, not manor. Quote:
I'm actually growing fond of Cinque - honestly I did not care for the Numbers at all during Strikers. It wasn't just because they were named after numbers (at least they managed to pinned that on Jail's lack of creativity/care), but rather it seemed like the Numbers were spawned just for the sake of covering every character cliche and fetish out there. And lol @ Nove's act of desperation. |
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2009-10-25, 09:12 | Link #17571 | |||
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Join Date: Feb 2008
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A touching short of Noland revisiting a past long ended (like most of your emoshorts, the form is pretty fair)... ...And how can it be, that a knight of the Saint Kaiser still mourns for his lost family after so many years? O good knight... For kings we mourn a summer, For heroes grieve a year But mourning left from kin bereft Shall aught but disappear. ...But on from the brevous leaden weights...oh, ho, what have we there? I wonder, what was Kaon expecting from Noland, then, if not simply assent to dine? Somehow I was expecting this to happen... ...and the story goes on. Quote:
1. Please check the spelling of the first few lines of your post 2. Note this: No Jail, No Problem, Will Travel! 3. I think you requested this before - I shall oblige: I HATE YOU. 4. And Welcome Back to the show. Spoiler for nwcnebuchadnezzar:
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Interesting Mind Trip is Interesting. About writing bits of the history of the Tome of the Night Sky, though, asking a certain Nightengale might help you formulate 'em ideas. First off...you're not making Reinforce...a TRAP, are you? For if you do...prepare to die, heretic. Alright, I was kidding. You want feedback? Aye, Luigi, that's one Frickin' Freakily Fast n Furious Flummoxing Feedback - Fabolously Fun-Sized...(Though I'm hard up on time here, let's see what I can say.) Spoiler for nwcavertingyoureyes:
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2009-10-25, 09:45 | Link #17572 | |
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2009-10-25, 09:46 | Link #17573 | ||
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Manner, manor....... ugh. I hate that word.
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2009-10-25, 12:29 | Link #17574 |
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Well...I just uploaded Animal Instincts chapter 2 on ff.net if anyone is interested... :3
*sits back reading a newspaper while waiting patiently for Satashi's AlternativeS update*
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2009-10-25, 12:45 | Link #17575 | |
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Short chapter but good! Sette's developing humanity could take a whole story all by itself; it's nice to see Cinque being a good sister and trying to help her expand her existence beyond combat training (which could be rather important. After all, if Jail is going to be retiring from the Evil Mad Scientist routine, he's not going to need combat cyborgs who don't know how to be useful around the house. Wendi and Nove can provide hours of entertainment as they stumble through their budding romance, but we don't want to have to trade Sette to JAIL for a minion to be named later. The way you wrote the Nove/Wendi scene, it almost seemed as if Nove's budding affection for Wendi was a computer virus steadily affecting certain of her subsystems one by one... MORE!! |
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2009-10-25, 14:39 | Link #17576 |
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Well, this is awkward. Okay, so... I've actually been thinking about this for quite awhile, but some things happened last night that, for me, confirmed that this is something I have to do, at least for the moment. Because if I don't do this, then I might do something I regret, and I don't want to do that. Basically, I'm taking a little break from writing. I just... I can't do it, not right now. It's not a matter of time, my spark has just.... gone out. Died. For the first time, I don't want to write anything, not even little shorts. So, as of right now, BtBR, "Sisters", and my ViCia series are officially on hold until I can step back and figure out what the hell's going on with me. As for "Day", well, that's something I have to discuss with Nanya, because it isn't fair to him for us to put the series on hiatus just because I'm going through a bit of a mental breakdown right now. I know you can't force writing, but at the same time, it isn't fair to him or to the people who like "Day" for me to just drop it because of personal issues, so... I'll talk to him about it and see what he has to say. This is only temporary. I know I'll definitely write again. I just don't know when, because... my spark is gone, and nothing I've tried can get it lit again, not right now. I'm really sorry about this. I know I'm letting a lot of people down...
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2009-10-25, 14:48 | Link #17577 | |
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2009-10-25, 14:51 | Link #17578 |
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You've burned yourself out from the sounds of things.
Looking at your project set, you have four differrent projects going on at the same time. Believe it or not, that's a LOT of thinking. Mental exhaustion takes its toll. So relax for a few weeks and let your mind sort itself out. I do this on a regular basis really. I'll hit this roadblock where it's not a matter of inspiration, but a matter of motivation. All you want to do is vegiate. I've noticed that for me, it tends to synch with the lunar cycle. I get my most motivated in the days leading up to the full moon and then right after it I burn out and go down for a week or two. Sometimes I really burn out and go down for months. No biggy. Creative work is not something that should be rushed. |
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