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ZeroXSEED · 2013-09-06, 09:08

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Show everything. The good, the bad, and the ugly.

True love is all about acceptance and compromise.

By this point none of the girls in the harem can do either, they only want good things and expect good things to come, only enraged when reality smacked their face and blame it on Ichika.

demino_hellsin · 2013-09-06, 09:09

well fire, there is the issue of half the writers not being in such a relationship before.

Fireminer · 2013-09-06, 09:34

"...
"Houki, just...one more..."

"No Ichika! You have had enough Sake! Father won't be happy seeing you late for tommorow training!"

"...Houki?"

"Yes?"

"Please play that song...I want something to remind about her."

Houki solemmly nodded and began to play her flute. That song, "The Fallen Sakura Petal", is truly a piece that could connect the reals of death and living. High tones create a harmony that filled the air with a dreading, yet magnificent feeling - nothing last in this glassy world, like a Sakura petal in the aftermath of Spring. They flying with the wind, passing through the rustling leaves, making lazy waves on the crystal pond. Suddenly, Ichika grabbed his katana and showing his moves. Not the usual lethal slash and stab, this is much more graceful. Like a dance for his death beloved. They trembling with Houki's tones...

Unbearknow to them, Kuu-chan was standing afar, a lone tear flowed down on her serene beauty..."

First time I try something like this.

demino_hellsin · 2013-09-06, 09:39

I remember writing something overly dramatic like that. I now look back at it and wonder how cheesy I was as a kid.

agetreme · 2013-09-06, 11:24

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fireminer

Something that transceeds the unknow multi-faced of love: Like a river that reflects the sun with its drop (A.K.A covering all stages of emotional, more than crush, happiness, embrassment and frustration).

Crude way of putting it: BS!

-_- I am not a good writer too but I seriously doubt that it is that complicated.

I just lack the experience to write one well.

More orz for failing at Life, Universe and Everything.

Any way, a proper romance is merely just slightly more inmate interaction between two really compatible lovers.

It is not like twin level where they finish off each other sentences but more like knowing each other well enough (Soul mates?), they know what buttons to push and are willing to push it without fearing about suffer the consequences because they are really that nice to each other. (hence the term bro-mance when it come to two guys who are really really good friend)

=
Unrelated note:

Chinese did have a saying something about it is really hard to find a Soul Mate (not necessarily lover but somebody who share the same hobby and understood you very well).

Fireminer · 2013-09-06, 20:19

Just having a nightmare of Maya as the Axe Murderer...

demino_hellsin · 2013-09-07, 04:19

How would one react if it was applied in the story a version of Squall who "likes them young"

DarkJak2050 · 2013-09-07, 04:29

Quote:

Originally Posted by demino_hellsin

well fire, there is the issue of half the writers not being in such a relationship before.

[Raises hand] Agreed...

Which is why my fic won't have any romance for my guys. And for another reason.

It said that in Canon, that all the girls are curious about Ichika. If my guys were to draw attention from the girls, then it would go against the concept of the girls being curious about Ichika.

Quote:

Originally Posted by demino_hellsin

How would one react if it was applied in the story a version of Squall who "likes them young"

I don't like where that's heading.

demino_hellsin · 2013-09-07, 04:35

Indeed, it's not pleasant at all. But Squall is still a lady and she won't do anything untoward any girl. She just hits on them a lot.

DarkJak2050 · 2013-09-07, 04:36

So in other words, she's like an Adult Version of Tatenashi...

demino_hellsin · 2013-09-07, 04:40

Indeed. But she won't be held accountable if she can't contain her charm

DarkJak2050 · 2013-09-07, 04:53

Yeah, but she still rubs me the wrong way...

Both Squall and Tatenashi...

demino_hellsin · 2013-09-07, 04:56

They are both overwhelming, so much so that the main cast looks uninteresting by comparison.

DarkJak2050 · 2013-09-07, 05:09

Then I wouldn't be surprised if they get their own spin-off series.

Like how Bellows got her own Manga series in Gargantia on the Verdurous Planet.

demino_hellsin · 2013-09-07, 05:22

They'd need some Charlotte level fanbase to do that though. Charlotte's moeness makes her flaws negligible in the eys of many.

Fireminer · 2013-09-07, 05:24

Question: Demino, which gender are you?

And Squall, as I see it, there is nothing stop you to write a story like that. I'm even quite curious about it. But how will you handle a character with so little material like Squall?

demino_hellsin · 2013-09-07, 05:30

Dude

I wrote a little something between Squall and Ran for my xover story already. Since then, theinteresting possibilities have been assailing me

Fireminer · 2013-09-07, 05:34

Define "possibilities". This not a Flower-and-Sweet relationship, right?

demino_hellsin · 2013-09-07, 05:40

- Reluctant PT soldier Ran
- Implications of SquallxMadoka
- Yandere Autumn definitely

Just to name a few

MeisterBabylon · 2013-09-07, 05:49

Continuing from before...

Spoiler for Heh...:

Yes, the Symphogear was starting to get to me.

Whoever built Core 109's frame wasn't very imaginative. Which was why Karon added a few touches of her own. Like singing while fighting. And calling the Yellow Collider form "Vandam Draupnir", after the Norse rings that could copy themselves endlessly. And of course screaming all her attacks.

So, with 6 colors of the rainbow, the forms of 109/Vandam is:

Yellow Collider - Vandam Draupnir
Blue Hammer - Vandam Mjolnir
Green Blader - Vandam Tyrfing
Orange Arms - Vandam Ydalir
Violet Syntho - Vandam Bragi
Red Wing - Vandam Skidbalnir

The last one is actually born from a duet between Irish and Karon. The theme?

The meeting, and power, of Two Wishes.

I believe its obvious then what the Second Shift/Ultimate form of 109/Vandam is. Even comes with a theme:

In [The Infinite Stratos], Orimura Kaoru/Idol Stratos Magi Karon is voiced by Aoi Yuki. I figured that a more squirrelly person fit the character.

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ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	@ Miner Show everything. The good, the bad, and the ugly. True love is all about acceptance and compromise. By this point none of the girls in the harem can do either, they only want good things and expect good things to come, only enraged when reality smacked their face and blame it on Ichika. __________________

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MeisterBabylon ~ Your Smile ~ Author Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: 346Pro Age: 38	Continuing from before... Spoiler for Heh...: "Time for the coda!" Karon tapped the remaining switch on her belt, toggling the viewing glass side to side. [TURN ON! FULL POWER YELLOW COLLIDER!] The rings orbiting around the idol stratos froze and flashed brightly before screaming into the sky. They grew in size and docked charged directing plates in resonating clangs and fell back down, lining up in a column to the fore of the yellow Vandam. "Go, VANDAM DRAUPNIR!" Kaoru leapt into the sky and the rings followed, replicating and drawing a path towards the Golem. At the peak of her trajectory, the idol rolled into a somersault and lashed out with a kick into the Particle Accelerator. "FINAL IGNITIOOOOOOOOON!!" Each ring buzzed with yellow thunder as the idol shrieked through, boosting her speed higher and higher. Karon gritted through the hi-G maneuver as Vandam's inertial dampeners worked to compensate. The friction from the air ignited the atmosphere around her, turning the IS unit into a roaring yellow fireball that blew through the Golem at 0.0018c. The collapse of the recoiling vacuum wake followed by the rupture of the Golem's pseudocore let out a mechanical groan that framed Karon with a blaze of glory. The idol did a twirl and pointed to the camera. "And that's a wrap!" Yes, the Symphogear was starting to get to me. Whoever built Core 109's frame wasn't very imaginative. Which was why Karon added a few touches of her own. Like singing while fighting. And calling the Yellow Collider form "Vandam Draupnir", after the Norse rings that could copy themselves endlessly. And of course screaming all her attacks. So, with 6 colors of the rainbow, the forms of 109/Vandam is: Yellow Collider - Vandam Draupnir Blue Hammer - Vandam Mjolnir Green Blader - Vandam Tyrfing Orange Arms - Vandam Ydalir Violet Syntho - Vandam Bragi Red Wing - Vandam Skidbalnir The last one is actually born from a duet between Irish and Karon. The theme? <p>No iframe support, please <a href="http://youtu.be/JEkubbf6quE">watch on YouTube</a>.</p> The meeting, and power, of Two Wishes. I believe its obvious then what the Second Shift/Ultimate form of 109/Vandam is. Even comes with a theme: <p>No iframe support, please <a href="http://youtu.be/2b76aVDA4oI">watch on YouTube</a>.</p> In [The Infinite Stratos], Orimura Kaoru/Idol Stratos Magi Karon is voiced by Aoi Yuki. I figured that a more squirrelly person fit the character. __________________ 白露型駆逐艦の４番艦、夕立です。第三次ソロモン海戦では、けっこう頑張ったっぽい★？

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demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	well fire, there is the issue of half the writers not being in such a relationship before.

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Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	"... "Houki, just...one more..." "No Ichika! You have had enough Sake! Father won't be happy seeing you late for tommorow training!" "...Houki?" "Yes?" "Please play that song...I want something to remind about her." Houki solemmly nodded and began to play her flute. That song, "The Fallen Sakura Petal", is truly a piece that could connect the reals of death and living. High tones create a harmony that filled the air with a dreading, yet magnificent feeling - nothing last in this glassy world, like a Sakura petal in the aftermath of Spring. They flying with the wind, passing through the rustling leaves, making lazy waves on the crystal pond. Suddenly, Ichika grabbed his katana and showing his moves. Not the usual lethal slash and stab, this is much more graceful. Like a dance for his death beloved. They trembling with Houki's tones... Unbearknow to them, Kuu-chan was standing afar, a lone tear flowed down on her serene beauty..." First time I try something like this.

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demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	I remember writing something overly dramatic like that. I now look back at it and wonder how cheesy I was as a kid.

2013-09-06, 20:19	Link #45766
Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	Just having a nightmare of Maya as the Axe Murderer...

2013-09-07, 04:19	Link #45767
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	How would one react if it was applied in the story a version of Squall who "likes them young"

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demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	Indeed, it's not pleasant at all. But Squall is still a lady and she won't do anything untoward any girl. She just hits on them a lot.

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DarkJak2050 Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2011	So in other words, she's like an Adult Version of Tatenashi...

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demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	Indeed. But she won't be held accountable if she can't contain her charm

2013-09-07, 04:53	Link #45772
DarkJak2050 Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2011	Yeah, but she still rubs me the wrong way... Both Squall and Tatenashi...

2013-09-07, 04:56	Link #45773
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	They are both overwhelming, so much so that the main cast looks uninteresting by comparison.

2013-09-07, 05:09	Link #45774
DarkJak2050 Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2011	Then I wouldn't be surprised if they get their own spin-off series. Like how Bellows got her own Manga series in Gargantia on the Verdurous Planet.

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demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	They'd need some Charlotte level fanbase to do that though. Charlotte's moeness makes her flaws negligible in the eys of many.

2013-09-07, 05:24	Link #45776
Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	Question: Demino, which gender are you? And Squall, as I see it, there is nothing stop you to write a story like that. I'm even quite curious about it. But how will you handle a character with so little material like Squall?

2013-09-07, 05:30	Link #45777
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	Dude I wrote a little something between Squall and Ran for my xover story already. Since then, theinteresting possibilities have been assailing me

2013-09-07, 05:34	Link #45778
Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	Define "possibilities". This not a Flower-and-Sweet relationship, right?

2013-09-07, 05:40	Link #45779
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	- Reluctant PT soldier Ran - Implications of SquallxMadoka - Yandere Autumn definitely Just to name a few