Infinite Stratos Character Creation and Fanfiction Discussion

[FlameSparkZ]

Originally Posted by Terminator98

Behold my newest creation...

Swedish Representative Candidate - Shizuko "Astrid" Kameyo

Info with her IS is attached along, just click on the link in her profile.

Reading her profile, Ikaros from Sora no Otoshimono came to mind
And her VA seems to fit Shizuko too.

Also, I got this sudden urge to do a bit of artwork with the whole 1-2 class in SD (aka Super Deformed/Chibi).
But there's the thing called "assigned seats"

According to the anime, the class has 6 rows, each with 5 desks, which makes a total of 30 seats.
Like so...

Spoiler for Classroom:

[ ] <--- Teacher's Desk

[ ] [ ] [ ] [ ] [ ]
[ ] [ ] [ ] [ ] [ ]
[ ] [ ] [ ] [ ] [ ]
[ ] [ ] [ ] [F] [ ] <--- Fuuko's Desk, marked with an F
[ ] [ ] [ ] [ ] [ ]
[ ] [ ] [ ] [ ] [ ]

So, I'd like to know where are the other OC's seat.
As for Rin's seat...is there any information on it? If not, we could put her on the same seat as one of the 1-1 characters.

Once it's decided, we can move over to the details :3

[Saint X]

Originally Posted by FlameSparkZ

But there's the thing called "assigned seats"

According to the anime, the class has 6 rows, each with 5 desks, which makes a total of 30 seats.
Like so...

Spoiler for Classroom:

[ ] <--- Teacher's Desk

[ ] [ ] [ ] [ ] [ ]
[ ] [ ] [ ] [ ] [ ]
[ ] [ ] [ ] [ ] [ ]
[ ] [ ] [ ] [F] [ ] <--- Fuuko's Desk, marked with an F
[ ] [ ] [ ] [ ] [ ]
[ ] [ ] [ ] [ ] [ ]

So, I'd like to know where are the other OC's seat.
As for Rin's seat...is there any information on it? If not, we could put where on the same seat as one of the 1-1 characters.

Once it's decided, we can move over to the details :3

Spoiler for Class 1-3 arrangement just in case:

[ ] <--- Teacher's Desk

[ ] [ ] [ ] [ ] [ ]
[ ] [ ] [ ] [ ] [ ]
[x] [x] [ ] [ ] [ ] <-- Twins Ange and Monique
[x] [ ] [x] [ ] [ ] <-- Maria and Elena
[ ] [ ] [ ] [ ] [ ]
[ ] [ ] [ ] [ ] [ ]

The problem is where the US Rep sits

[Keroko]

Originally Posted by FlameSparkZ

According to the anime, the class has 6 rows, each with 5 desks, which makes a total of 30 seats.
Like so...

Spoiler for Classroom:

So, I'd like to know where are the other OC's seat.
As for Rin's seat...is there any information on it? If not, we could put where on the same seat as one of the 1-1 characters.

Once it's decided, we can move over to the details :3

Well, Helena is in class 1-2, so I'm not sure if that's useful to you but here we go:

[ ] <--- Teacher's Desk

[ ] [ ] [ ] [ ] [ ]
[ ] [ ] [ ] [ ] [ ]
[ ] [ ] [ ] [ ] [ ]
[ ] [ ] [ ] [ ] [ ]
[H] [ ] [ ] [ ] [ ]
[ ] [ ] [ ] [ ] [ ]

Sleepy head + spot near the window in the back of the class = comfy time.

[Kyral]

Originally Posted by MeisterBabylon

Spoiler for IS: Shooting Star - Shift 1.3:

*snip*

...

*looks up profile*

Aaah! Come on! Less shy more dojikko! And don't just forget her main reason of being there in the first place!

Spoiler for IS: Shooting Star - Shift 1.3 - FIXED-:

I’m sorry to have ruined your yuri fantasies... Marvelous griped mentally as he bumped the next person up. “Erika Weber Kurosawa?”

“Yes!” Weber sprang up as stiff as a board at her name being called, her eyes flashing with anticipation. “I'm Erika Weber! I’m from Germany! I'm good at studying, cooking and I... Uhm.. I like...”

Amid the awkward pause, Max tried a soft, rolling gesture to keep her going. Somewhere inside, he began noticing that all the girls seemed to be following some kind of invisible moe archetype checklist in the sky. What kind of joke was God playing?

“You like...?” chimed someone out of view.

“I... I REALLY LIKE IS! IT WAS ALWAYS MY DREAM TO-Agack!!” Weber blurted out and bowing her head forward to hide her embarrassment, but sadly it caused her to slam her forehead onto her table.

"Uuuuh..." Erika hurriedly sat down, hiding her red face while rubbing her forehead.

Originally Posted by FlameSparkZ

So, I'd like to know where are the other OC's seat.
As for Rin's seat...is there any information on it? If not, we could put where on the same seat as one of the 1-1 characters.

Once it's decided, we can move over to the details :3

Sure thing! But it's class 1-2 too...

[ ] <--- Teacher's Desk

[ ] [ ] [ ] [ ] [ ]
[ ] [ ] [ ] [ ] [ ]
[ ] [ ] [ ] [E] [ ] <- Erika
[ ] [ ] [ ] [ ] [ ]
[ ] [ ] [ ] [ ] [ ]
[ ] [ ] [ ] [ ] [ ]

[Asuras]

Consider Infinite Stratos: AISA terminated. Losing time and losing fervor.

Meister, have you even started writing yet? :P I have yet to read something of yours.

[Terminator98]

Consider Infinite Stratos: AISA terminated. Losing time and losing fervor.

Meister, have you even started writing yet? :P I have yet to read something of yours.

NOEESSS... TEH ALIENS!!!!

... on a side note didn't Meister just right a little thing?

Reading her profile, Ikaros from Sora no Otoshimono came to mind
And her VA seems to fit Shizuko too.

Also, I got this sudden urge to do a bit of artwork with the whole 1-2 class in SD (aka Super Deformed/Chibi).
But there's the thing called "assigned seats"

According to the anime, the class has 6 rows, each with 5 desks, which makes a total of 30 seats.
Like so...

Woot, nice VA pick. Might consider it over my choice, but I didn't pick her for nothing... Ryō Hirohashi voiced Echo in Pandora Hearts.

So, now... if I follow the logic:



[ ] <--- Teacher's Desk

[ ] [ ] [ ] [ ] [ ]
[ ] [ ] [ ] [ ] [ ]
[ ] [ ] [ ] [ ] [ ]
[ ] [ ] [ ] [ ] [ ]
[ ] [ ] [ ] [ ] [ ]
[S] [ ] [ ] [ ] [ ] <-- Shizuko



Being at the last seat behind along the window for sunlight (heat)... Mmm, fits her perfectly.

[Asuras]

Originally Posted by JamesEdwards

Hnn, I think this is more like your deal.

That's amazing. It looks great yes, but the hydroplasm race is pure white upon their armor and very smooth as well.

Originally Posted by MeisterBabylon

Spoiler for IS: Shooting Star - Shift 1.3:

snip

Whoops. Yep. There it is.

[Dragonkid11]

Well then...

My OC are also class 1-2
[ ]

[A] [ ] [ ] [ ] [ ]<--Angelia Stark
[ ] [ ] [ ] [ ] [ ]
[ ] [ ] [ ] [ ] [ ]
[ ] [ ] [ ] [ ] [ ]
[ ] [ ] [ ] [ ] [ ]
[ ] [ ] [ ] [ ] [M]<--Minori Kuriya

I wonder why just about everyone have their OC in class 1-2...

Oh,right,it's just not normal for class 1-1 to get so much transfer student...XD

[FlameSparkZ]

Originally Posted by Terminator98

Woot, nice VA pick. Might consider it over my choice, but I didn't pick her for nothing... Ryō Hirohashi voiced Echo in Pandora Hearts.

I see, that's also a nice choice for a VA

Originally Posted by Terminator98

Being at the last seat behind along the window for sunlight (heat)... Mmm, fits her perfectly.

Yeah, and Helena who sits in front of her seems to like to take naps, so it's nice and quiet during recess

Originally Posted by Dragonkid11

I wonder why just about everyone have their OC in class 1-2...

Oh,right,it's just not normal for class 1-1 to get so much transfer student...XD

That and 1-1 class's students already have faces, not to mention that there's some support characters with their own name.

[agetreme]

Currently all my OC are in class 3....

In Meister's Fanfic Yuu is in class 2

[MeisterBabylon]

Originally Posted by FlameSparkZ

Heh :3

The tongue stuck out may be a bit too much, but nicely played.
Also, lol @ the "yuri fantasies" part

Fixed as required.

Originally Posted by Terminator98

Sorry for being such a pain... But I think you forgot to add someone...
Or more like, THERE'S SOMEONE that's just been created...

This is the new OC I made while thinking of a char absurd enough and not so far from reality that she would fit into Max's class.... yes, this one has no relation at all with Omega Division. So go ahead if you feel like using her.

Behold my newest creation...

Swedish Representative Candidate - Shizuko "Astrid" Kameyo

Info with her IS is attached along, just click on the link in her profile.

Yeah this is much more perfect. I need a Chiu in this class.

Originally Posted by Terminator98

Back to Shooting Star 1.3...
Ok, that was unexpected of Helena.
Why isn't Rachel chastising the over zealeous students though?

She's a good fighter after all.

They haven't really gone and blown a hole in the wall, so why intervene? They are free to make a fool of themselves.

Originally Posted by Kyral

...

*looks up profile*

Aaah! Come on! Less shy more dojikko! And don't just forget her main reason of being there in the first place!

Spoiler for IS: Shooting Star - Shift 1.3 - FIXED-:

I’m sorry to have ruined your yuri fantasies... Marvelous griped mentally as he bumped the next person up. “Erika Weber Kurosawa?”

“Yes!” Weber sprang up as stiff as a board at her name being called, her eyes flashing with anticipation. “I'm Erika Weber! I’m from Germany! I'm good at studying, cooking and I... Uhm.. I like...”

Amid the awkward pause, Max tried a soft, rolling gesture to keep her going. Somewhere inside, he began noticing that all the girls seemed to be following some kind of invisible moe archetype checklist in the sky. What kind of joke was God playing?

“You like...?” chimed someone out of view.

“I... I REALLY LIKE IS! IT WAS ALWAYS MY DREAM TO-Agack!!” Weber blurted out and bowing her head forward to hide her embarrassment, but sadly it caused her to slam her forehead onto her table.

"Uuuuh..." Erika hurriedly sat down, hiding her red face while rubbing her forehead.

Fixed.





~~~New Intelligence Data Updated~~~

Spoiler for IS: Shooting Star - Shift 1.3:

The recommended sitting arrangement at the Academy was according to Japanese phonetics. However, that was a foreign concept to Class 1-2, which had the largest number of transfer students and overseas scholars on campus. Even the homeroom teachers were ‘gaijin’. Thus, seating had been free and easy, with the teachers’ records updated in time for homeroom.

That also meant there was no discernable pattern for Marvelous-sensei to just shout a name and pass on the spotlight. At least, there was a touchscreen under his nose and Maximillan hit a button. The backboard behind him reacted, naming the student sitting in the far left of the foremost row. That silenced the class instantly.

“H-How about we carry on with...” Maximillan croaked sheepishly. “...Smith?”

“Yes,” Alice blurted curtly and stood up. “I am Alice Smith, a US representative candidate.”

And she sat down.

“Er...” Maximillan sweatdropped. “Anything else...?”

The young Smith kept up her disinterested gaze. “You did not mention any other details about yourself, Marvel-sensei.”

There were a few chuckles working its way around. Max bristled.

“Pardon the mistake! I couldn’t get a word in edgewise with all that noise...” He hurriedly backpedaled. “Name is as you’ve all seen,and I’m not very proud of it. I would prefer to be addressed as Maximillan or just Max. And not as though I am the boss of Stan Lee.”

“I come from the lunar colony Metro-3, and my work is my hobby. I’m sure we all love IS?”

There were a few nods.

“Same for me. I started working on robots when I was younger, then moved on to IS cores. It is... an honor to have been invited to join the teaching staff here at ISA, and to be immediately assigned a home class.”

“Frankly, I’m still catching my breath.” He shrugged. “So please, go easy on me.”

Now a hand shot up in the crowd. From the viewscreen, it belonged to... one Catherine O’Donell.

“Yes, Catherine?” Max, feeling that he was getting a handle on things, said in the nicest, ‘teacherly’ tone he could muster.

O’Donell went straight for the kill. “Do you have a girlfriend?”

His eyes widened for a second, and he remembered to clamp his jaws shut. It wasn’t a surprise question -after the earlier ruckus, he had suspected someone would soon come up with it. But the answer was harder coming than he had expected...

“No, Max-nii-chan doesn’t!” chirped a little voice at the end of the room.

A wave of heads turning towards the back row rolled as Max turned pale. Just what are you planning, Kha?!

“Max-nii-chan went to a boys school, so he’s been very excited about becoming our teacher!” Karon continued, beaming.

No such thing!! Max screamed inside as half of the girls exploded into activity again. This time, Browning rapped on the board, prompting silence.

The Marvelous Teacher heaved a breath of dejection, knowing that the peaceful days he longed for will never come. “Smith, all your’s...”

“Well then,” Alice panned. “I am from Los Angeles, and I like burgers.”

Maximillan paused and waited... Smith kept on eyeballing... then Max gave up.

“Next...” Another name replaced Alice’s. “Teo Jinyu?”

“Present~” The next student in the second row sang as she stood up. “You can call me Tio Ginjyo, its the Japanese approximation.”

“Duly noted,” Maximillan nodded, relaxing now that a proper student had appeared.

“I am from Singapore Metropolis the Third,” Gin spoke with gentle regal. “Or Metro-3, like we usually call it. I like sweet things, tea time and I really hope to do a lot of fun things with everyone.”

Her radiant expression and flawless demeanor certainly had a lot going for her.

“Tio...” echoed a voice in the far corner. “Could you be Tio Chisien’s daughter?!”

“Eh...” Gin replied shyly.

“The Grand Admiral of the Singapore Navy?!” cried another student. “That means, you’re a real princess!”

“Er...” Ginjyo put forward humbly. “It’s not that grand... I only hope to be your friend, as equals.”

She gave a small bow to raptuous applause. “Please guide me!”

“I’m sure we all will,” Max added. He then noticed in the seat beside Gin was a little mop of blue, topped off with black cat ear implements. Her body heaved slowly to her breathing, oblivious to the din that had been rumbling till then. The teacher was about to point it out when Gin intervened.

“This is Helena de Wolf. She just got here this morning so she hasn’t had much sleep...”

Max waved it on and pushed the next person up. [Amamiya Fuuko] appeared on the board.

“Che,” tsked the angry redhead seated behind Gin.

Che?! Maximillan thought.

“Ah, what a drag,” Fuuko chained, arms as crossed as she was. “I’m obviously from Japan and I feel sorry that men have invaded the sacred grounds of ISA. You’d think that after IS was invented that they would get a hint? But nooo they keep on popping up."

She finished with a disapproving shrug. “It grosses me out just to think of what they might be after...”

I’m sorry to have ruined your yuri fantasies... Marvelous griped mentally as he bumped the next person up. “Erika Weber Kurosawa?”

“Yes!” Weber sprang up as stiff as a board at her name being called, her eyes flashing with anticipation. “I'm Erika Weber! I’m from Germany! I'm good at studying, cooking and I... Uhm.. I like...”

Amid the awkward pause, Max tried a soft, rolling gesture to keep her going. Somewhere inside, he began noticing that all the girls seemed to be following some kind of invisible moe archetype checklist in the sky. What kind of joke was God playing?

“You like...?” chimed someone out of view.

“I... I REALLY LIKE IS! IT WAS ALWAYS MY DREAM TO-Agack!!” Weber blurted out and bowing her head forward to hide her embarrassment, but sadly it caused her to slam her forehead onto her table.

"Uuuuh..." Erika hurriedly sat down, hiding her red face while rubbing her forehead.

She even sounds like Momo... Maximillan thought absent-mindedly. “Kamijyou-chan?”

Wait why did I just sound like a loli school teacher?!

“What’s with the ‘-chan’, Teacher?” the girl in male uniform said as she got up. “I’m not a softie, you know.”

“Apologies, it just sort of flowed...” Yeah, sort of.

“Well then, I’ve been preparing for this moment...” Yuu sucked in a breath, then yelled, “My name is Yuu! Kamijyou Yuu!”

And she posed, partially summoning an IS-type katana. “The sword that cleaves aliens!”

“As expected of the counter alien... something.”
“CASIO, it’s CASIO.”

“It’s CA-SaI-O!” Yuu protested as her blade vanished. “There’s a big difference!!”

“Yes, yes...”

"Let's see..." Max tabbed on next. "Astrid Kameyo?"

"Yes." The pinked haired girl in the last row took the stand. "I am the Swedish representative candidate. I read."

She returned to her seat as mechanically as she had left. This time, Max decided to not waste time and moved on to the next name.

“Huang Lingyi?”

All eyes were on the blank seat in front of the second row.

“She’s absent?” Max asked.

“Oh yeah, that girl,” Browning cut in. “The Commies rang this morning saying that their representative got delayed because of her personal unit was still being tuned.”

“Sounds like quite a hassle, these personal units,” Marvelous concluded.

“Don’t worry about her,” Rachel waved him on. “She’ll be arriving tomorrow morning.”

“Super... Someone with an actual personal IS!!”
“She should be our Class Rep! Then we can go against Class 1-1’s Brittainian!”

“I don’t think we should decide that behind another person’s back...” Max added.

“I’m in favor of that suggestion,” Browning closed. “It is tactically sound. We can put it down to the price to pay for missing 1 day of school.”

"If you say so..." Max moved on to the sleeping Wolfe. "Could somebody wake her?"

"I... do not think that would be wise..." Gin replied nervously.

"Ah there's no need to be shy about this, she's been knocked out long enough."

Marvelous scooted over, prompting Tio to jump out of her seat. Before anyone else could process what was happening, the boy had his hand on the sleepyhead's shoulder.

"Say, wake up, Wol--"

There was a blue whirlwind, then Max found himself somersaulting through the air. The class was silenced by Helena's erect form in a last stance of a judo throw, only to be interrupted by the crash and clatter of Maximillan returning to earth.

"I tried to warn you, Teacher..." Gin added in sympathy. "Helena has a rather violent reflex..."

Helena flopped back down, dreaming of beef jerkys as though nothing had happened.

"This class... will be the death of me..." were the silver boy's last words.

Marvelous, stop breaking the 4th wall.

Also, Shizuko appears.

Btw, looks like the IS: SS arrangement is really messed up from everyone's takes...

[1] [7] [] [] []
[2] [8] [] [] []
[3] [] [11] [] []
[4] [] [] [] []
[5] [12] [] [] []
[6] [9] [10] [] []

1. Alice Smith
2. Teo Jinyu
3. Amamiya Fuuko
4. Erika Weber
5. Kamijyou Yuu
6. Astrid
7. Huang Lingyi
8. Helena de Wolfe (since Jinyu is her roommate and moved her to class ala Sanya)
9. Gou Karon
10. Catherine O'Donell
11. Priscilla Spark (Angelia Stark)
12. Kougami Tsubomi


Yeah, I guess my seating is completely AU now...

[Keroko]

Originally Posted by Terminator98

Back to Shooting Star 1.3...
Ok, that was unexpected of Helena.
Why isn't Rachel chastising the over zealeous students though?

Rather unexpected indeed. I don't recall writing any violent reflexes in her profile...

And it's 'Wolf' as in the Dutch word for the wolf species (pronounced "wohlf"). Wolfe is more close to the German plural for wolf (missing the ö though, if memory serves).

[Kyral]

Originally Posted by MeisterBabylon

Fixed.

Originally Posted by Keroko

Wolfe is more close to the German plural for wolf (missing the ö though, if memory serves).

Jupp. Wölfe is the plural.

[FlameSparkZ]

Originally Posted by MeisterBabylon

Btw, looks like the IS: SS arrangement is really messed up from everyone's takes...

[1] [7] [] [] []
[2] [8] [] [] []
[3] [] [11] [] []
[4] [] [] [] []
[5] [12] [] [] []
[6] [9] [10] [] []

1. Alice Smith
2. Teo Jinyu
3. Amamiya Fuuko
4. Erika Weber
5. Kamijyou Yuu
6. Astrid
7. Huang Lingyi
8. Helena de Wolfe (since Jinyu is her roommate and moved her to class ala Sanya)
9. Gou Karon
10. Catherine O'Donell
11. Priscilla Spark (Angelia Stark)
12. Kougami Tsubomi


Yeah, I guess my seating is completely AU now...

Does it have to be like that?
I chose Fuuko's seat in accordance to her pesonality: not too far, but also not too close, because she doesn't want to stand out.
Then again, with a class like this...

[EDIT:] Nevermind what was here >_<

[Saint X]

Originally Posted by Dragonkid11

I wonder why just about everyone have their OC in class 1-2...

I placed mine in 1-3 so that it would be far enough to stave off the hijinks of 1-1 and 1-2 but close enough to be somewhat involved later.

i might as well create "the legend of the untouchable" while i'm at it

[MeisterBabylon]

Ah well... I'm busy. Someone go do the compiled seating including Huang Lingyi/Rin (I alternated between spellings), and I'll go rewrite 1.3 according to it.

Feel free to place Karon anywhere, but try to place Jinyu beside Helena? Put Sarah and Yoko in there. Also, place SaintX's Ange and Monique in there somewhere as well; I'm using them in 1-2 for obligatory twins.

Thanks a bunch guys.

@Keroko: The violent reflexes was more of a spur of the moment thing. Innocent sleeper is not innocent kinda thing.

Granted that would change with the agreed seating arrangement...




EDIT: Because of the number of characters, I'll only be focusing on a few each time. But I will eventually feature all of them.

[SaintessHeart]

Originally Posted by MeisterBabylon

Also, Shizuko appears.

Btw, looks like the IS: SS arrangement is really messed up from everyone's takes...

[1] [7] [] [] []
[2] [8] [] [] []
[3] [] [11] [] []
[4] [] [] [] []
[5] [12] [] [] []
[6] [9] [10] [] []

1. Alice Smith
2. Teo Jinyu
3. Amamiya Fuuko
4. Erika Weber
5. Kamijyou Yuu
6. Astrid
7. Huang Lingyi
8. Helena de Wolfe (since Jinyu is her roommate and moved her to class ala Sanya)
9. Gou Karon
10. Catherine O'Donell
11. Priscilla Spark (Angelia Stark)
12. Kougami Tsubomi


Yeah, I guess my seating is completely AU now...

Isn't it already agreed like a hundred pages ago that Helena's roommate is Kari?

[MeisterBabylon]

*DONG*

I CLEAN FORGOT!!

This is what happens when you work in ED for the whole week on end...

I'm also facing a little dilemma with regards to Karon's roommate. Its now a toss-up between Fuuko and Shiyi... Shall we run a vote?

[SaintessHeart]

Originally Posted by MeisterBabylon

*DONG*

I CLEAN FORGOT!!

This is what happens when you work in ED for the whole week on end...

I'm also facing a little dilemma with regards to Karon's roommate. Its now a toss-up between Fuuko and Shiyi... Shall we run a vote?

I am fine with Rachel anywhere in the class, but I think ever since I created Rachel she is already Karon's roommate, courtesy of the Metro embassy's "arrangements".

Another drawing :

Spoiler for Kari and Lena:

This pic is a mess. Couldn't get the details done properly with a mechanical pencil and most features are either too sharp or badly shaded. And my scanner cropped out the pantyshot. Dammit.

I was thinking of putting Kari right behind Lena so she could watch over that wolf which sleeps like a pig.

[MeisterBabylon]

Alright then. Btw, can I drop the Rachel part of her name? Need to differentiate her from Rachel Browning. I've been modifying OCs a little here and there to make the whole package better.