Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by wanwan1203

o_O i... umm well i am a fan.. but *goes to her corner* i won't be joining that fan army that's gonna be coming after satashi. o.o ^^;;;;

edit: page claim.. page claimed for umm making love? yeah... i'm gonna go.. hide now.. for that... umm yeah.. o.o;;; the world needs more love!! loveeeee!!!

"All you need is love" ~ The Beetles

Profile Page Update:

Ilya has once again been renamed to AX
Evil Rick has been completed!

[Evil Rick]

Originally Posted by Kha

AWESOME!!!

Thanks

Originally Posted by Satashi

Spoiler for Vivio/Syn (Adult) Vivio POV, NSFW:

Soft touching, questioning fingertips, shaking breath.

The feelings came so suddenly it scared me a little. Gentle hands touched my skin, warm breath came against my ear. A sticky moist tongue touched my neck and trailed downwards to my collar bone and lips embraced the skin there.

Sudden suction, embracing arms, loving whispers.

Her hand was placed against my chest, fingertips on my neck. Slowly, experimenting, it slid down between my breasts. Warmth flooded wherever she touched, followed by a longing chill that lingered when she moved. The hand slid over my stomach, to my side, and around to embrace my lower back and more.

Shy pants, longing gazes, encouraging nods.

Her lips went lower as I was laid back, her blue hair spilling over my body. Her mouth came to my chest again, hand moving down my thigh. I felt my body twitch under her fingertips, my breath escaping my mouth in a hushed gasp.

Interlacing fingers, heats beating, embarrassed blushing.

Her weight came on me, body damp with sweat. Our mouths opened as we kissed, sloppily trying to learn how to do it. My leg went around her waist as she rocked forward, making us both suck in each other's air and pause to let our bodies calm down from the intense rush.

Longing kisses, Shaking fingers, submissive breathing.

Yeah, that came from no where. Sorry I can't finish it on AnimeSuki ><

@_@ I'm speakless...
As always a wonderfull way to describe the character's feelings ^.^

Originally Posted by Satashi

Profile Page Update:

Ilya has once again been renamed to AX
Evil Rick has been completed!

Thanks Satashi

[Satashi]

Spoiler for short!:

Nanoha slowly sat up in bed and blinked, rubbing her eyes briefly before moving to stand up. Carefully she walked to her closet and picked up her uniform and then proceeded to unbutton her shirt.

Fate groggily woke up and opened one eye, seeing Nanoha sliding up her panties and grinning to herself. "Have a good day, Nanoha."

Jumping lightly, Nanoha blushed and looked over at her with a smile. "Love you, Fate-chan."

Why did I write that? 'cause it happened to Angel and me, and I thought it was funny

[NorthernFallout]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Spoiler for short!:

Why did I write that? 'cause it happened to Angel and me, and I thought it was funny

Interesting...*computes new information and saves to memory bank*

[Evil Rick]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Spoiler for short!:

Nanoha slowly sat up in bed and blinked, rubbing her eyes briefly before moving to stand up. Carefully she walked to her closet and picked up her uniform and then proceeded to unbutton her shirt.

Fate groggily woke up and opened one eye, seeing Nanoha sliding up her panties and grinning to herself. "Have a good day, Nanoha."

Jumping lightly, Nanoha blushed and looked over at her with a smile. "Love you, Fate-chan."

Why did I write that? 'cause it happened to Angel and me, and I thought it was funny

happened... to you and Angel?!

[Ryand-Smith]

Well proof that Satashi is a girl? Confirmed for Brawl?

Spoiler for Short Fluff Work Fate v Vivio, AU post StrikerS:

Ok, here goes.

Supreme Khrack

"So, these are the old Kaiser's weapons..." Nanoha looked at the report, the signs of belkan magic scrolling down the screen, as Hayate responded, "Yes, but, it seems that Vivio made some changes. She still uses attacks from all of us, but she made her own style, an aggressive form of support, to be frank. As the two Aces were focused on the belkan magic, Rein put on the S Rank Practice match, as Fate stretched, Vivio in the custom barrier jacket, the blue and white resembling her mother's own flight uniform, but with several drastic changes to the makeup.

It had pants, the pale white colors matching a pattern commonly seen in traditional stealth getups, as the belt seemed to have an extended blue blouse, tucked under a plain white belt. Her blue blouse let into white shoulders, which seemed to fall into a shortened, white upper arm, before the core of her device became clear. Large, overpowered hand guards, similar to Subaru's Mach Calibur covered both her hands, as yellow daggers waited for their moment, the two on each hand guard waiting for some sort of cue

"Fate-Momma, I'm going to show you why me and my General Fighter are worthy of the S rank"

The older mage laughed, as she simply replied, through telekentic means "Show me what we both taught you."

Nanoha smiled over the com, as she signaled the go ahead, the fight match starting with a bang. At first appearance, Vivio seemed stuck, the normally aerial fighter waiting on the ground, and Fate obliged her, her Photon Lancer firing a bolt from the blue at Vivio's form. The teenager smiled, as she placed up a round barrier, the bolt dissipating from view.

"Momma, at least give me a better fight than that," the teenager remarked, as the device said "Cartridge Load!" That cry was the one she needed, the magical flow rushing to her body, her confidence suddenly rising to amazing levels

"Left yourself open, Vivio-Chan" the Ace Enforcer reminded her, her device switched over to the riot form, the shortened dress a physical symbol of the Aces' strength, beauty, and fury
She quickly delivered a series of short and precise slices, each one alerting her to the weaknesses of the teenager's omnidriectional shield.

"Vivio, you can't just focus on defensive" the Ace consoled, as Vivio seemed to have a smile on her face.

"Nanoha, look, she's going to go for the attack I told you about, the finishing move from the book!"

"Mama, with my General Fighter," Vivio's right hand seemed to glow, as she silently thanked Subaru for the technique basis, the practice runs coming in handy.

"This hand of mine, glows with my own power! Its burning grip tells me to surpass you!"

Fate shifted her device to the Zamber form now, her own personal limiters released, "Well, then, I shall have to show you the way an Ace functions!" She took a massive swing, as Vivio seemed to rush forward, deftly evading the blade with the finesse of an ace flying mage...

"Mama, Here I go... Divine Forward... Finger!" The teenager seemed to have a burning pasion, as she attempted to go for the finisher, but the strike of the riot form blocked her assault, as Fate simply said,

"The way of a true S mage is not through mimics, it is through realizing that achieving the mission goal is not always glorious! But, since you managed to evade my Zamber form, I'll see if I can take you onto the next level.

Well how is it?

[BPHaru]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Spoiler for short!:

Nanoha slowly sat up in bed and blinked, rubbing her eyes briefly before moving to stand up. Carefully she walked to her closet and picked up her uniform and then proceeded to unbutton her shirt.

Fate groggily woke up and opened one eye, seeing Nanoha sliding up her panties and grinning to herself. "Have a good day, Nanoha."

Jumping lightly, Nanoha blushed and looked over at her with a smile. "Love you, Fate-chan."

Why did I write that? 'cause it happened to Angel and me, and I thought it was funny

First I took a read over the short.
It was nice.
Then I took a look at the end note.
It was AWESOME!

Sataurial FTW!

Cuídense y sigan sonriendo

[nictory]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Spoiler for short!:

Nanoha slowly sat up in bed and blinked, rubbing her eyes briefly before moving to stand up. Carefully she walked to her closet and picked up her uniform and then proceeded to unbutton her shirt.

Fate groggily woke up and opened one eye, seeing Nanoha sliding up her panties and grinning to herself. "Have a good day, Nanoha."

Jumping lightly, Nanoha blushed and looked over at her with a smile. "Love you, Fate-chan."

Why did I write that? 'cause it happened to Angel and me, and I thought it was funny

Whaaa?

[Evil Rick]

Hey people, I had started something called Biorenders Project, to put is short, thei'r the Bios of my OCs presented in Renders (images)

At the moment I had only 4 from Nanoha, Rise of Techno - Union (Zaeta, ROBO_GATSURALLY, Dr. Faus and The Holly Techno - Union Emperor), but I'll be updating soon with the upcoming OCs of Vita, Shadows of the Past

Why you don't take a look in the link below and tell me what you think?

Bio Renders Project

[Kaix]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Spoiler for To Make a Mother Proud pt.5:

It has been an entire day since we arrived now. Morale in the camp was low despite us being there with them, which I understood. When they said they were out of food, they were out of food. I felt horrible that I had something to eat in my backpack but at the same time I knew that I could give everyone on base something to eat and it would be nothing more than half of a bite. That wouldn't do anything at all, so Syn and I just stayed quiet.

"I'm bored." Syn spoke up idly in our tent. "Want to train?"

"We can't while on a mission, you know that." I was polishing Fallen Soul in his weapon form without much interest in doing so. I kept my weapon perfectly clean at all times, just as Nanoha-mama did. I guess it became a habit over the time I've had a device.

"We could do it mentally. Come on, Vi?"

I looked at Syn's hopeful eyes and sighed. "Okay, just for a little bit." I placed m weapon down next to us and turned to face her. Syn sat on her knees and I scooted close with my legs on either side. Our hands touched lightly and we slowly laced our fingers together. Her forehead met mine and I felt her breath on my lips. Inhale... Exhale...Inhale...

Our breathing matched after a few moments and I felt the link with her establish. We were suddenly in the air over a river, both in barrier jackets and holding our weapons. I was aware of her body being close to mine but at the same time my mind was telling me exactly where she was in the air. She attacked first, drawing the string of her bow and forming an arrow into it, smiling at me respectfully before shooting.

"Excuse me!" Someone poked their head into our tent, shocking both of us enough to gasp and fall apart.

I fell on my back, hands escaping my friends, and groaned while bringing my fingers to my head to rub my temples. Having such an intense mental connection broken so suddenly always gave me a migraine. "What?" I asked a little harshly.

"Oh, sorry, I didn't mean to intrude..."

Syn answered before I could. "Keep your fantasies to yourself, we were sparring mentally." She rubbed her head ruefully. "What do you need? Can we help you?"

"The sergeant wishes to see you." The man looked at us one more time before continuing. "He's in the middle of the base."

I nodded at Syn and we both picked up our weapons before heading out of our tent and into the warmth of the sun. I spotted the man at once and we both saluted when close enough. "Reporting, sir." I stated crisply.

"I just got word about troops coming towards us. I would like you two to be at the front line."

Syn saluted and was given permission to speak freely. "Sir, I am a ranged mage. I would do best in the middle or near the end of formation."

"Are you not fast enough?"

"Sir, I have more defense than maneuverability."

He snorted. "I wouldn't have guessed with those little fairy wings of yours." I grinned and had to bite my tongue not to laugh. Syn was touchy about her barrier jacket, that I had personally helped make, and the cute little wings on it were normally a point that most people avoided talking about. Back at the base we were both highly respected, but here it seemed as if we were being treated as we are.... twelve year old privates.

Syn narrowed her eyes but didn't say anything. Instead, the man continued. "Fine, take your back position. Do you have any problems, Takamachi?"

"No sir, I am best at mid to close range."

"Good. Go to where everyone is gathering and prepare to fight." He glared at us both, hard. "And do your job properly this time, will you?" HE turned his back on us and I stuck my tongue out at him.

"This time, Vi." Syn held up her bow and grinned. "Let's show him and Hayate both that we are more than capable of doing missions on our own!"

She was always so confident, but almost never overly so. Seeing her standing there with that look on her face filled me with pride as well, and I couldn't help but smile at her. "Yeah! We'll show them!"

Battles coming up? Still looks interesting this far

Originally Posted by Satashi

Spoiler for short!:

Nanoha slowly sat up in bed and blinked, rubbing her eyes briefly before moving to stand up. Carefully she walked to her closet and picked up her uniform and then proceeded to unbutton her shirt.

Fate groggily woke up and opened one eye, seeing Nanoha sliding up her panties and grinning to herself. "Have a good day, Nanoha."

Jumping lightly, Nanoha blushed and looked over at her with a smile. "Love you, Fate-chan."

Why did I write that? 'cause it happened to Angel and me, and I thought it was funny

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

Hey people, I had started something called Biorenders Project, to put is short, thei'r the Bios of my OCs presented in Renders (images)

At the moment I had only 4 from Nanoha, Rise of Techno - Union (Zaeta, ROBO_GATSURALLY, Dr. Faus and The Holly Techno - Union Emperor), but I'll be updating soon with the upcoming OCs of Vita, Shadows of the Past

Why you don't take a look in the link below and tell me what you think?

Bio Renders Project

I hope you still have the PSD files, because you wrote at Zaeta's profile at her alignment 'God' instead of 'Good'.
Otherwise, those look really nice (I like the overall design) and it's easy to access information on the characters. Besides, it has an awesome sounding name.

[Raging Heart]

Originally Posted by wanwan1203

o_O i... umm well i am a fan.. but *goes to her corner* i won't be joining that fan army that's gonna be coming after satashi. o.o ^^;;;;

edit: page claim.. page claimed for umm making love? yeah... i'm gonna go.. hide now.. for that... umm yeah.. o.o;;; the world needs more love!! loveeeee!!!

love? too bad is no longer real anymore, true love is gone, thanks to the people i don't beleive on it anymore.


i have an idea (evil smile and devil horns.) *Ranging runs out of the room laughing evily.*

ok ok evil ideas appear in my mind, lolz and i can't help it if i am bad.

169 victims, ask my family i am evil special when i throw my tricks at others.

[wanwan1203]

.........................
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

OMG!!!!!!!!! oh my freakin' god!!! Arigatou Sheitarou updated Red R o s e s!!!!!!

gahhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! @_@!! is this real????

my ANGST!! my lovely angst has returned!!! *squeals in delight and giddily heads over to ff.net to read/check*

ah i'm so happy right now X3!!! *huggles laptop*

[Kha]

*fans the hyperthermic wanwan*

[wanwan1203]

Originally Posted by Kha

*fans the hyperthermic wanwan*

*me thanks kha*

@_@ well... update was real.. and damn that was so awesome!! *cries* angsttttttt!!! awesome chapter. awesome writing!! oh the ulcers!! they live!!! i was squirming while reading it. really squriming irl. @.@ i missed those uncomfortable feelings in my chest and tummy that only sheitarou's writing can induce. (in that section and genre anyway ^^') things don't bode well for Fate. i can feel it!!! ><!! *waits patiently for the next update* though... 4 months since the last update. o.o

god...sooo gooood. DX

[labpartner]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Spoiler for short!:

Nanoha slowly sat up in bed and blinked, rubbing her eyes briefly before moving to stand up. Carefully she walked to her closet and picked up her uniform and then proceeded to unbutton her shirt.

Fate groggily woke up and opened one eye, seeing Nanoha sliding up her panties and grinning to herself. "Have a good day, Nanoha."

Jumping lightly, Nanoha blushed and looked over at her with a smile. "Love you, Fate-chan."

Why did I write that? 'cause it happened to Angel and me, and I thought it was funny

Satashi you made my day again at 9 am!

[Evil Rick]

Thanks Kai, my Biorenders Project updated with 2 new OCs from Vita,Shadows of the Past

Maligno and Parca

Biorenders Project

[Satashi]

So last night I had a dream

It was Nanoha Season 4.

But they were all highschool kids, and It was after school. Subaru and Tia were were in some club eating. NAnoha,Fate,Caro/Erio (teens) were all together and came in. ERio threw Strada @_@ at Tia and sniped a hair off her hair. and the two looked over in shock. Erio said "Sorry, Strada couldn't see, had a spec of metal in his eye" and for some reason, everyone laughed. They haven't seen each other in ages it seems.

So then Caro looks at the stage of the club and goes "We just gonna eat?" and everyone shakes their head.

Next thing I know, They're on Stage. Erio is on Drums, Tia is Singing, Subaru is on guitar, Caro is on Bass, and Nanoha and Fate (now loli) are doing some ubar cute dance.

And several people from Fon Filia are at the cafe watching them, and I'm sitting there at a table with TeleIce sharing a parfait with her. Angel was at another table on her laptop, drawing. Eva was walking around with some food on a tray looking for a seat, Wan was spazzing and flailing around.....and I can't remeber much else but I remember a lot being there.

......WTF!?

[Blue-Phoenix]

Originally Posted by Satashi

So last night I had a dream

It was Nanoha Season 4.

But they were all highschool kids, and It was after school. Subaru and Tia were were in some club eating. NAnoha,Fate,Caro/Erio (teens) were all together and came in. ERio threw Strada @_@ at Tia and sniped a hair off her hair. and the two looked over in shock. Erio said "Sorry, Strada couldn't see, had a spec of metal in his eye" and for some reason, everyone laughed. They haven't seen each other in ages it seems.

So then Caro looks at the stage of the club and goes "We just gonna eat?" and everyone shakes their head.

Next thing I know, They're on Stage. Erio is on Drums, Tia is Singing, Subaru is on guitar, Caro is on Bass, and Nanoha and Fate (now loli) are doing some ubar cute dance.

And several people from Fon Filia are at the cafe watching them, and I'm sitting there at a table with TeleIce sharing a parfait with her. Angel was at another table on her laptop, drawing. Eva was walking around with some food on a tray looking for a seat, Wan was spazzing and flailing around.....and I can't remeber much else but I remember a lot being there.

......WTF!?

Maybe you should cut down on the amount of Nanoha related things you do before bed. That is a really funky dream

That or it is a sign that you should be doing more nanoha related things. Must go ponder this....

[labpartner]

Originally Posted by Satashi

So last night I had a dream

It was Nanoha Season 4.

But they were all highschool kids, and It was after school. Subaru and Tia were were in some club eating. NAnoha,Fate,Caro/Erio (teens) were all together and came in. ERio threw Strada @_@ at Tia and sniped a hair off her hair. and the two looked over in shock. Erio said "Sorry, Strada couldn't see, had a spec of metal in his eye" and for some reason, everyone laughed. They haven't seen each other in ages it seems.

So then Caro looks at the stage of the club and goes "We just gonna eat?" and everyone shakes their head.

Next thing I know, They're on Stage. Erio is on Drums, Tia is Singing, Subaru is on guitar, Caro is on Bass, and Nanoha and Fate (now loli) are doing some ubar cute dance.

And several people from Fon Filia are at the cafe watching them, and I'm sitting there at a table with TeleIce sharing a parfait with her. Angel was at another table on her laptop, drawing. Eva was walking around with some food on a tray looking for a seat, Wan was spazzing and flailing around.....and I can't remeber much else but I remember a lot being there.

......WTF!?

I heard that there will be BIG news about Nanoha in August. It may be either Season 4 or OVA.

[Kaix]

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

Thanks Kai, my Biorenders Project updated with 2 new OCs from Vita,Shadows of the Past

Maligno and Parca

Biorenders Project

Wohoo, new characters. Maligno makes me think of Vikings, while Parca is... interesting.
It's 'unknown' not 'unknow' btw. I hope you don't mind me mentioning, but I'm just trying to help.

Originally Posted by Satashi

So last night I had a dream

It was Nanoha Season 4.

But they were all highschool kids, and It was after school. Subaru and Tia were were in some club eating. NAnoha,Fate,Caro/Erio (teens) were all together and came in. ERio threw Strada @_@ at Tia and sniped a hair off her hair. and the two looked over in shock. Erio said "Sorry, Strada couldn't see, had a spec of metal in his eye" and for some reason, everyone laughed. They haven't seen each other in ages it seems.

So then Caro looks at the stage of the club and goes "We just gonna eat?" and everyone shakes their head.

Next thing I know, They're on Stage. Erio is on Drums, Tia is Singing, Subaru is on guitar, Caro is on Bass, and Nanoha and Fate (now loli) are doing some ubar cute dance.

And several people from Fon Filia are at the cafe watching them, and I'm sitting there at a table with TeleIce sharing a parfait with her. Angel was at another table on her laptop, drawing. Eva was walking around with some food on a tray looking for a seat, Wan was spazzing and flailing around.....and I can't remeber much else but I remember a lot being there.

......WTF!?

Nice dream. Have you been eating anything weird before going to bed by any chance? Whatever the cause, funky dream!

EDIT: Page claim for funky dreams! xD