2011-03-21, 02:21 | Link #981 | |
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2011-03-22, 10:28 | Link #983 | |
Takao Tsundere Cruiser
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2011-03-22, 10:58 | Link #984 | |
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Your idea for your fan fic great, as others suggest, try to find a beta reader or keep on reading English newspapers and listen learning channels like discovery , national geographic, history channel ( well that how i broaden my English vocabulary english is also a 2nd language to me ) I wish you well on your fan fiction |
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2011-03-23, 01:14 | Link #985 | ||
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Again 2 of my OCs will be part of main characters in my fanfic like the other and about his power (the boy one only) Spoiler:
About the other still not introduced yet Actually the reason why I put the Oc earlier to introduce to other about the OC, again I can see it very bad idea (I will repair this mistake) About Mikoto , yeah! Time to redo it Quote:
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2011-03-23, 01:42 | Link #986 |
Princess or Plunderer?
Join Date: May 2009
Location: the Philippines
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Not here to burst your bubble, but how did the Dual-Skill acquire its two powers?
In canon, there is no such thing as a Dual-Skill, and the only instance of Dual-Skill (and Multi-Skill) - Teacher Harumi Kiyama - becomes one because of the 10000 brains connected using the Level Upper Network.
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2011-03-23, 01:55 | Link #987 | |
We're Back
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Location: Redgrave City
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Logically, the only way you're gonna get dual skill is if your character has two brains, and I don't mean the one below.
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2011-03-23, 02:06 | Link #988 | |
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Dual Skill mean an ESPer that able to use more than one ability as the only true exist dual-skill is Tsuchimikado Motoharu (who actually magician-Esper hybrid (again he actually can't be said as truly Dual-Skill (if I put the actual concept of real Dual-Skill), which also the same case with My OC)) My OC is like Touma, someone who already have his own unique ability Spoiler for his power called:
Back again , my OC having his own ability + ESPer ability (again, my OC seems powerful, but his ability actually have much ... in fact too much limitations) Touma in fact can be dual-skill (if not because his Imagine Breaker blocking his power and label he as Level 0) Last edited by WiliamZ0; 2011-03-23 at 02:25. |
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2011-03-23, 02:44 | Link #991 | |
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Actually the first impression most people would get is that he has one power that lets him do all that. Even the 7th Level 5, who display a wide range of capabilities, people still believe it's just one power that does all that.
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2011-03-23, 02:59 | Link #993 | |
Princess or Plunderer?
Join Date: May 2009
Location: the Philippines
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Just make it one ability.
My suggestion: Atomizer (分子解体) [Molecular Disassembly]. Quote:
In fact, in one of my fanfiction projects, I have a character with the ability to control gravity, but the ability is fully active only for 1 second at a time because he's just a Level 3 (no passive AIM as well).
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2011-03-23, 03:06 | Link #995 | |
Princess or Plunderer?
Join Date: May 2009
Location: the Philippines
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EDIT: Since the fanfiction group is inactive, I might as well dump my esper ability ideas here as well. > Perfect Slick (抵抗急減) [Sudden Friction Reduction] - Creates an area around the esper where friction is drastically reduced (to the natural friction of ice). Level 2. > Metal Flame (発火榴弾) [Explosive Projectile] - A variation of esper ability which controls the element calcium. It replicates the conditions of the creation of Greek fire. Level 3. > Gravity Point (重心顕現) [Manifestation of Gravity] - Allows an esper to create a small spherical area where gravity attracts nearby objects towards that small area. The effect lasts for 1 second. Level 3 or 4.
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Then again, [Dark Matter] isn't really dark matter...
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2011-03-23, 18:28 | Link #997 | |
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@Chaos2Frozen: A magic spell, uh? |
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2011-03-23, 19:33 | Link #998 |
Princess or Plunderer?
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Location: the Philippines
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I was thinking of a girl who likes to make pranks on other girls whom she did not like by letting them slip. Although moving like a skater on ice ain't so shabby as well.
Also, I agree on the challenge of making spells using the canon of Index. I have to research on Philippine folklore just to create abilities for two of my OC's! D:
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2011-03-23, 20:43 | Link #1000 | |
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I even have one of the line Spoiler for this is only a line of my another fanfic not newest one:
About the newest one, I probably will add Islam while looking at good place to put them I have someone that skilled in this part (I mean someone skilled in Islam) |
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