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Eratas123 · 2012-02-14, 07:38

@ Treme - Nope, I'm pretty sure it's me, if the voices I'm hearing are any indication...

ZeroXSEED · 2012-02-14, 07:38

Well, I can't considering she still a Junior High Student (and pretty much average shmuck at it). Unless I took a grimdark route and have her kidnapped & brainwashed being few girls who has A-rank and haven't yet to be scouted...

Eratas123 · 2012-02-14, 07:41

They don't need to kidnap her (Think they can get past Gen, Ren, and Dan?), just have her rn some tests. If they find her aptitude and sync rate is amazing, she can replace Kanzashi.....which adds more drama.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-02-14, 07:47

She has A, approximately the same as Kanzashi...

also, when 7 I.S.-like unit (who unlike cheapskates, battery powered unit) descend toward you, packing at the least enough firepower to sink a battleship....

Maybe I should keep her in extra for her own good, thank you for the suggestion though.

HasuMasu · 2012-02-14, 07:49

Quote:

Originally Posted by agetreme

Not you, me.

The crackiest part of that story is that Cecilia's size is bigger than Houki's.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-02-14, 07:51

..... Are you for real? I though Cecil is smaller than Houki.

agetreme · 2012-02-14, 07:53

actually Cecilia's chest is smaller than Houki.... -_-

Read: forced into it

HasuMasu · 2012-02-14, 08:00

Oh I read it wrong, I forgot about Laura...false alarm.

Eratas123 · 2012-02-14, 08:01

@ Senpai - Your choice

Not everyone has to get a role. I just like giving extra's roles for some reason

StratoSpear · 2012-02-14, 10:13

Double-scene~!

Spoiler for Scene 1:

Spoiler for Scene 2:

ZeroXSEED · 2012-02-14, 10:52

What have I done....

Eratas123 · 2012-02-14, 21:09

@ Senpai - What's wrong?

ZeroXSEED · 2012-02-14, 21:12

I somehow managed to insert les yay and Ho yay (in that order), as well as more Rin-Charles tease, but felt half-assed, need to improve it somehow

6600 and counting! Oh my!

Eratas123 · 2012-02-14, 21:19

Good job on reaching 6k words

I'm just finishing up my first beta reading project.

Side note - Not sure if I asked this before, but here goes: Which of the girls would be good parents, and what kind of parents would they be?

ZeroXSEED · 2012-02-14, 21:25

The closest one would be Maya and Charlotte, probably Sarashiki sisters, if a bit quirky. The kind of parents that paid full attention to their kids without being tyrannical in process.

The rest is... a gamble, whether they can get out of their violent method & stubborness or not. Chifuyu... unless mellowed by age, is the worst of all. Madoka is self explanatory.

Oh, and I refrain from commenting about Honhon, she's just that unpredictable.

Eratas123 · 2012-02-14, 21:31

@ Senpai - I meant in the current situation

I know they'll be good parents in the future, but how about while they're still teenagers/in their early 20's?

ZeroXSEED · 2012-02-14, 21:36

Same as above.

Eratas123 · 2012-02-14, 21:39

@ Senpai - So Chifuyu's kid would resent her?

ZeroXSEED · 2012-02-14, 21:41

Yes.

Especially if Chifuyu is worse than when she's older

Eratas123 · 2012-02-14, 21:46

Nope, she's way worse as her older self. Up to what age is it reasonable for a kid to hate their parent? I don't think 5 year olds can.

2012-02-14, 07:38	Link #22101
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Treme - Nope, I'm pretty sure it's me, if the voices I'm hearing are any indication... __________________

2012-02-14, 07:38	Link #22102
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Well, I can't considering she still a Junior High Student (and pretty much average shmuck at it). Unless I took a grimdark route and have her kidnapped & brainwashed being few girls who has A-rank and haven't yet to be scouted... __________________

2012-02-14, 07:41	Link #22103
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	They don't need to kidnap her (Think they can get past Gen, Ren, and Dan?), just have her rn some tests. If they find her aptitude and sync rate is amazing, she can replace Kanzashi.....which adds more drama. __________________

2012-02-14, 07:47	Link #22104
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	She has A, approximately the same as Kanzashi... also, when 7 I.S.-like unit (who unlike cheapskates, battery powered unit) descend toward you, packing at the least enough firepower to sink a battleship.... Maybe I should keep her in extra for her own good, thank you for the suggestion though. __________________

2012-02-14, 07:51	Link #22106
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	..... Are you for real? I though Cecil is smaller than Houki. __________________

2012-02-14, 07:53	Link #22107
agetreme Just another Idiot Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Delusion world	actually Cecilia's chest is smaller than Houki.... -_- Read: forced into it __________________ Ara Han

2012-02-14, 08:00	Link #22108
HasuMasu Senior Member Artist Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: The Middle Way	Oh I read it wrong, I forgot about Laura...false alarm. __________________

2012-02-14, 08:01	Link #22109
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Senpai - Your choice Not everyone has to get a role. I just like giving extra's roles for some reason __________________

2012-02-14, 10:13	Link #22110
StratoSpear Titans Test Team Pilot Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: The Elysium	Double-scene~! Spoiler for Scene 1: ========== Near the Naritasan Shinsho-Ji Temple ========== ‘This yukata… Will he like it…?’ Tsurugi slowly walks out of a public restroom in a navy blue yukata with abstract prints of flower petals and butterflies. Anxious, she quickly looks left and right to find Inami, softly sighing as he’s seemingly nowhere to be found. “Ts… Tsu-chan?” His sudden voice startles her as she then turns around, spotting him dressed in blue short-sleeve, collarless shirt and black pants. “I… In… In… Ina-kun!” She brokenly greets him with a slightly flushed surprise face. “Wow… Y-You’re… magnificent!” “Uhh…!” She runs over to him and takes holds his hand tight, dropping her head low to hide her embarrassment. “T-Thank you… Ina-kun.” “Heh… Still can’t handle the embarrassment, eh?” He says to her while gently tapping on her head. “It’s been too long since I did this…!” “Yeah… too long…” He slowly looks away, his expression filled with guilt. Just as Tsurugi raises her head, he quickly smiles at her and holds her hand. “Shall we?” “Y-Yeah…” As the sun begins to set, the couple walks along a wide path with stalls neatly arranged along its sides. Various kinds of stalls are in business, ranging from game stalls to food stalls. Stopping from stall to stall, Tsurugi buys herself cherry-flavored candy floss while Inami unknowingly impresses a small crowd with his close-range accuracy at a shooting range game stall. “Nice marksmanship! Here’s your reward, young man!” The female stall owner congratulates then gives him a grey-belly dolphin stuffed plush. “Waaah! Thanks!” He beams in delight and looks over to Tsurugi, handing the stuffed plush to her. “This is for you!” “M-Me? Really?” She stammers, awed by the adorableness of the dolphin plush. Inami simply nods his head with a smile. She grins wide, finishing up the last bits of her candy floss then takes the plush toy from him. “It’s cute! Thank you so much, Ina-kun!” She hugs the dolphin plushie. Inami looks over to his watch then back to her. “Well… About time we go find ourselves a nice spot for the fireworks. Come on, Tsu-chan!” “Right!” She cheerily replies as he takes her hand and heads for the woods. Spoiler for Scene 2: ========== Moments later, at the Yokosuka District Force ========== *BOOM* A barrier-less drone gets blown to pieces as a heavy-caliber cannon shell hits its chest, leaving the remaining two to evade while retaliating with their forearm beam guns. The drones manage to score several hits on the fleet’s Takanami-class flagship but not damaging enough to sink it. “Ergh…! Damage report!” The ship captain demands as a few sparks discharge within the damaged bridge. “Moderate hull damages with small fires breaking out from where we were hit, but our fire-fighting team is keeping it under control, skipper. They also took out one of our Phalanxes.” “All right. Keep the guns firing!” As the two drones resume their maneuvers, one of them breaks off and manages to land on the flagship’s front deck, promptly slicing the main gun apart with its forearm beam blade. “Tango on deck, skipper!” A crew yells out as the drone aims its beam gun towards the bridge. **BDOOM BDOOM** Rapid cannon fire from a nearby Abukuma-class frigate strikes the drone’s side with the immense impact knocking it off the flagship’s deck and into the sea some distance away from its port side. “Finish it off, torpedoes!” The gunner acknowledges the captain’s firm order and proceeds to launch a torpedo from its side, deck-mounted triple torpedo tubes, and into the sea as it then belts for its target. The lone drone underwater snaps online from the previous shell impact’s shock and begins to turn around, only in time to see the torpedo already zeroing towards it. A great explosion erupts from underwater, blowing up a tall pillar of water next to the flagship, indicating the drone’s destruction. “Splash another one, skipper!” The crew cries out as seawater from the explosion showers the flagship. “Keep your guard up, men! There’s still one more left!” The last remaining drone avoids fire from the other ships and heads down towards the flagship’s bridge, flashing its visor as it attempts to lunge its beam blade. “Yokosuka, this is Python One.” A male voice emanates from the comms. A lone F-15J Eagle jet approaches the flagship’s stern, with the pilot achieving a lock on the attacking drone. “Tally tango one, firing missile.” __________________ "You cannot be bad at watching a movie. You cannot be bad at listening to an album. ...But you can be bad at playing a videogame, and the game will punish you and deny you access to the rest of the videogame."

2012-02-14, 10:52	Link #22111
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	What have I done.... __________________

2012-02-14, 21:09	Link #22112
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Senpai - What's wrong? __________________

2012-02-14, 21:12	Link #22113
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	I somehow managed to insert les yay and Ho yay (in that order), as well as more Rin-Charles tease, but felt half-assed, need to improve it somehow 6600 and counting! Oh my! __________________

2012-02-14, 21:19	Link #22114
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Good job on reaching 6k words I'm just finishing up my first beta reading project. Side note - Not sure if I asked this before, but here goes: Which of the girls would be good parents, and what kind of parents would they be? __________________

2012-02-14, 21:25	Link #22115
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	The closest one would be Maya and Charlotte, probably Sarashiki sisters, if a bit quirky. The kind of parents that paid full attention to their kids without being tyrannical in process. The rest is... a gamble, whether they can get out of their violent method & stubborness or not. Chifuyu... unless mellowed by age, is the worst of all. Madoka is self explanatory. Oh, and I refrain from commenting about Honhon, she's just that unpredictable. __________________

2012-02-14, 21:31	Link #22116
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Senpai - I meant in the current situation I know they'll be good parents in the future, but how about while they're still teenagers/in their early 20's? __________________

2012-02-14, 21:36	Link #22117
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Same as above. __________________

2012-02-14, 21:39	Link #22118
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Senpai - So Chifuyu's kid would resent her? __________________

2012-02-14, 21:41	Link #22119
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Yes. Especially if Chifuyu is worse than when she's older __________________

2012-02-14, 21:46	Link #22120
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Nope, she's way worse as her older self. Up to what age is it reasonable for a kid to hate their parent? I don't think 5 year olds can. __________________